VIRMAN FF : i love u manvi...!!! prt 27 (LAST) | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hav been a silent reader for a lng tym but today wanted to actively participate...

all characters are same but the storyline is a bit different...!!!

main characters are

MANVI CHAUDHARY

VIRAT VADERA

and d thing to be taken into account is dat virat and manvi were college ''FRIENDS''... 😛

here it goes...

in the vadera mansion...

as usual everybdy were having their breakfast at 8am... (according to hitler dadaji's rulebook)

when suddenly buaji asked virat about his ongoin case which he was handling wid his VIREN BHAI... she must hav asked viren only abt d case if he was present there but he has gone out of station for sum impt work. virat told her about d case while having his brkfst and seeing dis dadaji was really happy... he was really happy dat virat has become responsible and mature in d last 3 yrs after he completed his mba and earned his degree, as he never thot dat one day he will be proud of virat, but a part of his heart always wanted this to happen...

virat finished his breakfast, took d blessings of all d elders and left for the office in his new BLACK SUV.

everybody in the house was happy for virat except vanshika and viren (for dey wanted to know the reason behind dis changed virat who was no longer a prankster, mastikhor, aa hppy -go- lucky guy who had a grt passion towards music and wanted to be a world famous singer)...😭

pls tell me guys do u want me to continue this story...!!! eagerly waiting fr d replies...😊

INDEX

PART 1 ABOVE

PART 2 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=59899938&#59899938 PAGE 1

PART 3 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=59963971&#59963971 PAGE 2

PART 4 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=60082251&#60082251 PAGE 2

PROMO https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=62276696&#62276696 PAGE 2

PART 5 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=62549730&#62549730 PAGE 3

PART 6 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=62834817&#62834817 PAGE 4

PART 7 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=62855467&#62855467 PAGE 4

PART 8 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=62984478&#62984478 PAGE 6

PART 9 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=63140860&#63140860 PAGE 7

PART 10 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=63210041&#63210041 PAGE 7

PART 11 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=63389825&#63389825 PAGE 10

PART 12 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=63664806&#63664806 PAGE 12

PART 13 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3061525&PID=63703740&#63703740 PAGE 14

PM LIST AT PAGE 15

PART 14 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/63893236 PAGE 16

PART 15 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64289268 PAGE 19

PART 16 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64590958 PAGE 21

PART 17 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64605436 PAGE 23

PART 18 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65503639 PAGE 27

PART 19 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65515483 PAGE 28

PART 20 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65683977 PAGE 31

PART 21 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65782350 PAGE 35

PART 22 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66176454

PART 23 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70690665

PART 24 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72528642

part 25 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72569092

part 26 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72662929

part 27 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/73022716

Edited by naina927 - 11 years ago

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Rucha Mulay

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ouch how can u even ask? Just continue gal! This is rocking!!!!

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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thnx for d encouragement ... will continue soon and will not disappoint anyone...😊

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naina

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😃😊after whole tiresome day, Virat returned home n found vanshika staring at him from the stairs n thinking of the sadness and emptiness in his heart which was reflected crsytal clear in his deep brown eyes...😔 Virat went to her, hugged her tightly n said ," MOM, I AM OKKAY... just that i am vry tired as i had lot of work in the office today n am damn hungry" (inside his heart he knew wat his mother wanted to ask him but he was determined not to share his pain, his agony with anybody... infact he didnt want his mom to get worried bcos of him, bcos of wat happened to him 3 yrs back, bcos of the reason dat changed him n his life forever and ever) Thinking this he went to his room which was once d witness oh his dreamz, his love for music, his ambitions but returning back to d present he realised things have changed... a change which cannot be reversed ever in his life until SHE... suddenly there was a knock on the door, he went and opened the door.. it was vanshika with a trolly carrying dinner. then both the son and mother had food together. while virat was enjoying his favourite rajma chawal, vanshika told him that today a courrier came of his name n asked tarun (the servant) to bring it for virat; for may b it can be impt... virat said that he'l have a look at it after he his done with his dinner or may be wenever he got time... after finishing the dinner, they both said gdnt n vanshika went to her room. Virat was really not in the mood of doing anythng and was goin towards the balcony but somehow that packet caught his attention. it had "DEAR VIRAT" written on it... the handwriting seemed so familiar.Virat ran towards that packet to have a close look at the handwriting but to his surprise dat handwriting was MANVI's... 😲with even the thought of manvi, his lips suddenly curled and there was a smile on his face...😃 his smile which was lost from the time he returned from London 3 yr bck...

precap: virat remembered the first time he saw manvi, the love of his life...

😊 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Interesting story.please continue and do pm me.

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shilpa09

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Posted: 11 years ago

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good start dear:)

continue soon:):):)

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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i am really happy guys... this is mah first attempt at writing n am getting such a positive response...feelsss grrrttt...!!!!!😊😊

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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RECAP : Virat saw Mnvi's handwriting on dat packet n smiled after such a long tym...

nw the stort continues...

with the smile on his face, he was reminded of the time he first met MANVI ( HIS LADY LOVE), the first tym he went to her, the first time he touched her, the first time he kissed her...

*************** FLASHBACK *****************

IT WAS FIVE YEARS BACK IN LONDON

virat was super excited about his first day in that super cool and reputed college of london...

He got up n was ready for the fun awaiting him n went to college on his new sports bike...

he entered college busy with he BBM when suddenly he bumped into 'someone'

that someone was really beautiful having that angelic look on her face... she was wearing a black halter neck top with the best fitted jeans in the world showing her perfectly toned body with all her curves... BUT virat didnt noticed all this as his eyes were struck on her beautiful face n her deep brown eyes... he was LOST in that SOMEONE.❤️

will update after few hours... stay tuned😊

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hey guys why dont u all comment n let me knw whether u all are liking my effort or not... tell me i shud continue the story or shud stop wasting my time...😕

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Posted: 11 years ago

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continueee...amazing story!!!!...👏

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