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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

updating...
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Posted: 13 years ago
DOSTI YA PYAAR


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PART-12


Next day geet,maan n karan went to college as usual…geet is first confused as maan n karan dragged her to college very early….she confusingly stepped inside college whilst karan n maan shared smile all the while at the same time chuckled at her confused face….geet left surprised when she saw everyone is holding roses n wishing her….she was overwhelmed n confused thinking how they know her birthday as she herself forgot it also she never told anyone about her bday..but then she understood that it's all done by her sweet friends….she looked at maan n karan who stood there with crossed arms n smiling at her…she is about to say thankyou to them but stopped when they glared at her…



As maan n karan said she is princess on the day of her bday;they really made her feel like princess..she was welcomed with rose petals on her way…maan n karan signalled her to move forward…she smiled n did what they said…they finally reached their fav corner in the college n that is their college canteen..yes they arranged a cake there n decorated it very beautifully..geet felt overwhelmed…tears of happiness rolled down her cheeks…she ran to her friends n hugged them…she knows that she holds a very imp place in their lives but today they proved it again…she really felt like princess today…she felt that she is the luckiest person to have them in her life not becoz they are celebrating her bday…they cares for her a lot…they know how to bring smile on her face…maan n karan hugged her back...




After a while they broke the hug n nodded in no as if asking her to stop crying…"geet cut the cake na iam feeling hungry"said aadi to enlighten the emotional situation…all of them laughed..geet cut the cake n fed to everyone…maan n karan applied cake on her face completely n laughed at her…geet pouted her lips as they made her look like joker…later they enjoyed for sometime n cleaned everything in canteen together as it's time for college now…everyone headed towards their classes…only maan karan geet n harika were left there..



Geet:so my slaves don't u want to listen my order I mean princess ki order??are u ready guys??



Karan n maan smiled n said"whatever u say madam oops!princess…ur slaves are on duty now…said both of them in unison bowing slightly in front of her…..


Harika n geet giggled looking at them…."ummm…ok then u both have to accompany me for shopping"geet said while crossing her arms…


Maan n karan gasped in shock n said no no almost shouted.."shopping!!!!"


Maan:no way!!geet plz yar ask me to do 100 sit ups but shopping no way…


Karan:ha yar…pata hai hari ye geet na mumbai ke saare malls ghumaghumakar marwadegi…



Maan:ha... agar ab shopping ke liye jayegi na mall ke andar apni next bday par bahar ayegi…kabhi kehti hai ye dress achha hai next minute kehti hai..nahi nahi it's not that good..see this color wont look good bla bla bla..ufff….


Karan:bechara tumhara would be pati kya hoga uska…makes sad face..geet ek kaam kar u better marry shopping mall owner..tab jitna chahe utna time lesakthi ho kapde select karne mein….says karan…both maan n karan giggles n shares hi-5…


Geet who is glaring at them picked a tray which was on the table n started hitting them with that…they however snatched it from her but again geet strated throwing things like water bottle,glasses watever came in her hand while chasing them…when nothing came in her hand she hit them on their arm with her tiny fists sometimes pulling their hair with both her hands…three of them seemed like kids..they are just looking like primary school kids fighting for some toy..finally three of them felt tired n stood panting….they looked at each other n burst out laughing..



Geet:ok…..shopping cancel..she said still panting n her both hands held her waist…

"sachhii!!"maan n karan exclaimed in surprise..wow geet is saying no to shopping..they felt that they are lucky today as they escaped from this…

Geet:start doing situps..she said casually crosiing her arma..


"kya??"both gasped in shock.."ha…maan u forgot??u just said that u are ready to do 100 sit ups…so start doing now..this is ur punishment for cancelling my shopping plan…common common iam counting.."geet said..

Both r still in shock..is she serious??omg 100 sit ups..they thought looking at each other..karan glared at maan as he was the one who gave the idea of sit ups.."geet u r kidding na"maan said ..


Geet smirked.."no not at all…see my face..she made stern face..am I joking now..no na…now start it..waise u both r my slaves today..so do wat I say"


Maan n karan not having any other option said.."ok we'll accompany u for shopping"


Geet smiley widely..n said"awww how cute"said pulling their cheeks…three of them giggled remembering their whole drama..maan n karan hugged her sideways…meanwhile,karan noticed harika moving out with tears…soon maan n geet became busy in their talks n karan moved out…

Maan:chale??

Geet:where??

Maan:shopping..aur kaha…

Geet:now…maan classes hai na hum kese ja sakthe hai??

Maan:ofoo geet ye classes toh hothe rahenge..ek din attend nahi karogi toh toofan nahi ajayegi chalo…


Maan headed towards their car while geet went in search of karan n harika…

Harika came running to the corridor while her eyes filled with tears…karan who noticed it came to her n placed his hand on her shoulder…harika hugged him tight n cried..


Harika:u know karan after my dad I lost everything…I used to do same masti with my papa but…but…she cried..


Karan rubbed her back to calm her…"when ever I see u people I rememeber my dad who was my friend,my wellwisher my everything but he is no more today.."



Karan broke the hug n wiped her tears…he made her sit on bench n he sat beside her..then he took her hands in his n said"don't feel that no one is with u..we are there na..ur friends n iam with u"said looking in to her eyes…she smiled n rested her head on his shoulder…


Geet who came in search of them witnessed the scene..she is shocked first then giggled..she slowly came to them on tip toes n screamed omg!!!!



Both jerked in shock then straightened themselves…geet started laughing loudly.."omg!!what's going on…and no one is interested in telling me"she said eyeing karan…


Karan:oye kya keh rahi ho tum..tried to act innocent...

Geet:hmmm..kya keh rahi hoon mein…iam just asking u what's going on??


Karan turned his face to other side whilst harika followed him…"umm what's going on between us…I don't know" he said looking at harika..


Geet:oye when I asked that what's going on between "you"??and ha even if I ask u u would have said there is nothing like that but u said u don't know..oye hoye kuch toh huwa hai….starts singing…


Karan:umm..wo geet don't u want to go for shopping???


Geet: ha I want to…I know u want harika too to accompany us hai na..isliye hinting her that we are gng…


Karan felt embarassed n literally ran from there saying he is waiting outside..geet giggled at him …she looked at harika who is looking down shy.."oye hoye blushing ha..btw iam angry on u u never said that u both love each other...when u realised that u love karan ha bolo bolo..."


Harika:even I don't know…but I realised..she saw geet smiling at her…I hope u too realise ur feelings soon…


Geet:kya feelings for whom??she asked perplexed…



Harika:ask ur heart…said harika n moved out leaving confused geet…geet thought about it for a while but shrugged it when maan called her…


Karan harika,maaneet reached mall..they looked for some party wear..as maan n karan said ;she shifted from one mall to another saying she don't like collection there…if she liked any dress she rejected it saying she don't like dupatta,sometimes she didn't liked design n sometimes color..poor boys almost on the way to faint…but at the same time their hands are carrying heavy packets as both the girls didn't leave any mall empty handed they bought teddy's somewhere,jewellery some where n cosmetics somewhere n still they have to buy dress as geet wants to wear something good yet simple…finally they reached another mall n this time maan n karan stopped the girls from selecting anything..they were scared as there is no big mall left to visit..they started selecting dress for her but they are not understanding any design which the men standing there explaining them…karan toh totally confused…they have bunch of clothes in front of them but not able to understand what to select what not to…they stood making confused face….geet n harika giggled at their plight..both came to them…


Geet:tum logo ko kya laga??shopping karna itna asaan hai…tum logo ka kya ek shirt aur jeans utakar lejathe ho but u don't know how hard it is for girls…we have to see whether it is of good quality,design n color..also whether the color suits us..uff..u don't know anything…..


Both joined hands infront of her after after her bashan.."maan gaye meri maa.."

Maan:ab plz jaldi karo…party aaj hi hai agle saal nahi….

Soon harika n geet became busy in choosing dress..they choose two salwar suits but confused which one to buy…maan who settled himself in couch n looking here n there saw a white colored sari with red border..he loved it a lot..he imagined geet in that n thought it looks perfect on geet…he picked it n brought near her..he is about to show her but karan interrupted"hey dude finally hogayi madam ki shopping..now lets' go"karan said n moved from there…maan smiled sadly n placed it back which was not gone unnoticed by geet..even harika noticed it…



Maan moved from there to entrance while geet came there n picked it..she caressed it n smiled..she immediately said that men to pack that saree..harika who witnessed this whole scene smiled n moved from there along with geet…



In the evening maan n karan helped geet's dad in party preparations while geet is busy in getting ready..she suddenly remember that she didn't meet maan's dad since morning actually she is missing him…maan n geet dragged her to college in a hurry so she failed to meet him..she knows he never miss to come to party but she didn't find him anywhere so she thought to call him but before she could call him her mobile screen flashed showing his name..she smiled n received the call.."hello uncle..where r u??iam missing u since morning.."


Dad:beta iam so sorry….ur uncle cant come to party today…I am in london now..i suddenly got a call to attend a meeting here..isliye bina bataye muje aana pada..iam so sorry beta…


Geet didn't say anything…"geet..beta are u there??"


Geet:hmmm…it's..it's ok uncle she mumbled sadly while her eyes filled with tears..

Dad:beta plz don't cry…I cant stay here if u cry like that on ur bday….ok then iam returning back now…


Geet:no no uncle plz don't do that..ya I was crying becoz I'll miss u na but it's ok..meeting is imp na so no need to come back but ha u have to bring a gift for me ok..


Dad smiled n said ok..geet disconnected the call n moved out from her room…


Maan,karan,,rano n mohinder karan's parents n everyone is waiting for the bday girl to arrive…their wait ended when they saw geet descending down along with harika…everyone left surprise as they saw geet in white saree..yes the same saree which maan chose for her….


Maan stood there lost in her…a beautiful smile was decorated on his lips which is also visible in his eyes..geet is just looking like an angel in that saree..she wore simple jewellery but not heavy one…she also wore the watch n bracelet which they gifted her…



even geet also is looking at maan n smiling widely as she too surprised him wearing the same saree which he liked..she can see the surprise expressions on his face also his beautiful smile…all the while harika is the spectator to this scene…she smiled at them as she is understanding how much they understand each other ,n how much they know each other very well..she shook her head thinking"when they'll realise their love?"


soon the party started n geet cut the cake..all the elders left the youngsters to enjoy the party..soon everyone started dancing with their jodis…karan n harika danced with each other..maan n geet are partners as always but this time there is a spark in their eyes..they danced looking in to each other's eyes..they didn't say anything but just danced smiling at each other…


when they are lost in their dance maan's mobile ring broke their trance..maan excused himself n left to receive the call..he is confused to find his dad's name..

maan:ha papa..


dad:maan I need ur help..beta can u plz go to km now..i know u r in party but I don't have any other option…he said in hurry..


maan:papa..what happened??why are u so tensed??is everything ok…


dad:son u plz go n check in my room if there is ******** project file..i was in so much hurry in the morning n forgot to bring the file..now meeting is postponed to morning becoz of that…maan if we loose this project there we'll be in heavy loss as kc invested large amounts in implementing it…don't know what I'll do now..what if I loose that file??


Maan:papa relax..u don't worry I'll search for it..dont worry plz file miljayega…. …. said maan who stepped insied the car when he sensed tensin in dad's voice….


He reached km in few minutes n rushed to his dad's room…he searched for the file in his cupboard n everywhere but it is nowhere..he came out running n asked nakul if he saw any file in his dad's room but he nodded in no…he brushed his hairs in frustation not knowing what to do now…suddenly his gaze fell on a file which is on couch..he picked it up in his hand n found it is the same file his dad was searching for…

Maan:thankgod!!file milgayi..

He phoned to his dad n informed it…as there is no one at this time who can pass the file to him maan rushed to airport….

Meanwhile,geet didn't find maan anywhere in the party..she looked for him but he is no where..she called him but he didn't pick the call as he forgot the mobile in the living room couch….

Precap:

Maaneet missing eachother..

Realisation …😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update👏
Liked college scene.⭐️.Loved maaneet-karan nok-jhok👏⭐️
karan and harika are in love...
Hope soon maaneet realize feeling for each other
Precap sound interesting
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊

Don't end it soon
Edited by srirad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear ,thanks for it ,you updated after a long time .

loved maaneet & karan-harika relation.

precap 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part..
They treated her like princess!!
Nw maan and karan came to noe that shopping s not an easy task 4 girls 😆
SO Karan and harika noes that they love each other..
but i think they dint confessed yet..
So maaneet s abt to realize their feelings..wow!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

sahi mein...kab realise karenge yeh dono k unka rishta dosti se badkad hai...pyar hai...chalo jitna jaldi samajh jaye utna hi achha hai...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update ,...hope soon realised their feelings
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome update
how beautifully dey celebrated geet bday
finally ek couple toh ban gya
waiting for maaneet when dey will realise dere love for each other
too gooddd
nd waitung for it
how geet wear saree dat ws selected by maan soo cute
pre ap seems interesting
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update

i jst luv'd dere masti

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