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Posted: 13 years ago
i read all d chap n it was reali nyc...awesome vms 2 plz can u add me 2 pm list...please please please
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ilvuday

i read all d chap n it was reali nyc...awesome vms 2 plz can u add me 2 pm list...please please please


thanks dear, rly glad that you liked them. well i dont rly have a pm list for this so i only send out pms to my buddies i have added. cud u please send me a friends request and i'll accept it :)
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Originally posted by: Anjalika13

awesome

loved the updates


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omg it was so awesome...they are engaged...yay!!!...and the vm was so so amazing...loved it...cont soon dear!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshi_t

omg it was so awesome...they are engaged...yay!!!...and the vm was so so amazing...loved it...cont soon dear!!! 😊


haha thanks dear, really glad that you liked it😳 and yeah nitz did an amazing job, just love her for making it😆 will try to continue soon
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Hey guys, sorry for updating after a long time. I've been busy updating my ff. So I think this is going to be the last part of the SS and maybe I might do an epilogue, it really depends if I have enough time. Do enjoy reading, do comment and please leave me your feedbacks etc. Oh and please excuse my hindi, I'm terrible at it but I thought that I might try to use a bit in the SS😳


Part 8

She stands in her bedroom, alone. Looking in her simple dressing table's mirror at every fine detail. At every strand of hair that falls over her face. At every stone and gem that decorates her rich red lengha. Then she looks at her jewellery; perfectly enhancing her bridal look.

Today was the day she would finally reunite with her partner; her lost soul mate. She closes her eyes, wanting to freeze in the very moment. The unknown, fear feeling that creeps up on her. The doubts of things going wrong. But instead, in her closed eyes, she imagines all the moments spent with him. Valentine's day, her garden, the surprise party. And this all makes a smile creep on to her face. Uday veer. He was the one and only; the one who she was meant to be with. The one she would spend her whole lifetime with.

In the buzzing silence, light footsteps are heard. They come nearer and nearer towards her room. Soon another figure appears in the mirror and it touches her shoulder. She turns around and smiles at the person.

"Look at you! Your looking beautiful!" Neha says.

"Thanks Neha," Manyata says blushing.

"Have you ever wondered that you'd fall in love with a guy you hated?" Neha questions.

"No not really," Manyata tells her, playing around with her fingers nervously.

"Come on, let's put this on. Everyone is waiting for you downstairs," Neha tells her. She then nods, and Neha places the red dupatta on her head. "Only minutes now. Then he will be yours," Neha laughs. Manyata doesn't say anything, instead she just looks down and blushs.

"C'mon Udayveer's blushing bride, let's not let him wait another second," Neha winks.

"Yeah okay," She whispers. They both then go down together; Neha guiding her.

"Look he's staring at you," Neha quietly tells her as they walk down the stairs. Manyata glances up to look at him and both their eyes meet for a moment. But the eye-lock soon breaks away as the two girls reach the bottom of the stairs.

"Aah! Manyata agaya!" DS tells the guests. She then walks up to Manyata and helps her on to the puja stage. "You are looking very pretty dear."

"Thank you DS," She whispers.

Soon she is escorted to sit next to Uday. She sits down; keeping her eyes downcasted. And he looks at her beauty.

"Aab hum puja kar sakti hai?" The pundit asks.

"Haan, shurwat karyeh pundi ji," DS says. The pundit then recietes many things, and the couple carrry on sitting; her looking down and him looking at her.

"Aab uttiyeh," The pundit tells them. Both stands up as the pundit explains to them about what they have to do. Komal ties a red dupatta to each others clothes and then the two hold hands. Manyata first does her rounds of walking around the fire. Then Uday takes his turns and afterwards they both sit on the floor once again. The pundit recites more veruses and everyone smiles watching the two.

Then the pundit tells Uday to put the mangalsutra and sindoor on Manyata. He does as he is told and then the puja is ended.

The two newly wed couple then take their blessings from the elders and the two go into the car.

"Uday, isn't anyone one else coming in the car with us?" She asks him. He smiles at her.

"Nope. Just you and me baby," He replies back.

"And the driver..." Manyata adds.

"Nope, I'm driving," he tells her.

"Oh okay," She whispers. He opens the front passenger door for her as always and she sits down; looking out of the window. All her cousins, friends and her sister wave at her and she waves back at them.

"Don't worry, we'll come and visit them tommorow," Uday tells her as he closes his door.

"Really?" she asks amazed.

"Yes of course," he says. When Manyata first married, Akash never let her visit her family. She tried everything she could to visit them; but it was no use.

"Thank you Uday! Love you so much!" She says, hugging him. From outside an oo-er comes, and Uday rolls all the windows up.

"You already know that I love you, and I'll love you forever and always," he replies back, smiling at her. They pull out of the hug and he drives away. Both talking like they normally would.

"Did I tell you how beautiful you looked today?" Uday says.

"Yes you have, for the fifth time today!" Manyata exclaims.

"Someone's a very talkative bride," Uday says, and then Manyata quietens down.

"Sorry," She whispers.

"You do know I was joking," Uday says, and then Manyata punches him in the arm. "Ouch, I'm sorry!"

A month later the two go on their honeymoon to Venice in Italy. They go on a boat there; Uday rowing.


Uday then starts singing:





Haan ankhiyaan nu ankhiyaan ujad lagiyaan
Kab tak tera raasta main
Haan yunhi takiyaan
Haan ankhiyaan nu ankhiyaan ujad lagiyaan

Ho tu jeene ka sahara (mere yaara oh yaara mere yaar)
Ho tu jahan se pyaara (mere yaara oh yaara mere yaar)
Tu jeene ka sahara (mere yaara oh yaara mere yaar)
Ho ho tu jahan se bhi pyaara (mere yaara oh yaara mere yaar)
Ho tere intezaar mein hoon
Tere khumaar mein hoon
Ab meri har dua mein, rehta hai tu
Yeh jaan le ke hai

Tu, mohabbat hai
Tu, inaayat hai
Tu, tujhi se main hoon
Oo..

Tu, meri aadat hai
Tu, meri chahat hai
Tu, tujhi se main hoon (tujhi se main hoon)

Haan ankhiyaan nu ankhiyaan ujar lagiyaan
Kab tak tera raasta mein
Haan yunhi takiyaan

Haan yunhi kahin, gum hua mujhse mera pata
Haan jaagi jaagi aankhon mein hai, bas tera khwaab sa
Saazishein yeh lamho ne kar ke, humko mila hi diya
Dheere dheere dil mein mere, bin kahe keh diya

Ho anjaana tha jo armaan, tumse hi maine jaana
Tumko jahaan bana ke, ab main jiyeun
Yeh jaan leke

Tu, mohabbat hai
Tu, inaayat hai
Tu, tujhi se main hoon
(tujhi se main hoon)

Haan chede mujhe saansein meri
Dekhe tera raasta ho
Haan chori-chori bann ne lagi
Teri meri daastan
Khushiyon ke bahaane sabhi tumhi se hai milne lagey
Ho oh ho pyaar ki nayi raahon pe
Hum saath chalne lagey

Ho shaamil hua tu aise
Dil mein sabar ho jaise
Phir besabar main hoke
Kaise jeeyun
Yeh jaan le ke hai

Tu, mohabbat hai
Tu, inaayat hai
Tu, tujhi se main hoon

Tu, meri aadat hai
Tu, meri chahat hai
Tu, tujhi se main hoon (tujhi se main hoon)

Ankhiyaan nu ankhiyaan ujad lagiyaan
Tujhi si main hoon
Kab tak tera raasta mein
Haan yunhi taakiyaan
Tujhi se main hoon

(end of song)

"Aww Uday, how cute, why do you have to be so sweet!" Manyata says blushing.

"Because my parents had diabetes," he says.

"Really? I didn't know that..." She staggers.

"Princess, I was only joking," Uday tells her. Then they both start laughing.


"Did you ever think that we'd be here right now? Together?" Manyata says.

"Anything is possible Princess," Uday states.

"That's true. But if you ever thought about it, if we never met at the shopping mall then we'd never be here," Manyata carries on.

"Princess why would you ever want to think about that?" Uday asks her, confused. He always thought that it was a miracle; that moment when they first met. He had found the lost princess just because of a mere scar; an accident that happened in childhood. He never wondered what life would have been like if they had never met then.

However, she always wondered how it would have been like if they had never met. If he just gave up at the dare, and if she just ran away in the first place from him. Her life would have been normal, she would've achieved her dream career by now. All her dreams would have come true. But they did meet then, at the shopping mall. And then that moment changed her whole life. She didn't understand anything at first; if she did then maybe she would have been in a different place.

"I don't know, sometimes I just wonder what life would have been like," She tells him. Then there's a moment of silence. They both look at the place surrounding them. All the other boats passing them; the Italian music playing. People chatting and gossiping. But here were them two; really quiet, not knowing what to comment about after their recent conversation.

He keeps rowing hard until he's hands start to ache, and then he stops to rest. She still stays quiet, looking around the place. Venice; such a beautiful and busy place. A place where they use boats instead of cars. Where the roads aren't made of cement and tar, but of rivers and water. A place which is meant to be romantic. She then looks up at him and he looks up at her. They share this sweet eye-lock for a moment. A moment lost in time; frozen.

"Princess..." He starts to say,

"Yes..." She replies back to him. He then stands up and sits next to her. Taking her hands into his, he looks into her eyes.

"Never, ever, say that again. What happened in the past remains in the past. It can't be changed. We shouldn't regret it. It was our fate that brought us here..." He says. She carries on looking into his eyes, and he looks back at her.

"But..." She says but Uday interrupts her.


"Shhh..." He says, placing his finger on her lips. She doesn't say anything, and he then removes his finger and he moves in closer. Then they share a sweet kiss.

"I guess it was fate that brought us here..." Manyata whispers.



Edited by -Niha- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome loved the part my parents had diabetics it was awesome please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome loved the part my parents had diabetics it was awesome please continue soon


thanks dear, glad to hear that you loved the joke 😆
lol that was the last part... but i might do an epilogue it depends on time rly...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Amibaiju

Awesomeee...loved it...


thanks dear, glad to hear that you loved it :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsum update!! It was a pleasure reading ur SS & pls continue writing dear..Ty 4 d pm 😃

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