Navya Ek Naya Ehsaas- Part 33- Page 101 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
Fab update yaar...waiting eagerly for the next chapter. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
so nice post, all things written beautifully from phone convo to anant 's helplessness and navya's anxiety. it was very nice,,, precap it too gud... waiting for yr next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!!!loved their phone conversations and feeling for eachother.well written.Thanks for the pm.can't wait for the next.pls update as soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey lovely update and story seems to be getting interesting. Can't wait for next update. Please update soon :)
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Part 6

Navya went out of the classroom to go and meet Appy and Shraddha. She was still sad and thinking about Anant all along. She looked down at her phone to see nothing. She wanted to call him, text him but she stopped. How could she text him? Wouldn't that be a bit weird? She walked towards Appy and Shraddha sad and dejected. "Navya tu yaha? Kese hai tu?" Appy ran up to Navya and hugged her tightly. Navya didn't really respond to the welcome and pulled a forced smile. "Kya hua Navya why you so sad?" Shraddha held her hand and looked at her worried. Navya looked at both of them with the same expression. "Navya!!" Appy shook her. "Come on Navya lets sit down why are you so tensed?" They took her to a nearby bench and she burst out into tears. She counldnt control her emotions and she hugged both her friends tightly. Appy and Shraddha were completly shocked "Navya yeh kya hai? Tu ro rahe hai? Kuch ghar par hua, uncle ya aunty ne tume kuch kaha?" Navya pulled herself away from the hug "Appy yeh nahin hain kuch aur baat hai...!" she paused as she thought whether to tell her about it. Navya stood up and wiped her tears. Why am i getting so emotional? He's nothing to me right? She made herself look composed and turned back. "Appy, Shraddha hum bohot pareshan hai.. Anant ki wajah se aaj unonhe mujhe phone kiya ke woh aaj college nahin aa raha hai aur woh kaafi upset lag raha tha aur phir woh college aaya aur canteen me humse baat ki ke woh jah raha hai kuch important baat hai isliye!" she sat down looking confused and still trying to figure out what happened to him. "Navya ab tu kya pareshan ho rahe hai aur yeh asoo kisliye woh tumare koi apna nahin hai na? Kuch baat honge ab smile to kar ese moo latka kar woh wapas nahin aayenge na chal canteen chalte hai!" Appy held her by her shoulders but Shraddha was still worried looking at her. She wanted to know more about Navya's reaction. They went into the canteen and ordered some food. Navya was still quiet and would only speak to a minimum she was a quiet girl but with her two besties she was a crazy girl who would never stay quiet. Appy tried cheering her up but it didnt work. "Navya come one eat your sandwich its going cold!" she nodded and ate it slowly. Shraddha was watching her quietly. She could see Navya was blanketed in saddness. But why? Anant is nothing to her other than a classmate. Appy got a call from her Mum and she had to leave to go home. "Guys i have to go home Ma needs me tell the teacher that I have an appointment or something and get some notes please!" Appy hugged Navya and Shraddha. "Navya please cheer up!" she smiled at her and Shraadha thought to talk to her now. "Navya come on lets go for a walk!" Navya denied and she wanted to stay put. "Come on its a nice day we can sit on the grass for a while we have a free period next anyway!" she encouraged her and they finally went.

"Navya tell me what's wrong I can clearly see on your face that you are sad about Anant, no jokes please share it with me!" Shraddha clasped her hand and moved closer to her. She smiled at her to give her moral support. "Please!" she smiled at her and Navya started speaking with her "Shraddha im just worried for him, we were first class mates and then now I consider him as my friend we never liked each other before, we were jealous of each other remember our first lecture. But when we did this project I got to know that he is a real nice person so I decided that I was going to be nice to him and be friends I dont know if he sees me as a friend but he is a friend in my eyes and if a friend is sad or troubled you are bound to be sad and worried for them?!" tears slowly came out of her eyes and Shraddha smiled. "Navya thats really nice of you and I am sure he is your friend too, he will be happy when he finds out that he has such a nice friend to support him, Navya why dont you text him to see if he is okay?!" Navya looked at her shocked and gasped. "How can I...?" Navya looked away shy. "Navya your his friend right and as a friend arent you meant to make sure your friend is okay?!" Shraddha held her hand again and gave her the mobile. "Here do it?!" she took the phone and blankly stared at it. "Shraddha il give him some time il do it later!" she looked at her and smiled "You best do Pagli!" Shraddha and Navya spent there free period in the sun relaxing and working on the new project. They attended their lesson and Navya made sure she concentrated and wrote all the notes for Appy. Wait Navya aren't you forgetting something? Her mind was speaking to her. She stopped to think what she was on about? She looked to her right to see the table missing. "Anant" she spoke out aloud and everyone looked at her. She looked down embarrased. Why did I say his name what's wrong with me? Shraddha held her shoulder "Whats wrong Navya are you okay?" She nodded saying its fine. The class coninued and the teacher asked Navya to present the project ideas. Navya stood up still looking at Anant's empty seat. She smiled at the class and explained the project the class impressed and there was a little Q &A with the students. The class ended and Navya rushed home after dropping Shraddha off. She went inside her house to find her Mum in the kitchen and her grandma reading a holy scripture near the mandir. She could her bubbles of oil and tempering of the curries her Mom was making and it bought a little smile on her lips. She continued to walk into her room when her Mum stopped "Navya tu aa gaye, jah living room me bhet me tere liye chai lai aate hu!" Navya was not in the mood for having tea so she shook her head at her "Maa its okay I'm not really in the mood, i'm tired so I'm going to rest in my room!" Navya sped into her room quickly before her Mum could ask her any more questions. Meeta looked at her perplexed. Yeh ladki ko kya hogaya hai? Navya sat on her bed and tucked her head in her knees. She thought about Anant and pictured him from this morning. She sat there thinking for around 10 minutes when she looked at her phone. She looked at it blankly and went to her messages. She went to Anant's name and halted to think for a moment. Kya hum kar sakthe hai unko message? Navya went deep into thoughts What if he doesnt like it? She recalled Shraddha's words You best do Pagli!. Just then her Mum called her for dinner. She spoke "Baad me kar dehte hu unse message!" She went to dinner and sat with her family. There was a few conversations running around the table but nothing important. Navya zoned herself out a little bit and spoke very little. She emptied the dishes and washed them and went straight to her room. She grabbed her phone and found his name in her contact list she had a last minute think and then created a message saying Hey Anant its Navya! Are you okay? Are you feeling better? She mentally read it about 5 times before she sent it she wasn't used to all of this. She had never texted a guy so it was a bit unusual for her and especially in a delicate situation. She pressed send and it went off. She closed her eyes and prayed for everything to be okay. She read a few books for a while and kept glancing at her phone to see if there was any reply. Her heart was breaking into pieces. She wondered round the room in different places worried and tensed about Anant. Ek Ek lamha played in the background. Anant sat on a bench crying a little at remembering his Dad's words. From childhood he has seen this happen to his mum he remembered how his Father would slap his mother if she didnt cook the dinner properly or if he didnt like anything. Whenever Anant talked about being a doctor when he was younger his Dad always crushed his dreams saying he is naughty how will he fit into this profession. Anant clinched his fists tightly and raged. He couldn't be insulted anymore. His life was destructed by his Dad's words, his life was insecure, unstable. He came from a renowned family but there was no peace, no respect for each other. He didnt hear his phone bleep but it was shining with Navya's name. Anant closed his eyes and remembered something from his past.

*FLASHBACK*

Anant and Sughanda was sitting on the bed and she was putting him to sleep. Sughanda was coughing and sneezing and Anant watched her. "Dont worry Ma when I am older I will never let you get ill I promise I'll be a doctor and make you better!" Sughanda smiled at him and then his Dad walked in hearing them. "SUGHANDA, mere chai kaha hai? Tum kya karte ho pure din sirf maharani ki tara behte rehte ho aur humare saath mat sona humko aap ki flu nahin chahiye!" He stormed out of the room leaving Sughanda in tears. Anant was shaking in fear at his Dad's voice but he was sad, hurt at his mum's saddness. "Maa its okay dont cry you can sleep with me tonight!" he held her hand and hugged her. He wiped her tears and this bought a little smile to her face.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Anant wiped his face and looked with an angry face. His hair was just above his eyes and his eyes spoke volumes of hatred of saddness. He stood up and grabbed his phone without looking at it and sped off in his car. He sped off in his car and drove around somewhere. He was racing away when an old person was on the road he broke and the tyres screeched the road. The lady escaped by inches. Anant came out of his senses and ran out of the car. "Are you okay?" the old woman was bending down to get her walking stick as it fell down. He passed her the walking stick and she looked at him. "Drive carefully dear your family will worry otherwise!" those words hit him like a bullet in the heart. Family he thought half of them are idiots anyway. Apart from Mom, bhaiya, Nimi, Chachi and Chachu they all hate me. They care about their name more than their family. They dont understand feelings, emotions. He respected his culture but not insults that was darn right out of order. The woman waited for him to reply. "Yes, I'm sorry let me take you home its getting late!" Anant took her to the car and took her home. His heart was of gold but part of his family had made him slightly stone hearted. It wasn't his fault it's the surrounding fault. He took her home "God bless you beta with happiness, success and a happy married life!" she brushed his head as she walked in and that bought a smile to his face. He got back in the car and it was nearing 12am. Sughanda sat in the living room waiting for him. His phone rang and it was his Dad he didnt answer. He drove around for half an hour and his phone was clogged in missed calls. Ranbir rang him and he didnt answer. His phone was bleeping like a horn and he then looked at it. He saw a message from Navya. He was shocked. It was sent three hours ago. He went to her name and read it. He looked at it and wondered whether to reply. Just then his Dad was calling through after seeing his name flash up he threw his phone on the seat and drove home. He only went home because of his mom no one else. He knew she wouldn't have eaten properly she was like that. He drove into the mansion gates and walked into the house to see his mum sitting on the sofa crying with Chachi and Nimi holding onto her and Mohan on the phone. He walked over to him Mum and she was so happy to see him. She hugged him tightly. "Anant tu theek hai na beta?" she was a wonderful woman, perfect in every way. A great mother. Anant hugged her tightly he loved his mum's hugs. "I'm okay dont worry mum have you eaten?" she nodded no. "Let's go and eat, Nimi get me one plate!" she ran into the kitchen to get the food plate ready and Anant bought her to the table. She sat down and he wiped her tears. He fed her a few bites and she fed him. Om walked down the stairs, outraged to see him. "Aagaye is ghar ka rajkumar, aa jao Anant babu aap lijye khana!" Om looked disgusted at him. Sughanda started crying again. Anant looked at him with evil eyes. He didnt reply. He looked over to see his Mum crying. He continued to feed her and he ignored him completly. "I'm talking to you Anant!" he grabbed his hand. Anant looked down at it and ignored him again. "ANANT!" he shouted at the top of his voice and Anant stood up and so did Sughanda. Everyone was petrified by his Lion like voice. He looked at him through the eye silent. "Kya hai yeh sab yahan thumara sab naukar hai ke jab au aur jab nikal jao!" Anant looked down his eyes closed gentle tears of anguish trolled down his face. "Dekh yeh tera lad ka natija, ab rone se kuch nahin honga jese Maa aisa beta!" Om shouted at the top of his voice. "BAS!" Anant couldn't take it anymore. The house was in stunned silence. "Me aur kuch bhi nahin sun na chahte hu mere Maa ke kilaf ek shabd bhi nahin!" Anant looked him eye to eye with rage. Om lifted his hand to slap him but Anant held his hand. "Jesa Baap waisa hi beta hain na Papa!" Om was shocked and so was everyone else. Mohan tried to stop him and everyone was upset. "ANANT yeh had hai yeh hai tere sanskaar!" Om blasted. Anant looked at him disgusted. "Haan ye hi hain mere sanskaar! Jo aap ne di hai!" Anant somehow got a surge of courage. Everyone was praying for Anant. "ANANT! Ek dum chup hojao!" Om shouted. "Nahin kyun chup hojao, aab hum saach bol rahe hai to aapko taklif hui hai to mere Maa ko kese lag raha hai jab tum use dhate ho ya thapad marte ho kya yeh hai thumare sanskaar?" Anant stood close to his face. He had got so much confidence so much courage that he could look his father in the face. Om was left stunned, gobsmacked and Anant sat back down again with his Mother.

Precap: Anant and Navya in the garden talking to each other and Anant tell her about his life. What happened to him and his family's relationship? Navya shocked.

Thanks for readin please leave your honest comments and please if you want me to write about certain things let me know and I will be more than happy if possible to try and incorporate it in. Thanks a lot again! 😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
ths was absolutely mind blowing update sonia.. from starting til d end of ths chap it was fabulous.. play of emotions wth navya right frm her crying til she cald out anant's name loud was brilliently written n i culd actualy imagin it.. it was very touchy n i culd feel it.. anant's anger and d result of his boiling blood gave me goosebumps and to imagine it, he looked smoking hot in tht attire, haye still drooling.. juz a request plz dnt make us wait more, do update asap.. a tight 🤗 4 d superb update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing, dhamakedar update, loved the way you portrayed Navi's concern and worries, Angry Anant is brilliant, the way he protested against om is admirable.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww amazing sonia 👍🏼 would love to see more off angry anant
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome awsome lovely dear just amazing
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Thanks a lot for all the comments guys you all are just amazing 🤗 I dont know how to thank you all for your kind words! Have read each and every one you are just lovely people! I will try and update ASAP for you guys! Thanks again! Love you ❤️

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