ArhiSS: Innocence In Her Eyes NEW UPDATE pg 130

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Hey guys! I am a new writer and I got this amazing idea when I was just in deep thought. Please do read this little part that I posted and comment and like it if I should continue. :) Thank you.

Ps: This is a dark concept, and at times it is difficult to handle. How ever do not stop just here because I can assure you it gets better along the chapters. I don't go in to full description on certain scenes just for the comfort of the readers. Please do read it and give me your feed backs. This is a love story full of different aspects of reality, but with a dream. A love story of acceptance, and a light at the end of a tunnel.

Thank you,

Dal :)


Innocence In Her Eyes



Chapter 1

Without darkness there cannot be light. Those words are the source to my strength to my everyday life. My mother was the first to speak those words to me; it was her last. Each drop of water that fell from the sky reminded me of her. I watched through the broken window pane as the water rushed down from the sky. A smile always lit her darkened face as she held me in her lap, watching the drops of water trickle down. My eyes travelled along with the water that slightly sprayed me from the wind. Maybe she was dancing up in the clouds sending down the rain, to comfort my agonizing pain. A shadowy smile spread across my face. This was peaceful, but it will come to an end, the way it's supposed to be. My eyes slowly closed as the wind howled, fluttering the ends of my hair. My heart hoped tonight I won't be called, alas, right on cue she called me. "KHUSHI YOU HAVE A CUSTOMER." Tears trickled down my eyes and I clenched my fist. It was time, I knew it, and my demons within me knew it. "KHUSHI GET DOWN HERE SOON. YOU'RE WASTING PRECIOUS TIME." My hands shook as I wiped away my tears and placed my mask over my face; a mask, which I wore every day for survival. "I AM COMING JAMMA." I ran down the stairs to the living room. The anklets that I wore on my ankles stopped chinkling as I slowed down to see my customer. "There you are. How long does it take for someone to come down faster! Take him with you to room 09,'' Jamma said and she gave me the keys. I nodded slowly and signaled him to follow me. I went upstairs to room 09 with him behind me, we went inside and I locked the door. Just as I turned around the vile man grabbed me and pulled me closer. "Well, let's get down to business shall we pretty flower?" he said as his cigarette stench travelled to my nose. Once again I nodded slowly and his lustful hands began to do the rest.

After a while the pain starts to become a part of you. It begins to numb you out and you join hands with the demon itself. Slowly I turned my aching naked body to see the man sleeping next to me. He seemed to have a peaceful smile on his face, of course, sucking on someone else's soul always seemed to satisfy many of the men that visited this place. "Without darkness there cannot be light." I got up, wrapped the sheet around my body and walked to the window next to the bed. "Mama, you always told me that without darkness there cannot be light, but mamma I still don't see a light. Where is it mamma? The demons have already got me mamma, I don't think another light can save me." I knew my pleading whispers were travelling up to the sky, but indeed I got no answer. The snores from the man began to get louder and I shook my head. I raised my fair palms and I studied them. These hands are innocent in my eyes, but those demons have tainted each speck of my skin with blood. I looked outside again in to the gloomy night sky. "There's only darkness mamma. The light has long gone,'' I whispered my last words and settled down on the bed. Sleep was finally taking over my bruised body.


Index

Chapter 1: pg 1

Chapter 1B : pg 2

Chapter 2A: Pg 3

Chapter 2B: Pg 5

Chapter 3A: Pg 6

Chapter 3B: Pg 7

Chapter 4A: Pg 8

Chapter 4B: pg 10

Chapter 5A : pg 13

Chapter 5B: pg 15

Chapter 6A: pg 17

Chapter 6B: Pg 20

Chapter 7A: Pg 23

NOTE: Pg 27

SMALL SNEAK PEEK UPDATED : Pg 29

Chapter 7B: Pg 33

Sneak peek: pg 36

Note: Pg 39

Chapter 8A: Pg 41

Chapter 8B: Pg46

Chapter 9A: Pg 51

Chapter 9A Part 2: pg 54

Chapter 10 A, B, C: Pg 61

Chapter 11 A: Pg 65

Chapter 11 B: Pg 72

Chapter 12 A: Pg 81

Chapter 12 B: Pg 88

NOTE: PG 95

Chapter 13A: Pg 99

Chapter 13B: Pg 107

Chapter 14A: Pg 115

Chapter 14B sneak peek: Pg 120

Chapter 14B: Pg 122

Chapter 15A (Sneak Peek) Pg 126

Chapter 15A (Longer Sneak Peek) Pg 128

Chapter 15A (Arnav's Past part 2) Pg 130
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claireDD thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u r sooo talented baby..
but hell,, this is wayyy emotional to handle..
omg khushi...why on earth did she end up like this??
this is heart wrenching..dnt know whether i'd be able to handle this ss..
u r an amazing writer hun...thumbs up..
ela !!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: claireDD

u r sooo talented baby..
but hell,, this is wayyy emotional to handle..
omg khushi...why on earth did she end up like this??
this is heart wrenching..dnt know whether i'd be able to handle this ss..
u r an amazing writer hun...thumbs up..
ela !!!!!


Thank you very much it means a lot to me! I usually write dark stories, but not this path. I am doing this to get over my fears and face the reality about life. I want to show how a girl can fight through society and make it through. No matter how much people put her down.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u r very good at writing...
its very emotional and scary to handle...
poor khushi...those talks to her mom was very heart breaking...
I love the concept...its dark and interesting...
U r handling it quite well dear...
continue soon...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you :) I hope it continues that way.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am working on the next part of the chapter right now. :)
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Chapter 1b

"You disgust me; how many times have I told you to stay away from us?!"

"I told you I won't let you live in peace. Give me what I need!"

The sudden harsh whispers woke me up. I knew they were coming from the kitchen, but I wondered who would be at home late at night. "I will never give you what you want! How could you want a little child for your vile business! She's only five. Don't you have a conscious?" The voices began to get louder as I walked slowly to the kitchen. I stood still and listened quietly.

"Come on Madu you know I don't have a conscious. Haven't you learnt anything with our past? Now stop being a stubborn bitch and hand me over what I need." A chill traveled down my spine. The man sounded so evil, as if those monsters I read about in story books. What is mama doing talking to a man like him and that too in the middle of the night?

"You're right Karan; you don't, but at least think. She is my only life, without her I rather die." A lump formed in my throat. My mother sounded so desperate and so weak. Taking a deep breath I peeked in to see what was happening. There I saw my mother corned against the kitchen counter, trapped between his tanned arms. The words that came out of his mouth the next minute sucked the life out of my little body. "Then die, Madu. Just die."

My eyes flew open as the sun was peeking through the shattered window. Gasping for breath I got up startled at the tormenting flashback. The blood was rushing faster than usual from my heart and I felt the sweat trickling down my forehead. I wasn't surprised to see the horrific flashback. Those memories have sketched itself in to my soul, but yet they never failed to terrify me. Throwing away the sheet that covered me; I woke up and wiped my sweat. Glancing outside I knew it was going to be another manipulative day. A day where the weather was beautiful, a day where everything seemed peaceful, but inside me it was a war. "Time to get dressed Khushi. Time to face the world", I began to chant those words in my head and went to the bathroom to wash.

"So how was he? Was he good? He seemed like the type to be rough," Jamma questioned and stated the moment I entered the kitchen to eat breakfast. Gritting my teeth I answered a quiet yes and began to eat. "You know, all the men here love you. Although I don't understand why since you act like a f**king proud bitch. Do you ever talk properly? The years you have lived here all you have said is, 'yes or no'" The anger that I controlled within me was beginning to resurface, but I kept my mouth shut. "When boss arrives I am going to complain about your f**king attitude. Now give me that food!" Jamma said and took the little bit of bread I had. It didn't bother me, over the years living here I never really had a proper appetite. Trying desperately to find some peace I walked out in to the city. "Without darkness there cannot be light." The whispers began to posses my mind.

******

Mr. Arnav Singh Razaida; this was a name that was feared, respected and honored by everyone. It was a name I was very proud of, but it was a name that held many tormenting memories. No matter how much power this name possessed, it was stained and beaten down. However the secrets behind this name were only known by me and my self only. To the rest of the world this name was full of glory and to me, it was just Arnav. As a child all I remembered was the embraces of my mother, and the sweet smiles of my sister. Those were the only sweet lingering memories that made my name worth. Rest of the memories that came with this name was full of vicious men, murder and blood. A sudden knock on the door brought me back to reality. "Sir, it's me Aman." Ah yes, Aman, my personal assistant. He helped me through pretty much everything, but right now I was not in the mood. Frustration coursed through my veins, but I let him in. "Come in Aman. Now what is it?" Aman seemed excited about something, it was clearly written on his face. I raised my eyebrow and nodded my head for him to continue. "Well, ASR do you remember Mr. Malhotra the owner of Sha magazine?" I nodded my head once again. ''Yeah, I remember so what about him?" "ASR HE AGREED TO DO THE PROJECT WITH US!" A small smirk formed across my face. "I am not surprised. Nobody says no to Arnav Singh Razaida." Aman nodded, ''well of course, the day someone does say no to you is the day hell freezes over." I couldn't help but laugh. Even though Aman was my assistant he was more like a friend. However he knew his limits with me; everyone did. But I didn't know that it was all about to change within a few hours

Arnav meet's Khushi in chapter 2! Woot I am excited to write that.


Edited by Dalmuthuya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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eagarly waiting 4 arnav to meet khushi .thankx 4 d pm bdw.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i couldn't hold myself from reading it as i saw ur pm..
i knew u wud write it to exceed anyone's expectations even though its heart wrenching..😭😭
i have a million questions in my head..
how did she end up like this?
what compelled her to give up her morals and values?
if arnav and his misunderstandings are the reasons behind khushi's plight,i need that dog to rot in hell...😡
anyways u r a great writer hun..
i'd love to read more..
after all life's not a bed of roses right..
thumbs up for the new angle and for ur creativity👍🏼👍🏼⭐️⭐️👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start
pls pm me when u update

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