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Guys sorry for the late update...


Rey's mom:toh kriyaansh ek hone wale hai!!

SMriti ghai:KRia aur rey kabhi ek nahin honge!!!!

All look back with a shocked exp

Kria:mom...*shocked*

all:aunty?*shocked*

Rey's mom:smriti*excited*

But smriti was carrying her angry exp on her face,,,she walked towards kria ,took hold of her wrist and pulled her saying

Smriti:chup chup mere saat ghar wapas chalo kria!!!

Smriti pulls kria and starts to go...But rey's mom runs towards her and blocks their way...

rey's mom:Hey smriti!!!rukho!!!

(Rey's mom name is anitha)

smriti:Anitha plz hato!!*firmly*

Anitha:nahin jab tak tum mujse baat nahin karoge tab tak mei tumhe chodungi nahin!!

smriti:hato !!

anitha:arey meri maa aur kitni saal gussa hogi mujse?baat toh karo...

smriti:nahin!

anitha:toh mei nahin hatne wali!

Anitha suddenly hugged her and tears rolled down her eyes..

anitha:smriti am sorry!really sorry!!muje maaf kardhe!!*sobs*

Now smriti was melted...she was also having tears in her eyes coz she was meeting her BEST FRIEND!! after soo many years!!

Smriti:itz ok ab natak bandh karo*breaking the hug*

anitha:Natak?tume natak lagtha hai?*:O*

Smriti:haan!tum toh waise ki taise ho!!kuch bhi nahin badali..!*smiling*

anitha:woh to hun!tum bhi toh same to same.!!

Whole gang exp was ":O" ...They see the gang and laugh hard...

Anitha :Arey tum rey aur kria ko ek saath kyun nahin hone de rahi ho?

(note:smriti dnt kne that rey is anitha's son)

Smriti:arey ye bacha casinova hai aur upar se dancer bhi jo bhi mere saath hua mei woh kaafi hai i dont wnt my daughter to go through the same...

anitha:tum kaise keh sakthe ho ki rey acha ladka nahin hai?

smriti:kaise matlab meine dekha aur suna...

anitha:matlab mei bhi achi nahin hu*pout*

smriti:arey ye meine kab kaha ..meine toh rey ko...

anitha:woh rey koyi aur nahin mera ladla beta

Smriti:tumhara beta?!!!!*shocked*

anitha:haan...

smriti:phir bhi...

anitha:arey smriti man jao na...

Gang:aunty plz...

rey:sasuma *smriti glares at him* i mean aunty plz i love her i cnt live without her...

...:smriti man jao na...

all were confused ,smriti was shocked

let me clear ur confusions...smriti and arnav shekawat i mean swayam's father are couple...arnav was a dancer they used to have one daughter and one son they are none other than swayam and kria ...their marrige was love marrige..arnav was showing intrest in his carrier...they always used to fight...they fought soo much that they were divorsed...arnav took swayam and smriti took kria...still arnav n smriti love each other...coming to anitha she is a childhood frind of smriti,they were soo close...one day due to some dispute smriti stoped talking to her...

Smriti*shocked*:arnav?

arnav:smriti mera baat...

smriti*angry*:kria chalo chalthe hai...

Kria*confused*:par mom...

smriti:kria jaldi!!!

Arnav:smriti am sorry!!plz muje maaf kardho muje aapna galthi ka ehsaas hogaya hai!!!am really sorry!!plz i want my family back...

smriti:sorry toh muje kehna chahiye arnav *sobbing*

whole gang were hell shocked especially reyam and krisha...

kria*shouted*:mom yeh kya ho raha hai?!!!!

smriti:kria ye tera papa...

kria*shocked*:kya swayam mera bhai???

Swayam*shocked*:kria meri behan??

ALL:wat??!!!!!

smriti&arnav:haan...

arnav:matlab hum phir se ek saath happy family ki tarah reh sakthe hai kya?

smriti:yes...

Swayam went and hugged smriti ...kria went and hugged arnav...

after sometime all wer seated on the couch...when rey walked towards kria took hold of her wrist and said

rey:aunty mein kria se bahut pyaar kartha hun...she is my life...i cant even imagine my life without her...mei uskeliye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayar hun...ab kuch bhi boliye muje manzoor hai...

smriti came near him and said:tum toh anitha ka beta ho isse zyadha aur kya chahiye muje??

Rey was happy!!!!!

He hugged kria very tightly soon he realised the situation and became normal and hugged her sidewards..kria was blushing hard

all:awww!!!!!

Smriti:toh kria toh tumhe ye shaadi manzoor hai?

Kria:bhai ki maarzi...

Precap:

Swayam:ye shaadi nahin ho saktha hai!!!

All SHOCKED!!!!!! ESPECIALLY REY!!!


Here ends my chapter...

first of all am sorry pals for late update

and sorry for short update

sorry for no kriyaansh scenes...

sorry for short update...

actually mei mood mei nahin thi par sab log ff ke bare mei puch rahe the isliye update kiya...

hope u ppl like it

plz do hit the like button

do give bada comments...

critiscism welcome

TTYL!😊

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