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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

loved the updt...the small swaron encounter was a treat to read...finally kria enters...a great entry indeed,...now m waiting all the more for ur updates...nxt part soon please...


thankyou 😃..vl try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx..😊
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wow really nice...loved the swaron convo... 😃

thanx 4 d pm...update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...
amazing updatee.
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amazing update thanks for the pm
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Hey nice update...pls do pm me whenever you update it...thanks
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hey m missing it...its been a lot of time .wen wud u update...
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Hello guyz, thankyou so much for liking and commntng on last update. Well we noe it's been ages we updated this. But we r in cls 10 n its becumng really difficult for us to update, hope u understand. But we will try our best to update this as soon as possible. Promise now the updates will be more regular ( not 3-4 days but sooner than this)

Well here's chapter 6 and 7!!

Hope u all like it😃

Enjoy !! 😃

Chapter 6

Next morning

Vp calls rey, sharon, swayam and shivam in his office.
VP: rey, sharon, sawyam..tumlog iss clg k office bearers ho. toh tumhe upcoming event k bare me toh pta hi hoga. St. Louis ka charity event. What's the progress??..
Sharon: sir, umm..actually humne meetings rakha tha and we are discussing on it.
VP: umm..okay. so give all the details as soon as possible.
Sh: yes sir..
VP:well...actually i wanted to inform u about something regarding shivam. *swayam and rey looks at shivam* Boys jo hua so hua, so hua. Purani baato ko bhul jao. I kno u ppl dont like each other but this is a clg and yahan aissa behaviour tolerate nhi kia jaega. I think u ppl should better sort out ur differences,*he looks at the boys* so, i have decided that shivam, jo ki KKR clg ka cultural secretary reh chuka h, sshould help u guys in the charity event. Is it okay with u guys??.. *looks at rey, swayam and sharon*
rey: umm...yess sir. we are okay with it. (voiceover): we are obviously not okay with it but we have to do it!!!
Shivam is a bit shocked with his reply. He thought that he would never be allowed to help but fate knows how to play its game!!
Shivam(voiceover): in hone mujhe allow kaise kar dia??? hmmm..i should bettre not do anything wrong this time. I have to make place in this lg nd this time no mean intentions.hmmm...i wish maine pehle b aisa socha hota...!!

He sighed

Vp: well then its final..shivam vl be helping u all

All( rey,swayum n Sharon): yess sir

Vp: now u may all leave

All: thankyou sir

They all came out of vp's office

Shivam: umm..guys,thanx..mujhe include krne ke liye..

Sharon was not interested and she was luking at d other side

Rey n swayum lukd at each other

Swayum: ya..ya its okay

Rey: but remember this is a favour!!..n aacha ise mei hoga ki tm isss baar kch garbar na kro..nhi toh..

Shivam: nhi..nhi..i vl..mai apna kamm kr lunga

Rey: ya v vl c it *smirks *

And Rey,Swayum n Sharon left frm der

Shivam (voiceover) : hmm..*sigh* oh shit assignment ke liye buk issue karana tha..ughh..shivam run, nhi toh classes ka tym ho jayega n u have to get dat buk!!

And he quickly runs towards library

Swayum ,rey and Sharon were walking towards RH to inform others abt d encounter wen they see a huge crowd near RDX sir's office

Note: guyzz in this ff rdx n Nicole ka marriage nhi hua h!!!..n nicole had gone to pune for sum official work

Sharon: itna bhirr kyu h,sir ke office ke samne,rey aaj kch h kya??..i mean anything special??

Rey: umm..nahi. i have no idea abt ths. Let's check it out ho kya rha h

When they advanced towards rdx office, they c d whole gang there peering inside d office.

Rey: guyzz tum log ye kya kr rhe ho???!!!!!

Swayum: n wese itna bhidd kyu??

Neha: arre u not knowing, Nicole maa'm cuming back

Rey,swayum n Sharon: what???!!!!!

Nilesh : ha..meri sapnno ki mallika wapas aa gyi *dreamy mode*

Rey: kch bhi ..maa'm h vo hamari nilesh!!..behave urself!!

Nilesh: aare..toh maa'm h toh..pyaar thodi na kch dekhta hai

Simmi was fuming with anger seeing nilesh like dat

Simmi:rey's right nilesh,behave!!!!

Nilesh: aare what's ur problem??...koi shanti se usse dekhkne bhi nhi deta n he again goes towards rdx office

Simmi was a upset n angry so she walks out f der.

Rey: ye nilesh bhi na, chodo. Guys v talked to vp sir,unhone ne kaha ki shivam ko charity event mei include krne n v included him.

Vishakha:hmm..v din't have any choice man, so dnt feel bad abt it guys

Amar: hmm tahi hai

Swayum: so now..v shud btr head for classes then

Everyone:hmmm n d girls went.

Nilesh was busy looking at Nicole so he dnt knew wat was going on

All looking towards nilesh who was juming like an ape seeing Nicole

Vicky: aee iska kuch nhi ho skta!!

Everyone(only boys r der): hmmm n they sigh in unison

Swayum:chalo guys..isse le jana padega nhi toh ye nhi hilne wala aaj yaha se

Bharat: chalo

And they literally dragged nilesh away with them (poor nil :D)

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Shivam enters the library and BBOOOMMM!!! he clashes with a girl and her books fell down. He bends down to help her.
Shi: m sorry. wo maine dekha...
but he couldn't complete his sentence as that girl starts speaking.
girl: arey nai nai..wo toh main hi dekh kr nhi chal re thi. sorry.
And that melodious voice enters shivam's ears.
Shi(voiceover): ye awaz..ye awaaz toh..
He looks up to find the owner of that voice. He knew it belogned to whom. It was tani's. The only girl who had made a lasting imression in his heart and reached its deep core only to write her name on it..forever..
The face had that impression like the one which he had seen the first..a startled and yet a really cute one.
Shi:tani..
Tani: arey shivam ap..
Tani remembers the first time when they had clashed into each other. Rey and Swayam, and even others were considderably unhappy to see him. She always wanted to talk to his bhai about it but was never able to as she was afraid of the anger which she saw in his eyes that day.
Shi: tum mera naam janti ho?? * he remembered he had not officially met her before*
Tani: haan wo bhai k muh se suna tha..
The two gather all her books and rise up.
Shi: ohh...waise sorry again. meri galti thi..
Tani:arey ni..bola na meri galti thi..
Shi:lekin..
She cuts in between.
Tani; acha chalo hum dono ki galti thi. theek hai??
Shi;yeah..
Tani laughs and her laughter enters shivam's ears..her voice calmed his mind. Seeing her happy, a smile involuntarily crept onto his face. Moments later her laughs end and a smile remains on her face. Shivam carefully observed that little curve and blurts out something unknowingly.
Shi: u have a really beautiful smile.
Tani*confused*: thanx..
She smiles again and his heart does a summersault inside.
Tani: acha mainn chalti hoon. bye..
shi: bye..
Tani leaves.
Shi(voiceover): what the hell was that??.."u have a really beautiful smile" !!!..u have gone crazy dude. U certainly dint had to say that!!
He taps his head and goes ad occupies a corner seat at a vacant table. He takes out his ntebook and books and starts writing something but..
Shi: ughh!!..ye pen kyo ni kaam kr rha??
He throws the pen across the table and it lands near another pen. He leens forward to pick that purple colored with golden strips pen.
Shi; huhh??..ye kiska pen hai?? hmm..kissi ka bhi ho..
He starts using it. After a while he felt a soft tap on his shoulders. He turns around to find tani over her sholders.
Tani; hii shivam..actually wo mera hai..
She points to the pen in his hand.
Shi:the pen??..
tani;yeah..
Shi; ohh sorry..wo mera pen kaam nhi kr ra tha islie..
Tani; its okay..if u dont have a pen then i can give u.
Shi;arey ni thk hai..i'll find one on my own.
Tani: arey lekin jab mere paas hai toh fir kyo??..
She makes a really cute expression and shivam again gets lost in discovering each and eery feature angelic cute face. Onther the other hand she takes out a pen from her bag and brings it forward to give him..but poor shivam is lost in his dreams. He is brought back onto the earth by her angel's voice.
Tani; but i'll need that one. its very special to me.
Shi;ohh yeah..
They xchange the pens.
Shi:thanx..
Tani; ur welcome.
She smiles yet another time and this time shivam coouldnt help himself from flying high up in the sky. His emotions controlled all his organs and his body became just a mere puppet in its hands. He saw that bright radiating smile and couldn't help his owm happiness creeping slowly from his heart to his lips, and further into his eyes. he looked deeply into her eyes with great intensity. She soon turned around and left leaving a small "bye" behind. The three letters made him feel like ge was flying. But suddenly his wings were cut off and he landed on that stiff bench. But his thoughts again went in search of its mistress, tani. But again his chain of thoughts came to a halt when he heard his cell ringing. He took out his cell and while mentally swearing on it, picked up the call. he said to the caller that he would call later and banged his cell on the table. The world around him towards him and motioned a "shhh...!!!". He bit his tongue and said sorry to others while swearing again on his phone. He saw tani's pen on his other hand and noticed that this one was of metallic blue color. He ran his fingers through it and felt something written on it. He brought the pen closer to his eyes( and no..his eyes arent bad) and saw tani's name written there in italics. He again ran his fingers through it. He was so immensely lost in it that he missed to hear his cell hone ringing again. After a while the irritated librarian came to him ad showed him the way to the door. He surely got a lesson that day to keep ur phone in silent for firstly, it can throw u outta the library, and secondly, it can cause heavy damage to ur love life!!!

Dehradun

aaliya: c'mon dude!! ab aisa toh mat keh ki tu thk h, coz teko dekhkr aisa bilkul nhi lagta!!
kriya: arey baba main jhoot kyo bolungi??..main sachh..
...and kriya kept convincing her 3 friends. But unfortunately all went in vain as her friends knew her too well. They knew that she was lying, they always did when she lied. They knew that it wasn't the incident wasn't an 'accident', as quoted by her, she really did try to suicide!!
For the past four months, since the time she returned from mumbai, they had noticed the change in her. She wasn't the usual hyper active and cheerful girl they called their friend, and she wasnt the girl prateek had fallen for!


Prateek had always liked kriya. He knew her frm childhood,went to d same school, were in d same grp ,infact all of them were. He had alwaz admired her for hr braveness and beauty. Her liitle pramks yet an innocence of a child in her. He loved evrythng about her .Though he never confessed his love infront of her, she always knew his feelings, and yet avoided it always in the fear to lose a good friend of hers.
prateek(voiceover): ye kriya ko kya ho gya hai??.. aaj kal wo itni khoi-khoi kyo rehti hai??.. usne kaha tha ki dance k wajah se uski mom usse wapas aa gyi par mujhe nhi lagta ki baat sirf itna h. Warna usme itna badlav nhi ata..she's eerily quiet these day!! Hope wo jald hi theek h jae 'coz wo hume toh kuch btane wali h nhi!!...JUST HOPE!!! ( again a reminder : prateek is agud character ; do not bash abt him, infact he's a cupid in disguise ❤️
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Aaliya, prateek and vivan left after a while when all their attempts proved to be futile. They knew that kriya was strong-headed and she would never tell them what the matter was, but they didn't understand that when she is so strong-headed, then how did she allowed her emotions to take over her mind and why the hell did she commit suicide!!!
kriya: sorry guys.. main tumhe apne problem k bare me nhi bata sakti warna tumlog bahut pareshan ho jaoge. And i can't see you like that.
Just then her mother enters her room with a glass of 'haldi wala doodh'. She sits near her.
maa: arey..tumhare dost kab gye??
kr: bas abhi nikale.
maa: ohh acha...acha lo, ye doodh pee lo
kr: chee nai..!!!..maa plz kuch bhi lekin ye nhi..plzzz!!
maa: nai wai kuch nai..take it and drink it now!!
She narrowed her brows to make a strict face, and kriya immediately takes over the glass. She pinches her nose and starts to drink it. She takes a slip and makes a disgusting look!! Her mum sees that innocent face and immediately falls for it.
maa: m sorry beta..mere wajah se...
Her voice trembles as her emotions make a way back to her heart. Kriya keeps the glass of milk on the side table and held her maa in her arms
Kriya: maa..aisa kuch nhi ..apke wajah se kuch bhi nahi hua!!
Her mother composes herself and wipes off the the tears which had welled up in the corner of her eyes.
maa: kriya..mujhe tumse kuch imp baat krna h.
kr: haan maa kahie na..
maa: maine decide kia h ki tum mumbai wapas jaogi. Wahi tum khush reh sakti ho, apne dreams fulfill kr sakti ho. I'l no longer b the barrier between u and your dreams.
kr: maa..
..and it was all she could say. She kept her head on her maa's lap trying to hide the tears on her eyes. After a while she spoke.
kr: nai maa. mujhe mumbai wapas nhi jana. Wahan ki bheed mujhe bilkul nhi passand. Wahan dunia itne raftar se chalti h ki mujhe dar laga rehta h ki main kahi peeche na choot jaun...mujhe wahan nahi jana maa..nahi jana!!
maa: par tumhe toh aisi hi life chahie thi na??
kr: haan..but wahan rehkr mujhe laga ki mumbai mere lie nahi hai...main mumbai k liye nahi hoon!!
maa: okay beta.. *she raises her up* jaisi tumhari marzi. ab lo ye doodh pee lo...loo *she gives the milk*
And this time kriya quietly drinks the whole glass. When her mother goes away, she gets inside her quilt and starts to sob.
kr(voiceover): maa..main mumbai wapas nhi ja sakti. Islie nhi ki mujhe wo jagah passand nhi..infact i love that city..bbut..but main rey aor gang ko face nhi kr sakti. Maine apni team ko tab choda jab unhe meri sabse zyada zarurat thi..before the finals of footloose..vishakha would b so much mad at me, neha bhi kitna dukhi hui hogi. bharat, amar..i miss them all!! But ek hi hope par unhe chod k ayi thi, ki swayam inhe sambhalega. Aor rey!!..maine unka kitni buri tarah dil toda. He must be hating me like hell!! And i dont have the strenght to face it..i dont cant face his anger.. i cant face the disgust he must have when he'll see me...after all i broke his heart!!.. M not capable of their love and friendship..m a traitor ..m nothing else but a traitor !!

check the next post 😊

Edited by muzzy_sk - 13 years ago
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Chapter 7

In Rh:

Sharon: so guys lets start.. charity events kch hi days mei h n we stl hv not decided what to do

All: hmmm

Vicky : so krna kya h?? tumne kuch socha h kya??

Sharon: umm..ya ek toh group dance rahega n 1 duet..anythng more??

Rey: na..dats just fine..itna hi rakhte h

Vishakha: so guys..grp dance..vo toh ho jayega but who r d one's dancing in duet and wats d theme man???

Everyone:theme!..hmmm everyone thinking

Rinni: couples??

Nilesh: nope common hai

Vishakha: girl v/s boy??

Vicky: kuch aur nhi sujha

Bharat: aiee kuch mat bolna *shows his fist*

Vicky: aaram se aaram se mere bhai

Neha: neha wanting sumthng pyaara sa..babu like

Vishakha,rinni,simmi: awww

Sharon: umm..how abt a mono act kinda thng..matlb not xactly like dat,v vl modify it and on something romantic???!!! *looking at swayum* *then gaining back her sense she looks away*Umm d famous love stoys??

Neha: nice idea it is

Nilesh: ya Sharon nice one

Simmi: afterol its Sharon!!

Swayum: so kaun sa love story???

Neha: Romeo aur Juliet,neha loving

Rinni: Heer Ranjha??

All shocked hearing " Heer Ranjha"

Rinni: kya??...mujhe bhi kch pata rhta h..

Amar smiled looking at her..* she blushed* and then looked away

Vicky: Frog Prince!

All look at each other and broke into a laughter

Rey: Vicky..tu na..*trying hard to conrol his laughter*

Swayum: great choice Vicky

Vicky: aare ??* confused*

Nilesh: kyu tu frog banega??* Lauging hard* and teri princess tujhe kiss kareke prince bana degi??..hmmm

Neha blushed hearing this,vch did not go unnoticed by others

Vishakha: ahem ahem ..bas bas princess

And everybody agn startd laughing

Sharon: okay okay guyzz'bht ho gaya. Lets work now and Vicky sorry pr no frog prince and she smiled at him

Nilesh : sooo???..St. Louis ka charity event h,it has to be sumthng different

Swayum: hmm.baat toh sahi h. so vch is d best story??

Rey who was lost in his thoughts blurted out: Chabilal and Ramaira

Everony: kya???

Rey back to his senses: umm..vo kch nhi'

Swayum: aare bta na. kaun h ye chabilal and ramaira??

Simmi: hmm..sounds interesting

Rey: err..umm..guys chabilal is actually frm a village who cums to Mumbai for his studies,his accent is of a common village man,simple yet sweet guy. A total humble person. Ramaira on the other hand is d clg diva. The most famous girl, and immensely rich. When they meet the both of them fall in love..
(or mayb just chabila: he muttered under his breath)

Swayum: eehh kuch kaha?

Rey: ehh nhi.. ha toh when they meet they fall in love. But sadly for ramaira this was aplay just a game to get famous. She never loved him or cared about him. She just pretended.*he sighed*. When she was bored she left him, alone,isolated. His frenz were vth him alwaz but he missed her very much. It had been months dat she left him but he cud not forget her. She was and will alwaz be the one and only for him *he sighed*

Everyone silent for a moment and then they all startd shouting

Sharon: wow rey dat was just...Awesome!!!!

Rey smiled at them

Vicky: ha rey mast tha yaar

Vishakha: ya man, it was os cute and dat b***h man how cud she leave him

Amar:hmm..but bht athi thory thi ( hmm..but bhut aachi story thi )

Nilesh: ya dude ye story tujhe kaise pata chali?..i mean kaha suna..??

Sharon: ya..mene bhi frst tym suna..Ramaira and Chabilal

He tried hard to control his tears and sumhow managed to speak

Rey: bas suna tha guys khi..so I just told u guys

Bharat: toh ab ye iss pe dance??..magar karega kaun??

Simmi: Rey and Sharon

Rey: no!!

Everyone looking at him *o.0 *<confused>

Rey: umm ..mera matlb h ..nhi guyzz.. I don't want to. Mujhe iss baar duet nhi karna,Sharon n maine bhut kiya h. Let d betther ones do it together;they vl create a magic

Everyone confused but ignored it, they wer busy discussing who wud dance. It was only noticed by Sharon and Swayum. Rey smiled at the and they did d same (swayum n Sharon ek dusre ko nhi dekhe)

Simmi: so..so..so guys..who vl b dancing??

Riinni : Sharon hai toh'ummm ..sath mei ..swayum!

Sharon turned into a tomato hearing this

Neha: but neha thnking..will Sharon doing it???

Sharon looked at swayum

She looked into his eyes and again felt that calmness in them. It was soothing.

She came bak to hers ense when she heard rey calling out her name aloud

Sharon: umm.Mmm ha rey

Rey: so...Sharon a nd swayum. Will you both?

Sharon again looked swayum

Swayum: only if she is comfortable with it

Sharon: umm'yeah'okay then. Umm *looking at sayum* yeah we will rey

Rey smiled at them

Sharon: okay then'Duet finalize ho gaya n now group dance.

Now everybody startd discussing about the group dance,they did not notice that rey quietly moved away from them

Rey(voiceover): huh...story!!..Chabilal and Ramaira..*he sighed *. I wish vo ek story hoti,where u alwaz get a happy ending. But reality.. reality is far away for happy endings. * a tears or two made their way towards his cheek, he immediatelty brushed them off*But u noe wat kriya as I said u were and always will be the girl for me,I mean chabilal and his lips curved into a small smile

He heard sum1 calling his name and turnd

Swayum: kya hua??..tu idhar kyu aa gaya. Is everything alright ?

Rey: ya dude..everythngs fine * smiles*

Swayum: thk hai,but u noe na..koi bhi problem hua toh tu mujhe btayega,samjha

Rey: ha ..ha mr. Sherlock homes. Ab chale discussion mei??

They both shared a small laugh and went towards the grp.

Rey putting his arms around Rinni

Rey: Rinni u noe wat..u r d best!!

Rinni: o.0..umm..Thankyou rey J

And rey and swayum looked at each other and smiled

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All the girls except tanni and Sharon were in the girl's locker room

Neha: neha dancing with babu, neha very happy

Vishakha and rinni smiled looking at her

Siimi was a bit lost I her thoughts;this was noticed by all three of them

Riinni: tumhe kya hua ??

Simmi:um..m thinking about shivam

All the 3 gals looked at her as if she has lost it completely

Just then taani eneters but nobody notices,she is bit away and others can't see her but she cud hear them

Simmi: don't use ur brains much plzz,I am thinking ki khi vo phr se kuch planning kr ke toh nhi aaya hai imean suddenly St. Louis join krna ' d rival clg, charity event mei interested and of course vp sir uske dad hai

Vishkha: yaa man, looks to me like sum kind of planning and plotting.

Tanni: aap..aaplog aisa kyu bol rhe h hai ?

Aal the 4 girls turn around to look at her

Rinni: tum use nhi janti,we have many reasons to hate him

Vishkha: exactly

Taani: matlb?..ye shivam ko aap log etna hate kyu krte ho,btaye na

Neha: bura he is,very bura

Simmi: use ki vajah se hmlog , the dazzlers * she then remembers dat vishakha and neha r there n bites her toungue*..mera matlb hai ki team dazzlers footloose elimaination mei bahar ho gaye. Usne cheat kiya and we bore the consequences.

Rinni: yup!!..usse ki vajah se Sharon ne apna confidence loose kar diya tha..huhh

Just then simmi het a msg from Rey

Simmi: hey rey ka msg hai ,gotta go..byee

Vishakha: hey wait,mujhe ek assignment subit krna hai, I vl go vth you

And they both leave

Taani:toh hua kya a exactly??shivam ne cheat kiya tha..

Neha and rinni then narrates her the whole story. Shivam n Louisans ka frst face meeting,face off, party, Sharon se dosti ,copying d dance routine and footloose elimination. Sharo loosing her self confidence n ol.

Taani(voiceover): oh toh esliy bhai shivam ki etna hate krte hai

Taaani: oh aisa hua tha *sympathetic tone*

Neha: hmmm,so evil he is and we not wanting him in charity event

Rinni: khi prhse kuch garbar na ho jaaye

Tanni: hmmm

Tanni(voiceover): khi maine shivam se baat krke galti toh nhi ki? Bhai ko pata chala toh vo aur disturb ho jayenge..no, tanni tujhe unse dur rhna padega,aose bhi bhut problems hai aur nhi

Neha: aacha ..chalo chalet hai ab,classes ka tym ho gaya hai

Tanni: ha mere cls ka bhi tym ho gaya hai.mai aap log ke sath hi aati hu

Rinni: tumlog jao,mujhe thoda freshen up hona hai, thn I vl cum to cls

Neha and taani: okay

And they both left

Rinni freshnd up and was wiping her face vth d we tissue.

Rinni: hmm..ab chalet hu,nhi toh late ho jayega n that prof. aaargghhh

Just then he heard a knock at the doors. she turned back but couldn't find anyone there but just a purple color envelope. She went ahead and picked it up. On it, it was written 'RINNISHA MALHOTRA' with golden glitters in a beautiful handwritting and a butterfly in a corner.
rinni: ohhh...its so nice..but ye mujhe de kaun sakta hai?? *confused*
She slowly opened it and found a note on inside. She read what was written there..
" The first time I saw you
I listened to my heart
I knew you were the one
From the very start

Just want you to know
From the bottom of my heart
You are my baby and my love
You are stealing my heart

When you smile
You make me smile
When you laugh
You make me laugh

How you make me adore you
Never thought it would be true
wanting to hold you
I finally found you

When I look into your eyes
so pretty like beautiful starry skies
Let me hold you
Let me feel you

All I want is you
Baby I love you!"




rinni: woowww...its so nice!!!..ye mujhe bhej kaun sakta h??..*still confused*
She read what was further written in it...

"give me the honour and pleasure of having a dance with u..
at 6 o'clock..the college canteen...
will be waiting for u...!!..!!"


rinni: 6 o'clock??...but thats just an hour away..and i need to look my best!!
...she said while holdin that paper and smiling from ear-to-ear..!!
She quickly ran towards her locker and started looking for the perfect dress for 'the occassion' !!!

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