Hi!
I was gonna wait for you to open a new thread before posting this but gonna go ahead and post anyways!
I'm so so glad I started reading this, it's a brilliant story! I really like your writing style, it's definitely very unique and I love how you mirror/ parallel flashbacks with what the chapter holds, kinda like a twist on foreshadowing... The relationship between Arnav and Khushi is sincere and I like how you gradually built on that, with him asking for redemption and her cautiously giving in; it makes Khushi's character a lot stronger and honestly this is how I would have liked to see her on the show as well!
Congratulations on completing another thread btw, although it's expected seeing the quality with which you write :)
Update soon!
Shruti
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