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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Huge applause to both my buddies and to you to Annie!
That was a brilliant start to what I believe would make an incredible story.
Fire ahead guys!

awww... nidhs, jaan *hugs*... thanks for your applauses..

i'm sure this one will get you hooked..

yup there is fire and also ice ahead.. caution board laga na padega.. lolzz..

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Chapter 1:Matches our made in Heaven

written by me Fiza (lalmirch28)

Maanvi looking completely gorgeous in her wedding dress walked down the Stairs with her friends around her. Khushi to her right , her bro Daboo on the left and Today was her wedding day the day that every girl waits and dreams for, but instead of being thrilled she was terrified. The reason being that she was emotional blackmailed and forced in to marring a guy she didn't love for get love someone she barely even knew this was only beacuse of that horrible incident that happend in college and that heartless casanova

maanvi's mind: Come on Manvi i get a hold of yourself be strong, today your life will change for ever your getting married ,you have to do this for your family. Just thing about papa, chachu, Beji Daboo you cant back out now.

maanvi's heart: Main aisa kaise kar sakthi hoon. I don't know why but I cant get my self to trust gyaan, even though he Promised me he will always keep me happy, but I have this gut feeling that keeps telling me he is not the right guy for me. I just want to scream and run away from this situation(closing her eyes) ya Rabba please let me be wrong about gyaan and let this new chapter in life be the beginning of the most beautiful journey of my life please help me please.(maanvi looks up at the guest ) she passes by viren to go sit at the mandap

(Viren looking at maanvi i and thinking )Viren's heart: why do i feel this bride is one of the saddest i have ever seen ? it's her wedding day..every girl waits for a day like today but why does it seem that she is dreading it wwhy am i feeling this girls pain ?

Viren's mind: wait is she being forced into this shaadi ?is this out of her will ...come on viren cool it your at someones wedding stop thinking like a lawyer

khushi (putting her hand on Maanvi's shoulder trying to make her feel relax) : maanvi i you look Stunning ' don't worry it will all work out just give yourself a chance to try and understand him then time will make everything fall into place for get about everything taht happend . Now please smile. says khushi

for the 1^st time Khushi di you proved u have Brains great advice you gave my sister.says dabbu

Oye Dabba excuse me but you're the one who has no brains. says Khushi

who ever marries u is insane Khushi Di I tell you and Maanvi di everything will ok main ho na your body guard brother says dabbu.

OMG! Maanvi look the jiju is looking at you says dabbu

maanvi looks up a lil but doesnt notice her would be husband she is too lost in thought

As she sat in the mandap beside him, her heart rate started to beat faster. She look at her soon to be husband gyaan. he smiled at her but his smile didnt touch her at all . she could belive she was actually getting married to a guy she barely knew she Maanvi the jahnsi ki rani was hell scared of this strange man sitting near her for the firt time in life she didnt know how get out of sucha stiutaion The marriage began. They started the rituals as she tried to hold back the tears.

suddenly the Groom's mother stop's the rituals the phire wont start till you give us another 75 lacs and a papers to your property in chandighar says the woman

everyone was shocked but not as much as maanvi was she had no idea that the grooms family were so damn greedy .she looked up at her would be husband stairing at him with pleading eyes to stop the nonsences at once

she felt betrayed she felt as if her family was selling her trading her to the grooms family she couldnt take it any more she stood up

she clapped her hands

"wow" just amazing our you a mother or a business woman? disgusting shame on you you being a woman how can you do this toa young gurl on her wedding day? How dare you make such demands and take advatage of my family helplessness . im nota toy or piec of furnture to be sold ...you cant bid on me ..and you know what im not for sale im priceless... you will regret what you have said .says manvi poining a finger at the old lady..

Manvi beta please chup ho jao says her chacha

no chachu why should i looking at the groom this fool this Bhalu (bear ) you chose for me he hasnt said a word is at if the cat has got his toung .. you thought this guy would be there for me care for me love me ...thank god this didnt happen ..and you guys looking at the grooms family just wait at watch (snaps her fingers and points at them) anyone has a cell i can use i need to call the police no one was giving there cell phones
just then Viren steps forwards and hands her his cellphone.
Here you go you may use mine says Viren
Maanvi looks at him *Eye lock *

She takes the cell phone and dials the police

little while later the police arrive and take the groom's family away.

Everyone else is also leaving

Beeji and chachu our crying

maanvi beta why tum kyun yeh sab crys beeji

haan beta this wasnt the right way says chachu.

kya ofcourse it was they were greedy pigs they had learn a lesson am i sucha burden on you all that you wanted me to marry these down market people says maanvi

noo Maanvi beta but who will marry you now huh? says beeji

haan maanvi beta once a girl is left at the mandap no wants to marry sucha girl says chachu .

I will marry sucha amazing girl says a voice

you all should be proud of her what she did was very brave ... its remarkable to see someone stand up for what's just and right and i would be honored to marry such a girl that is if she and you all agree says Viren
Mr. Viren Vadhera India's #1 lawyer says chachu

please call be viren or beta says viren

Beeji, Chachu, im ready to marry him I dont know why

but i feel as if i can trust him im sure he will never hurt me says maanvi

she looks up at him at smiles
The Phire are over viren then putsthe mangalsutra and sindoor on her ...

the Sindoor falls on her nose a little

Maanvi beta you are very lucky this is a sign that he will love you very much says beeji

maanvi smiles and blushs

viren whispers this hint of scarlet on your cheecks suites you well you look beautiful

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Edited by lalmirch28 - 13 years ago

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Riya

@riyashaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

really amazing..this story line sounds freshness...plz pm me wen u guyz update

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

fiza.. jaan this is so amazing...

i loved the changes you made..

Virena and manvi already started liking each other..

uff.. maanvi blushed.. now that's a surprise.

Indeed Matches are made in Heaven after reading this chapter.

great going sweets..

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ...Tich...
fiza.. jaan this is so amazing...
i loved the changes you made..
Virena and manvi already started liking each other..
uff.. maanvi blushed.. now that's a surprise.
Indeed Matches are made in Heaven after reading this chapter.
great going sweets..

Thank u dear .. i know it more of a understanding..and comfort then liking haha lets see how there love story blosooms haha

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Ahw, love how you made her Jhansi ki Rani in the mandap.

And Viren really is awesome, he respects her.

Such unexpected things happening...

I can't even predict is going to happen next.

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: BrunoMars
Ahw, love how you made her Jhansi ki Rani in the mandap.
And Viren really is awesome, he respects her.
Such unexpected things happening...
I can't even predict is going to happen next.

aww thanks hun ...haha yup no one will be able to haha it will be one hell of a rollercoaster ride haha 😆

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ...Tich...
Hey Annie... yaar now i'm getting a complex feeling... you are a freaking awesome writer...
girl you rock and you definitely write better than me.
I loved the way story is started. With Muskaan's kidnapping..
truly awesome..
btw.. i've sent you a pm please do see it.

Ola Tich!!
Aiyyo!! Don't say that yaar!! Makes me feel embarrassed!! :P
Hahahah...I just read Fizz's first chappy!!! And I love it!! Our writing styles definitely differ a lot, but we're putting a joint effort here and that's what matters!!
Yeah, am currently reading it and like I said in the CC topic, me gonna go again for Tennis! hum bas phus chuke hain, dost!! Bas marna baaki hain!! :P

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

FIZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗 *running madly towards Fiza* Lovely, yaar!! *jumping up and down* I loved it re!! Good job!!👏 Chal, chappy aakhir kar chhap gayi!!! 😆 :D Thanks for taking care!! 😛 mwh... *hugs* 🤗
Ahem.😳..I know! Am such a nautanki na?? :P

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt
FIZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗 *running madly towards Fiza* Lovely, yaar!! *jumping up and down* I loved it re!! Good job!!👏 Chal, chappy aakhir kar chhap gayi!!! 😆 :D Thanks for taking care!! 😛 mwh... *hugs* 🤗
Ahem.😳..I know! Am such a nautanki na?? :P

haha no mere bhena no one can be a bigger drama queen then me hahah lol glad u liked it come to my cc theeki mirchi cc to talk check ur pm's