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Posted: 13 years ago
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namy kaha chali gayi yaar teri yaad aa rahi hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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im so sorry evryone!! i have been very busy lately.. and trust me wen i say busy im exhausted lazy and irritated and in these situation its easy for a person esply a writer to face 'writters block' thats what im going thru now!! may b sumtimes one or the other OS ideas can flop up my mind but not always hence.. may b after this u would find 2 updates one of 'dream girl [ kriyaansh oneshots ] other of arsha ss both ending hence last parts will b updated by monday ..! after wich i would be going on for a BREAK! hope u understand..
to know more do read the NOTE in my gallery - click here

Chapter 1

Hastily she got up from my bed.. yawning a little she walked towards the window..!
The Dolbriyal Mansion she simply love this place.. maasi has always been her second mother.. and Mish the only naughty cat in her life who keeps her life entertained! Jokes apart.. no one in this world would manage to see a particular side of mish which she can easily witness whenever she wants..! she was mish's exclusive partner in my crime!
[ I think its better to write in povs.. like kria, rey, Sharon, swayam, misha, karan etc!! to I will b switching pov's and will mention whose it is hence no worries! Cheers ]
Kria pov
OH MY!!! How my life had changed in this 5 years ??? i still cant believe 5 years had passed by.. it was more like yesterday after the Prom nite incident how abruptly I made exit from evryone's life.. Sharon who kept following me till the house.. swayam who kept banging my doors when I locked myself up in the room and rey ? not even once he had called.. I agree wat I did was harsh but dint he had his way to apologize ? for christs sake he was Wrong as much as I was! My only mistake falling in love with a guy who was a complete jerk! Huh!! Why am I again slaughtering myself In his thoughts ? isn't that past ??
As I was just going to let another yawn out my cell fone rang.. I sighed looking at the time it was 6am in the morning.. I dint have a proper sleep since yesterday!!
GOSH! Yesterday!!! Shit how can I even forget ??? I was getting engaged to karan and yesterday was first official family meet with all pooja and dinner stuff!! HELL!! Karan!!!! I even forgot to call him up!!! Kria u are being the next lazy cat of the house !! wasn't misha alone enough ??
I took over the fone.. who could it be ? misha ofcourse!!
'hey mish wassup!!'
'don't give 'me' wassup!! U dumbo im waiting down !!!! aren't u cuming for jogging ?? agar nhi ana tha toh pehle bol deti na! u knw I always be late to my job!! Kria yaar wats wrong with u.. fir se devdaas..' and so and so on started with her usual rants!!!
'STOP!!!' I exclaimed !! 'mish sorry I woke up just now sweetheart.. tum..' she cut me off saying
'don't call me sweetheart! How cheesy!! Kria learn to b practical!!! Atleast after all what happened!!' mish blurted on the other side .. I could imagine her rolling her eyes and snapping her head.
'whatever! Il catch u later.. u go alone today ? pleaseee'
'pata tha muje!! I knew it!!! I knew u keep ditching me!!!! Huh tujse toh karan hi better hai kam se muje NO toh nhi kehtha' she said pouting!! Oh gosh I knew this girl by every inch!!!
I chuckled at her childishness and though 'I really wish u wouldn't b this practical mish !! seriously..'
'OYEE!!! U ther ??'
'haan haan mish.. listen il freshen up.. u go alright!!?'
'fine bye!!'
Call disconnected..
I sighed deeply..
After about 20 minutes finally I was ready for my normal routine..!!! finally the house would b silent without any hustle bustle for another 4 days!!
I seriously needed peace.. life wasn't going easy.. marriage engagements! Geez taking the mere names I had goosebumps!! I swear I would murder karan if he made me go through anything more.. !! gosh how will I manage 15 days with two Biggest idiots of the world ?
Karan and Misha!! 15th day from today!! My marriage !! my marriage ?? seriously ?? with karan out of all the boys in the world ? who happened to my Best buddy since 3years of age!! If misha wasn't 2 years younger to me I swear karan wouldn't b brought to dobriyal mansion!! Then this whole Drama wouldn't have setted up! I would be peacefully leaving in NY as I was 4 years before coming to delhi!! HELL think of the devil where the hell did he disappear last nite ?? I wondered and mentally made a note to strangle him right away when I see him..
***
Rey Pov
[ still cant believe im writing in his ! lol enjoy reading ]
I glanced at my watch for one last time.. it read 7.00 am. damn I was write wen its swayam and Sharon never expect them to on time! And me ?? all alone in this creepy place early morning just arrived from Venice!! Uggh!! I hate this !! cudnt they jus gimme the address ?? I would be more obliged to find the address by myself than waiting in a creepy park early morning just landed from flight headed straight to this place were meeting was fixed..
I glanced around and spotted a bench.. I dragged my backpack and made my way towards it.. taking bottle of water from by backpack in gazed around the park.. people had started jog walk and exercise in the park.. I seriously felt out of place with my denims and tired looking face.
My fone beeped making my body vibrate and give me a mini heart attack.. I hurriedly pulled it out.. swayam calling it read.
'dude where the hell ru ??' I almost yelled at swayam who had just sweetly said hello. Oh please don't expect me to be sweet to this bloody creature!! He had ruined my life completely!! Okay if not completely he had his amount of share!!!
'rey calm down im on my way.. I just went to pick up and Sharon and she was sleeping..'
'and then u felt she was looking very cute.. and u went to kiss u sleeping beauty.. she stirred in her sleep.. u dint want her to wake up.. u stood there until she woke up by herself.. she being the sleep lover took her own sweet time.. and u let her have it.. and then finally wen she woke up.. u took another brief moment to greet and romance a bit.. and finally wen she was out of the house u just lost urself admiring her.. and HUH!! CUT THE CRAP DUDE I HAVE BEEN WAITING HERE SINCE AN HOUR AND UR GIVING ME ALL THIS SHIT ??' I yelled at him again..
'rey!!! ENOUGH IM ON MY WAY!! just 15 minutes il b ther!' saying wich he cut the fone..
GOD I know I overreacted but I cant help!! Im jealous for god's sake!!!
I and swayam both started falling for a girl almost at the same time.. wen he first saw sharon was the same time when I first saw kria.. we both had a small little bet who would win girl's heart first! SHIT BET NOT AGAIN!!!! Uugh!! How I hate this name!! this name has brought me into bits!! If it wasn't for a stupid bet which I hardly remembered kria would never go!! And for me being the DUMBEST person in the world I let her go because my ego was hurted!! And now I realize what have I lost!! Will I ever get her back! Shit NO NO NO was all I could here whenever I asked this question.. and moreover why am I here anyway ?? wasn't I trying to live in VENICE ?? was there any need to attend this wedding ?? GOD if Sharon is planning a wedding why on earth she wants me to help her anyway ?? and out of all ever since I ask this question she kept giving me threats of what would happen if I don't come over!! Huh!!
10 minutes had already past with my heavy curses towards Sharon and swayam.. I stood up in frustration only to get hit by the strong force of a wind.. wich made my nerves itch.. restless increase in my body.. goosebumps slowly made their way.. what on earth was happening ??? was it some kind of disaster ?? what more would be a disaster than losing one's own true love for a stupid lame bet ???
I looked around a park only to spot a girl wearing white sweatshirt and pants , draped in light blue jacket open zipped.. hair tied high up.. the ponytail kept moving to and fro everytime she jogged.. her ears were covered with headphones wich was connected to her ipod .. I could see white coloured Ipod peeping from her pant pockets.. she had her sweatband on her wrists.. with spectacles covering her eyes
And what hell shocked me was her FACE! And when I recognised her finally
f**k!! Kria ?? I slowly let out a sigh in disbelief !! I couldn't believe!! Was I really seeing her ? or was it an illusion ?? shit shit!! She was real.. !! she stopped near a fountain sitting down on the concrete platform around the fountain..
I blinked my eyes constantly trying to register what I was seeing.. it was if she was a complete stranger to my eyes.. even then I felt the sparks rise.. just as I first saw her.. she would never even know were I had seen her first.. it was in delhi.. hell in delhi itself when Sharon had a fashion week.. kria's college was the host.. I saw her wen I attended the show.. how she happily chirply worked and managed things well..!! gosh then and there I fallen for this girl blindly though!.. all my efforts to reach her went in vain and finally I insisted sharon to call her over to Mumbai.. and kria happily took over the opportunity.. I never had been that happy in my life to see her close to me. Evry moment spent with her was a bliss..!!! SHIT! I miss her.. *pout*
I winced in pain when someone pinched me hard on my flesh near my waist
OUCH!!!
I turned to see swayam and Sharon grinning sheepishly!! How I wished to smack their teeth at that merry second !! but I resisted.. how can I even do it ? if it wasn't them then how do I ever see my angel ??
Speaking of which I opened my mouth to say sumthn..
When swayam turned my head towards kria who was now getting up panting a bit and smiling inhaling the air in the park..
'so this was the emergency I called u over.. would u miss this chance ??' swayam whispered..
I looked over them.. and grinned wide like a 5 year old nodding my head in negation.. and then we shared a group hug..

***

many of u wer quite disturbed why i had added misha's part more.. thats coz i needed to introduce new charac thats y i went in detail neverthless the whole story if of KRIYAANSH ofcourse!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
res

unres

firstly...

yippee!!!!!!!!!first one to cmnt...

wow !!!!!!!! nice start...

shit...kriya ki shaadi...

wo bhi sharon is the wedding planner??? :O

swaron know its kria...i mean bride...

finally zindagi mei pehli baar acha kaam kiya tune rey ki p.o.v deke...

u knew ri8...i was dying to read it...

he loved her from first sight...or may be first meet...

no hopes and guesses ki aage kya hoga...

i cant believe u...

tu thedi hai...

kuch bhi aise bhi ghumati rehti hai story ko...

so just hoping for the best and waiting 4r next chapter...

i hope pechle updates ko cmnt na karne ki kami iss me poori kardi maine...

if u dnt feel so sorry...

actually 100 and more pms pe cmnt karna...not possible that too in a

stupid network is impossible...

and u know i hate typing...

sab ki cmnt ek saath likhun...

even its one lined...

i hate dng that...

coz on total it becomes pages...

just stopping my bakwaas...

baaki do jo kaha uski update jaldi dena...

aur i dnt think misha ki kuch jyaada hua...

atleast rey saw her ri8...

thats enough...

but kriya rejected to go to jog ri8???

then how come she can be there???

and any photo of mish or we should just imagine some body with blurred head??????😛

he he ...mai hamesha aisa hi karti hun

have a good day taaki ache se next update jaldi de sako...

iska nahi toh doosri ki toh sahi...
Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
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dii bang on ..loved kriyas pov d way she was missing him nd thiking abut him hayee
rey pov was awesum .. but i guess u never took my suggestion :'( its ok .. i loved it


totally amazing update


i wish .. evrything is more intense ... i love dat 😉 so...
sharon is planner of d wedding i guess sharon know dat but kriya doesnt .. nd rey dnt know dat its kriyas naa ..super excited yaar


i am surely wait for dis gosh i guess one month dats quite long time ...but still I GUESS ALWAYS U GIVE US AN UPDATE WORTH A WAIT ..
thanks for d pm
update wen possible
Edited by sujana9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
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wow!! amazing update nams ...

I just loved it...

sply Rey's POV...

thanks for the pm😊
Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
fabulous update di...

hehehe...

luvd kriyaansh's frustration...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nooo kriya ki shaadi woh bhi kissi aur se
nhi yr
aisa mt kr
rey toh maar jaiga
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update
Kria ki shaadi n sharon is the weeding planner
Rey love kria at first sight
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous update...
Loved it...
N kria is happy about her marriage???
N rey saw her...wow...
N do swaron know about kria's wedding...!!!
Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow ab ayaga maza rey will manaoing his kria

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