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Nisha

@ABlank90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Thank you so much guys for all your lovely comments! Glad you liked the song selection. I'm really happy to see the response Sameer is getting. And the whole aspect of Shaan is really exciting me too! Thanks a lot for your support people! 😃

Have tried to answer everyone:

@Jalis: Yup, best friends are really important. My best friend and I rarely get a chance to meet often but we still know the other is there for us when we need her! And I loved your comment's last line! 😆

@Aasma: They are Shanak. So don't worry! 😊

@yasharanrox: Glad you liked it! 😊

@Yasharanrocks: Thanks! 😊

@Ramzz: All I can say is that I really like Sameer, harmless or not- will be waiting for your views! 😃

@Saroj: Hahah...loved your comment and prediction! That's usually how such things happen lol! 😆

@Priya P: Thanks a lot! 😊

@Saranya1990: Hey hello! Thanks! 😊

@Heer: Sorry for the intezaar. Was caught up but longer update is on its way! Glad you liked the song selection and your views on Sameer. 😊

@Sangita: Thank youu! Glad you liked both parts! 😃

@Rida: Yup twist aa gaya. And Shaan pe mujeh bhi tars aa raha hai ab tou! He sure was shocked! 😉

@snigdhanagar: Glad you liked the song selection. Loved your comment! 😃

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Nisha

@ABlank90

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Part 25

"Kya huwa hai Khanak?" asked a concerned Sameer. "Why do you look so upset all of a sudden?"
"Shaantanu kya sochein ge Sam?"
"Oh God Khanak! Goli maro Shaantanu ko. Why are you letting him rule your actions indirectly?"
"I am not."
"Yes you are. To hell with Shaantanu kya sochay ga. You're out with me and kisi ko koi problem nai honi chahiye!"
"Ghussa honey ki zaroorat nai hai," Khanak reminded Sameer.

Sameer took a deep breath and looked at Khanak. He held her petite shoulders in his handsm forcing her to look him in the eye.
"Khanak, I know you like this guy but we know nothing about him. Even you are unsure ke asal zindagi mein ye kaisa hai. He seems cynical about women but you don't know why. He has given your relationship a chance but you don't know why. And your fears about all that has gone between you guys are justified."
"But.."
"Listen to me Khanak. You like him. That's great. But do you love him?"
"Sam.."
"Nai Khanak, don't even try to answer that question. You possibly can't. You barely know him. And yes, people fall in love with people they hardly know but you're better than that Khanak."

Khanak sighed.
"Yes, you're right. Tou ab?"
"Tou ab ye ke stick to the plan Khanak. We've gone over this. Caution is the best policy. Let's judge Shaantanu's feelings about you before we open your heart to him."

They started leaving the bar and walking towards the restaurant.
"Trust me Khanak. I am guy AND I am your friend." Sameer reassured her again.
"I do trust you silly why do you think you need to reassure me?"
"Nai I know you're worried. Kaha tha date ker lo us James Clarke ko tum."
"Chup kero Sam!" said Khanak, lightheartedly punching Sameer's arm.
"Nai seriously babe at least tumhein idea tou ho jata iss sab ka," laughed Sameer.
"Very funny!"

"Acha nai actually mein ye iss liye keh raha tha because Khanak there is risk in totally putting yourself out there. Especially since you're a girl, and a very tradition-oriented one too. Plus, you're someone who is very pure and sincere at heart. I mean, from what you've told me, Shaantanu looks like a nice guy but then there is always a limit to his openess. I'm sure he thinks you're simple and straightforward. Then why keep things from you? And puhleez, itna tou janna tumhara haq hai ke ussey auratein itni buri kyun lagti hein. He should know that. Plus, jitna tum ne ussey apne baray mein bataya hai uss ne tumhein 30% bhi nai bataya hoga apne baray mein. So take it easy yaar."
"Fine. Easy hi tou le rahi houn. It's just that deep down I think he's a great person. And what if he's taking time to open up because he is unsure of my reaction? What if he wants to please me and not upset me?"
"Ho sakta hai Khanak but dekho he should know ke to take this thing further he has to let you in. Plus, you hate liars. So what's there in his life is there. He can't change that. Why not tell? I am sure tum logoun ki itni understanding tou ho hi gai hai. And warna tou he seems to be so much at ease with you from what you've told me. Phir kyun nai bata sakta wo tumhein apne baray mein?"

"Hmmm...you're right. But I just want to make him feel comfortable around me. Make him feel ke he can say anything to me without being afraid of what I'd think."
"Agar aysa time ana hoga Khanak, tou aye ga. Moreover, if you're too overt about your feelings tou he might get scared away or commitment phobic if he feels his feelings don't match yours when in truth he might just be needing a bit more time to realize his feelings. I am a guy Khanak so I know. Lay low for a while. He like to be in control and you need to set the record straight ke you're your own person. Theek hai ke you've gotten into this because of your parents and you've found him likeable but are you willing to compromise your independence?"
"No I don't want to compromise my independence but how do you know he likes to be in control?"

Sameer laughed again at the confused yet concerned expression on Khanak's face. This is how he had imagined it would be when she fell for someone. He had always believed that someone would be either an Indian or an arranged marriage proposal to say the least. Shaantanu was both! No wonder Khanak was so anxious.
"The way he strode to the dance floor, that said it all," he winked.
"Sameer tum bhi na," Khanak pushed him away while his laughter only got more infectious, causing Khanak to smile.
"Kero lo blush beta but please, restaurant anay wala hai get into character!"

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"Who were these two Shaan?" asked Natasha as they were walking to the restaurant.
"Friends."
"Oh..how do you know them?"
"Doesn't matter Natasha. Can we just walk and enjoy the weather?" replied a sulky Shaan.

His mind was still on the dance floor and Sameer leading Khanak. First on the dance floor, then off the dance floor. The two seemed so much at ease with each other. There seemed to have been no discomfort until Shaan had stepped ahead and his bothered him to no end.

It had been ten minutes since they were waiting for Khanak and Sameer in the restaurant.
Ten minutes! Kar kya rahe hein ye dono. Tujhe Khanak ko us stupid aadmi ke saath akele chro ke nai ana chahiye tha Shaan!
Kyun? Meri kya lagti hai Khanak jo mein ussey rokta. Plus wo us Sameer ko jaanti hai. She could've asked me to stop. We could all have gone together but nai.

Yes, my dear friends it is often when one feels insecure that one questions the motives of those they know are sincere. For when one isn't sure of oneself, one thinks it is illogical to believe others.

So caught up with his anger at himself and Khanak was Shaan, that he didn't notice that the woman had arrived with the man he so despised at his moment. They were seated at a square table. Khanak sat between Sameer and Shaan, opposite Natasha.

"Chalo bhai, let's order! Bohat bhook lagi hai" said Sameer.
"Yeah. Shaan and I have decided our orders tum log dekh lo." replied Natasha as she successfully signalled a waiter to come to their table.
"The usual, Sunshine?" asked Sameer.
"Yup!" said Khanak, smiling a radiant smile.
"We'll have two twin chicken breast steaks with mushroom sauce." Sameer told the waiter.

Sunshine!
Excuse me, Sunshine!!!
What the hell was going on here!
If Shaantanu could curse out loud, beat up Sameer and still stay in Khanak's good books- he's have done it!
Does this man even know who he is talking to?
She's exclusive to me!
We haven't really finalized things but hello Khanak? he felt like snapping his fingers in front of Khanak's eyes to make her realize he was still there. He, the person she was getting to know because they were probably going to get married! Unbelievable!

As they waited for their food to come, the four started talking.
"You two looked fab on the dance floor by the way," said Natasha to Sameer and Khanak, frustrating Shaan even more.
"Yeah, you two looked as if the world didn't exist for you guys," laughed Shaan.

To an ordinary observer, the comment would've seemed like a compliment or a tease. And that's why the underlining meaning went unnoticed by Natasha. Sameer and Khanak, however, were startled by Shaan's response. Nonetheless, they kept themselves composed.

"Yeah, well Khanak and I had decided we'd go out and spend some "us time" together tonight. It's been a while ke we've hung out for long together. I've been away on a conference and you know, phone calls and skype apni jaga and in person baat cheet apni jaga," replied Sameer, smoothly.
Natasha agree, but Shaantanu had more to add.
"Tou why didn't you take Khanak with you?"

Prickly comment number two- noted Sameer and Khanak. What was up with Shaantanu? Where Khanak was baffled, Sameer was excited.
"Yeah Khanak had to sort a few things out in London and I didn't want Alpana Aunty to worry unnecessarily. Aur phir meine kahan jana hai. Conference or no conference, it doesn't really matter to me and Khanak." answered Sameer.

"Wah yaar. So are you guys dating?" asked Natasha.

Second update for the week. Sorry for keeping you guys waiting. I've written a longer update to make up for it. Was planning to make it longer but my sister needs to work on the laptop I'm using and I couldn't risk not updating today. Hope you like the update! 😊

Edited by ABlank90 - 11 years ago

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@Medusa..

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Woaaahhh...!!Our timings seems to match each time...!😆

What an update Nisha!AWESOME!👏

It made me giggle throughout!😆

Loved Sameer-Khanak convo...!!Just like how to best friends does..!😃

Loved it!❤️

Not Khanak, but do Sameer feel anything fo her? OMG! Am likin this guy...if not khanak, i wont mind having him for myself!😳😆

And shaaannn! ghossshhh...!The guy is BURNIN...!🤣🤣

Sunshine..!rofl...seriously...!! 🤣

She's exclusive to me! OMG! I loved this line...!! Hayeee...*Sigh*😳

Shaan's comments! Poor guy...!! Very apt..!!! :P :P

Shout at Sameer,slap him and still want to remain in Khanak's good book wala line was super awesome!😆

Beautiful update...!!LOVED LOVED it!🤗

Cont.sooon!Muaahhh...!!❤️

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#354

heyy nisha...🤗 awesome update yaar...

poor shaan he was boiling wid anger😆...n wanna knw does sameer is atraccted to khanak ???

n shez exclusive fr me...hayeee ..n sunshine wla.🤣

n natasha asked r dey dating each other wht will be deir answer...cnt waittt

update soon...😉

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Heer

@heer_85

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Awesome update yaar 🤗

loved sameer n khanak conv abt shaan

Poor shaan, he was burning with anger n his mind was still on the dance floor and then off the dance floor lolzzz

wow!! sunshine wala part was awesome 🤣

Natasha ne toh Etam bomb phora by asking r u both dating OMG!!! Shaan to gaya lolzzz

can't wait for next

update soon

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SJ6...

@SJ6...

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#356

omg omg omg loved it soo much, love the convo between the frends cant,wait to read the next update xxx

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Mounika

@ktym

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#357

OMG wat an update...

loved it...love the convo between khanak and sameer...

shaan was pissed of wid this guy...loving that!!!!!!!!!

waiting for the next update infact the answer they need to give for natasha's question...😊 and to watch shaan's reaction😆

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jaisyjazz

@jaisyjazz

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#358

yayyy my guess was right sameer is khanak's best friend so sweet

hmm i love jealous shan he looks cute in that😉

my exclusive ahh i love it

waiting for next its gonna so much fun😊

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Ramani

@RB81

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#359

lovely update nisha..
but i'm really not liking the way things proceed on sameer's front..
he may be a good friend of khanak..but does shaan know abt that..may he too wud accept the fact that sameer is khanak's friend had not she grown little uncomfortable with shaan..is it not human thing to think r talk the way he is talking..ie,the prickly comments..as soon as shaan approached khanak in the dance floor it was she who was all uncomfortable..is that right??
may be the guy needs time to open up..i'm really not liking the way sameer acts as khanak's brain..cant she do things on her own..
upar se kabab mein haddi ki tarah ye natasha..cant u simply shut ur mouth n sit there..wat a question..r u both dating..i really wish to beat her up..LOL!!!
awaiting the next part..

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#360

awesome update
loved the conv between khanak and sam
loved the jealous and furious shaan
loved the ques natasaha asked
actually i loved each and eery bit of the update
lukin fwd to next... update soon

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