Childhood Crush of Raizadas Pt 7 Pg 52 *COMPLETED* - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys first of all thanks a lot guys for liking and commenting on my posts. As i cannot reply to everyone's comments I've written a thanks note over here.
Thanks a lot guys for commenting. I really liked it when I came to know that you all wanted the update and want me not to stop this FF. So here you go with the update. And guys plz buddy me for PMs.

Payal turned around and started to walk away with moisten eyes but she was stopped by someone. That someone snatched the paper from Arnav's hand while he was still shooing Payal behind her back and crumpled it and partially tore the paper.

Who was that someone.

It was Khushi. Yes the very own Khushi Kumari Gupta.(future Singh Raizada).

'Another Girl' Arnav thought to himself.

Khushi: "Tumne meri Jiji ko kyu rulaya?" (Why you made my sister cry) she asked with raged voice as if she would slap him any moment with her cute angelic tiny hands. Arnav was angry too by seeing this as she stole paper from his hand.

Arnav: "Wohh mere Bhai ki drawing hai wapas do?" (that is my brother's drawing give it back to me) he asked angrily by moving out his one hand to ask the paper and circling his other tiny hand around Aakash shoulder and dragging him closer with his tiny arms.

Khushi: "Nahi pehle tum baato tumne meri Jiji ko rulaya kyu?" (No first you say why you made my sister?) she pouts her lips in anger and shouts at the top of her voice again at him. Her beautiful milky white face turns red in anger.

Arnav: "Kyu ki wohh mere Bhai se baath kar rahi thi." (because she was talking to my brother) he said in anger. His face too became red.

Khushi: "Toh? Kya tumhara Bhai ladki hai?" (So? Is your brother a girl?) she asked with girly attitude placing both her hands on her waist.

Arnav: "Tum mere bhai ke bare mein aise baath nahi kar sakti." (you cannot talk like this about my brother) he said in baby rage.

Khushi: "Kyu? Wohh bhagwan hai?" (Why is he God?) she asked politely in sarcastic way nodding her head up and down.

Arnav: "Nahi. Kyu ki wohh Raizada hai." (No because he is Raizada)He looked with his head up and brushed his hairs to a side and tightened up his tie. He hided the matter again.

Khushi: "Kismein?" (In what) she asked waving her hand to and fro to ask in what.

Arnav: "What?" he asked in confusing way. His eyes were chocolaty brown when the rage and confusion both came up.

Khushi: "Tumne hi toh kaha na Raizada hai toh maine pucha kismein?" (you only said na that its Raizada so I asked in what?) she was mocking him and pulling his leg but he was not understanding it.

So she began the explanation.

Khushi: "Rai matlab wohh... Wohh... khane wali. Wohh black black (she showed him circling her finger in the air and then minimizing her finger to show the size.)

Khushi: "aur Zada matlab more so I asked Kismein Raizada hai? Tumhare tiffin mein?"

(Rai means mustard and zada means more so I asked in what is Raizada? In your lunch box?) she mocked him completely and started laughing aloud by clapping her tiny hands once.

And both the tots for whom Arnav and Khushi were fighting were again sitting on bench and talking and laughing. Aakash was again putting up drawings on paper and Payal was enjoying it. They both were not concerned about their sibling who were fighting for them.

Arnav on the other hand was so angry.

Arnav: "Nahi wohh mera surname hai." (No its my surname) Arnav screamed from his tiny mouth gritting his teeth and continued..

"Aur hum ladkiyo se baath nahi karte kyu ki wohh bahut roti hai." (and we don't talk to girls because they cry a lot)

He snatched the paper from her and peaked up his head in attitude and anger.

Khushi: "Kyu ki tum ladke rulate ho ladkiyo ko. Jaise abhi tumne meri Jiji ko rulaya." (No its because you boys make girls cry like just now you made my sister cry.) she was in baby anger but in no mood to continue the fight as it was her first day. So she took her sister away from there while Arnav was about to say something. He was angry but took away Aakash from there.

Arnav thought that it was nice that Payal's sister wasn't in the same class as he can tolerate Payal but not her sister.

Aakash and Arnav went to boy's loo. Arnav's thought wasn't even finished when he saw Khushi sitting on his bench. He became so restless. It was like think of the devil and here he is for him. He stared Khushi.

Precap:

And to make the worst of his nightmares Khushi sat next to Arnav as someone was already sitting next to Payal. And immediately after Khushi Aakash entered the class. Where will he sit?

Now one more fight for sitting place and benches.

Flashback why Arnav hate Girls.


Guys Plz do drop your precious comments. And Hit the like button as it would take just a second or two to do that.

And also your opinion about how you liked it?

Edited by Rosyln419 - 13 years ago
purplepixie thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
so cute!!! n the rai-zyada part...😆

luved it!!

looking forward to the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice !!! Liked the baby cute fight and the part where Akash and payal are not bother to stop their sibblings and are enjoying in their own world !!!! Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved Khushi's mocking of Arnav
sooryalekshmi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Raizada... kismein?
was too funny, yaar.
I am still laughing thinking about that.

continue soon.
thanks 4 the PM
shilpa09 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear...it takes me back to my childhood dayz...
thnx alot:):):)
Daspayel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Khushi iz smart
kiddo Arnav has fbs uski memory kitni hai ??:o
nd dont stop updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am really liking these childish squabbles, pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lol! "kismein Raizada hai?"😆 Loved this dialogue !
Beautiful update dear! Thx for the pm!



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Posted: 13 years ago
it was so cute!!!!! pls continue soon😊 khushi'll tame arnav😉

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