Jeevan Saathi-ArSh ff Part 11-Pg 21/14 feb

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Hey guys Im Hinal
Im a Maaneet fan but I also love ArSh n have read many ffs on them
I have started a ff on MG n im writing it on ArSh version also
Hope u guys like it...


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Character Sketch

Shashank Malhotra-


A well known business man. Strict in nature but loves his family a lot.

Padma Malhotra-

Wife of Shashank. Is a house wife n loves her family a lot.

Priya Malhotra-
NDTV Imagine''s "Basera'''' Actress Priya Bathija at a press-meet in New Delhi on Wednesday

Elder daughter of Shashank n Padma Malhotra. Is an architect by profession n loves Shilpa very much. Has a down to earth nature.

Shilpa Malhotra/Malik-


Younger daughter of Shashank n Padma. Very bubby n charming girl who lives her life to the best. But 1 incident in her life changed her from a bubby girl to a very silent girl. Is married to Armaan Malik n loves her family a lot.

Armaan Malik-
Only son of Amar n Seema n MD of Malik Industries. Loves Shilpa a lot n is a very charming n fun loving guy. Loves Shilpa's family more than his.

Amar Malik -

A well known businessman n best friend of Shashank Malhotra. Loves his son a lot n always wanted to Shashank's daughter to be married to Armaan.

Seema Malik -

Amar's wife n Armaan's mom. Loves her son a lot. N loves Shilpa as her daughter.

Yuvraj Shah -
Syed Yasir Shah

Priya's would be husband. Architect by profession.
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Love,
Hinal


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Malhotra Mansion,
All are running around to complete the wedding preparations.

Padma "Arre woh phool waha mat lago. Yaha lagao... Aur yeh laal parde nahi Nile wale dalne hai... Uff kya tum log koi bhi kaam theek se nahi kar sakte. Ab jaldi karo Baraat ko anne main todhi hi der baaki hai aur yaha ek kaam bhi pura nahi huva."

Shashank "Padma shaant hojao. Sab hojayega. Tum ghabra kyu rahi ho."

Padma "Ji dekhye na sab kaam baaki pade hai aur koi bhi theek se nahi kar raha"

Shashank "Padma tum jaake Priya ko dekho main yaha ka sambhal lunga"

Padma "Ji" n left to Priya's room.

As she entered the room she saw Priya sitting in her bridal outfit looking very beautiful. Padma had tears seeing her little princess grown up wearing a bridal outfit.

She remembered the time when her both princesses were small n use to dress up in her saree n played "Shaadi... Shaadi" n today is the day when her one princess is already married n the other one is going to be married.

As Priya saw Padma standing at the door with tears in her eyes she called out, "Mumma..."

Padma came out of her thoughts n said "Meri Bachi toh kitni khubsoorat lag rahi hai. Kabhi kisi ki nazar na lage tujhe."

Priya "Mumma mujhe dar lag raha hai..."

Padma "Arre isme darne wali kya baat hai. Tu toh Yuvraj ko phele se janti hai na aur unke ghar bhi toh rahi hai. Toh phir darne kya baat hai???"

Priya "Haan Mumma main usse jaanti hu aur unke ghar bhi rahi hu lekin aaj ke baad humara rishta badal jayega.Isliye dar lag raha hai."

Padma "Arre Bacha usme darne ki koi baat nahi hai. Tum log ek dusre ko jaise jaise aur achi se janoge waise hi tera yeh dar bhi chala jayega. Ab mujhe ek smile de"

Priya "Thank u Mumma." n hugged her.

Shashank who had come to check on Padma n Priya saw them hugging n said "Mujhe hug nahi milega kya???"

Priya "Kyu nahi papa" n got up n hugged him.

"Arre Bidaai main abhi time hai toh abhi se kyu rona shuru kar diya aap teeno ne???"

Priya came out of the hug n pulled Shilpa's ears n said "Tu inti late kyu aayi."

Shilpa "Ouchhh Di chodo na."

Priya left her ear n then asked "Ab bata late kyu huvi???"

Shilpa remembered the morning events n blushed a bit n said "Woh kuch nahi Di. Armaan ka kuch kaam agaya tha isiliye late hogaye."

Padma "Acha tum log baatein karo main neeche chalti hu. Aur Shilpa yeh kya tu Armaan ko akela chod ke agayi??? Uff kab sudhregi yeh ladki" n went with Shashank to welcome Armaan n look at the other arrangements.

Anjali, Priya n Shilpa's friend said after Padma n Shashank left "Arre Priya tujhe pata nahi hai kya ke Armaan ka kya important kaam agaya hoga subah subah Shilpa ko dekh ke" n winked at her.

Priya "Haan Anjie woh toh koi moka nahi chodta Shilpa ke saath romance karne main "n hi-fied Anjali while Shilpa was blushing hearing it.

Shilpa "Aisa kuch nahi hai di aur waise main bhi kal se dekhti hu ke jiju aapko kitna akela chod te hai." n hi- fied Anjali.

Shilpa "Waise di jiju dekhte kaise hai??? Yeh galat hai ke aapne abhi tak jiju ki ek photo bhi nahi dekhiye hume"

Anjali "Haan Priya bata na kaise dikhte hai woh"

Priya "Woh... Unki aankhein... mendak jaisi hai..."

A pair of hazel brown eyes are shown.

"Unki body jaise ko budha mota insaan hai waisi hai..."

A guy looking extremely handsome is seen.

"Aur woh aise bolta hai... Pri...iiiya Mu...jh...se Sh...aa...diii... ka...roo...giii..." started laughing.

Shilpa "Wah di kya description di hai jiju ki ab toh unko dekhna hi hoga."

Padma from downstairs "Shilpaaa Neeche aa..."

Priya "Ja Mumma bula rahi hai"

Shilpa "Haan jati hu" n went down n Rano told her to take the Thali to pandit ji.

Shilpa took the plate which had sindoor,mangalsutra n flowers n gave it to pandit ji. Pandit ji asked to get something from the kitchen n as she was taking out the thing a pair of hands held her from back n she gasped out loud.

"Armaannn. Yeh aap kya kar rahe ho chodo na kisine dekh liya toh."

Armaan "Arre koi nahi dekhega aur agar dekh bhi liya toh kuch nahi kehega akhir tumhara pati hu main. Kisi padosi ki biwi ke saath romance nahi kar raha main." n turned her towards him.

Shilpa "Aapko aaj badi masti suj rahi hai kya baat hai???"

Armaan "Agar tum itni khubsoorat lagogi is saree main toh main kya kar sakta hu." n was about to kiss her when Shilpa pushed him n said "Baaki ki masti ghar par" n ran away with the thing.

Armaan smiled at her retreating figure n went to Shashank to help him in the arrangements.

After sometime the baraat arrived n Padma did the aarti n as Yuvraj was about to lift the sehra someone called Shilpa n she turned away. After welcoming Yuvraj he was lead to the mandap n all the rituals began. Shilpa n Anjali stole the shoes without anyone getting to know from the groom's side.

Shilpa did the ghatbandhan n came n stood next to Armaan n Shilpa was showering the flowers on the couple when she felt the flowers on her n turned to see Armaan showering the flowers on her. Shilpa glared at him but he didnt stop n then she shook her head n left from there to bring the shoes with Anjali.

Anjali "Jiju ab toh sehra hataye aur apna chera dikhaye. Baadi taraf suni hai aapki..."

As Yuvraj was about to remove his sehra the guys from the groom's side said "Nahi phele aap jhoote dijye uske baad hi aapko dulhe ka chera dekhne ko milega"

Anjali "Phele hume paise dijye phir hi jhoote milenge vaharna baithe rahe yaha bina jhooto ke." n hi-fied Shilpa.

Yuvraj then took out money from his pocket n gave n then he lifted his sehra n Shilpa n Anjali were shocked n the next second Shilpa fainted.

Precap -
Blast from the past

Priya's outfit -

Shilpa's outfit -

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Yuvraj's outfit -
Beige Colored Grooms Sherwani

Armaan's outfit -
Resham Worked Mens Indian Sherwani

Love,
Hinal

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Yuvraj then took out money from his pocket n gave n then he lifted his sehra n Shilpa n Anjali were shocked n the next second Shilpa fainted.

Armaan held Shilpa from falling n took her up to her room n Anjali followed. Yuvraj was shocked to see her n thought, "Shilpa woh yaha kya kar rahi hai??? Aur woh ladka kaun tha jo usko utha ke abhi leke gaya" (Shilpa what is she doing here??? N who is the guy who took her in his arms n went now) n as he turned to ask Priya he saw no one was standing there n then saw that all had gone to the room to see Shilpa n so even he went there.

Armaan was pacing in worry n wondering why was Anjali taking so much time to check her. The whole 5 mins looked like an eternity for him without his Jaan, his Shilpa.

As Anjali came out he began questioning her without even taking a breath.

Armaan, "Anjie Shilpa theek toh hai na??? Usse hosh agaya kya??? Arre tum kuch bol kyu nahi ho???" (Anjie Shilpa is fine na??? Did she gain conciousness??? Why arent u telling something???)

Anjali, "Arre Armaan phele tum shaant hojao. Shilpa bilkul theek hai aur woh bas todha stress badh gaya tha isiliye behosh hogayi." (Armaan first u calm down. Shilpa is fine n she fainted bcoz of stress) n coming to his ears whispered, "Aur tumhare liye ek khush khabri hai" (N there is a good news for u) n winked n went down taking all others with her.

Armaan was only worried for his Jaan n didnt understand what Anjali was telling n rushed in to see Shilpa sitting on the bed with a small smile on her face which had gone a bit pink.

Armaan went n sat in front of her n cupped her face n said in a worried tone, "Tum theek ho na Jaan???" (Are u fine Jaan???)

Shilpa smiled at him n said, "Haan main theek hu." with a blush on her face.

Armaan kissed her forehead n said, "Pata hai main kitna pareshaan hogaya tha tumhe behosh dekh ke... Meri toh jaan hi nikal gayi thi lekin tumhe theek dekh ke mujhe ab bohut acha lag raha hai." (U know how worried I was when I saw u fainted... My life had only gone seeing u like that but seeing u fine now my life is back)

He then came close to her n took her lips into his. First it was a smooth kiss pouring out his fear but then it turned into a passionate one when she started responding with equal passion.

As they pulled out of the kiss being breathless Shilpa pushed Armaan n rushed to the washroom n puked. Armaan ran to help her n held her hairs n helped her to wash her face. He then carried her in his arms back to the bed n rested her n then asked, "Tum theek ho na Jaan??? Yeh tumhe aaj kal ulti kyu arahi hai??? Main Anjali ko bolta hu ke tumhara phir se check up kar de..."(U are fine na Jaan??? Why are u puking from a few days??? I'll tell Anjali to do ur check up once again...) n stood up to leave when Shilpa held his hand. Armaan turned n asked, "Tumhe kuch chahiye kya Jaan???" (U want something Jaan???)

Shilpa shook her head in a no n said, "Phele aap yaha bhetiye mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai." (First u sit here I want to tell u something.)

Armaan, "Haan bolo Shilpa." (Ya tell Shilpa)

Shilpa, "Armaan kal aapka birthday hai na toh main aapko ek gift dena chahti hu jo aapko meri taraf se best gift hoga..." (Armaan tmrw is ur birtday right so I want to give u a gift which will be the best one from my side)

Armaan, "Acha aur woh gift kya hai???" (Oh n what is that gift???)

Shilpa took his hands in hers n placed it on her stomach n whispered in his ears, "Aap Papa bane wale hai." (U are going to be a father)

Armaan was so overwhelmed that he was going to be Papa n Shilpa Mama n that it was their symbol of love. Armaan kissed her forehead n then kissed her both eyes n then her cheeks n as he was about to kiss her lips someone knocked the door. Armaan groaned n said, "Lo agaye kabab main haddi" (See someone came to disturb us)

Shilpa giggled seeing his irritated face n pushed him n said, "Jao na." (Go na)

Armaan sighed n went n opened the door to see the whole Malhotra family n Malik family standing there with smiles along with Anjali who had a big smirk on her face seeing his irritated face. Armaan smiled at them n let them in.

Shilpa went pink seeing her family smiling as she got to know that they know about her pregnancy. Priya went n hugged Shilpa n said, "Thank u Shilpa. This is the best wedding gift I could get. Main Massi bane wali hu..." (Im going to be aunt now)

Shilpa smiled n hugged her back n then Padma n Seema came n blessed her n all congraulated her. Yuvraj came n congraluted her n went out.

After sometime Priya's bidaai was held n then the whole Malik family left. After reaching home Seema told Armaan to take Shilpa to their room to rest n then left as they were also tired bcoz of the wedding.

After entering the room Shilpa went n changed into something more comfortable n then lied down on the bed n was thinking about the baby when she felt ticklish n laughed n saw Armaan kissing her stomach.

Armaan, "Hello baby, Main Armaan hu aapka Papa... Aapko dekhne ke bohut mann kar raha hai isiliye aap jaldi se aana aur phir hum dono mil ke Mumma ko bohut tang karenge aur bohut saari masti karenge." n again kissed her stomach.

Shulpa waked Armaan's shoulders n said, "Abhi tak woh aaya nahi aur tum abhi se team bana ke meri khilaaf ho bhi gaye" n made a gol guppa face.

Oh Armaan so wanted to kiss her rosy cheeks then n he did that n said, "Nahi Shona main toh bas baby se baat kar raha tha aur mujhe kya baat karni hai nahi pata thi toh maine yeh bol diya" She pouted cutely..he didn't let her think, rather took in those plump lips into a soul searing kiss. she clutched his shirt tighter with his unexpected move and when she adjusted herself, he bit her lips hard

"aaah..." she hissed and he took the advantage and delved his tongue deeper into her mouth. she was thrilled with the sensation he was filling her with...his tongue exploring each and every corner of her mouth. she wrapped her hands around his shoulder, giving in to his demand, closing her eyes. they finally parted when they felt a serious need for air. he looked at her flushed face...pink and glowing...her eyes her lost in him... he saw the desire in then..the same that he felt.

Shilpa always had to bow don infront of his passion... she noticed his eyes going a darker shade with every passing second.

He pulled her closer to him and dug his face into her hair, taking in the exotic aroma, trailing wet kisses along her slender neck line, leaving is marks.

Her fingers ran into his hair, clutching them tight...pulling him more on to her. He moved down, trailing kisses and stopped right over her bosom. with a jerk he pulled away her kurti that stopped him from treading further. He felt her shiver in his arms...he slowly traced his finger along the line of her salwar, kissing her stomach. she held his shoulder, suppressing her moan, digging her fingers into his skin.

Slowly he pulled out the salwar and tossed it away, Shilpa felt as if she'd swoon in anticipation. She gasped, "Armaan..", feeling the chillness around her waist and below.

He was throbbing with his arousal. by the time he had undressed, she had already unbuttoned his shirt and thrown it somewhere. He kissed her tummy again, "you sleep baby.. mumma will be with me tonight.."

Shilpa smiled hearing hearing him say so! nothing to say... they could understand each other just by looking into their eyes.In a fraction of second, he lay on top of her...both completely bare, moaning and panting.

He relished her like a hungry lion...worshipped her body like a goddess and kissed her senseless. she couldn't have taken it anymore. She pulled his hair in order to get him close.. he groaned and slipped in, making her scream. he let her scream while he moved gently within her..filling her with his love...kissing her everywhere but her lips.

He remained careful as not to hurt her in any way.

She shuddered as she hit the climax and he followed her seconds later. He kissed her passionately when her screams subsided. She caressed his bare shoulder and back, where she had scartched and bit him...soothing them with her love'.

After they calmed down Armaan lied on his back n took her into his arms n caressed her hairs. Shilpa had a soft smile on her face n was lost thinking something.

Armaan while playing with her front curls asked, "Kya soch rahi ho Jaan???"

Shilpa, "Kuch nahi bas humari pheli mulakat yaad kar rahi thi. Tumhe pata hai tab maine socha bhi nahi tha ke main tumse shaadi karungi ya phir humare pyaar ki nishaani mere saath hogi."

Armaan, "Lekin maine toh yahi socha tha ke tumhe meri biwi banogi aur humare pyaar ki nishaani tumhare saath hi hogi"

Shilpa, "Tumhe kitne irritating the tab uff'."

Armaan, "Aur tum utni hi khubsoorat jitni aaj ho'."

Shilpa, "Armaannn''"

Precap '

Flashback

ArSh 1st meet

Present

Yuvraj thinking about Shilpa


Credits to Ash (Kawaii_geet) for the intimate scene which is written by her.

Love,

Hinal

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amaazing work dear
loved it
aww armaan is sooo cute
And loved the Arsh moments
I think yuvraj is shilpa 's past hope he will not come between Armaan shilpa
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiii
awesome update
loved it
ArSh sooo cute
loved armaan
sooo sweet
was YV shilpa's past
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting start!!!!!
loved the CS!!!
beautiful update!!!!!
please do continue soon!!!
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Hey great start...But i would like to draw ur attention to the fact that this ff HIGHLY rsembles another one written by my friend Laddoo Phaddoo..its called humsafar...The storyline so far matches 90% with that...SO please make sure u take care of that...

Also kindly shift it to the FanFiction Forum please...

Once again...Great Start...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awwosme ff dear just read two parts
would love to read further,do contiue soon and do pm me plz love
maria:)
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Originally posted by: SabzKaShGrAnd

Hey great start...But i would like to draw ur attention to the fact that this ff HIGHLY rsembles another one written by my friend Laddoo Phaddoo..its called humsafar...The storyline so far matches 90% with that...SO please make sure u take care of that...


Also kindly shift it to the FanFiction Forum please...

Once again...Great Start...




yeah it resembles but i guess it is quite difrent from Humsafar!i hope she take care of this further as well:)

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