Destiny, Fate & Love Thread 1. Chapter 1 - 42. - Page 55

Originally posted by: dona86

loved the update

Originally posted by: rubinahansa

Awesome

Originally posted by: kvarsha

awesomee updateee...

loved it alottt...

keep updating fastlyy like tht we will commenting like tht😆😆😆...

arnav uy driving me crazyy day by day wt happned day dreaming with khush

ufff😆😆😆...

maan ki romance tho gyi kaam see...😆😆😆...

bichara dev bach ke rehana re baba😆😆...

update soon😆

thnx for pm😆😆

Originally posted by: sushna

wow... awsome update...

arnav is day dreaming hahahah...😆😆😆...

plz send me a pm

Originally posted by: lovespell

Really Arnav hiding in the bathrroom. The Mighty Arnav Singh Raizada!!!! LOL LOL

That was super hilarious.

He is just so scared not to get caught by khushi before the engagment

And also not to ignore khushi is also getting effected by arnav. This is so much fun now

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Lovely update dear. Waiting dear.

Originally posted by: spvd

part 32
well dear this was awesome as always...
u are a first time writer and the way the story u are writing really have to give the credit and have to praise u a lot...
and u know what, i feel and find u writing the story in a funny way and sequences are really entertaining...
i always look forward for ur updates...
i read this from my mobile at 2 AM and still couldnt stop myself laughing so much...
that was uncontrollable...
now back tot he comment...

fantastic part...
Maan Geet
hai kitna lovely hai...
OMG Daadima bhi kuch kam nahi hai...
Maan carried her that was so lovely...
Geet swinging her legs and waiting for them was like a kid doing such things and looking adorable...
and Daadima's comment was fantastic...
this made me laugh and could imagine Soni's blush...
wow Maan Singh Khurana behaving like this so lovey dovey and caring...
hes started his mission to woo his woman...
the gestures are adorable...
hes cooking for her and Soni is so touched by this...
grrr aagaya ullu da pattha Dev...
hes gonna get from me nicely...
this is the SECOND time this gadha has disturbed their trance and the lovely scene...
Naintara should do some thing to this unromantic nahi nahi romance breaker or put salt in his parathas...
they were about to kiss or to say Maan was to...
sigh...
poor Soni baby shes so confused and apprehensive...
hope she falls for Maan and then get her yaadaash back or the other way round, me confused, but i want Maan not to get hurt...
missed NT in this...

Arnav Khushi
well here comes the Arnav Singh Raizada...
nowadays i mean nowa-updates Arnav is making me ROFL...
my God this guy is a unique piece...
now i can imagine him being the naughtiest boy in the younger version...
his hobby has changed, hos daily work has changed, his behavior has changed, his attitude towards marriage and love has changed, on the whole Arnav Singh Raizada has changed and its Khushi Kumari Gupta behind these changes...
from gardening to pacing and sighing to stalking i mean waiting and acting as the driver and lover boy...
waah kya shuruwaat thi...
that para actually made me laugh so much...
super shuruwaat...
poor guy...
and the next hilarious part is him planning ot do things in his ASR style and the next second halting and shocked and RUNNING back to his room was the cherry on the top...
waah kya style hai ASR ka...
ha ha ha...
and Khushi thinking chote as a kid of 10 or 11 years...
my God, and Khushi SHOULD tell her Arnavji and wanna know Arnav's reaction to this...
for once ASR is behaving like a badmash baccha and scared to get caught for his badmaashi...
but have to give the credit his mind works in good pace...
though he couldnt think of anything immediately but his smartness to make Khushi retreat back was good...
the family's reaction to Arnav's storming and flying out was funny and one day they gonna find this out...
only Khushi can make Arnav do such things and aage bhi many unbelievable things...
OMG Khushi kissed him like he does on his forehead...
Arnav ka neend to tho gayi aaj raat...
so cute...
she was like a kid at that instant...
Mela?
aur kya kya baaki hai Arnav ke liye?
but loving this...
he got her the jhumkas and his day dreaming and enjoying with Khushi were so beautiful...
Khushi does feel something for her Arnavji...
only Soni i mean Geet is yet to fall or her life to start happening...
cont soon dear...
me feeling like to read this FF from start once again...
will do once i finish my all pms as i have this FF in my desky...

Thanks for the review! Loved it!

I may be first time writer but I have created and narrated a lot of stories on the spot to entertain my friends. But I never wrote them down as my writing speed sucks when compared to the speed of my thoughts but recently I realized that my typing speed is better than my writing speed so decided to try my hand here! But I was scared as my writing skills suck! For nearly seven years I have written only business related documents so found it really hard to give proper words to my thoughts! Thanks for the compliments! I really appreciate it!

You read it at midnight! You should not do that! Your eyes might get kharaab (cannot remember the right word, this is what I said about having horrible writing skills) and then who read my FFs?

Maaneet

Can you imagine Geet sitting and swinging her legs while Maan comes and picks her up and shocks her? Can you imagine Dadi saying those lines? I imagined it and I ended up laughing non stop for 5 minutes.

Yes, Maan has started his mission. Poor Geet!

Dev will remain kabab me haddi for a while or else Maan might get carried away and then later Geet might regret it!

Soni will remain confused for few chapters! There are two twists left before she fall for him!

Arhi

When I saw the young Arnav being naughty I wanted to see him naughty again in the show! Then we saw his flirty avatar during Payash marriage and that's when I got this idea for the FF.

Khushi ke pyaar ne ASR ko Arnav banaa diya! He is turned into the guy he was before his parents' death.

You loved ASR's style right! More antics from ASR coming soon! Just wait till the shopping for the engagement begins, and then the real fun will start!

You gave me an idea regarding Arnav's reaction to Khushi calling Chote kid. I am going to work on it.

He is ASR, his mind has to work quick.

Yes, she kissed him on the forehead! Very soon this scene will create problems for Khushi, one problem already came in chapter 33. Poor Khushi! Her heart went dhak dhak!

Aap bataayiye, aur kahaan kahaan bheju Arnav ko? Mela toh hogaya, whats next?

Khushi will fall soon but Soni will take time!

You are gonna read it again! Wow! I am so touched to hear that! It is a writers dream to have her/his story read again and again! Thanks for giving me this privilege! If you see any bloopers or discrepancies do tell me I will rectify it.

Thanks once again for the awesome review! You made my day!

CHAPTER 33. WHY DOES HE WORRY FOR ME?

Place - Khurana Mansion

It was early morning and Maan walked into his study to take some papers. He felt the wind in his air and realized that the window was kept open. He rolled his eyes. It was his habit to keep it open while working and then forgetting to close it. He walked to the window with the purpose of closing it but his hand stilled while his lips gave a smile. The reason for his smile; there sat Soni on the swing in the grounds swinging around with no care of the world. Maan leaned against the window and folded his hands across his chest. He stared at her with a smile on his face. Suddenly, he had this urge to join her on the swing. The swing was broad enough for both of them to sit on it. He smiled broadly. Why was he not joining her? What was stopping him now? His smile turned into smirk. He dashed out of the room with the hopes of fulfilling his wish.

Soni sighed as she got up from the swing. She loved the mornings. They were so beautiful; the rays coming from the east, the orange-red sky, the birds flying from their nests. Haaye! Thank you Babaji! Itni khoobsurat subah banaane ke liye! Poor Soni! She was so interested in thanking her Babaji that she did not notice the patch of mud in front of her. Pachaak! There went Soni down slipping on the mud and falling on her back. She blinked her eyes in shock. Haiyye Babaji yeh kya hogaya? She tried to get up by pushing the ground with her hands but she kept on slipping and falling back. Finally, with some effort, she sat up. She glared at the sky, "Yeh achcha hai Babaji! Itni taareef ki maine aapki aur ek aap hain jo Mujhe neeche gira rahe hain." She tried to get up but she slipped again. One of the strands of her hair kept on coming on her face and she pushed it away. Unknowingly she applied mud on her face. She tried to get up but could not. She looked at the sky and pouted. "Babaji aap bahut bure ho! Bahut bure! Thodi toh madad kardo!" She tried to get up again only to hear laughter. She looked up and saw Maan doubling over with laughter. She glared at him but he did not seem to notice.

Maan ran down the stairs with the hopes of sitting on the swing with Soni only to be disappointed as she got up from the swing the moment he reached the doors. Dammit! He was about to turn away and walk back to his room when he saw her fall down. His breath stopped for a moment but seeing her try to get up, he started breathing again. She was fine! He walked towards her with the intention to help her when he noticed her apply the mud on her face unknowingly. He stared at her in shock. She looked so comic with her face covered in mud while she kept on pouting and complaining to her Babaji. Maan could not resist himself. He tried to control himself from laughing but he could not. Soon, the area resonated with his laughter with Soni glaring at him.

Soni looked around for something; something that she could throw on Maan and break his head. How dare he laugh at her instead of helping her? She, with determination, got up from the ground and looked around for help. Suddenly, she noticed the pipe used for gardening, the tap was open and the pipe was still spilling water. She grinned evilly. Poor Maan!

Maan kept on laughing not noticing Soni's glare or her evil smile. Soon, all thoughts of laughing were wiped out from his mind when cold water was splashed on his face. He looked in shock as Soni sprayed water on him from the pipe in full force. "Soni yeh kya kar rahi ho?" Maan started stumbling behind. But Soni did not stop. He pointed a finger at her. "Soni bandh karo." But Soni refused to relent. He placed his hands in front of his face with hopes of protecting his face but Soni just changed the aim of the pipe to his chest. "Soni, enough. Bas karo." Soni did not want to stop. She was enjoying in too much to stop. He kept on stumbling behind but Soni kept on coming ahead spraying the water on him. Suddenly, he heard her giggles and stood in shock. Achcha! Toh aapko meri haalat pe mazaa aa raha hai, Mrs. Khurana! Ab dekho main tumhara kya haal karta hoon. He smirked.

Soni kept on spraying Maan with water while giggling in between. She did not notice Maan look at her in shock. But she did notice Maan walking towards her. He was walking towards her while the water kept on drenching him. She swallowed. He was wearing a white shirt which unfortunately for her turned transparent showing her his perfectly toned body. Hey Babaji! Inhein itna handsome lagne ka haq kisne diya hai? Upar se yeh white shirt! White shirt pe ban lagni chaahiye! Soni gulped and started walking behind. But Maan was faster. He snatched the pipe from her hand with his left hand while his right hand snaked around her waist pulling her close. She crashed into his chest and stared into his eyes with shock. Her eyes widened while her mind supplied a prayer to Babaji to save her from her Shaitan. He threw the pipe away and wiped the mud on her face with his hand. She closed her eyes at his touch.

Maan tried to stop himself but could not. He kissed her cheek and she turned red. He smirked at the effect he had on her. He slowly placed light kisses on her face. Slowly his lips trailed towards her neck. Soni's eyes popped open as she felt him kiss her neck. She came out of her trance and pushed him away gently. She blushed at his love filled stare. She cleared her throat. "Koi dekhlega." She mumbled and ran away. Maan smirked. Ya right!

During the breakfast, Maan kept on staring towards Soni with a smirk on his face while a red faced Soni avoided looking at his smug face. Dadima and NT winked at each other while Dev ate without any clue of what was happening around the table.

Place - Outside KC

Arnav started the car as soon as Khushi sat in it. It was evening time and he had come to pick Khushi as per his routine. Khushi kept her bag aside and started speaking non stop about her day. Arnav smiled at her animated style. She was literally jumping while trying to explain a comic situation between some girl and guy called Pinky and Adi. After her monologue ended, she jingled her bangles showing him that she was wearing the bangles she had bought yesterday. Arnav smiled at her when a thought struck him. "Waise you never told me, what is your favorite colour?" Khushi turned towards him at his question and smiled at him. "Green; Humein hara rang bahut pasand hai. Ek dum hariyali ke jaise. Hare hare ped, hare hare paudhe! Devi Maiyya ne bahut khoobsurat duniya banayi hai! Kehte hain ki Dharti Maiyya ka rang bhi hara aur bhoora hota hai; green aur brown. Isliye hara humaara pasandeeda hai." Arnav nodded. He understood her explanation. "Waisa aapko kaun sa rang pasand hai?" Khushi asked him. Arnav smirked. "Red; the color of blood, dard ka rang, gusse ka rang, a very passionate colour, the color for destruction. Jab maut hoti hai toh har jagah sirf laal rang chaaya hota hai. When there is war, there is nothing but blood around. Jeet ka rang hai red. Winner ka rang hai red. It is the color of death. Maut ka rang!" Arnav explained his fascination for the color. He imagined her in the red saree and smirked again. Yes, he loved red. Khushi frowned. "Chi! Kaisi baatein aap karte hain? Itne khoobsurat rang ko aap kitna bura banaate hain?" Arnav looked at her questioningly. "Laal kitna khoobsurat rang hai. Jab subah hoti hai toh aasmaan par chaaye laalima ka rang. Jab shaam ko suraj dhalta hai tab aasmaan par chadha rang. Mitti ka rang. Gulaab ka rang. Gulmohor ka rang. Ek dulhan ke jode ka rang. Ek suhaagan ke sindoor ka rang. Laal hota hai dil ka rang, pyaar ka rang, mohabbat ka rang, ishq ka rang." She finished passionately and Arnav stopped the car and stared at her in shock. She blushed at his look and turned away. She slowly whispered, "Aapke di hui saree ka rang bhi toh wahi hai. Par us saree ne kabhi bhi humein dard nahi diya, sirf khushiyaan di aur aap jaise dost diya.", she whispered but Arnav heard it. Arnav smiled tenderly at her and started driving again.

Soon, Arnav and Khushi reached Laxminagar. Khushi removed the seat belt and was about to get down when, "Suno?" She turned at Arnav's words and looked at him. She sat back in the car. He leaned over and spoke, "Tum hisaab baraabar karne ki baat karti hona. Toh ek hisaab baaki hai jo Mujhe poora karna hai." Her eyebrows furrowed at what hisaab was left between them. "Woh hisaab jo tumhaare result nikalne ke din se pending hai." Slowly, he kissed her on her cheek and glanced at her. Her cheek turned red as she stared at him in shock. He looked at her cheek. They were tempting him. He raised his hand and slowly brushed them against her cheek. He kissed them again but his lips lingered longer than before. She closed her eyes as she felt her whole being bombarded by new feelings; feelings she could not explain. She had to get out of here. She had to get away from him for the sake of her sanity. She pushed him mildly and jumped of the car. She ran away. Arnav smirked and drove off.

After running for few minutes, Khushi stopped and panted. She clutched the area above her heart with her right hand willing her heart to stop beating so faster. She took deep breaths and closed her eyes. Bad idea! The moment she closed her eyes, she was taken back to the car to the moment when he kissed her again. She shook her head. Hey Devi Maiyya! Yeh humein kya ho raha hai? She swallowed and walked to her house, her brain still scrambling to find answers to her questions.

Place - Soni's Room at Khurana Mansion

It was early morning and Soni walked towards the dining table with parathas in her hand. She resolutely ignored Maan who was staring at her from the moment he sat at the dining table. Dev lunged for the parathas when he stopped mid move as he noticed his brother glare at him. He sat back and sulked while his brother took the plate from Soni deliberately brushing his fingers with her fingers. She blushed; turned and nearly ran away to her safe haven for today, the kitchen. NT and Dadima noticed the byplay. NT hid her grin behind her hand while Dadima smiled openly.

Soni stood in the middle of the kitchen. "Ajeeb hain yeh Babaji! Log table ke neeche haath pakadke romance karte hai aur yeh hain ki sabke saamne……" She hid her face in her hands as her whole face turned red. After few minutes, she removed her hands from her face and decided. Nahi Soni! Tu aise Maan se nahi daregi! She squared her shoulders as if going for war and prepared another batch of parathas. She took the next set of parathas and went outside. As Maan raised his hand to take the parathas from her with a smirk on his face, Soni skirted around him, walked towards Dadima's seat and placed the plate in front of her. She looked at Maan, gave him a smirk and walked away. Dadima and NT giggled but stopped when Maan glared at them. Dev continued eating. Waah! Kya Parathe hain! Banaane waale ke haath choomne chaahiye! Then he remembered his bro's angry face and his wife's glare and mentally shook his head. Nahi! Haath choomna cancel! Mujhe itni chhoti umar mein marna nahi hai!

Soni walked into the room with a tray of glass filled with lassi and Maan got ready for another round of teasing Soni when suddenly Soni felt dizzy. Maan had raised his hand for holding the tray in hopes of touching her hand again when she placed the tray in his hand forcefully and clutched his shoulder with one hand and put her other hand on her head. Maan suddenly realized the severity of the situation and placed the tray on the table and got up. As soon as he got up, Soni fainted on him. Maan looked at her in shock and sat down making her sit on his lap. Dadima and NT got up shocked while Dev whipped up his phone and called the Doctor. Maan patted her cheeks calling her name while NT splashed some water on her face. Dev got hold of the Doctor and after few minutes spoke to the family, "Doctor keh rahe hai ki sar par maar lagne ki wajah se aur kamjori ke wajah se aisa hua hai. Bhabhi theek hai bas thodi rest ki jaroorat hai." Maan nodded. Soon Soni woke up. She looked at Maan and smiled at him. He hugged her happy that she was okay. She hugged him back. NT and Dadima smiled tenderly. Dev looked at them confused.

Soni suddenly realized that she was sitting on Maan's lap. She blushed and got up. She tried to walk away to the kitchen when Maan grabbed her wrist. She turned around and Maan spoke, "Kitchen Chandu dekh lega. Tumhein aaram ki jaroorat hai. Aur tum aaram karogi." He tugged her hand and pulled her close. He picked her up and took her to her room. Soni stared at him. Itna pyaar karte ho aap mujhse Maan? Itna pareshaan hote hain aap mere liye? She smiled. Maybe falling in love with him would not be so hard.

NT and Dadima stared at Maan's retreating back with a smile on her face. Dev looked at Maan confusingly and spoke up, "Lagta hai Bhai ko Bhabhi se pyaar hogaya hai.", Dev observed. NT slapped her forehead while Dadima rolled her eyes. NT looked upwards. Hey Geet ke Babaji, yeh kis Tubelight se paala pada hai!

Place - Outside KC

Arnav was leaning on his car waiting for Khushi outside KC when he noticed her coming towards him with a limp in her walk. He stood straight in worry. What happened? He saw red stain on her yellow salwar right where her right knee was. Her right knee was injured! He looked at her alarmed. He marched towards her and the moment he reached her, he picked her up and without a word to her deposited her in his car. She looked at him in trepidation. He slammed the door and walked to the driver's seat. He climbed in and she looked at him in shock. Yeh paagal ho gaye hain kya?

As Arnav drove the car, Khushi attempted to explain her limp, "Woh hum neeche utar rahe the seediyon se tab humaara pair fisla aur hum gir gaye. Pair deewar se takraaya aur Khoon nikla. Hum theek hai." The moment she said the last line Arnav turned and glared at her as if saying Ya Right! Khushi looked away. Soon, they stopped at a Doctor's clinic. Khushi looked at the clinic in shock. Before she could react, he had picked her up and taken her in. She turned red as she noticed the people staring at them. She buried her face in his chest in embarrassment.

Around an hour later, Arnav was driving towards Laxminagar with Khushi in the passenger seat. Khushi looked at Arnav. Yeh kitne achche hain! Humaari kitni kadar karte hai! Hey Devi Maiyya! Achcha hua ki wahaan Lady Doctor thi warna hum sharam se laal ho jaate! She had gotten hurt on her knee which required her to remove her salwar for the check up. Aur yeh the ki kuch samajh hi nahi rahe the! Kehte hain ki room se baahar nahi jaayenge. She felt her face turn red. Then she giggled as she remembered his mortified face when he realized the reason they were sending him out of the examination room. They soon reached the regular drop point and she got down. Her limp had gone away and her knee seemed perfectly fine now that the Doctor had applied medicine. She walked few steps when she was grabbed from behind and she came to face to face with Arnav. She looked at him in shock. He hugged her tightly and whispered, "Tumhein kuch ho gaya toh main nahi jee paaunga, Afreen. Tum mere liye bahut khaas ho." He was about to say that she was his life but refrained. He did not want to scare her with his words. He pulled away from her and walked away. She stood there and watched him drive away. Kyon hote hain aap itne pareshaan jab humein kuch hota hai? Kya hum aapke liye itne keemti hain? Kya hum aapke zindagi mein itni ehmiyat rakhte hai? She stared into the distance and slowly smiled. Par hum yeh kyon bhool jaate hain Arnavji ki aap bhi humaare zindagi ka anmol hissa ban chuke ho. She turned and walked off.

P.S. Sorry for such a short update! Had exams on Monday and had to study for it on Sunday! In short, I started on this chapter today only and completed it in 2 hrs. Hope you guys don't mind the shortness and abruptness!

Precap - While Khushi is worried with her new feelings, Geet realizes that she is half in love with Maan and remaining half will happen soon! Any guesses which songs I am talking about here?