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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 6
R:Eh Haan come in beta.
Tia made her self comfortable on the sofa.
R:Beta Geet is sleeping
T:Oef how boring chalo now that I have come I won' t like this. Come on aunty won' t you make snacks for me.
Rano fellt like pushing her out of the house but nobody was allowed to now that something was wrong. Highly irritaited she stood up and went to the kitchen.While Tia was driving Rano nuts. Maan was busy searching in Geet' s room in hope to find clues.Maan opened Geet's wardrobe it was empty now he was sure his Geet was gone. But why did they send her away and was she okay. He opened a drawer he found a paper in it.Maan started reading it.
Four years old with my back to the door
All I could hear was the family war
Your selfish hands always expecting more
Am I your child or just a charity ward
Wait is this the first part of the song she was singing at college. Only one way too find out he started reading again.
You have a hollowed out heart
But it's heavy in your chest
I try so hard to fight it
But it's hopeless Hopeless
You're hopeless
It is indeed that song so this was the first part.Maan rememberd the pain in her eyes when she was singing this part. Is it you parents Geet whom have hurt you so much.
Oh mother,Please mother
I'd love to leave you alone
But I can't let you go
Oh father Please father
Put the bottle down
For the love of a daughter
Looks like both her parents are horrible. Seems like her dad drinks every night. Haan Tia also Told me na that when she went to Geet' s place her dad was drunk.
Oh It's been forever
Since I've fellt love,
And I can't have
What was never mine
Oh, I can be manipulated
Only so many times
Before even I love you
Starts to sound like a lie
You have a hollowed out heart
But it's heavy in your chest
I try so hard to fight it
But it's hopeless,Hopeless
You're hopeless

Maan could feel geet' s pain he fellt disgusted on those people whom called them parents. But what he didn' t get was why she wrote. That she can' t have what was never hers, what did she mean by that.

Don't you remember
I'm your baby girl
How could you push me out of your world
Lie to your flesh and your blood
Put your hands on the ones that you swore you loved

Looks like they also hit her it seems like that, from the lyrics. How could they behave in such a manner to their own child, how could any parent do that.

Don't you remember
I'm your baby girl
How could you throw me right out of your world
So young when the pain had begun
Now forever afraid of being loved

Maan was now sure that his Geet was not save. Don' t worry Geet you will be loved. I will take your fear away, that' s Maan Singh Khurana' s promise. Geet tumara Maan aara hai tuhme lehne.Maan texted Tia.


T:Aunty these samosa' s are heavenly.
R:Thank you beta
T:Aunty aap peeche se HP ke haina
R:haan beta we used to live in **** village
T:Acha so does anyway still live there or is everyone now in Mumbai.
R:Nahi beta daarij still lives there.
T:Cool
After chatting for 15 min more. She bid goodbye.
M:Finally Tia
T:Eh hello Mr.boring don' t finally me huh I got the info you want
V:Ms.Dreamy your briliant so tell us where is Geet
T:I think she is at her Daarij they live in HP in ***** village
Vicky texted someone.
T:Whom did you text
V:Private detective.I feel find my would be bhabhi
T:How romantic
Tia and Vicky shared a eye lock. Maan cleared his throath to get there attention.
V:Eh I think we should leave.
In the car.
V:Any usefull info that you found in her room
M:Yeah I know her parents are threath her in awrong way.I am almost sure now that My geet is in danger
V:Wah My Geet.Ky baat hai chote
M:Bro please
V:Don' t worry she will be fine no wories

Precap:Maan,vicky and Tia in HP.Ap kya hoga

Part 7
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me third not bad hehehehe😆😆😆
lvd dis song or poem wtever it is 😆😆😆
Four years old with my back to the door
All I could hear was the family war
Your selfish hands always expecting more
Am I your child or just a charity ward
You have a hollowed out heart
But it's heavy in your chest
I try so hard to fight it
But it's hopeless Hopeless
You're hopeless
Oh mother,Please mother
I'd love to leave you alone
But I can't let you go
Oh father Please father
Put the bottle down
For the love of a daughter
Oh It's been forever
Since I've fellt love,
And I can't have
What was never mine
Oh, I can be manipulated
Only so many times
Before even I love you
Starts to sound like a lie
You have a hollowed out heart
But it's heavy in your chest
I try so hard to fight it
But it's hopeless,Hopeless
You're hopeless
Don't you remember
I'm your baby girl
How could you push me out of your world
Lie to your flesh and your blood
Put your hands on the ones that you swore you loved
Don't you remember
I'm your baby girl
How could you throw me right out of your world
So young when the pain had begun
Now forever afraid of being loved
these lines touch my heart

good work tia..😆
chal maan babu lag ja kaam pe..
mission find geet start😳
precap- teeno hp mai a ayega mza..😆😆😆


Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


Maan got her poem and got to know about her pain...

Tia is very helpful for him to get information...

they are going to HP to save her...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

kya baat hai ek ke baad ek update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Maan got her poem and got to know about her pain...

Tia is very helpful for him to get information...

they are going to HP to save her...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

kya baat hai ek ke baad ek update...

yeah I love this song for the love of a daugther you should really listen to it
Yeah me feeling really charged up so al ready to get my title of update machine back😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh seriously geet went thr alott...bt fikhar nt ab maan hoga uske sath!!!!
Sacchi ye tia toh,mann karta hai isse hug karu...detectivgiri karne mei mahir hai voh...

Again mr.boring!!!
Uff ye ladki bhi na...

So ab maan n vicky n tia hp jane wale hai!!!!
Cont soon
Thnx fr pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
MIND BLOWING lyrics
ahh i could just keep rereading them
go find your girl Maan
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

MIND BLOWING lyrics
ahh i could just keep rereading them
go find your girl Maan

I know I love this song od Demi a lot too you should listen to it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420

I know I love this song od Demi a lot too you should listen to it


Amazing how it seems like the song was made for this story

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Posted: 13 years ago
Tia in hp too??????
CHLO COMEDY KI KAMI NHI HOGI AAGE BHI, LOLZZZ
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Posted: 13 years ago

m not much worried...coz i knw whn maan is dere...nothing to fear...

fabulous update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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