manveer wedding short FF

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Posted: 13 years ago
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a short ff by me on manveer wedding. it only has 2 parts and i will update the second part soon.😉

Manatya was running towards akash to meet him at the temple but something was holding her back. She didn't,knew what but there was something. As she was running to get to akash fast. She slipped one of the stairs but luckily she kept her balance and didn't fall but her dupatta got ripped because she stepped on it while she lost her balance. she moved and when she took her feet off the duppatta it was ripped with a big hole. As she picked her dupatta up and looked through the whole she saw uv dressed up as a groom. She couldn't believe her eyes it waz uv n as soon she remove the duppatta out of her sight uv was not there. She couldn't believe her eyes so she did the same process couples of times. By that time akash noticed her and he came running towards her. He yelled her name as he was running towards her. Manatya lostin uvs thoughts n akashreached out to get manatyas hand.at first manatya hesitated and looked back as uv will come there but there was no one. She gave a look to akash unable to decide but akash wasn't waiting for her reply. He took her hands into his. Her hands were cold and trembling and his was warm with nervousness. Manatya didn't feel anything and akash slowly dragged her to the mandap. She was just a body without any soul who is lost and confused. Her heart started beating faster as she got closer to the mandap. She looked back again in a hope for a miracle in hope for uv but there was dead silence around her n no sign of uv. At last she gave up, she was stuck in a situation where she couldn't break her promise to akash nor she could confess her love to uv. In few minutes Manatya life was taking a drastic turn which no one knew the consequences of. She sat a the mandap andakash looked at her with a smile and kissed her cheeks. Manatya didn't look at akash and just stare at the fire with memories of uv playing in her mind. After few secod she couldn't endure it anymore and closed her eyes. Akash reached out n holded manatya hand but manatya didn't let akash hold her hand. Akash looked at her but she was thinking about uv only and no one else. The pheras started but manatya didn't get up. Akash tried couple of times but manatya didn't respond. After few minutes manatya woke up and realized everyone was gone and she was in the arms of uv who was sprinkling watee on her face. She was surprised and happy. All the emotions started to come out as tears and she tightly hugged uv and after few second she slightly whispered in uvs ears. I LOVE YOU ...MY PRINCE...4EVER N EVER...she kissed him on the cheek. Uv looks at manatya and manatya looking at uv with a big smile. Uv picks up manatya and starts walking towards the car but the car is not there.Instead there is a cinderella style carriage with white color. uv insists manatya to close her eyes and she does. (tum mIle) plays in the background and uv carries manatya to the carriage and asks her to open her eyes. as she open her eyes she yells this is beautiful exactly like my dream. she looks at uv and manveer kiss. uv puts her down and holds her hand as she gets in the carriage and uv sits besides her. in the carriage manatya just looks at uv and holds his ahnd tightly. aafter few minutes manatya tells uv that she loved the surprise and today he really made her a princess. uv just nods his head and the carriage stops. manatya gets worried but uv assures her that everything is fine. he gets out and bring a horse and tells manatya to step out. manatya steps out and is amazed by seeing the horse. she admires the horse and uv tells her that he will take her to the mandap at a horse. manatya surprised and asks how did he do that? uv smiles and holds her hand and tells her he is a prince after all so this is required in order to compelte their love story. manatya smiles and tells uv lets go. first uv gets on the horse and then he gives manatya his hand and picks her up and makes her sit on the horse. uv makes manatya sits on the front.manatya's hair is messed up blocking her eyes. uv looks at her eyes and removes the hair from her eyes. (ishq hua from aja nachle plays in the background). uv rides the horse and all this while manatya just admires uv. uv takes glances at manatya as well but manatya feels dizzy and uv notices but manatya brushes it off saying it's nothing. uv doesn't belive her and stops the horse at a beach and gets water for her. uv makes manatya drink water and all this while manatya is smiling and blushing. uv smiles back at her and call her princess... what happened? manatya nods her head and says nothing. manveer is back on the horse, manatya insists uv to ride the horse in the water. she pleads and uv gives in. as uv rides the horse in the water. manatya gets happy and water starts splashing on her. she enjoys it and her hair gets wet and tunrs around and water from her hair splashes on uv's face. she starts wiping the water with her dupatta the torn one and as she is done. she looks through the hole againa and this time uv is there for real. she smiles and uv winks at her. manveer finally reaches the palace. as they reach flowers starts showering and everybody is happy to see them together except jay ofcourse. manveer look at each other and smile. manatya has tears in her eyes and uv looks at her and wipes it off with hsi hands. he kisses on her cheek and manatya kiss him back. manveer reach the stage and uv gets off first. he offers manatya his hand and he picks her up and then slightly puts her down. manatya runs to hug komal and then she hugs rajmata. both ladies bless her and manveer go and change.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww... that was sooo cute n adorable!! Plzzz continue soon as I'm eager to read the next part!!:D
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awww..that was very very cute...😍uv the draem prince...lolll...waiting for the next part...i hope this is not manyata's dream...btw when r u going to update TOUGH LOVE??WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww, that was SUPER cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😛
really adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!⭐️
luved it!!!!!!!!!!👏
nice twist back to manveer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was cool!!! I loved it...but hope it really happen in DEK... But please update next part soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of all i think i have to extend my ff now since i am getting all these ideas and they are never ending. i thought i could fit it in just 2 updates but i couldn't so i guess this ff will be longer now.

The mandap is all set up with white flowers and. Rajmata & brijraj is welcoming everyone to the wedding. Unnati and vijaybhai is helping manatya getting ready but they are teasing her about uv . On the other side jagat is helping uv to get ready. Manatya's face is shown blurry and shecomes out in pink and gold lehenga. Unnati tells manatya that she is looking beautiful and so does vijay. One by one unnati puts jewellery on manatya. Uv is putting on her sherwani and hairstyling his hair and at the end uv puts his turban on and picks his sword. Manatya is all dressed up as well and puts on her duppatta for the last touch up. Both manveer are shown clearly walking towards the mandap and lost in each others thoughts. Unnati leaves manatya to wish uv and congratz him. Vijaybhai is walking with manatya and he escorts her to the mandap. Unnati goes upto uv and hugs him tightly calling dada…… congratz. Uv hugs her back. Jaggat leaves to find jay and unnati escorts uv to the mandap. Uv asks unnati where is manatya and unnati asks her why. Uv tells her it's a surprise. Uv runs to manatya and manatya is close to mandap. Manatya sees uv and she thinks it's a dream but vijaaybhai asks manatya that ur prince can't even wait for few minutes? Kaun sa jaadu kiya hain princess. Manatya says what? By the time she realizes uv is next to her and picks her instantly. Manatya asks him why is he picking her up? Uv nods and tells her that today it's their marriage and he wants to make it the most beautiful day of her life so he is doing this. Manatya says acchha ok I have a surprise for you as well but it's after wedding so you have to wait. Uv smiles and tells manatya his is the best. Manatya tells her that we will see and smiles. As they walk there are curtains everywhere.

Manatya looks everywhere and she is lost. Uv laughs a little and manatya looks at him confused. Uv tells her not to be confused. This is a game I will ask you a very important questions and the curtains will open on ur response. Manatya is confused again. Uv just smiles and starts walking to the curtains and stops. Manatya asks him what is the question? Uv puts manatya down and flowers start to shower and manatya is happy. Uv bends down and holds manatya's hand and asks her my princess…. Would you like to spend entire life with me and beyond. Will you marry me and be mine forever?(saibo starts playing in the background) Manatya is smiling and has tears in her eyes. Uv comes closer and wipes her tears. Manatya hugs him tightly and whispers yes my prince I would spend my life with you. Uv smiles and picks her up and spins her around. Manveer kiss. Glitter starts to shower with white snow.uv puts manatya down and kisses her hand. He tells her I love you princess and manatya just blushes. Uv asks manatya shall we? Manatya nods and they start to walk. Manveer holding hands and uv holding manatya by her waist. Manveer stakes blessing from rajmata and their parents. The pheres starts but uv picks up manatya before the peheres. Everybody is watching them.(tu hi mera plays in the background). Manveer taking the pheras and they are lost in each other. It's uv's turn to walk ahead and he slightly puts manatya down and resume with the pheras. Everybody is showering flowers and snow in the air. Manveer is happy as they are walking to their new lives and a new beginning for their lives with each other. Manatya dreaming about their future and uv lost in manatya's beauty. He is lost in her thoughts and the pheras end. Finally the priest tells uv to put mangalsutra and sindoor. Uv takes the sindoor and puts on her forehead and then he ties the mangalsutra around her neck. Everybody claps and cheers for them. As manveer takes the elders blessing uv winks at manatya and manatya winks them. Both of them are flirting with each other through their eyes. The family eats their dinner and manveer eat from one plate and feed each other but manatya falls asleep during eat as uv is talking to rajmata and as he turns to feed manatya. She is sleeping on his shoulder. For few moments uv just admires her and then slightly wakes her up by kissing her forehead. Princess……. Uth jao finish ur dinner naa.. manatya blinks her eyes and asks uv what/ uv just smiles and tells her to eat. Manatya insists on not eating but uv feeds her and she agrees.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww... I loved the second part too n I'm really glad that u will have to make this FF longer cuz I really enjoy reading it!!:D Plzzz continue soon!!:D

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