D3-A HAUNTED LOVE STORY # 2 Chap 17 Pg 96 !!!!! - Page 71

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Posted: 13 years ago
wooo FF! hey bhagwan! finally yaad aa gaya! uska naam tha 4 hasinaye if u remember! :P haan, ye to official AT he! :P
do-do kar ke update karte he na! as such u nd meek saath, akshi and kriti ek saath ya aisa kuch! mere updates bohottt chotu motu se hote he! :P
and iske baad hoga ki hum last me USA me milenge! mene aur kriti ne baat ki thi and mera idea tha, obviously! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SugarCubes

wooo FF! hey bhagwan! finally yaad aa gaya! uska naam tha 4 hasinaye if u remember! :P haan, ye to official AT he! :P

do-do kar ke update karte he na! as such u nd meek saath, akshi and kriti ek saath ya aisa kuch! mere updates bohottt chotu motu se hote he! :P
and iske baad hoga ki hum last me USA me milenge! mene aur kriti ne baat ki thi and mera idea tha, obviously! :P


ultimate 😆

ff name: wen tallis collide-The 4 hasinaye 😆

ok thik he f9 😛

m ready to pair up wit any1...tu bata de kon kiske sath he 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AshFFPMz


ultimate 😆

ff name: wen tallis collide-The 4 hasinaye 😆

ok thik he f9 😛

m ready to pair up wit any1...tu bata de kon kiske sath he 😆

me batau? to hum dono hi kar lete he ya anyone yaar! kya farak padta he!! haan, i lyk d name! 😆
what ultimate! 😆 dekh mene 2 ghanto me bas ek jeans and dress li jabki 2 parts me divide hui me and mere behen 2 2 kar ke so dat jaldi kaam khatam ho! and me har jagah se kuch acha dekh leti thi! 🤣🤣 (shopping :P)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SugarCubes

me batau? to hum dono hi kar lete he ya anyone yaar! kya farak padta he!! haan, i lyk d name! 😆
what ultimate! 😆 dekh mene 2 ghanto me bas ek jeans and dress li jabki 2 parts me divide hui me and mere behen 2 2 kar ke so dat jaldi kaam khatam ho! and me har jagah se kuch acha dekh leti thi! 🤣🤣 (shopping :P)


dats wy u r ultimate 😆 (shopping :P)
acha thik h fir:P
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Posted: 13 years ago
no update sorry !!!!
i had put a lot of tym in writing a very big update for u guyz but alas it all got vanished coz of power cut off !!! dont wy isnt it pasting though i had copied it ol !!!!
m so sry bt no update tday !! and i cant rite that biggest update ever again !! so weneva u get the next update it wil be big bt nt bigger dan wat i had written today !!! hmmppp
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing ipdate loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
😛PMs have been sent to tose in the buddy list of AshFFPMz ... and guyz i had planned a a grand and really big updatefor u all but unfortunately day before yesterday wen was writing it the power went off and the update got deleted so m very much sry !!!! nw i dnt hav dat mch tym so even i dnt no ki me kitni badi update dungi...jb thak jaungi i ll stop..and btw i hav to rush at 11:30 so tb tk jitni ho jaye kaam chala lena 😛
enuff of my bak bak...here's the update 😳

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Chapter 17

Vish: dude u goen made or wat? ye vicky kese ho skta?! 😲


The person removes his mask

Neh: Oh damn shit !!!!

Vish: y-ye toh...

Neh: Vicky he !!!!!!!

Vish: h-h-h...

Neh: HOW???!!!! 😲

Sh: M-muje bhi n-nhi pata...M-me toh b-bas t-tum dono k-ko d-dhund rhi thi j-jb he k-kidnapped me aur muje y-yha le aya !!!! M-mujhe toh yaad bhi n-nhi ki isse d-dekhne ke b-baad kya hua..I-I j-just w-woke up now...!!!!!

*Vicky starts moving towards Sharon*

Vic: 😈 Aaj ka khana kaafi acha hone wala he 😈

Sh: V-V-Vicky y-ye tum k-kya k-keh rhe ho?? T-Tum p-pagal ho gye ho ...

Vic: PAGAL?? Me pagal ho gaya hun??!!! *flashing his loud evil laughter* Me kaha pagal hua hun

😈

Sh: D-Dekho vicky mujhe pata he ki tumhe khana pasand he par itna toh me bhi janti hu ki tum insaano o nhi khate !!!! *afraid*

Vic: Par aaj tum nhi bachne wali !!!

Sh: Vicky tum ye kya b ol rhe ho? me dost hu tumhari !!! Mene kya kia he??

*Vicky does not care to answer and still is moving towards Sharon ... *

Vishakha: *in a whisper to Neha* Dude kuch krna padega vrna Vicky Sharon ko nhi chodega !!

Neha: K-Kya kare??!!!!

*Neha then tries to diverge Vicky's attention *

Ne: H-Hey u loser !!!! M-Mr. Wannabe !!!! Y-Ye kya o-overacting kr rhe ho !!!! T-Tum jesa tacky aur LS banda mene apni lyf me kbhi nhi dekha..h-haan ...

Vic: u no wat..bhot bolti ho tum ... aaj tumhari zuban hi band kr deta hu permanently ... !!!

*Vicky who had been holding Sharon's arms so that she didnt run away now pushes her woth a jerk and she falls on the ground really hard and hurts herself and Vicky moves towards Neha *

Sharon: Ouch...

*Sharon sees a flower pot beside her *

Ne: V-Vicky ye kya kej rhe ho tum !!! Heights of overacting !! D-Dur rho mujse !!!! J-Just stay away !!!! M-Me tum jese LS logo se baat toh kya unki shakal bhi dekhna pasand nhi krti !!!

Vic: Tumhari pasand ya na pasand se mujhe koi farak nhi padta..Mujhe jo krna he me vo karunga !!! 😈

Ne: VISHAKHA HELLPP !!!! * Neha cries out in fear *

*Vishakha tries to push off Vicky but Vicky is too determined to get his prey and pushes bakk Vishkaha and she too falls to the ground *

*Vicky is now on the verge of holding Neha's throat to kill her but SUDDENLY someone hits his head and he falls with a thump *

Ne: hufff...*sigh of relief * Thnxx a lot Sharon !!!

Sharon: Pleasur !!! u also helped me..nw it was my chnce to help u 😉

Ne: awwiieee thnxx...!!!

Vishakha too gets up..

Vish: thnk gawd v r safe !!!

Sharon: par guys Vicky ko ho kya gaya tha?? and how come he's here...agat ye yaha he tu for Kria bhi yhi honi chahie na ... dono sath hi ayenge na since dey r bro sis !!!

Vish: mayb vo bhi hum logo ki tarah alag ho gye the !!

Sh: Ya ... mayb ...

Ne: Toh ab kya krna he?

Sharon: Krna kya he..lets move ... sbko dhundte he ... !!!!

Vishakha: Ya lets go out of here now...

*Neha does not move from her place *

Vish: WTH Neha .. tumhe pura din yhi rehna he kya?

Ne: guyz VICKY !!! iska kya krna he??

Sharon: omg !!! we just forgot abt him !!!

Ne: Not me though !!!

Sh: yaya.. so kya krna he iska?

Vish: mere khayal se ab tk thik ho gaya hoga...i think its safe enuff to wake him up..wat say??

Sharon: ya me too think dat...par kre kya?? paani ka toh door door tak koi naamo nishan nhi he !!!

Vish: uski legs rub krte hain !!!!

Sharon: no wayss ... m damn sure dey ll be DIRTY !!!! 🤢

Vish: ok i guess i no dat very well 😛

Sharon: Toh kya kre??

Ne: its SIMPLE 😉

Sharon: kya?

Ne: wait and watch 😉

*Neha rubs her hands and slaps Vicky hard on face *

Vic: MUMMYYY !!!! mene kuch nhi kia he !!! sachhiii !!!! Ye sab iss Kria ke kaarnaamein he srsly !!! ye hmesha khud pranks khelti he aur mujhe fasa deti he !!!

Ne: Shut up dumbo its me..NEHA !!!!

Sharon: *in her mind* Simmi ki muh boli behen 😛 Dono apne wannabe hubbies ko slap krne me believe krti hain 😆

Vishkaha: Sharon kya sochke has rhi ho?

Sharon: nh kuch nhi 😆


Vicky is shockedd to see the three of them !!!

Vic: Neha tum ?! Sharon tum ?! Vishkaha tum ?! 😲

Sharon: it would hav been better if u wud hav said "NEha Sharon Vishkaha tum? 😲"

Ne: Naah...it wud hav been better if u wud hav said "Tum log? !! 😲"

Vish: are nhi..it wud hav been osmest like dis.. "Gals tum log yaha kese? 😲"

Sharon: are nhi my one was best...vese bbhi FYI osmest koi wrd nhi hta 😆

Ne: mene kaha na my one was THE best !!!

they start fighting...meanwhile..

Vicky: GIRLS !!!!!

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Nil: MERE DESH KI DHARTI !!!!!

Swayam: uuhh wat?

Nil: mere desh ki dharti sona ugle ugle heere mori..mere desh ki dharti 😛

*Simmi blushes *

Rinni: *still in tanhai mode * agar tum dono ka romance ho gya ho toh pls can v move on?! 😡

Nimmi: oh sry 😛

Sw: *in whispers* piece he dono ke dono !!!! romance bhi ese gaane par !! oh gosh !!!! ese gaane pe bhi romance hhota he kya??!!! dey r ANTIQUE !!! museum me laga dena chahie dono ke dono ko.. ab yha me aur Sharon hote toh hm kitne romantic songs pe romance kr rhe hhote 😳

Sim: i heard evrything wayam !!!!

Sw: wat??!!! i mean... kya suna tumne ?!

Sim: dnt act smart...agar tumhe hmare romance me innterest nhi he toh mat rkho bt dnt speak ill abt it vrna m e bhul jaungi ki tum mere dost ho !!!

Sw: are dosti todne ki baat kaha se aa gyi re ? 😲

Sim: todne ki baat kisne ki?? me toh hospitalze krne ki baat r rhi thi 😛

Sw: na baba na..m happie to be fit n f9 😆

Sim: aa gaya na lyn pe 😆

8and then again suddenly they hear a noise !! and and and its none other an sbka ladla (and Nishna ka dulara bhi 😛 ) NILESH !!! 🤣

Nil: REEYYY !!!! ME AA RHA HUN !!!!!!

He runs in a slow motion towards Rey 🤣

BG Tune: Kabhji khushi kbhi gam na juda hone hum kbhi khushi kbhi gam 🤣
tujhe meri kasam kbhi khushi KABHII GUMMM 🤣🤣

but but but he TRIPS 🤣

par par par usko bachane ke lie he na uski ladli SIMMI 🤣🤣

Aur ab we have the famous pose jo har story me hota he !!!! Simmi is holding nil by the waist...🤣🤣🤣 waahh waaahhh 🤣🤣🤣

The PERFECT NIMMI ROMANCE !!!!

EYE LOCk !!!! BOTH LOST IN EACH OTHER'S EYES...(ketaki re kaha he tu 🤣)

and their eye lock laste for 10 mins 😲 🤣🤣🤣

chlo ab bas kro...bak to the f 😛

Rey: Ho gaya tum dono ka?

Kri: hayyee mere love birds..nazar na lage 😛

Bharat: tu kaafi he nazar lagane ke lie !!!!

KRia: haww...me kaafi hu??!!! Teri toh...

and deir epic fight starts again

Rey: inn logon ka kuch nhi ho skta !!!!

meanwhile swayam moves towards Rey and Nimmi move tpwards KRiRat !!!...

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all i can promise u is dat KR and SS will be the topic of discussion between Reyam in the nxt update and m sure u ol r goin to love it .. it will state FACTS 😛

acha dats all for the update ...

repeating again..for PMs pls add AshFFPMz to ur buddy list !!!! bcoz PMs of all my FFs are being sent by this account ONLY !!!!

40 + likes 40 + comments (regarding the update...(not spamming...spamming ki no limit..infinite allowed he 😆 )
and u may get the update SOON..listen clearly..not exactly after it u ll get d update bt den i ll try to update asap bt be4 dis NO UPDATE

-Ash

Edited by swaron502 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...loved it...😊😛😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shravani97

awesome update...loved it...😊😛😃


thnks shravani 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ash my reaction while reading this update is >> 🤣 🤣
full on entertaining update 😆
Nil's slow motion running with the bg tune 🤣
in this situation also, the girls are fyting 😆
had lot of fun reading the update

continue asap 😉

this is supposed to be a horror story na.. but i rofl reading this FF more than any other 😆 i like ur talent of making ppl laugh in a horror story 😆 just kidding .. dnt take it seriously 😊
Edited by ---Priya--- - 13 years ago

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