VirMan SS: Pehla Pehla Pyaar updated part 5

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Hi guys 😊 I am a silent member of the forum and haven't written anything imaginative since long so please excuse if you find my story lame or boring and am really sorry if you do 😊

PEHLA PEHLA PYAAR
It was very windy that day... The cool wind greeted me...
I opened my arms wide and grasped it's freshness in me as it lightened up my smile... :)

I was so happy...! Just so so so happy!!

A voice greeted me from the door 'Good Morning Mannu!!!'
My smile grew wider as I saw Jeevika Di at the door and ran to hug her..
'Diii! Where were you? Do you have ANY idea how much I missed you? You said you will be gone for 2 days... What sort of engagement was it that took you a week to attend? :('
'Calm down Mannu, am here now, na? Am so sorry for being late, actually I caught up with few other old friends of mine and they insisted on making me stay so...:('
The frown on my face turned to a smirk as I noticed my darling sister's apologetic face...
'I was just kidding Di! You na...! You always take me seriously!! Haha!'
'Mannu x-(', she looked at me angrily..
But well, what do I say, she can't stay mad at me for long can she? ;) When I hugged her, she smiled instantly and hugged me back..! ^_^

'Come quick, breakfast is ready:)', Di informed me.
'Gimme two minutes Di, I will be right there!:)'

Di left to call the others, so I turned around relieved, thankful that she hadn't noticed the photo I had been holding in my hand...
I took it and stared at it lovingly.. My sweetheart... My best friend... My partner...
... My love..
'Hey! Why you grinning huh? Just cuz I love you doesn't mean you start throwing attitude around ok? Not like you're very special or something huhn!'
I turned my face the other side, irritated... But couldn't stay that way for long..'Oh come on who am I kidding! OFCOURSE you're special.. You're more special than anyone else.. If Di is my heart, you're my heartbeat.. If Di is my weakness, you are my strength.. If Di is my life, you are my love.. I love you Virat, truly and whole heartedly... You may not love me back but my heart beats for you , and I live for you.. I love you Virat.. I love you.. :')'
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I walked into her room.. Bhabhi had told to me call her for breakfast as she was late. I tried to gather my senses as I stepped in front of her door, but didn't have the guts to get in. Since I had realized my love for her, I had never managed to speak one sensible word to her. She comes in front of me, and I go speechless... But, well, it never really was awkward, cuz she too had been behaving that way lately..

I hit myself on the head to brush away the thoughts, and peeked into her room.. N there she was...talking to herself. Her beauty never failed to mesmerize me... <3

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Awesome start. Continue soon and pm me when u update...:)
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