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Posted: 13 years ago
hope my wait is over sooonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
will u plz update.N plz start khumaari 2 soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

KHUMAARI- Beauty With The Beast
EPILOGUE

Thank u guys... I got some fantastic comments that made me sooo happy... Its bcoz of u all that I am able to finish it. Without your cmments n likes Khumaari would have been incomplete. I am sorry that I kept u all waiting... but finally I am updating so please don't be mad at me😳

Dedicated to:

Shru di (shrutheAjay)
I know m damn late but u know the reason anyways belated Happy Birthday😛 Wish u all the happiness in life😃
n also to RB (Neha512)
the amazing writer of Intehaa.. She scored 288 out of 300 in her CA trainning n I hav never been so proud of her.
She looked at her reflection in the mirror n blushed.
Jhalli. Came out of her mouth as she hit her head for her stupidity. The bright red mark she found that morning in on her neck in Mukki was not some insect bite but the proof of her husband's love, she knew it now because her whole body was covered with similar marks n though she had hard time hiding them n Meera teased her every now n then, still every time she glanced at those marks she loved herself more because he loved her n it made her feel so much more precious.
Strong arms wrapped around her waist n her eyes moved down to her bump, it was no ordinary bump n was huge but not once Maan made her feel ugly or unwanted.
You should have woken me up. His voice was hoarse as he buried his face in her locks inhaling her scent n for the umpteenth time he realised that he could never get enough of her. I told you not to climb off the bed without me.
Geet pouted at his reflection in the mirror. Maan it's just a bed not Mount Everest. She said to her over protective hubby, n by over protective she wasn't referring to some normal protective husband who took care of his wife at the time of her pregnancy, by over protective she meant obsessive compulsive protectiveness.
Well, it all started when just after 1 month of their first ahem ahem night, they found out that she was expecting n that was it. Something got into him n he became almost neurotic about shielding her from everything.
He transferred their room downstairs; whenever she needed to go upstairs he was there to carry her. He didn't allow her to work, not even to take water for herself. Poor Cotton, she was also not allowed to play with him in the garden. Only Geet knew how she convinced Maan to continue going to office, already he was working for just 6 hours in office she didn't wanted him to compromise with his work.
Though he went to office but stayed connected to her all the time n in his absence there was always a line of servants to take care of her but more to keep an eye on her so she didn't do any work. He also asked for leave from her school n the authorities had to arrange for a temporary substitute for her post. Despite all her efforts on the 4th month of her pregnancy he stopped going to office n stayed with her 24/7 like a shadow n looked after all the business from home.
While she was getting exasperated by his behaviour, he just loved all this. He had an excuse to stay with all the time n all those small small moments with her were his biggest treasures. Sharing cherries with her n in return receiving that lovely smile while eating ice cream on the most odd timings at night, fulfilling all her wishes, her mood swings... everything made his life beautiful which was no surprise as he had the factual beauty with himself, truthful n pure.
What he loved the most was her increased curves n to double Geet's misery n his fortune, she herself craved for him more n more. They made love like insane n few times even the servants caught them in their act. No one roamed around their room or study while they were together who knows when they would start. Maan was shameless but she always ended all red n embarrassed.
Even Meera n Shaan were incredulous, they were recently married but didn't stood anywhere near in comparison to Geet Maan. They didn't understood from where so much passion came from, maybe it was Geet who was Maan's from the very beginning, maybe it was Maan whose life revolved around her or maybe it was their divine love that knew no bounds.
Are you complaining that I love you so much? Maan asked suddenly serious.
Nai... Geet shouted. Maine aisa kab kaha.
Maan smirked, there was a time when he never even thought about saying it to her that too with actual feelings but after he confessed 'that time' became a history n he never hesitated again. He said it every time he got a chance, not like he waited for one n he used those three words to his full advantage n did emotional atyachaar on poor Geet.
Hmm... So you ready for bath? Maan asked since her pregnancy he gave her bath, daily n didn't minded it at all.
Maan... She said turning in his embrace n looked into his eyes. This is not necessary.
He raised his brow. I mean since last 8 months, I am not able to look after you n you are doing so much...
Shh... Maan kept his finger on her mouth. You think I am doing this for you? I am doing this for myself. He knocked the fat tear drop off her cheek. I don't know about you but these 8 months were the best 8 months of my life. For the 1st time I am not doing something because its business, but 1st time I am doing something that is worthy.
He cupped her face. I love you Geet that's why whatever I do is to keep you safe so that you remain with me forever. Anyways you are going to give birth to my cubs so it's my duty. He said n she hugged him tight.
When she had married because of her father n brother, she had no idea that life was going to be so perfect. Her husband was one in a million n had come a long way. He may not speak his heart to anyone else but he did with her. He told her things that no other person knew n the Maan she lived with, no one could imagine even existed. He treated her like a queen n she felt special. It was not the billons her husband owned that she cared about but that little space she held in centre of his heart was the earning of her lifetime.
I love you Maan. She tilted her head up so that she could look into those intense orbs that reflected her image. N I will be there with you till the end.
Her due date was after 1 month but her labour pain started the very next day. Maan immediately took her to the hospital. It was 12:15 PM n he was pacing outside the delivery room since 45 minutes, hearing her nonstop screams. Dadimaa, Shaan n Meera were also worried n tried to calm him down but fruitlessly. Another scream n the dam of his patience shattered.
Mr. Khurana you can't come in here. The nurse tried to push him out.
This is my wife. He growled. N I am going to stay with her.
The scared nurse turned to the doctor to which she nodded. The nurse provided him with a gown which he quickly tied around n walked to Geet who was placed on a weird looking chair with legs stretched n a blue medical cloth covering her from below the waist.
Her face told her misery. Maan. She half spoke half cried when he held her hand firmly between his. Her breathing was rugged n whole face wet with tears n sweat. She was scared before but feeling his touch she calmed down a bit.
He didn't know that giving birth would be so painful n his Mishty would have to go through so much. A tear rolled down from his eyes n she couldn't see him so vulnerable.
Everything is going to be fine. She assured collecting all her strength. He pretended to be strong n unaffected but she knew there was always a fear lurking inside him of losing what he loved. He had lived every moment of the pregnancy with her n right now also he was feeling every ounce of her pain which she didn't wanted.
Aaa... She screamed once more.
Doctor is she okay? You said her due date is after 1 month.
Yes Mr. Khurana. Average length of pregnancy in case of twins is 36 weeks. Doctor said. She had already informed them that she was going to give multiple birth, which she assumed to be twins because it was most common multiple birth but now when Geet was going through labour after 8 months only she understood what it was.
Geet screamed again n her breathing became more uneven. He could feel the pulse in her wrist going faster.
Squeezing her hand, he turned towards her. You can do it. I know. It was strange that even in this condition she was able to hear him so clearly, to feel him so profoundly n she trusted him. If he said that she could do it, then surely she would. Closing her eyes she dug her nails into his hands while his eyes were just fixated on her face n after few minutes of screaming n tension they heard the cry of the baby but before she could relax the excruciating pain again started n they heard another baby cry. When Maan thought that finally everything ended n was about to withdrew his hand, she held it tighter n with another scream one more cry penetrated their ears.
He entered the white hospital room n it didn't look dull at all; it was filled with colours, colours so vibrant that radiated his entire life. His loving eyes met the view of his angel, his beauty n then to the three princesses sleeping peacefully beside her. It was beyond his imagination that his fragile wife could endure so much of pain n give birth to 3 new lives. For all the times he thought that women were weak, she was weak, he was utterly wrong.
She was stronger than anyone else. She coped up with her father n brother while playing a mother to her sister at such a young age n after marriage she lived with him which was no walk on roses. Only a strong person like her could go through all the suffering he inflicted on her n still love him.
Man thinks on himself to be powerful but the real strength lies in the mildness of a woman's heart.
She is patient n forgiving. Perhaps that's the reason that god bestowed the responsibility of giving birth to a woman only.
She opened her eyes n that look in his eyes while watching their babies, made her feel idyllic like that was the moment she was waiting for all her life.
We created them. Maan commented on finding her awake n she smiled at his enthusiasm.
It's all because of you. She faked a pout signalling towards their 3-3 babies. Why do love me so much?
Because you Mishty.. He said sitting on the bed, careful not to wake the small souls. Are the reason of my being.
They went back home n received a warm welcome. Apart from maaneet, Dadimaa was another person who was really ecstatic, getting the perfect happy family that she always yearned for.
Days passed like this with love n happiness n despite having 3 infants Geet never suffered any discomfort; Maan had almost a dozen servants to assist her in taking care of the babies. He himself helped her n after finishing each chore, the sense of accomplishment n elation he felt was far more than any pleasure he got due to his business achievements.
While behind the closed doors he was loving n caring, outside he was still arrogant n very much the same person the only difference was he now possessed a heart n there was no Casanova tag with him. Most of his time was spent with her n she knew all about his business deals n if she felt something was morally wrong, she asked him not to do it n he could never deny her. Even without her saying he quit all his illegal dealings knowing his wife wouldn't like it n her dislike was his.
Doctor had advised them to maintain distance for 6 weeks so that Geet could heal after delivery n Maan waited patiently for that time to pass. Okay not so patiently n though it frustrated him, controlling all those wild urges every time he glanced at her, still he tired pacifying himself that once she gets completely cured he would make up for all this time.
Geet... Maan called pulling her into him.
His raw morning voice turned her on but she turned her head to the other side as she didn't want to make it difficult for him.
Maan you should get ready otherwise you will be late.
Uh..huh.. M not going to office today.
Kyu?? She turned on the bed to look at him.
What date today is?
12th august.
You know what that means?
Geet raised her brow. It means your 6 weeks are over. It immediately clicked in her mind. In taking care of the little angels she almost forgot about day n night but how could she forget this?
Her face lit up n he instantly dragged her towards the bathroom. What is this? She asked looking at the tub filled with crimson red thing which was certainly not water.
Wine... I always wanted to taste the two most intoxicating things together. Within minutes Maan freed them of their cloths n they were in big tub. After so many times, she still felt nervous n shy and shifted closer to him to hide herself.
He licked the wine drops sliding on her shoulders n as the burning sensation ran down his throat, his inner fire amplified. He kissed her neck coming over her n she threw her head back to give him better access. Grinding his hips against her he took her to the edge while she arced her herself more to make sure that he understood what she sought after.
His teeth bit into the pulse on her neck n that was indication of his next step. He penetrated inside her n she floated into bliss, it felt like arid ages since they thirsted for this but now it was being quenched n nothing felt better. They both reached their orgasm as she screamed his name n he kissed her, panting heavily.
You are far more invigorating than the wine. He commented. Ready for another round?
He asked n her blush answered it all.
3 years latter...
Mumma phir kya hua? Pari asked Geet. She, Piya n Pihu were listening to the story with great concentration while the 1 n a half year old Krish was busy sucking his thumb n kicking his sisters every now n then.
After few months of delivery Geet again became pregnant n gave birth to junior khurana n to everyone's astonishment n delight she was right now also 4 months pregnant. Maan though always composed n rational forgot everything when with his kids. The fact that they were his blood n he was somehow responsible in creating them fascinated him. Every time he saw them he felt proud n complete. He loved n pampered them to no extents.
Pari, Piya n Pihu already owned a doll house n mind it, no ordinary toy house but a real, big n pink house exclusively made for Khurana girls n for Krish there was a gaming room in KM with latest video games n all, it was another thing that at the moment he didn't even knew how to hold a remote. Although Maan pampered them like no tomorrow Geet was there to put good morals n values in them n the kids were truly lucky to have the world's best parents.
The spell broke by the tears of beauty. Geet said pulling Krish's thumb out of his mouth n covering all four kids with the warm blanket. Because she was his true love n because of it beast turned into a human.
Then? Asked Pihu.
Then they kissed n lived happily ever after. The girls clapped their hands while Krish kicked his legs merrily.
Now close your eyes n go to sleep. Geet closed the side lamp. Krish... At the stern voice of his mother he also quickly closed his eyes that were ditto copy of his father.
Maan quietly opened the door. Are they asleep? He asked in hushed tone.
Hmm... Geet nodded. He sat beside her n again pulled Krish's thumb out of his mouth.
I think they need separate rooms. He suggested seriously.
Maan they are just kids. She protested. It's good if they stays together.
You sure? Maan asked knotting his brows.
Haan. She smiled snuggling closer to him. Your work done? She asked as he was working in the study on some project.
Yeah but not all work is finished. He smirked n within a second she was in his arms as they moved out of the kids' room to theirs.
He laid her on the bed, tossing the dubatta aside n covered her petite form with his hard one.
I love you Maan. She said lacing her fingers in his hairs as his lips hovered over hers.
I live for you. Their lips met into the softest kiss filled with her innocent love n his feral passion.
They parted so that he could peek into those eyes oozing with love. He pecked her forehead then they again kissed n lived happily ever after.
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STOP!! STOP!! Forgot our Cotton? At least the meagre creature now deserves some screen space. Well after the beast stole poor Cotton's mumma, he became very lonely as Geet wasn't able to spare him much time. So she brought him a tiny wifey named Roma, who was purely like him... white n fluffy.
At the very 1st first sight Cotton became latto on her n when she saw Cotton... Aaah can anyone ignore our cutie pie? They instantly fell in love n soon there were 5 mini Cottons roaming here n there in KM, much to Maan's dislike but Geet loved them all. That's how Cotton became a family man... oppsss... family dog n this was his happy ending.
Don't know if I am sad or happy that it ended... but I am certainly satisfied by the happy note it ended on... Hope u ol agree with me... I am waiting to start with Khumaari 2 but all the silent reader who commented last part have to promise they wud comment more often on it😛
Now please like n comment so that i could know ur views, this is the last time I m asking for them on Khumaari sooo please...😳
Loads of love
Osheen😊
Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb epilogue
maan having 3 princess n 1 boy
geet carrying again
maan is really a romantic n caring hubby
he was so possessive with geet
n their romance is in air..
cottons family is also completed now..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it... It's beautiful.. When i saw prologue... I was jumpping in joy... I thought u started khumaari 2... But bechaari me... It was a beautiful journey... ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
AMAZING
MIND BLOWING
can't wait for Khumaari 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
tat was just amazing dear..
maan and geet having 4 kids and geet giving birth to triplets.. and still preggy with 5th one.. tat was awesome..
truly her innocence and love turned a beast into her maan...
m eagerly waiting for khumari season 2..
plzzz start soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
OH MY GOD THAT WAS PERFECT ENDING TO a story . JUST PERFECT ! . pls write more such FF's and if you do please inform us and i'm a true fan of ur work KHUMAARI - was the best of works i have ever read & i love it to beyond limit's , i'm qute sad that it ended but very happy that it has such a wonderful ending .love u & ur ff ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story dear...thank you for writng this...waiting eagerly for khumaari 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely epilogue
OMG maan needs to control 4 kids still one is on the way😳

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