DIL, DOSTI.. HUM!! ch25: pg 148,thread #2 link:pg1 - Page 22

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!she was so determined to learn cooking..
only for her dd..i mean dusht danav..
which is still unknown to her...
who hugged her?i hope its not dev!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
plz start maaneet convo
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG... just loving your writting...
keep writting
just can't wait for next...
Loved it loved it loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
GEET LEARNT TO COOK WHEN SHE WAS JUST 12 AND THAT TOO ITALIAN
DD NOW STANDS FOR DHAK DHAK AND NOT DESIRING DEVIL
MEERA IS SO COMFORTABLE WITH MAAN FROM DAY ONE AND GEET IS CONFUSED
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute update .
Geet used to chat with Maan n not dev ,so she learnt cooking Italian for him ,so cute😍
she called him dhust dhanav bcoz he didn't speak to her 😆
who held her waist ,dev ya maan 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful update...

loved it...

will geet realise her feelings fr maan...lets hope fr d best...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Pyar its the most ajeebest thing in the wrld yar ... maneet made me believe in it sachi ... grt update ... thnx fr the pm...cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg ! thank you so much ... I'm loving it ! its inspired but on geet and maan it has a very different feel altogether , just fabulous ! I loved the fact that Geet hugged her original DD Maan 😳
cannot wait for their first one to one conversation
thanks a lot for all pms

Edited by SuperbDrashti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...

Loved it so much

waiting for more

continue soon

thankx for pm



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Posted: 13 years ago



chapter 8

geet

'twas as if I was being engulfed in a warmth.. one which promised love, care n a sense of security!! It was a physical touch n yet d reaction came from my heart.. my heart beats had fastened, excited by his presence..!! my eyes closed involuntarily enjoying d bliss.. his touch invoked a fire I nvr knew existed in me.. I was scared I'd loose myself completely if he did nytng more and at d same tym feared I d collapse 4evr if he left me..!! d beautiful moon lit nyt added to d feel.. nd it was heaven to be in his arms.. to feel his breath on my nape wer he rested his head!! It send shivers down my back.. I wanted to turn arnd n look into his eyes.. which intrigued me, to hide myself in him.. n hug him tight, to tell him how much I missed him ovr dese yrs.. to fight wid him wen he wasn't der for me bt still was my support!!

But he held me tight in his embrace n I knew dis wer I belong!! As his fingers played magic wid my skin, his lips softly caressed my earlobe.. hey babaji he was such a tease.. bt I cudnt take it nymore.. neither d plessure nor d torture..!! I turned arnd n hugged him tight.. I cud hear his heart beat which was like music to my ears.. I found myself loosing in him.. my eyes still closed I softly kissed his heart!!


I opened my eyes wanting 2 capture his image forever.. slowly I opened my eyes..

To get d biggest surprise n shock of my life

It wasn't dev..

It was

Maan!!

I woke wid a start!! It was twilight. Break of dawn approaching a peaceful beginning unlike my state.. I was almost shaking wid shock? My heart was racing, my chest heaving, my emotions in a mess.. a havoc in my mind n body!!

I had just met him hardly 24hrs b4.. if u cud cal a mistaken hug n a few half glances a meeting, n here he not only occupied my thots bt also my dreams!! Don't dey say dreams seen early morng at dusk cm true.. hey babaji.. wht is happening 2 me?

As my breaths came bk 2 normal n my body relaxed guilt wasn't d first thot!! I was shy bt den chided myself.. wht was wrong wid me.. all my life I waited 2 meet dev n here I was dreaming of maan!! Hey babaji.. tht guy refused to look or talk to me.. I mean I haven't initiated ny convo or tried bt d dhust danav, he is,m scared if without speaking I cant get him ouuta my system.. wonder wht ll happen wen he talk 2 me..!!

Probably it was just d effect of desert request n meeer's praising him!!

No.. I cant allow such a thng 2 happen!! I better stay out of his way? N wht if he's able to c thru my thots!!

yes tht was d way.. i had 2 stay away fm him.. compose myself, b4 i speak to him!!

I got up fm d swing n went to my room..n slept off.. wanting 2 forget my dream n getting a hold ovr my feelings n my life..!!

my heart n mind wer indeed playing games!!

Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago

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