FF Badmash Dil Part 21 PG 35 LAST UPDATE - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Am very much excited for your FF ,Yumna .C'mon ,we are all ready to get in whatever you have in your mind ,so continue soon.
When you are going to start and at which frequency ??

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Get started soon and thanks for the pm did not expect it ... waiting for ur updates very soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow billo imarthi char wiht dev i liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting and plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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one word awesome teriffic wow
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice on.Do cnt nd pm me..

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In a Village called Vridaavaan , lived a girl named Radhika . She stayed with her father Tara Shankar and had a step mother named Arpita who never accepted Radhika as her own . She had a daughter named Vishaka who was careless and selfish. Radhika real mother passed away when she was 10 years old and her father got re married .Tara Shankar didn't know how to take care of Radhika and took his distance from her after the death of his wife. He got busy with his little cloths shop and his new wife, his attention on Radhika drifted away . He managed to feed and give shelter to the family but lacked in giving good guidance and love to his daughter .

Radhika was insulted by her step mother and got slapped and hit many times in her teenage years . This only made Radhika get angry and become rude and arrogant . She started hanging around the street alone and pick pocketing . When she felt so many people after her or giving her useless stress she would go to her favorite private spot near the river bank Radhika grew up to be a trouble maker for the village , she would intimidate innocent people and take their money .

She always carried her knife with her which scared the villagers . She was tough and rough , if any guy whistled or checked her out she would grabbed them by the collar and put the knife against their neck until they would run off terrified . Radhika knew how to get her way out of trouble, she would always gets scold by her father but she wouldn't care, it was his responsibility to take care of her but he didn't and now he was paying the price for it.

Arpita always insulted Radhika mother purposely and this would get Radhika agitated and warned Arpita not to say anything or else she would kill her. Tara Shankar always came in at the wrong moment and the blame would go on Radhika .

Radhika did go to college but sometimes skipped classes or get kicked out of class because she's behaving rudely . Radhika was 22 , she wore a shirt choli with a gagra along with kusa with payals. She had a nose ring and tied her hair in a braid with little earring and matching bangles. She looked like a typical village girl but with lots of mischievousness and always chewed gum .She liked taking advantages of tourist to rip them off with money , she charged them more then she should to give them a tour of the village .She had her ways with trick and no one dared messing with Radhika . She liked to pick on people mostly men who think they were tough but in the end always lost against her

There was a big Bhavan near the river bank , lived Dadima and Birju . Dadima had 2 grandsons Dev and Vivek but her own son Suraj Purohit decided to move to America with the family Dadima refused to leave her village and the Rajpurohiti . They all left feeling sad that Dadima didn't come along . Dev and Vivek did their studies in America and got raised there .Dev was a very handsome young guy , he dated many woman's and knew how to charm a girl . He had a playful side to himself but when it was time to be serious he was a complete different person . He knows how to have fun and takes up challenges. He was very active and sportive during his high school and college years . Mr.Purohit opened up a software business in America which was a huge success . They were very wealthy and gave Vivek and Dev the best education in business.

Dev just finished his University degree and planned on going back to Vridavaan. He had a beautiful childhood there with his grandmother and Birju .

Dev always planned on coming back to Vridavaan to see his grandmother , whenever they talked on the phone he would just ache to go and see her .Dev really missed his grandmother , she lived alone under Birju his best friends care. He decided to go back and help his grandmother with the RajPurohiti responsibilities. He barely had time during his school years but now nothing could stop him to see her .


Dev was very excited to come back to Vridaavaan., he was sitting in the car as birju drove, he looked outside the window only to smell the freshness in the air , the blue clear sky with the bright sun welcoming him back . When he entered the house Dadima was just ecstatic to see her grandson back all grown up and ready to explore the world. Dev saw his grandmother active as ever , she had gray hair but she was till very much present in the village , she would participate in charity , go to the temples , she knew almost everyone in the village and they all respected her very much .

"Dadima!" Dev could resist and hugged his grandmother fondly ..

She hugged him back and felt tears of joy seeing her grandson all grown up ..
Dev moved back and wiped her tears sweetly ..She had a good look at her grandson seeing him grown as a handsome young man with a charming smile .She stroke his arms unbelievably

"tuh kitna bara hochuka hai! "She said with tears of happiness..
(you have have grown so much!)

"Aur aap bhi aaj hi utni sundar lagri hain ! .."He said boyishly
(And you are still as beautiful as ever !)

Dadima hit him lightly "Chup badmash!'' she trailed of with a laugh

They both sat down and talked about the family well being and the business going smoothly. Dadima told Dev about the Rajpurohiti growth during the years and how they built more orphanages around the villages and shelters for the poor's.

There chit chatting went on them , Dev went up in the room which Birju cleaned up , Dev opened the curtains letting the fresh air penetrate in his room ..Dev took out his camera ..

"birju ..I want to go out today.."

"Aree haan ..aaj sham ko Raas leela hoga , ghat ke paas."
(sure , tonight there will be a performance near the river back .)

"Then we'll go" Dev said excitedly
**

It was almost sundown and Dev climbed on a bolder taking few snaps on the raas leela , he got down to get a better view , all the people were so indulged in the spectacle that they didn't even notice Radhika stealing their money .

Radhika chewed on her gum counting the money and putting the money on the side of her blouse and continued greedily ..

Dev sensed something as if someone was peeking in his coat pocket, in a reflex he grabbed the persons wrist and saw round stunned eyes that blinked with long lashes, she had a tiny nose with a nose ring , and perfect pink lip and took few bites of her gum . Her eyes slowly daggered on his hand that were holding her wrist . Everyone else didn't notice this they were watching the raas leela.

Radhika yanked her hand out hold and a pursed her lips angrily , how dare he touch her!

" kyun re beh ? Kabhie ladki nahi deka kya?! "she asked rudely yet loud
(what the hell! You never seen a girl before!)

"Kya?! "Dev asked dumfound seeing how she talked, he saw her brushing her finger under her nose chewing her gum once .

"Abhe aisa kya ghoom ghoom se muhje dekra re beh ?" ( What's your problem looking at me like this! )She asked biting her lower lips intimidating

Birju came ..

"aree..Radhika ji a..a..aapp.kya hua?" Birju asked feeling scared
( Radhika ..you w..what ..ha happened?)

"tuh jaanta hai ise?" She said pointing at Dev
(You know him!)

"H..h h hann" (Yes..)

"Vridavaan se toh lagtha nahi ..Kahan se aya hai beh?" She asked curtly looking at Dev's clothing style (You don't look from around here ? Where do you come from?)

"Haa..who Dev bhaiya aaj hi ayein hain America se.." Birju tried telling but felt nervous ..
(..He came from America just today ..)

Dev couldn't believe this girl ?! What did she think of herself

Suddenly they heard a man saying "mere paise kahan ge?" (Where's my money ?)

Radhika eyes widened up and quickly escaped , Dev watched on not understanding what just happened

"Birju , who the hell is she?" He said frowning his brows asking firmly

Birju told dev that she loved to steal and warned him to stay away from her as much as possible ..Dev smirked , he wasn't afraid of anyone especially that girl !

Dev was making his way back home going through the pictures , Birju went to meet someone and told Dev to wait near the river bank . It was dark outside only few lamp post lights were on and the moon light shined over the village

Suddenly Dev felt someone taking him by the collar and cluing him on the tree .He was surprised seeing the same girl he met before . Radhika took out her knife warningly ..

"Kyun re beh ..tuhje kya laga ke main itni asani se tumhe chorthi?"
( What did you think? That I will easily let you go ??)

"Chal Nikal paise .." She said firmly tightened her grip on his collar..
(Come on Take out your money ..)

Dev frowned his brows furiously , he was not at all intimidated by this girl nor will he do what she says ! She kept darting her eyes on him and bit her lowered lips bringing the knife closer..

"Yeh rampuri hai , Radhika ka rampuri .." She said raising her brows toughly "Maine ka nikal paise?!"( I said take out your money)

Dev clutched his jaws together and within a second he quickly twisted his arm and stood behind her. His grip on her writs was tight .

Radhika struggled to come out , she moaned lightly feeling her arm hurting ..Before she could say anything

"Main tuhje apne paise kabhie nahi dounga( I wont ever give you my money! )and don't you dare reaching my pocket again " He cleared warningly

He felt the girl in pain and realised how tightly he was holding her arms a relaxed his brows releasing her .But then felt a hard slap on his face ..Radhika couldn't believe that he dare touching her again

"tumhari himaat kaisi hui muhje haath lagane?!" She said furiously
(How dare you touch me!)

"Kabadaar tuh meri kareeb bhi aya toh , tumhare tukre tukre karke kutte ko khilan doungi .." (Im warming you if you ever came close to me like this again I will chop you and feed you to the dogs!) She warned pointing the knife towards him

"Tuh apne aap ko samaj thi kya ho? Who the hell are you and what do you think of yourself!.."

"Abeh ghade(donkey) muhjese sawal karni zaroorath kaise ki tumne.Aur agar tuhje itna shok hai muhje chune ki toh ja wapas janhan se tuh aya hai aur Gauri ladkian ko chule ..muhje nahi!" She said loudly yet rude
(You donkey how dare you even ask me questions A.nd if your so fond about touching me why don't you go back to America and do this with the white girl not with me! )

Dev was shocked to hear her talk in such way with him

"At least they have manners and act like a girl unlike you!" He replied proving his point "Tuh jaisi churel maine kabhie nahi deka aur nahi muhje chok hai tuhje haath lagane , tuh jaise ladki ko "(Never in my life Saw a witch like you and I have no interest in touching a girl like you!)

Radhika mouth opened hearing his insults , no one dared talking to her in such way !
"Aiyeee! tuh muhje jaanta nahi hai"
(HEY!!! YOU Don't know me !)

"And you have no idea who your messing with " Dev advised fiercely

At this moment it was war between these two, Radhika sniffed once brushing her finger under her nose chewing her gum . They both darted challengingly in each others eyes

Suddenly Birju called Dev from far .Dev couldn't believe this he was in a middle of a fight with this girl and someone had to call him .. Radhika smirked and snapped her fingers

"Chal phut yahan se ,aur kabadaar tuhne muhjse pagan bhi liya ..samja!?'' She said raising one brow sternly
(Get lost from here and don't you dare clash with me !)

Dev chuckled mockingly "Tuhje kya lagta hai ..ke main intni asani tumhari baat sun lounga Nahi you don't control me ..understand?!" (What do you think ..that I will listen to you quietly ? No you don't control me ..understand?)Dev said with a challenging smile

Radhika didn't move her gaze away from him ,she wasn't afraid of him

Birju came and Dev left and turned back only to see the girl putting her hand on her flank blowing away the tress that was over her face watching him walk .Dev just chuckled mocking and shook his head

***
Dev was in his room with Birju

"Birju! Its war time! That girl needs a lesson and I will give it to her ."

"dev bhaiya ..aise maat kijiye phir aapko pashtana hoga .."Birju said worriedly.
(Dev ..don do this..or else ou will regret it ..)

"Birju , main tumhare tarah darpok nahi hoon ..main itni jaldi harne wala se nahi hoon."
(Birju I'm not a scary cat like you I wont loose this easily .)

Radhika was sitting near the river bank playing around with her knife

"Us chore ko main nahi chorne wali , aur uska butwa main lekar hi rahoongi .."she said smiling determinatingly ( I wont leave that boy alone and will take his wallet no matter what!)

Precap

Radhika entered her house panting hard yet was beaming seeing that she got his wallet .

"Abhe Chori ..kahan se ari hai !" Arpita asked loudly..
(Hey Girl! Where are you coming from!)

"kyun re moti ? Bari fiquar hori thi meri ?" she said chewing her raising her brows
(Why Fatty ?Getting worried about me?)

"Muhje nahi ..meri pati tumhe dundre ahin .."
(Not me ..my husband is looking for you!)

"Pehle who mere Ma ki pati hain tumhare nahi ..samji budiya !"
(First he's my mother husband ..understand old lady!)

"tumhari zubaan katkar tumhare haath main dedoungi ..samji!" Arpita warned..
(I will chop you tongue and give it in your hands! )

"Acha .toh kare ke deka .."Radhika asked loudly yet rude..
(Oh really! I would love to see you try )

Arpita just darted her eyes furiously , if it wasn't for Tara Shankar she would have kicked Radhika out long time ago ..

Radhika just walked away giving few insults.


Hey guys!! 🤗 Sorry couldn't help myself to write another FF😳 I'm so happy that you guys will be joining me for "Badmash Dil " ( Mischievous Heart ).I didnt expect such great response from just the summary . Thank you so much !!!😃 I have to warn you guys that Radhika and Dev wont be very lovey lovey with each other for the moment 😆
I will update the next part tomorrow ..till then hope you like this small update 😊
Take care !

Please let me know if you want me to pm you 😊

Edited by billo77 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok, this 1th part was FUN 😉 Liked their feisty interaction and also ur description of the chars...radh is amusing in her imarti avatar..will wait to know hw she'll get that wallet 😆
P.s. I like the fact that when i come online first i found ur update
😃 Oh, and i was 1th to reply again ⭐️ 😃 😃
Edited by Myra.nelly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
wow really very nice ff love it waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
good one...like radhika's charater...different...waiting for the next update...

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