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Part 16: Fire, Water and Darkness

Maanendra's chain of thought broke with the first cry of birds. Geet was still sleeping in his embrace. They spend an eccentric night beneath the open sky. Waves of Bramhani river are the only moving thing here. Geet was in sound sleep, clutching her love tightly. But for Maan it was a sleepless night.. his eyes was fixed on the sky. The canvas of firmament continues changing its color with time. From murky violet to dark black and then the black started melting .. a luster of orange started sheared the dense darkness like a sharp sword and small beads of lights of night lost themselves in it. Maan was witnessing the change.. this continuous change, passing of time is an universal truth .. which is happening since the beginning of the creation will continue till its end. Maan felt a slight movement and checked Geet is wriggling a little in her sleep. Maan patted her back a little and kissed her cheek. She must have feeling uncomfortable in this sitting posture he thought and bend a little to lie her down. A cold faint ray hit her face. Just in a fraction Maan's mind rewind everything and it came to a static point at Geet's face. It's said the change is the universal truth.. everything changes.. day changes into night, night into another morning .. months in year, year in ages.. nature changes, time changes life also go through changes but one thing that never changes is LOVE. Its perdurable, unchangeable, undying unshaken. Change in nature is universal truth but the greater truth is immortality of love. Nothing can stop decaying of mortal body but nothing can eradicate true love .. in the book of this universe these stories leave their marks in golden letters .. they remain unseen, unheard untouched and the characters remain deathless there. The pain the doubt was evolving in his heart for some days come to an end and a feeling of eternal peace enveloped him. He lied on the sand bed beside Geet.

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Maan wake up feeling the heat on his face. He looked for Geet but she wasn't there beside him. "Geet" he called her but there was no reply. He looked here and there. After sometime his eyes fell on something familiar. It was the lahenga and choli of Geet lying on the sand. He looked around the place where he is standing. It's a lonely bank of Bramhani River. Tonsured hillock and gigantic rocks has covered the area from both side of river like they are guarding it from locality. It was beautiful like a piece of heaven has descended in earth, the river seems to be the Ganges of Paradise. Daylight and shadow of rocks plays hide and seek creating a mystery all around. None from the locality can find them here. Maan smirked.. he could see Geet's footstep going down to river. He hid himself behind a huge rock with her dress.

Maan could see her back came out of water once and sank into it again. Maan hold his breath and wait. Geet is his wife, she has given him all the right over her, still admiring her secretly had a different charm. Geet came out from water but to his dismay even before he could have a look of her she went behind a rock. For a certain period he could see nothing but a glimpse of her wet feet. But her little pink feet had enough power of seducing him. Adding to it the sweet soft sound of her anklet was making him crazy. He couldn't hold back and came out. Geet was standing there wrapping herself with her long white dupatta. But her dupatta was falling short to cover her back and her legs. Maan stood behind her without a single noise. She was standing making her back towards Maan, completely unaware of Maan's presence, thinking where she has left her dresses, when Maan's slender finger started caressing her bare back. Maan's fingers touched her nape and came down stroking her skin, making it melt under his touch. His fingers followed her spine and ended its journey before the beginning of her hip cleavage. Geet's breath became heavy, she was craving for this touch for a long time and when she her wait is over she became speechless. She moved a little and made a distance from him. But the next moment she felt a tug on her dupatta. She turned around in a reflex only to discover the corner of her dupatta was inside Maan's strong grip and a mischievous glow on his face. Her dupatta has already left her shoulder and in a minute it will betray with her bosoms too. Her dupatta was merely wrapping her body, one pull of his strong hand and it will come out. She gasped. Only a thought of going naked in front of Maan under broad day light made her shiver. She clutched the dupatta near her bosom and took a step back inside water. Maan looked at her feet, waves were kissing them evoking her perverted mind more. He took a step ahead. Geet keep on retreating and Maan approached her every time.

Geet felt the fabric is slipping from her hand. She wished the dark night to fall upon them so that at least a veil of darkness remains there between them. She looked in her eyes for once and in a fraction she felt she will lose all her resistance in this very moment. Geet tried to stop Maan.

"Maan, why are you coming inside water? Don't you know the myth of this place? This place is forbidden for any male." Geet mumbled feebly.

There was a myth common in local people. In this very place Apsaras* from heaven descend to take bath. So men are not allowed to come here, else they will be killed. But for a long time no male or female has come here, myths remain in human memory and the place remains alone outside of human reach.

"Yes I have heard the myth, so?"

"Aren't you afraid?"

"Uhhan .. why should I? The apsara I saw here to take bath is my wife." Maan replied playfully.

Geet blushed and took another step back inside water. Maan was nowhere to leave her.

"Leave me Maan."She pleaded in a shaken voice.

"I am not holding you." Maan replied keeping a straight face, smirking inside.

Geet look here and there thinking what to say, "Have you hidden my dress?"

"hmm.. yes."

"Maan please give me my dress. I need them."

"They are kept behind a rock .. go and find them."

Geet again dared to look at him. It was impossible for her to read his mind looking at his plane face. "Maan please let me go .."

"I am not blocking your way."

"Maan leave my dupatta." She spoke with hesitation.

"No I won't." Maan's reply stunt Geet.

"But.."

"You want to find your dress go leaving your dupatta here."

Geet went red in a second. She tried to pull her dupatta but a stronger pull come from opposite side and with a whirl it removed her dupatta from her breast. Geet realized there is no barrier between her nude assets and Maan's eyes now and there the last wrap of her cloth is loosely clinging on her lower body covering the last bit of secrecy of her body. Maan was still holding Geet's dupatta. One small drag from his side and it may scale off from her body. Geet covered her breasts and took two steps behind. It is the water of Bramhani river that can hide her nudity now. River covered her lower body in itself. Maan came closer, "Geet, I am your husband, then why you feel so shy in front of me. You belong to me.. your whole existence, your body your mind your soul belongs to me.. I have right on you.. Then why you find ways to hide from me?" He bent a little on her shoulder and removed the remaining cloth from her body. Geet sighed. How could she express what she feels in front of his intense eyes. His eyes do to her what a bee do to a flower, all her passion, desire all her raw feelings keep rising in her heart, making her scared. Her whole entity lost itself; she loses her control over herself. She tries to tie them up, shell them, hide them in every possible way.

Maan closed the distance between them. Geet's dupatta was floating away, both of them stooped to grip it. This time Maan left it. Geet didn't move, she stood silently looking downward. Storm was going inside her heart but nothing was shaping as a compact sentence.

"Geet are you angry with me? Won't you talk to me?" Maan asked. His craving was oozing out in his voice. "Geet, I am sorry. Please talk to me, your silence is killing me. Didn't you miss me.. tell me na.. didn't you?" Missing his! He should ask her were you dying without me. "Maan please never leave me again. The moment you leave me everything went wrong. Parinita, Thammi.." she sobbed.."I don't want to lose you, I can't.. I can't live without you." She hugged him tightly and cried. Maan cupped her face to see her in tears. Maan's heart skipped a beat. If it was before some days he would have consoled her with lovely words. But after experiencing so many lives he could only promise her one thing, "My love will never leave you Geet, I promise you." He closed all the distance between her shaken lips and his and kissed them pouring all his love in it. He softly licked them nibbled them Geet reacted and kissed him with same flavor. With that Maan deepen his kiss entering his tongue inside her mouth, letting it play and quench its thirst, licking the nectar for his thirsting soul. Geet let Maan devour her mouth. It seems the kiss will never break. Once they come out of the kiss they kiss again and again. The enraging passion, the thirst was engulfing them more with every kiss. The river went mad to match their passion. Their lower body was still inside the water and now it's trying to touch them in more ways. The sky melt down on them. Silver rain drops started crawling on their body, on Maan's back, on Geet's cleavage making their body burn on wet sensation. Maan left her lips and started kissing her chin, her nape, her shoulder, her bosom. Geet totally surrender to him. Maan caressed her back, squished her hip, kissed her valley of breasts, Geet dig her nails on his skin, his scalp. Her moan made him crazier. He dragged her closer so that his body could smash her soft features in his embrace, so that his heart can feel her heart beat into it.

Geet wriggled a little. Maan looked at her and frowned seeing her smiling. "What happened?" Maan asked in confusion. Geet nodded, "nothing." Maan also smiled this time. The mischievous glow of her eyes was back. "Are you remembering something?" Again Geet nodded in negative. Maan paused for a minute and placed her one hand on Geet's breast, holding her hip in another hand. "Now do you remember something? Our first kiss, your first submission to me. Don't you?"

Both of them remain silent for a moment fixing their eyes on each other. Geet hugged Maan again. The silent was broken down by Maan. "Geet, have you seen where we are standing? It's in middle of the river. Aren't you scared of water? Do you know swimming?" Maan asked so many thing in one breath.

"Hmm.. I know swimming. But not so confident about it." Maan frowned not understanding her. "I learned swimming in Banaras before coming here. Here I never get a chance to swim. So I am afraid I forgot how to swim. Now I can swim only in two situations. If it is with you or if it is for you." Geet said softly.

Maan had no answer to it. Swimming is something once someone learns it will be able to swim no matter how many year he or she is out of practice. But That was not the point, Geet's words touched Maan somewhere else. He keep on looking at her. The water level was rising in tide. Waves were jumping to touch Geet's breasts. Maan approached to kiss her again but both lost balance and slipped into water. The next moment Maan came out of the water like the God of river cupping his naked Goddess in his hand. Only a piece of wet white dupatta was covering her feminity.

Maan came out out of water and placed Geet on the wet sand bed, removing the last loose cover from her body and covered her with his masculinity. He removed his dress. Both of them were hungry, both of them were thirsty.. only they can quench each other's thirst. Each inch of their cells were dying to dissolve into each other. It said fire can't extinguish fire but in love all theory fails. Two burning souls find peace only burning them into each other. Maan and Geet were blazing in such fire. The more they were burning in this flame they were feeling the eternal bliss, they were feeling completed. Geet's celestial beauty was getting battered under Maan's continuous attack.. her lips had several cut marks, her already swollen breasts has been swelling more, her nipples became dark scarlet like ruby, her belly her naval her limbs were tattered with Maan's carnal marks .. still she was craving for more pain, for more torment from him to tear her apart. Geet's nails were scratching Maan's back, chest, shoulder still he wanted them to cut his skin and touch his flesh. The sand bed which was untouched for ages get stained, ragged in the course of their lovemaking. Their love reached to their body from their heart.. to their soul from their body. They became one for so many times. They made up their long separation in their unions.

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The day of passion drowned in coldness of twilight. Still they can't come out from their smoldering heaven. Maan was all over Geet, showering kisses on her face, holding her waist, snaking her legs with his. "Geet, do you remember what I wrote in the letter I gave you before leaving?" Maan paused and looked closely at her fanning her face with his warm breath letting Geet think or rather say to confuse her. "I will make you red like vermilion with my love. I kept my promise." Maan whispered while kissing her neck making her red patches go one shed darker. "Maan please now please tell me where my dresses are? I need them" Geet pleaded. Maan lied beside her, "You think you need them now?" Geet nodded innocently."But I don't think you need them now." Maan replied and before Geet could say anything Maan made it impossible for by tickling her on her poor belly and kissing her naval. Geet giggled and wriggled but it only left some more stains on the sand.

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Duskiness was surrounding them with the evening fall. Geet was sitting on Maan's lap and both were wrapped with the same poor dupatta. Maan's hand was pampering Geet's curves. Geet was reacting sometime but her mind was somewhere else. A while ago Maan narrated his experience of his tour. Story of Swarna and Swayam .. story of Vrinda and story of Thammi. A lump of clotted tears muted Geet's voice, her eyes were teary but she didn't cry. Maan noticed her eyes is fixed on the dark horizon, she was lost. He knew harshness of reality and its effect on human love and life is stabbing her sensitive heart inside.

Maan didn't speak and gave her time to organize herself. At last Geet spoke.

"Maan" she smiled.

"Haan Geet?"

"Do you scare separation?"

"Do you?" Maan queried in reply.

"Not anymore." Geet replied turning her head towards him. Maan looked at her in amusement.

"Maan, I thought I can't live without my love, I need you beside me always. But today I understand there are so many love stories that bloomed only to be separated. It's their destiny. It writes the final consent of every life. But love is not subject of it. It comes like free wind. Then why should I feel afraid of separation. Neither will I stop loving you now you will stop loving me. We are lucky. You me, Swayam, Swarna, Parnita everyone is fortunate that at least for once they loved and being loved by someone. We have already defeated our destiny Maan. I wish God showers this feeling on all starving souls like Vrinda, who are deprived of it for once. All her pain is going to wash away with this."

Maan listened to her. She can't belive her stupid wife has became so wise, so matured in these ten days.

"Geet if destiny separates us I promise I will come back to you fighting against all odds, you keep waiting for me."

"I will Maan, I will wait for you till eternity. But I can't wait alone. I need someone with me. I want our child to be with me." She lowered her eyes but her words were clear. She expressed her longing in simple language. Maan was stunned. He was not left any word except her name. "Geet" she took her name from deepest of his heart. Geet looked at him. His deep eyes were full of emotion. They were not moving anywhere else, only looking into her hazel. Geet closed the distance and they broke into a kiss. The fire of passion, the burn of desire was replaced by a feeling so contended. Maan removed the dupatta and make geet lie under him to repeat the act of love once again. Not like fire but they dissolved into each other like a ripple dissolves into a wave. The love is not about having your love, but love is only about loving .. Maan and Geet only revived the oldest and clichd truth ever.

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They reached the steps of Geet's balcony behind the temple. Both were giggling, laughing, teasing each other. They were happy, very happy today. Their pain, their agony was gone. Geet was blushing like a newlywed under Maan's gaze. Maan smiled thinking no matter how many times they make love Geet will be shy whenever he will look at her. Secretly he loved it. Today morning it was him who asked her the question but he knew the answer. The way he feels something new every time he sees Geet, she also feels the same. Only difference is, this feeling attracts him more towards her and on other side it increases Geet's coyness. Geet's white lagenga was shining under the moonlight. After so many requests Maan let her put her dress on her. Geet blushed again remembering them. She was going to take adieu but Maan was in no mood to leave her. He caught her by her waist.

"Geet I am hungry." Maan said in a heavy tone. They were starving whole day but they didn't feel neither hungry nor thirsty. Maan's words made Geet aware of it. She felt sorry for Maan and started thinking what she should do now. Maan smiled looking at Geet.

"Geet I am hungry again."

Geet looked at him with a serious face but discovered Maan is grinning meaningfully and his playful eyes are roaming on her lips. Geet shoved Maan angrily.

"Let me go Maan."

"Geet we spend only a day together but still there is whole night left." Maan said while using her weakness against her, tickling her midriff badly. Geet moaned feeling the unbearable sensation giving butterfly inside her stomach.

"Maan stop.." she tried to cry but her words remain in her mouth as Maan instantly blocked her lips with his. Geet tried to protest keeping her mouth shut but she could never resist Maan when it comes to love. After a while she surrendered and give him access to taste her and kissing him back.

The half broken silver plate on sky was witnessing them quietly. But it was not only moon who was watching them. They didn't notice a pair of eyes was staring at them from dark. Hatred, aggression and rage of those eyes turning the man look like a monster. In the very turn where darkness was darkest in this night a specter like man clenched his fist. At that moment he could destroy the whole universe if it was in hand. His dominated desire was evolving inside him like magma. He wanted to drag Geetasri away from the embrace of Maanendra, killing Maanendra then and there. But Devdutt remain calm. He controlled his inner urge. The sight of Geetasri, his love in another men's embrace was encouraging the demon inside him. He will demolish the existence of that man who has kissed Geetasri he decided and "Geetasri".. even he couldn't listen what he uttered after hissing her name coldly. He headed for the temple.

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Precap:

Geet was still lying senseless.

He opened the back door of her room

and went back to sit beside her.

His eyes had a lascivious looks in it. He scooped her

in his arms and lost into the darkness

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*Apsara - Beautiful dancing girls of Heaven

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Hi Sayanee
I'm really really sorry read it long ago but u know me how many times I think to write the comment but
anyway, let's come to the update
I don't know what adjectives I should give u for this updates
as I'm speechless
I don't know really what to say
Awesome, beautiful, brilliant, divine, pure, passionate, intense, mind blowing, out standing , excellent,superb, wonderful update
loved it

I read it too many times and enjoy it
it taught me love is so selfless,
love is unconditional
love is pure, divine, Passionate and intense.
love has many colors , but it never changed and it's increased with the time,
Life has also many colors but it always changing but only LOVE is not changing
I really loved the way u described the changing colors of sky with the changing of life

really loved it

the change , witnessed by maaneet , how maaneet differently witnessed it

yes everything change, life, time, situation everything but LOVE never changed and it's only increased for each other , it's grow more and more with the time

Loved their passion and romance in river to river bank

Loved how maan teased geet and how geet try to stop him

Maan's naughtiness, love, passion desire all r coming out where geet try to fight with her shyness & love along with her and desire , passion

But y m feeling there is something with the myth which geet mentioned here to stop maan but that is myth may be they will face problem , few obstcles will come but when they r together and they will face all odds together , all will be vanished and they will come out as winner .

Ultimately LOVE will be winner and I trust u for this

Maan is really smitten by geet's beauty .

Both missed each other so much, their longing , craving all r coming out .

Maan expressed his fear when geet silence for a moment

And geet expressed her fear , let out that in front her man, her maan , her husband.

I really loved this line by maan

It's touch my heart, it's bring tears in my eyes

"My love will never leave you Geet, I promise you."

I bow down in front of this line

I know Maan will fulfill her Promised if situation arises

Now I can swim only in two situations. If it is with you or if it is for you." Geet said softly.

It's show how pure, divine maaneet's love is ,

Love has many shade, some times it's passinate , intense, here maaneet's love overcome all and reached a new height it's worship, it's unconditional, it's pure, divine.

Description of their love and beauty r marvelous

Their union showing their longing , craving, passion, desire , love for each other.

It's beautiful ,passionate

Maan's naughtiness is increasing

Maan narrate his journey in front of geet and geet now facing the bitter but true reality of this cruel society

But this make geet mature also

I really amused to see it but love makes it.

But this paragraph and geet's lines make me speechless but it's so true

"Maan, I thought I can't live without my love, I need you beside me always. But today I understand there are so many love stories that bloomed only to be separated. It's their destiny. It writes the final consent of every life. But love is not subject of it. It comes like free wind. Then why should I feel afraid of separation. Neither will I stop loving you now you will stop loving me. We are lucky. You me, Swayam, Swarna, Parnita everyone is fortunate that at least for once they loved and being loved by someone. We have already defeated our destiny Maan. I wish God showers this feeling on all starving souls like Vrinda, who are deprived of it for once. All her pain is going to wash away with this."

Yes if destiny and this cruel society creates problem for maaneet , maan will definitely fight for his love and his geet & simultaneously geet will also wait for her maan till .

But loved the way , geet expressed she need companion as maan's "ANSH" , their symbol of love in her,

It's make me feel speechless again .

Maan also become speechless , and fulfill her wish, dream.

Aww maan's naughtiness r increasing , how much he teased geet

Lovely

Their kissed witnessed by moon but not only moon but a monster also witnessed it

It's like that monster want to eclipse their love but there is GOD and Love

MAANEET's Love will untouched and pure every time

I believe Love is GOD and GOD is Love then GOD will protect maaneet & their love

Precap is interesting and scary

But ym feeling this man is none other than DEVDUT monster

So monster start his work and take the angel but there is Man who will save his angel from this monster and their love also

Waiting for next part

Update kar abar

Love

rakhi

P.S.:-Pics r awesome, beautiful

loved them

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

it was an amazing update

d way u show how life changes wid example of sunrise was brilliant

dere love was eternal,undying ,everlasting