AbhiNikki FF-Your Journey with Me Completed - Page 10

I think i was really very sleepy when I read your Part 7.. because now when i started reading part 9 nothing was making sense :D I went ahead and read last few sections of part 7 and it turns out i ready completely different part 7 earlier :) :) In your version A is asking Rohit malhotra for card while i thought A gave his card to Rohit malhotra... Hahaha And the biggest blunder of all was the end.. i read it as A saw N sitting crying in the corner while it turns out she is hugging somebody else :D.. I am going to read next parts now :)

Part 8 comments:
"ohh..."

that was my exact reaction when i read the last statement of part 8 :) Oh my god pra, i just love the way you keep bringing sid in different ways in your FF.. wihtout being main character he plays such an important role in AN's lives.. You keep writing these FFs as if to show CVs what a mess they made out of these amazing people :) I also like how you keep showing N understanding, funny, bubbly yet mature, independent strong girl she wasy potraied in the start..

And the way you casually mention N's thoughts about A's behaviour that was amazing.. I think people keep thinking about such kind of things and they are never sure what is right.. is it their perception or reality.. You showed that so well and so easily..


another confession, when you brough Sid thinking about running away i was like this is exact same thing as what happened with N.. and was thinking hard on how N will react to it, will she follow A's approach or do something else and what would A have to say about all that.. But before my thoughts could run astray you brought another twist.. and frankly i like this better.. Sid seems like a guy who is always being told on what to do.. he has finally realised that he needs to figure out what he likes .. I like how N sees that.. and understands that.. and i also like how you show A still keeps bringing those old incidences and doesnt have enough trust on N's capability to read and understand people... that hurt is really tough to get over fully.. And oh my god what is he doing in all this anger... You picked up A's character really well here.. he doesnt seem to realise or rather realise and hurt people esp N purposely when he is angry...

Going to read Part 9 now :)

Part 9:
Again that was too sudden change of situation :) Haha with this rate its so difficult to predict whats happening next :D So A did realise what he was doing to N in his anger... I am not sure what will hurt N more.. knowing that the chikki was brought by her father or by knowing A wasnt going to tell her or that he told her to hurt her... Whats next pra? looking fwd to how N is going to take all this.. too many things happening.. sid, her father..

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

I think i was really very sleepy when I read your Part 7.. because now when i started reading part 9 nothing was making sense :D I went ahead and read last few sections of part 7 and it turns out i ready completely different part 7 earlier :) :) In your version A is asking Rohit malhotra for card while i thought A gave his card to Rohit malhotra... Hahaha And the biggest blunder of all was the end.. i read it as A saw N sitting crying in the corner while it turns out she is hugging somebody else :D.. I am going to read next parts now :)

Part 8 comments:
"ohh..."

that was my exact reaction when i read the last statement of part 8 :) Oh my god pra, i just love the way you keep bringing sid in different ways in your FF.. wihtout being main character he plays such an important role in AN's lives.. You keep writing these FFs as if to show CVs what a mess they made out of these amazing people :) I also like how you keep showing N understanding, funny, bubbly yet mature, independent strong girl she wasy potraied in the start..

And the way you casually mention N's thoughts about A's behaviour that was amazing.. I think people keep thinking about such kind of things and they are never sure what is right.. is it their perception or reality.. You showed that so well and so easily..


another confession, when you brough Sid thinking about running away i was like this is exact same thing as what happened with N.. and was thinking hard on how N will react to it, will she follow A's approach or do something else and what would A have to say about all that.. But before my thoughts could run astray you brought another twist.. and frankly i like this better.. Sid seems like a guy who is always being told on what to do.. he has finally realised that he needs to figure out what he likes .. I like how N sees that.. and understands that.. and i also like how you show A still keeps bringing those old incidences and doesnt have enough trust on N's capability to read and understand people... that hurt is really tough to get over fully.. And oh my god what is he doing in all this anger... You picked up A's character really well here.. he doesnt seem to realise or rather realise and hurt people esp N purposely when he is angry...

Going to read Part 9 now :)

Part 9:
Again that was too sudden change of situation :) Haha with this rate its so difficult to predict whats happening next :D So A did realise what he was doing to N in his anger... I am not sure what will hurt N more.. knowing that the chikki was brought by her father or by knowing A wasnt going to tell her or that he told her to hurt her... Whats next pra? looking fwd to how N is going to take all this.. too many things happening.. sid, her father..

@ariel , ruch , hemvb , mitzi , thanks guys

@jyothi , thanks sweetie

@Nikki , thanks sweetie

@Jibsi , thanks darling and you scared me thinking I did not send you a PM 😲 . But I did and I will😊 . Yaar , sorry I am not able to put smileys in the updates, because I am posting stuff from other laptops and dont have enough time to look for nice apt ones . Will surely try to put some later on.

hey...

Pra, you shouldnt worry about writing so much emotional stuff :) For me that is one of the criteria for liking FF :) I like the ffs that are well thought of from story, emptions, characters, their traits, point of view and so on.. No person is perfect and each one is unique because of their qualities and shortcomings.. so i like how you just dont emphasize only on qualities :) It makes you brilliant writer.. So keep up the good work :)
Thank you for appreciating my comments :) feels good to hear from somebody like you :)

And bummer that we need to wait more for the updates..

@geet , thanks sweetie and welcome to the thread .

Thanks for the pm and really nice update :D

@Nikki , thanks dear . Glad you liked it.

What I like about this update is they are slightly angry with each other but still together . and both are forgiving also ... not geting offened by the others actions.