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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12
nice part...
they are so nice and together...
cont soon dear...
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Sorry guys ths power cut is nt allowing me to type even a para..however finishd type almst n again is power cut ki toh mein...grr
wil post in a while guys
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Posted: 13 years ago
uff finally finally power agayi
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Posted: 13 years ago
DOSTI YA PYAAR





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PART-13

Maan:thankgod!!file milgayi..



He phoned to his dad n informed it…as there is no one at this time who can pass the file to him maan rushed to airport….



Meanwhile,geet didn't find maan anywhere in the party..she looked for him but he is no where..she called him but he didn't pick the call as he forgot the mobile in the living room couch….



She searched for him again but he is nowhere n no one even aadi,karan,harika had any info about him..she felt tensed for him..she finally called km n came to know that maan left to london as there is some urgency…



Geet:london…bina bataye chala gaya..ek phn nahi kar sakthe the..idiot…she felt very sad as he left the party first n on top of that he didn't even inform her anything about his journey…even though the party continued geet is in no mood to enjoy it..how can she enjoy when her maan is not with her..her face became low n she sat in one corner making faces,pouting her lips…harika noticed that geet is sad n sitting away from everyone there..




Harika:hey geet..what happened yar??why ur face is so dull all of sudden??are u ok??



Geet smiled sadly n nodded in no…



Harika nodded even when she is not convinced with geet's reply... the the next moment she realised that maan is nowhere in the party..she thought this to be the reason for her sadness..she smiled n headed towards geet again…"geet where is maan?kahi nazar nahi araha hai? Harika asked innocently….



Geet:u don't ask me about that idiot..fool..stupid…irresponsible idiot…


Harika:omg..wait wait..kya huwa geet??why are u cursing bechara maan…ab kya kiya usne??



Geet:kya kiya??u know he left to london without even informing me…he don't have any idea how worried iam..pagalo ki tarah doond rahi thi usko but sir toh chale gaye…let him come I wont leave him…she said twisting her nose n making angry faces…



Harika giggled inside but didn't show to geet.."geet..first tell me do u know why he left suddenly??"



Geet:ha..nakul said that uncle forgot some imp file so maan went to give him that file…


Harika:hmmm..geet tum bhi na..maan tension mein batana bhool gaya hoga..bechara worried about his dad's work na…



"ha…but"geet fumbled not knowing what to say..she is not understanding why she is so much angry on him..yes maan left without informing her..he was in so much tension to think about anything..he just thought about his dad's project n rushed to airport…but why she is so much angry on him,why she is not convinced with the fact that maan didn't have time to inform anyone..all she knew is he left without informing her….




But harika understood that she is missing him from the next second he left the place..she cant live a second without him….geet who lost in her thought left the place without answering her making her giggle…..




Here maan boarded the flight n before the take off he thought to call geet as he came without informing her..he knows that she'll be fuming with anger now n also will be worried for him…he dipped his hand in his pocket for his mobile…



Maan:gosh!!forgot my mobile at home…ab kya karu…geet will kill me now..hmmm beta maan tu toh gaya kaam se…london pahunchthe hi call karunga…he thought...




He reached london n his dad himself came to airport to receive him..he took a sigh when maan came there on time…maan noticed that his dad is very tensed…



Maan:papa don't worry everything is ok now…


Dad:ha beta but iam tensed becoz I have to give the presentation n I didn't even referred the file properly…


Maan:papa why u?project manager hai na….


Dad:ha but I intentionally kept the details of this project in secracy..this is the biggest project of ours n I don't want to take any risk…meeting just half an hour mein hai..pata nahi kese hoga..



Maan smiled at him while taking the file from him n said"don't worry dad"..he already read the file in flight n he know everything now..then both directly went to the company where meeting is held..maan's dad is still in tension n they entered the presentation room…he is about to move forward for presentation but maan moved forward before he could n started giving the presentation..his dad is shocked at his act first later surprised to see the way he is presenting their plan..he just looked like a perfect business tycoon who have years of experience…surprising him more he added his ideas to that project…everyone there were very much impressed with his presentation…




And as always khuranas got the project…all the other clients were very much impressed with maan..they came to know that he is none other that sanjeev singh khurana's son maan singh khurana,the future M.D of khurana constructions..they bestowed him with appreciations…all of them didn't leave him a second n just liked the way he interacted with everyone..dad felt proud of maan n he stood admiring his extraordinarily talented son rather say perfect business man…all the day maan is busy with clients or some other work related to project..he didn't even get time to breathe…he is also missing geet a lot but not able to move from there as he is handling that work….



Here in mumbai geet is still sad as she is missing maan very badly..she is not concentrating on anything..she even didn't stay in party last night n just came to her room all alone..she just spent in her room silently without talking to anyone which is not at all her nature…she didn't say anything even when her parents asked her the reason…she even skipped her breakfast n left to college…





Geet came to college but her mind is totally absent in classes..she is lost somewhere all the while..her face seemed very dull as if she'll cry at any moment..she didn't respond to karan's jokes but just gave him fake smile…harika noticed this n thought to talk to her after the class..



They entered the canteen after their classes but geet is still lost in her thoughts…karan is surprised to see her silent..she is such a chatter box who cant keep quiet for a second but today she didn't speak anything except hmmm for whatever he said n asked..he understood that she is missing maan…he sat beside her n encircled his arm around her shoulder bringing her out of her trance…

Karan:kaha koh gayi??


Geet gave him a weak smile n nodded in no…


Karan:missing maan ….hai na…geet didn't say anything but looked down..



Karan smiled at his innocent friend who makes sad faces for even small things but this time this is not definitely small thing atleast for her…"geet why u r so sad today..i know u r missing maan…but this is not the first time na..he went many times without even informing to anyone…u never stayed this sad then y today??pata hai tumhara chehra dekkar aisa lag raha hai ki tum saalo se kuch khaya hi nahi…."he giggled..he tried to cheer her but she went from there feeling frustated with his silly joke..yes it seemed silly for her for the first time..she even laughed for his silly jokes but today she is in no mood to smile even..she is feeling all frustated..harika glared at him n followed her…





Here in london maan is helping his dad but his mind is roaming here in mumbai..he is thinking about geet..how she would have reacted when he didn't inform anything about his sudden journey..she must be angry with him..he is already missing her a lot..it's been almost 1 n half day he didn't talk with her but it seemed as if he didn't talk with her since ages..he is trying to concentrate on work but not able to do it as he wants to talk with her at this moment…an unknown restlessness is filled in him..




he is not able to concentrate properly on his work..finally he decided to talk to her first..he moved out from conference room where he was working n entered his cabin..he immediately dialed geet's number without wasting a second…she didn't pick the phone..he dialed again but no response…he dialed for the third time but again no response….his restlessness increased more now..she never did like this..she didn't pick the call after many rings..an un known worry n fear filled in his mind…he tried again n this time he is successful..




"hello geet…kya huwa tuje phone kyun nahi utarahi ho…abhi tak so rahi ho kya..pata hai mein dar gaya tha ek pal ke liye"he said without a break…he didn't get any response from her..he thought she must be angry on her n will start shouting on him but she is silent.."ab tu chup kyun ho..kuch toh bol"he said…



"bolne doge toh tab bolungi na beta"came rano's voice…


Maan:maa aap…geet kaha hai…


Rano:beta she went to college..apni mobile bhool gayi hai ghar par..pata nahi use kya hogaya kal raat se…ek dum chup hogayi hai..


Maan(st):lagtha hai madam naraz hai mujse isliye chup hai…jab wo naraz hoti hai aisa hi rehti hai…maan tu sach much gaya…

aur ha tum bina bataye chale gaye ho..asked rano…

Maan:ha maa papa want some imp file isliye muje aana pada…accha teek hai bye maa…



Maan:ab kya karu…ha I'll call karan..she is in college na..zarur karan ke saath hogi…


He called karan immedaitely…"maan tum…kya yar bina bataye chale gaye ho..yaha geet mooh latkakar baiti hai…lagtha hai madam naraz hai tujse..tu toh gaya isbar...



Maan:karan plz don't scare me yar..ek kaam kar geet ko phone do I want to talk to her..



Karan who came out from canteen searched for her but she is nowhere…"yar pata nahi wo kaha chali gayi..abhi tak toh yahi thi..i'll search for her n then call u ok.."


Maan:hmmm..bye then…


Maan felt sad as he failed to talk to her…he is missing her badly..he is ready to listen her scoldings but want to listen her voice..he sighed n returned back to conference room thinking to call her again after a while…




Karan is roaming the whole college searching for her n he reached library…he is about to enter inside but suddenly bumped with harika who is also about to enter inside the library..both shared a glare n entered inside searching for geet…




Here geet sat in maan's fav place recollecting all the moments she spent with him there..she smiled as she remembered how maan hid in library to escape from her but later she catched him n how he solved the most toughest problem surprising them..how he used to play pranks on librarian…how he turned him in to jovial person who was serious looking personat first..she smiled but there is unknown sadness in her eyes..she is not able to control her tears now…she then saw down the desk where she found chew gums packet..she knows that it is maan's who always chews it whenever he is in library..she picked it n smiled sadly…




Karan n harika came to her breaking her trance.."geet…are u okay?"harika asked as she found tears in her eyes..geet smiled sadly n nodded in no…"geet what are u doing here?pata hai I was searching for u…maan ka phone…"before karan could complete his sentence geet gasped in excitement n almost shouted"kya maan ka phone"..everyone in library looked at her..she mouthed sorry giving them a weak smile…she grabbed phone from karan's hand n ran out from library thinking maan is on call.."hello maan how are u??why didn't u call me??hello..hello"geet said…




Karan laughed at her but stopped when he received a glare from harika.."yar maan called me but I didn't found u anywhere at that time"karan said..



Geet:he called u??..he can call me on my mobile na…ha I know he is scared of my anger but I wont leave him…aane do maan ko...she said sadly at the same time she is angry on him but don't know why…


Karan:geet tera mobile kaha hai??


That's when geet realised that her mobile is not with her…she remember that she forgot her mobile at home…she felt frustated with her behaviour….


"kya hogaya tuje"karan asked confused with her behaviour…



Geet looked at him…she is thinking the same what happened to her today..why is she feeling so restless..her tears are threatening to come out at anytime..she almost ran from there leaving karan confused n shocked with her behaviour..harika who knows the reason assured him that she'll take care of her n followed her…



Geet came running to playground which is empty n again the another fav corner of maan in the college…she sat on bench n the tears which she is stopping from long time made their way down her cheeks finally..she is really feeling frustated today…the one who never forget anything left her mobile at home,skipped her breakfast in the morning..she is not feeling like staying at one place..she don't know what is happening with her but she is not at all feeling peace anywhere…




unknowingly her silent tears took turn in to a sob…she is sobbing for no reason but feeling like crying…she felt someone's hand on her shoulder n looked up to find harika there…she stood up n hugged her..she sobbed again hugging her tight…harika who understood her feelings rubbed her back to calm her..




After a minute or something geet stopped crying n harika made her sit down back on bench..geet stopped sobbing but tears took no name to stop..she just stood looking at her lap while wiping her tears with one palm…


Harika:geet kya huwa??batao muje..asked very lovingly caressing her hair…


Geet:pata nahi hari…pata nahi kya horaha hai mere saath..iam feeling frustated…iam feeling like pulling my hairs..iam very angry but don't know why??on whom???iam feeling like iam staying in hell…not finding peace anywhere…I want to run away somewhere…I don't know why iam crying now….iam feeling like I don't have anything in my life..some one snatched my breath from me…har jagah bas…she didn't complete her sentence n closed her eyes while a tear escaped from her eyes…


Harika:har jagah bas maan hi nazar aaraha hai..hai na…


Geet nodded like an innocent child.."iam missing him a lot…karan said right…maan did this many times but this time…


Harika smiled at her n wiped her tears.."becoz u never had those feeling before which u have now for maan..u r missing him…u are not able to endure this distance from him..


Geet looked at her perplexed.."matlab.."


Harika:u know why u crying like this for unknown reason….actually it's not the unknown reason..u r ignoring the reason... not realisng the reason..and the reason for ur sadness is this small seperation from maan…u cant stay without him even for one day..why only one day you cant stay for a minute without him

Tum maan ko miss kar rahi ho na…you know why you are crying??why u r missing him this badly??why u r feeling this restlessness??why u r feeling like some other snatched ur life???

Harika smiled at geet who is staring at her confusingly….

becoz U LOVE MAAN…


Geet looked at her shocked.."kya???no..no harika it's not like that..u r taking it in a wrong way..yeah iam missing him but….


Harika:may be iam wrong…(she said it intentionally as she thought not to force her)

Geet pata hai when we love someone..we cant endure a minute's seperation from him..he becomes our life..our day starts with him n ends with him..we cant bear if he gets a small scratch on his hand..we feel like doing something which can take away all his pain..we smile whenever he is with us n that smile dissappears the very next minute if he goes away from us…when we don't find him near us we feel frustated,angry..we feel like running away from everyone…we feel helpless n our pain will come out in the form of tears….she looked at geet who lost in her thoughts..harika smiled n left her alone as she thought that she needs time now n have to stay alone…



Geet(st):harika ne jo kuch bhi kaha o sab mere saath ho raha hai..ha I cant stay away from maan..i cant bear if he is in pain,even when he suffers cold..i want him always infront of me…but is this becoz I love maan..kya mein sach mein maan se….



She didn't even realise when she walked out from the college n stepped inside karan's car..she is lost in her thoughts all the while…she didn't even notice when she reached home…she is physically present with her mom n dad but her mind is filled with only maan..she is confused thinking harika's words..she is not able to realise what is right n what is wrong..is she thinking wrong??how can she think about her friend in that way??but why all these things happening with her??why she is feeling restless???she drifted to sleep thinking about her confused feelings…




Here in london maan also is feeling restless..he thought it's becoz he didn't talk with her..he is missing her..he never stayed without talking with her that two for 2 days..he went with his dad on business tours many times but he used to have communication with her on phone n now he didn't even heard her voice since 2 days..he finally wrapped up all the work on which he took charge..he n his dad decided to return back the next second as his dad have to attend another meeting in mumbai but the flight is after few hours so they went back to hotel in which they were living to rest for a while…..maan's dad also noticed his restlessness but didn't say anything as he want maan to realise anything on his own..he also thought he may be wrong in thinking that they are in love…maan thought to call her but it's very late now..she must be sleeping cudling like a baby..he mumbled n smiled…kal jakar surprise doonga…he thought n drifted to sleep unknowingly as he is tired working continously…



Next morning,geet slowly opened her eyes n smiled…the next moment her eyes widened in shock…she got up instantly with her mouth open widely..she saw maan sat on her bed with crossed arms n his back is resting on wall of bed.."maan tum….tum kab aaye ho??..u shocked me"geet finally spoke something…



Maan:hmm kya kare…my geetu is angry with me so kuch toh karna padega na use manane ke liye …toh socha I'll surpise u..



Geet then rememberd that she is angry on maan..she pouted her lips saying.."u don't talk to me"n turned her face..maan made her face him holding her chin..he then held his ears n said sorry with pleading eyes…oh his pleading eyes can melt her in a second even when she is really angry on him but now she is not angry on him…she smiled n hugged him encicling her hands around his neck.."missed u soo much maan"




"I missed u geet"

"maan.."

"hmm…"maan mumbled..

"I love u"😳

Precap:

Geet pushed away maan with force while tears rolled down her cheeks..she ran from there..

Maan ran behing her calling her continously.."geet plz listen to me once"

She didn't care him n ran out of the college..she didn't even realise that she is standing in the middle of the road…maan saw that a car is approaching her with full speed bur before he could react that car hit geet making her lie on pool of blood…😭😭

"geet!!!!"maan screamed while running to her…..


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Posted: 13 years ago
Yiepee ..Me first😃
Superb update👏..Loved it⭐️
Both maaneet are restless
Liked harika -geet conoversation.👏.Finally harika told to geet what maan means for geet⭐️
Geet monologue are awesome⭐️
Loved maaneet moment😳
Geet said i love you to maan😳
Waiting for maan reaction
Precap sound scary..Omg what maan told to geet😕
Geet is in danger😲..accident😲😭
Can't wait ..
Update soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
Edited by srirad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATE MANEET MISSING EACH OTHER HARIKA MAKING GEET REALISE HER LOVE geet confessed precap scary



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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part a lot..
So geet realized her love for maan..
Thanx to harika..
Maan s too feeling restlessness but the reason s unknown to him..
Precap s shocking yaar..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hope maan will realise his luv soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry double post..😆

Edited by srirad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayeee kya update hai
mast ekdum
dosti se pyar
finally geet realised dat she loves maan
nd m aan also missing geet
loved it
nd finally geet proposed maan
too good
precap seems interesting nd scary

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