ArHi FF!! Event Horizon - Ch 8(A), Sep 11, Pg 25

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Their almost friendly banter was like ping-pong.!!

So what's lavanya and arnav's story?..Waiting eagerly for it to unfold..

Thanks for the pm..i very much appreciate it..or i would have missed this update...thanks a lot..;)

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violet-amster

@violet-amster

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Beth I like this khushi...
Nice work...
Continue soon...

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lastdesire

@lastdesire

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

thanx 4 da pm dear...want more...i lyk dis khushi...so sharp

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

I love Arnav khushi's conversation. And then there is La.. Lets see where its all heading! Great update! Thanks for the PM :) cant wait to read more!

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Loved it! La and Arnav have history? Can't wait to read more!

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CynicalNoob

@CynicalNoob

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

There is a sense of satisfaction when you converse with a peer - a true peer in the sense of emotional and intellectual connect. Even a simple act of drinking coffee or riding an elevator seems like an adventure when the conversation ebbs and flows in a steady tandem. What I see here is two people colliding in every moment, every word and every syllable. Yet they just come out of it as a whole - bigger and better; probably smarter?

What you are trying to portray here is ginormous in the sense of exploration of two people and their interactions. I am looking forward to see how the emotional interactions would be - intellectually stimulating or heart numbing?

Either ways, it would a bumpy ride.

CN

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

^ I'm impressed,CN... Such nice words...😆

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Nice one. Could u pls pm me with updates? I really liked it. Thks.

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QuiteThoughtful

@QuiteThoughtful

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: CynicalNoob
There is a sense of satisfaction when you converse with a peer - a true peer in the sense of emotional and intellectual connect. Even a simple act of drinking coffee or riding an elevator seems like an adventure when the conversation ebbs and flows in a steady tandem. What I see here is two people colliding in every moment, every word and every syllable. Yet they just come out of it as a whole - bigger and better; probably smarter?

What you are trying to portray here is ginormous in the sense of exploration of two people and their interactions. I am looking forward to see how the emotional interactions would be - intellectually stimulating or heart numbing?

Either ways, it would a bumpy ride.

CN

...And when that ceases to exist, you are left wondering when did it start to go wrong. It is folly to even think "why relationships do wrong" because we know; we always know the 'why'. If one sits and dissects every moment of anger and disappointment the answer would be right in front of us. But we just...don't, you know?

What they have now is something that I once had. The words were written after an unexpected encounter which had left me wondering and critically analyzing every decision and action I took in the past.

Thanks CN; for your words, decorated my memories.

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Although everything about Arnav and Khushi's meeting is incidental, I love the flavour and peculiarity of their conversations - Arnav's inability to give her a one word answer and her impishness at giving him "superstitious" answers and I love their crooked rules. And don't ask me why I say flavour. I just do.

P.S - Does the 14th floor of the building float on in the air in absence of a lower support? Haha!