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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Loved it!

Leave it to Anjali to not see what her hubby was doing...

But i liked the part about caterpillars and butterflies. Although, taken in a different context, it could also imply that shyam would slowly evolve and become a butterfly - meaning he would take position of arnav. but we all know that will never happen!

Great story!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

wow. whatever you made that creep do, i love you for making khushi find comfort in arnav's arms. very well written. Great story!!!

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Raj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

wow that was sooo good!!!! i luv how you descibed how khushi felt when shayam touched her and how different it was when arnav touched her...luv the contrast between the caterpillers and butterflies-it was fab :)

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ragaya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

That was absolutely beautiful, Anu! You are a queen of emotions. I can imagine how violated Khushi must have felt due to the creep. The way she sought comfort from Arnav was so realistic.Superb, dear!