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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Samira-

Congorats sweetheart for ur new SS 🤗🤗
i'm sorry for being so late to comment..
but good that i'm here now n got time to comment 😉
i really loved the concept Anila, it's amazing start,,
sure i'll enjoy the more parts to come...
missed you habibti
May ALLAH bless u sis muaaah



Awww...Thank u sooo much API...🤗
no problem at all m glad wid dis dat u r here...😳
i hope so API...
love u lodss API...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mulan.

aniii!!!!!!! *hugs*
OMG!!!! I didnt knw my sis writes!!!! :)
anyways this is simplyyy awsomeee!!!! I really liked the first part and m eagerly looking forward for more to come! :)
love ya aur aise he likhte raho! <3


API!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗
Acche se likhna nhi ata phir bhi i write...😳😆🤣
m sooo Glad to see cmnt pata hain..😳
Thank u...😳
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NorthernLight

Oh my GOD..you WRITE!! (Now you must be thinking Oh God she READS!!) LOL..so let me clarify..nope I don't read and even if I accidentally do i don't comment. So I am not sure what i am doing here 😆

hmm..so its Nupur at a bar in London!! I am trying hard to picture this. Drink kar ke drive bhi kar rahi hai 😕 or was it the driver there? Anyways..good start. per LIKE iss liye nahi dabaya..iss liye dabaya k you are celebrating anniversary of a true friendship...aajkal bohat kam log karte hai. So congrats on your first anniversary with Paro and 1st year on IF and your new SS. Allah dosti banaye rakkhe, IF se rishta qayem rakkhe aur hazaron SS aur likhwaye aur hum jaise autograph k liye line pe khare ho 😉

Take care and continue with your efforts..

-Neela


😆😆😆 u r Actually ri8 DI...😳
srsly!!! wen i saw ur comment i was like...🤓😲 😃 😍😳 Sacchi!!!i know ap nhi parhti n woh bhi mere jaisi ki writing nvr!! but srsly!!!!! m sooo Glad!!!! u wont blv...😳
Thank u sooo very much DI...🤗
i will alwaysss rmmbr this cmnt thank u...😳
Ameen...hmm me too hope for d same...Thank u...😳
arey woh driver hi chala raha tha Nupur nhi...😆
Thank u for coming here n cmnting...😳
love u lodss DI...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
when are u going to update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

when are u going to update


aj raat...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Assalamuwalikum...😳
Thank u sooo much my SISters n APIs...🤗
for reading n commenting on my previous work...😳
m glad dat u all liked it...😳
Thank u sooo much for Hitting d LIKE Tab and appreciating The 1st part of my First SS...😳
so Thank u a lot!!!😳
M here on my learning process of writing though i know m nt dat good...😳
bt THANK U sooo much for all d appreciation...😳
replied to u all...😳
LOVE u ALL...🤗🤗🤗

so here i present the 2nd part of my SS...😳

Too Good to be True...

Scroll Down...n DO READ n Criticize n Comment plzzz😳
n han Don't Forget to Hit the "LIKE" Tab...😳

😳
Anila(ANI)


Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is dedicated to TWO Important Persons of my Life...who means...
a lottt to me n whom i love From the Deepest Core of my Heart.❤️🤗
My Two DearestTT & BestestTT APIS...😳
My Fizu API🤗 n My Mehak API...🤗
Love u Both lodsss APIS...😳
Thank u sooo much for being such an important part of my Life...😳


Part *~2~* "Beginning of our new life"


She was coming out from the airport when she saw the last person she wanted to see yet she was pretty much expecting him as she knew that if she is coming he would come too but what make her more irritated as she wasn't getting any glimpse of her. "Why the hell are u here n where is she?" She asked. "Whoa, take it easy woman don't you think atleast u should say a Hi when you met a person who came to receive you", he snorted. "Oh ya! Then'Hi how are u? Good to see u here", she said with a mocking smile.

"God!! I must be really dreaming the high headed Miss. Bhushan is saying that she feels good to see me! This had to be my lucky day", he stated with faking to be fainted. "Sharma, will u now spill it out that where is she? I definitely didn't come to see your filthy face talking some rubbish!"

"Oh man u broke my heart!"

"Oh really I wish I could also break ur big dumb head!"

She was really upset as she was expecting her to receive her and to add more this dumb head idiot was making it more difficult to even think about her journey towards her destination with Him.. Walking past the parking lot when they actually stand infront of his car she was caught in a tight back hug from a person and was awarded with a loud scream of her name right in her ears which were loud enough for her ear drums to blast'. "Nupur!!!!!!!!!!!! Gosh! I missed u Sweetheart and why u are so late to reach here ?"

"Coz u sent an dumb head devil to receive me and bear all his tortures so.. it is fair enough for u to wait here." facing her she hugged her properly and pulling away she added, "even I missed my Princess too", she flashed her gorgeous smile which was mirroring by the other one..

"Gosh! Why girls always shout when they met as if they have just crowned as Miss. World!" He snorted making a disgusting face. "Well this was expected from this Nerdy woman but not from my GF PIA at least!"

"Really! Huh!!!" Both the girls said in reunion making a that-wasn't-funny-at-all face n started laughing n then their journey back home was all covered with giggling n chattering of both girls n the Hunk was left to be bored n make weird faces to them..


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"A gayi beta'how was your flight?" Reaching their destination a lovely n gorgeous woman in her mid forties greeted them with another gorgeous smile of hers.

She love this woman so much her warm aura is something she always craved for, hugging her with a mirroring smile n a slight sadness in her eyes she replied. "It was nice Shilpa aunty Good to see u again."

"I was waiting for u guys I hope Mayu didn't bother u much." she said making their way towards living room when Mayank made a what-i-did face.

"Ya aunty I wish he didn't but don't u worry I know how to handle this stupid creature at least in these 3years after getting my best friend with a Dumb head creature in addition!"

Hearing her reply all burst into laughing except one person for sure who was throwing glare n was about to burst out..finally said, "What Ma u r my mom or hers n U! my best friend u r also laughing hearing this High-headed woman's rubbish! Huh! I m leaving from here n U!!! I will see u huh!!! After all u r gonna live here with Me for the next 1 entire year so will see u HUH!!! Shutting the door behind with a bang Mayank left from there leaving all three woman giggling hard on his cute anger'

"Gosh! Nupur u r too much! Why u both always fight so much?" Pia asked controlling her laughter.

"Oh com'on I don't do it he only start all these..Huh! Sometimes I really wonder aunty how come someone so sweet like u can have this bitter person as son han!"

"Oh! Common on Nupur beta he is not that bad too u know ; )"

"Ya aunty I know, well now can anyone get me some food plz I m starving n u know how much I love ur food aunt."

"Awww'I have made ur favorite food beta just go n freshen up I will set the table."

"Thanks aunty u are the Best!"


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"Ohk ma'am! Now tell whats up with ur life n all?" Pia asked after dinner lazily lying on bed in Nupur's room.

"Well nothing much as u know in all our phone calls n chatting. Mom wanted me to go to live with her in France and join her as a fashion designer."

"Wow! Yaar that really sounds great then why u rejected?"

U know na Pia I don't like all these n I want to do Interior designing too so am here with my Best n Only Friend. are u not happy?

"Of course I am happy Sweetheart after all apart from Mayank u r my best friend from past 3years yaar ohk now lets stop it. but u know what am actually glad that u are going to live with us for one entire year.wow!"

"Ya even me too happy for that apart from living with that stupid dumb head Sharma under one roof."

"Ohh common on Nupur he is my best friend n u know after Mom n Dad Shilpa aunty n Mayank are my family and I am living with them from the past ten years I don't know what I would have done without them after losing mom n dad in that accident."

"Aww'm so sorry Princess I know they mean a lot to u I swear I didn't mean it as u know how much I love Shilpa aunty I was just irritated with that monkey Mayank that's it!"

"Hmm'I know ohk lets just stop it n u go to sleep ohk m gonna catch u up in morning."

"Pia u really think I should live here I mean I can switch to the near by flat right I mean last time I came here to visit u n u all forced me to live here for someday but now I m gonna stay for 1 long year n I don't feel u know."

"No I don't know n even don't want to know n now shut up n go to sleep ok or u want me to call Shipla aunty."

"Ok! No! I m gonna shut up now. Good night Princess."

"Good night sweetheart, sweet dreams." Hugging each other both of them went to sleep to their respective room one with subtle smile n another with a frown yet lips curved a little for a new beginning to start a New n most memorable Chapter of their lives...



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Do press the like TAB...i know its pretty LONG n BORING... but still BEAR with Patience...as i tried to make it short but wasn't being able to...

so SORRY...

Still if u liked it a BIT do Press the LIKE TAB n Leave A Word or Two plzzz😳

❤️Anila(ANI😳)


Part *~3~* "Bothering emotions"pg. 40

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aniii!!!!!!!!! 🤗
thanku sooo much for the pm and love u for the dedication my dear sis!!!! ❤️
i wasnt expecting BUT it came as such a pleasent surprise! Thanku sis! <3

ok coming to the part..
It was awsome! The excitement, the bickering! It was such an amazing part with awsome protrayal of thr meeting and gave a glimpse of what is to come! I mean so much quarelling! 😆
continue soon dear and thanks for pm and dedication! :)
Edited by mulan. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks alot dear for the dedication janu..thanku so much

this story is very interesting..very hard to say anything about it...so much suspense...
n i m living there frndship...they way the talk to each other n the lines they exchange ...mazadar hain

eager to know wht is exactly happening...

a wonderful story n wonderfully written jani...
lov ya


Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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