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"It has been six month since she had rejected my love." Virat had thought himself, who was sitting in the dark in the room. When Viren had walked in the room and tap Virat on the shoulder "Virat my brother how long will hide away from life." Viren had smelt alcohol on Virat, Viren thought "Virat you have drunk yourself away in the pass few months..." There was a minute of silence when Virat spoke "How can I go on with life when my love has gone away from my life for ever?" Viren reply "Is that my brother speaking who never gave up in life." Virat just got annoyed and said "Please bhai go away from here I don't talk to any one..." Viren felt bad but had no choice to walk out the room. Viren had come into the room, Viren always looked at thing positively but for the first time he gave up in life, one hand Maanvi was in hospital fighting for her life and there was just one name in her voice was "Partner", on the other hand how Virat had promise Maanvi that he will never meet her again. Viren thought to himself "It was sure that Maanvi and Virat could not live without each other, there was not a day where Maanvi did not miss Virat visa versa".

Jeevika had brought into Virat room with the food, when she saw a few empty bottle of Vodka. When Virat shout "Tarun where is my bottle of Vodka.?" When Tarun had walked in say "Sorry Virat baba here your bottle." When Virat get angry and said "How many time have told before my bottle finish I want another one here." Then Virat tried pour himself another drink when Jeevika stop him "Enough Virat you had enough. No more?????" Virat just smiled and said "Bhabhi that funny you showing concern for me., When I need support to get Maanvi no one had supported me to get my love. Now everyone showing fake concern for me. Please bhabhi save it and leave." Jeevika felt bad and thought "Virat how was always full of life, but now he has so much hatred toward life...It like he does not want know anything and he has loss everything...Viren ji was right once someone has loss against love they lost everything...I made a mistake 6 months ago but I will make things right no matter what I will convince Maanvi to expect Virat love as I can not see him like this any more..."
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice story...keep going n update soon !!!!!
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Originally posted by: BrunoMars

Nice concept, please

PM?

Thank you I thought of the concept when Virat had spoke Jeevika yesterday when he told her that he will go away from Maanvi life if she reject his love in 7 days and never return...So I thought what would happen if that happen...
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tat was really good start dear...continue soon:)
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Nice concept please continue soon and pm please, what will come next
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Amazing start loved it please update soon and do pm me
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Loved day start Plzzz continue soon n do pm me
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awesome start cant wait please pm me when you do thanks
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Part 2:

"Virat please have something to eat, why you taking your angry out on food?" Jeevika said to Virat sweetly, but Virat was very upset and said "Please bhabhi before I say anything out line and I take my angry out on you. Please I request you to go from here" Jeevika put her hand on Virat cheek like a mother does on her child "Please Virat stop being stubborn and eat something, since morning you been drinking this poison it not good for you." Virat get frustrated and take key of his bike which he brought for Maanvi and walked of in angry "Virat stop please? Virat listen..." Jeevika shouted helpless as she knew that Virat was to drunk to drive but Virat did not listen...When Viren come out and said "Jeevika what happen why you shouting..." When Jeevika said "Viren ji Virat gone out with the bike but he is no state to drive..." Then Viren reply "Don't worry Jeevika, I'll go after Virat..."

Outside Virat get on the bike and is about to drive when Viren shouted "Virat stop." But Virat nod his head and drove of...Viren got into the car with Jeevika and fallowed Virat but Virat drove fast and he was going all over the place...Viren tried stop Virat before it was to late but Virat has crushed with big track...Both Jeevika and Viren stop the car then shouted "Virat!!!!!!"...Virat lay on the road unconscious but he kept ripped one name only "Maanvi"...

Maanvi was in hospital and she all sudden got up from her nightmare shouted "Virat..." Maanvi instantly knew Virat was in some kind trouble as her heart started beating fast...Maanvi got her phone and dial Jeevika phone...Jeevika saw her phone ring and saw Maanvi name while she was outside OTT room where the doctor operated on Virat...Jeevika thought to herself "What will I say to Maanvi as I promised that I would look after Virat, Virat has loss his faith and fight against life after he lost his love..." Maanvi on the other hand was getting concern "Please Di pick up the phone..." Then finally Jeevika pick up the phone and said with tears in her eyes "Mannu please forgive me, I could not keep my promise..." Maanvi started to get worried "Di why you crying..." Viren saw Jeevika could not speak to he took the phone of her and said "Maanvi don't panic but Virat had an accident..." Maanvi was shocked after hear this and could not believe it Virat and accident as he was such safe drive...But Maanvi was unaware after she rejected Virat love he become an alcoholic all he did was drink and gave up on life...
Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing concept I Hope VirMan Unite And The Love Gurus Virika Unite Them
So PM me When U Update
Thanksz xxx
Edited:
So sad part 2 was i hope manvi finds out abwt virat his condition poor guy he has jus gave up
Edited by hs7071 - 13 years ago

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