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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys!
you know i lyk writing fanfics

well, my first one '2 luv or 2 h8' has bin accepted by harry potter fan fiction.com!

and i have writted another song-fic which was also accepted.

this is my author page : princesslily_36

this is my second fic which i rote

i woke up 1 morning and just had to write it

it has bin in my mynd 4 a long tym and i put it in words

if u lyk it pls review it here and at hpff.com

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I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You...

Disclaimer: I do not own James or Lily, or this song. I have just made use of the lyrics to fit my words. Please dont sue me!!!
This song-fiction is based on the lyrics of the song 'I just wanna spend my life with you' from the Hindi movie 'Neal n Nikki'.
I repeat, this song is not mine so dont sue me!

James was looking at Lily asleep in a sleeping position on the couch in front of the fireplace with her potions homework on her face. It was almost midnight and James had slipped down to the common room with a package in his hand. He gently took her homework from her face and set it down. He pushed her gently so that she was in a more comfortable, sleeping position. He covered her with a rug. She snuggled under the rug and her hair fell on her face. James smiled fondly at her and ran his hand on her hair gently.

"Like a dream you can't explain,
Love can chase you around in your own heart.
Like a sun shines in the rain,
Love can make your whole life fall apart!" He whispered,

"But I want it now...
I just wanna spend my life with you…
Time will show me how…
I just want to spend my life with you…"

She stirred lightly in her sleep and he pushed her hair off her face. He just stared contentedly at the serenity in her face. Her hair fell back in smooth waves and his eyes took in her face as if to capture the image in his heart forever.

"I'm in love somehow…
I just wanna spend my life with you…
You can show me how…
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out,
Suddenly love's a thing that I can't live without.
You're my dream, my love, my life,
I just wanna spend my life with you,
You're the 1 who makes me smile…
I just wanna spend my life with you…"

He saw a small smile tug at the corners of her lips. He knew that she was dreaming about something nice. He smiled sadly knowing that it was not him who was making her smile. She hated him. He wished that it was him she was dreaming about… he wished…


"What if you don't love me?
Is this how it's meant to be?"
Can't control this feeling… in my heart.
I can see paradise,
Glowing inside your eyes
And I know you feel it… in your heart…
But I want it now...
I just wanna spend my life with you…
Time will show me how…
I just want to spend my life with you…
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out,
Suddenly love's a thing that I can't live without.
You're my dream, my love, my life,
I just wanna spend my life with you,
You're the 1 who makes me smile…
I just wanna spend my life with you…"

The clock struck 12. James wanted to sing all his heart out to her… as he knew she wouldn't listen to him when she was awake. He had already started and saw no point in stopping now… he went on…

"Love is a crazy thing,
A song that you want to sing,
And the world lies… deep inside your soul.
When my Lily comes along,
Together we sing our song
We'll just let the music take control…

And I want it now...
I just wanna spend my life with you
Time will show me how…"

He gave her a wistful look as she stirred a little in her sleep. His breath caught in her throat as he took in her eyes… he nose… her lips… her slender, vulnerable neck…
He just wanted to kiss her right then…
"Happy sweet 16… my Lily flower…" he whispered in her ear. He kissed her cheek lightly and placed the package he had brought, next to her. After one long look at her, left to his dormitories.

Lily slowly opened her eyes. She had awakened at his first touch but had pretended to stay awake to see what he would do. She was appalled at what she had seen him do… or rather heard him do… she could not believe that he had sung such a beautiful song to her. He really sounded like it was heartfelt. She lightly touched the spot where he had kissed her. She gingerly picked up the packet he had laid beside her. She opened it and found a small pendant lying inside a white, velvet box. She picked up the pendant. It was made of 4 lilies placed inside a heart next to each other. They were placed next to each other and each of them had one letter on them. Together they spelt Lily. She stared at the staircase where he had left and sang softly,

"Suddenly everything has turned me inside out.
Suddenly love is a thing that I can't live without…"

She fingered the pendant lightly and whispered,

"I just wanna spend my life with you…"

A/N: This is my first shot at a song-fiction and I don't know how it turned out. I am actually working on another fiction now but this idea just popped into my mind and was tugging at it to be put down on paper. So here it is. Please review and tell me how it sound… good or bad?

Edited by vaish_ashiyuvi - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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first of congratulation for ur fic to be accepted by harry potter fanfiction.com 👏


i loved ur fanfic verymuch 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 congo vaishoo for the fanfic acception
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very well written song fanfic 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good vaish keep it up 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Congrats and love ur song fan-fic 😛

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Love Chandni 😛

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