Jab We Met Rajpreet ff pt 3 ready

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mumbai...
Rajbeer's love had just left him. Rajbeer was siting in the conference room of his company. The associates were yelling at each other but Rajbeer he was just quiet. The associate - Sir ap iss company key owner ho apki sign yaha chahiye.
Rajbeer signs it. He gets up and left the company. His driver opened the car door for him but Rajbeer just ignored him. He walked to a banquet hall, where his love was getting married. He read Varun weds Jiah. He left the hall and started walking towards the street. He had no idea where he was going. The begger said- allah key naam pey paisa dey dey baba
Rajbeer reached into his pocket and took out his wallet. He kept his cards and gave the entire wallet to the begger. the begger opened the wallet and saw hundreds of rupee and then smiled. Rajbeer untied his tie and then the dropped it on the ground. He took his cell phone and then dropped it on the ground too. He went to a train station and sat down in a train which was by chance going to Amritsar. The train moving and it was a very lonely train. On the train station there was a girl who was running for the train. She had a luggage bag. She was wearing a white and blue salwar kamez, she had hair that reached up to her waist. She finally caught up to the train. The part that she entered was the same part as Rajbeer's. After she got on the train she looked towards the ceiling and said- thank u babaji mera record toutne se bachaliya. (of course the girl was Preeto)
She looked at her ticket and started looking for her seat F28. Rajbeer was seating in her seat. Preeto- excuse me... yeh meri seat hai.
Rajbeer looked at her and then moved to the opposite seat of Preeto. Preeto- ap kisse milne ja rahe hai. (No response) o toh koi kam hoga, ( no response) well mein toh apne vacation key liye apni family key pas ja rahi hon. Ap holidays key liye ja rahe ho na Amritsar. Baadi kubsorat jagah hai.
The ticket conducter comes- ticket ticket.
Preeto shows him her ticket. The conductor asks Rajbeer for his ticket but Rajbeer totally missed that. Preeto- o hello ji, apka ticket maang rahe hai.
Rajbeer looked lost at that. The conductor- ticket hai na
Rajbeer- nahi hai mere paas koi bhi ticket.
Conductor- ticket nahi hai keyse insaan ho tum ticket key bina keyse chalta hai.
Preeto- o ji toh iss mein kyunsi baadi baat hai abhi leylo ticket.
Conductor- issa nahi hota hai madam
Preeto- han han afterall itne saarepassengershai
She said that as she looked around at the lonely section. Conductor- thik hai thik hai. Kaha tak ka ticket banao.
Rajbeer- kaha tak jatti hai yeh train
Preeto and the conductor exchanged looks- Amritsar tak
Rajbeer- toh fir Amirtsar ka ticket chahiye.
Conductor looked confused and gave a Amritsar ticket. Conductor looked at Preeto again- yeh apkey saath hai
Preeto- nahi toh.
The conductor leaves. Preeto breaks the awkward silent moment between Rajpreet. Preeto- so ap kya ghar se bhaaj rahe ho kya (No response) apka patta nahi lekin mein toh sirf 10 saal ki thi jab mein ghar se bhaaj gae. Mujhe ek tilona chahiye tha aur mere Bj Papaji maana kiya toh fir bas mein bhaaj gae... Ap kyun ghar se bhaaj rahe ho.
Rajbeer- tumhe patta nahi chalta key mein tumhari baataon mein interested nahi hon.
Preeto- agar itni kadwahat hai toh fir jaona kahi aur jake beto. Patta nahi kaha kaha se log atte hai.
Rajbeer got up and walked away from her. It was like 11 pm when Preeto started feeling sleepy. She opened her bag and looked for something to wear. She got a pair of gray sweat and a white t-shirt which had a big red outlined on it. She went to the washroom and changed. She came back and put her suit away and then went to sleep.Rajbeer looked at hersleeping, he light was still on. He walked over and closed the lights. He went back to his seat. Then the train stops and Rajbeer decides to get off the train. He is roaming on the lonely platform. Preeto wakes up for some reason and sits up and sees Rajbeer walking on the platform. She gets off the train to get Rajbeer. Preeto- excuse me
Rajbeer didnt hear her. Preeto repeats- excuse me.
Rajbeer turns around to see her. Preeto- Kya kar rahe ho train chali jaegi.
Rajbeer ignored her and then continued walking. Preeto followed him- jaldi chalo.
The train started moving. Preeto- Arrey jaldi chalo train ja rahi hai.
Rajbeer ignored her again. Preeto gave up on Rajbeer and started running for the train. She bumped into someone and that slowed her down. The was moving fast, Preeto was running for the train and then she missed. Preeto's mouth was left open.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jab we met on Rajpreet woww...
I jus love jab we met movie its one of my fav...continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love this movie so much. Thank you Sana for choosing this story. Please continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love Jab we met movie you give this to Rajpreet superb sana👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The train had just left...

Preeto was angry at Rajbeer. She turned to where he was but he was gone. She ran to the place where she last saw him. She then saw Rajbeer walking towards the exit. Rajbeer is outside the station when Preeto runs up to him. Preeto- excuse me

Rajbeer stops and turns- tum.

Preeto also comes out the station and reads the station name and looks at Rajbeer again. Preeto- tum... tum keyse insaan ho mein tumhari madat karney train se oatri aur meri train bhi miss hue. Now im at this Ahmedabad station.

Rajbeer- TUM MUJSE KYA CHAHATI HO

Preeto- TUM AB MUJHE MERI GHAR AMRITSAR TAK POCHAONGAY AUR WOH BHI MERE SARE SAMAN KEY SAATH JI HAN

Rajbeer goes back into the station and rushes to the information center. Preeto follows him. Rajbeer- hello Mumbia se Amritsar tak jaane wali train ab agle kyunse station pey rokegi aur kitni der mein.

Person- bhai ab toh woh train Jaipur pey ek gante baad rokegi.

Rajbeer- thank u

He takes Preeto's hand and rushes outside to find a cab. They enter a white taxi. Rajbeer- Jaipur station chalo

The driver starts the car but is driving slow and Rajbeer and Preeto look at the driver awkwardly. Preeto- excuse me kya ap zara tez chalaoga meri train miss hojaegi.

Driver- behenji speed limit jeysa bhi kuch hota hai.

Rajbeer- ghadi rook

Driver- kya

Rajbeer- stop the car

The driver stops the car and Rajbeer gets out of the car and opens the front door and tells him- move

The driver moves to the left and Rajbeer starts driving. All the ornaments of the cars were messed up.

Preeto- tum kya ek race driver ho'. Itni acchi and fast driving kaha se sikhi.

Rajbeer- nahi mein ek race car driver nahi hon. Meine itni fast khabhi drive bhi nahi kiya mein sirf tumhe time pey station choud na chahata hon.

Preeto- awww, mein bhaut special feel kar rahi hon.

Rajbeer murmured- I recommend u don't

Driver- kya tum iss pagal driver ki girlfriend ho

Rajbeer and Preeto- NAHI

Driver- kya tum isski biwi ho

Rajbeer and Preeto- NAHI

Driver- TOH KYA RISHTA HAI TUM DONU MEIN

Rajbeer- kuch nahi meri bat kismati thi jo mera pala iss pagal ladki se hua.

Preeto- oye bat kismati tumhari nahi meri hai' patta nahi kya pagalpan tha mere dimag pe jo tumhari madat karne apni train miss kar di.

Rajbeer- o toh tum accept karti ho na key tum pagal ho.

Preeto- nahi pagal tum ho

Meanwhile they reach Jaipur and Rajbeer stops the car. Preeto exits the car and Rajbeer was about to go when the driver holds his hand. Driver- oye mere paise do' meri ghadi toud di.

Rajbeer- ek minute.

He reaches in his pockets but remembers all he has is his cards. Preeto- tum a rahe ho

Rajbeer- dekho meine tumhe tumhari train tak pochadiya jab mera pichah choudo.

Preeto- someone's grumpy.

She goes to the train. Rajbeer looks around and sees a ATM machine. He goes there and the driver stops him. Driver- o hello mere paise.

Rajbeer- chalo mere saath.

The driver and Rajbeer go to the ATM machine and Rajbeer gets money from the machine. He gives the half to the driver and the other half he puts in his pocket. The driver salutes and leaves. He was about to leave the station when he left someone tapping his shoulder. He turns around and sees Preeto. Rajbeer- ab kya hai

Preeto- please thode paise dona.

Rajbeer- kyun tumhara saman toh hai na

Preeto- train nahi ae abhi mujhe bhaut piyas lagi hai.

Rajbeer gets angry and gives her some money. Preeto takes it and was about to leave when she turns around to see Rajbeer still looking at her in amazement. She goes on her tippy toes and plants a kiss on his cheek. After the kiss she smiles and says- thank u

She then goes back to the train station. After she kissed Rajbeer's cheek, Rajbeer's crankiness was replace by a sweet smile. Rajbeer- thank u'. yeh ladki actually acchi hai'. Poori raat bhak bhak kar rahi thi lekin fir sirf ek thank u it makes her so innocent.

Preeto's train had arrived by then and she was waiting in the line. Finally her number came and she gave the shop keeper money and said- paani please

She got the water and there was no one behind her so she obviously started talking. She took a sip of water and then talked- aaj kal loj pepsi, coke, engery drinks, juice yeh sab pi tey hai lekin pani ka kam koi nahi kar sakta.

She was taking another sip of water when the train started moving. She finished drinking her water and then realized that the train had started moving fast. Preeto tried to get to her train but she missed her train'. Again.

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U r only good for writing stories on RajPreet. And btw i read the comment where u said that Meenu was a really cute role and ur making me the custodian.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jab we Met...
Preeto's train left again. She goes to the head office of the station and tells the person that she has missed her train.
Person- dekhiyeh hum abhi toh kuch nahi kar sakte. Lekin hum agle station walo ko keh donga key apka shaman nikal dey.
Preeto- thik hai.
Preeto then goes outside and then finds a bench in the middle of the station and seats there. Then some people come there and think they should tease her. Person- kya hua ma'dame
Preeto- tumse matlab
Person 2- itna jussa, apko kya patta nahi key ek akeli ladki ek kholi (open) tijori hai.
Preeto- kya bakwas kar rahe ho
Person 1- ek kam karte hai ap mere saath chaliye mein apko ek safe jaggah pey ley jatta hon.
Person 2- lekin thoda expensive nahi hoga
Person 1- hoga lekin madam ko accha lagay ga.
Preeto- tujhe ek thapad hon tab jakey tumhari akal aegi kya
Person 2- oye maarney dey.. usi bahane choo toh leygi.
Person 1- accha toh ji maari yeh maari yeh nah.
Preeto gets up and leaves the station. She goes outside and stands with some ladies. The thing that she didnt know was that those ladies were call girls. Some guy with bikes come and start glaring that her. She looks around and then understands that they think that she is one of them. She walks away but the guys follow her. Preeto turns around to look that them. Preeto- dekhiye mein weyse ladki nahi hon.
Biker 1- toh keysi ladki hai... chal chal mere saath double peyse donga tujhe fir tu bhi khush aur mein bhi khush.
Preeto looks around for help then she sees someone walking and she thinks its Rajbeer because of the shirt. She runs to him and comes in front of him. Then looks at the face and yes its Rajbeer. She quickly hugs him and says- Thank god.
The bikers leave when she hugs him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haaye feels good reading Jab we met story on Rajpreet..😍
waiting for next part..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is small part but i am happy because other stories are in pending 😉love Rajpreet's jab we met
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gosh , Jab we Met Remake with R-P in Sana's style ? Totally loving it and one of my favourite films..

Rajpreet's story initially did have JBW shades and so can easily connect to RB playing Shahid's role and Preeto playing KK/Geet's role
Edited by ankitaluv - 13 years ago

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