story was tight till holi...then wht happened..

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shtl_l

@shtl_l

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

if we see the story from the start...ipkknd the story was tight script without any flaw as such till holi episodes...i mean each scene was done well...storywise also there was no loop holes...

but after holi episode the show started showing flaws...i dont mean just direction...i mean the story script...did the writer changed...i really want to know if the writer changed after the holi episodes...

i mean thou kidnapping track was good...to cover up the barun abscence...they did keep the story going...but connectivity is...i dont know...i mean in the hut scene...khushi changing dress...khushi was wearing proper dress b4...the writer should have shown water being splashed...atleast we can justify the clothes she wears after that...but the dress was not even tht much torn...

3 dreams in 3 weeks...i know to bring the lead couple in one frame...ok that is understandable...

telepathy talk...oh dialogues were good but they didnt execute it properly...

we will overlook all these things because we r die hard fans...but normal tv viewers donot overlook such things...

i hope after barun comes back...the CV's will give us our strong script and story back...

Edited by shtl_l - 13 years ago

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

No actually i loved the telepathy scene and totally loved the dialogues! They were even portrayed in a good way. Though i do get your point. See, the cv's are kind of in a pressure.

1- the trp pressure.

2- barun's absence pressure

3- daljeet upset with her role pressure.

4- fan's outburst on small things pressure.

So my guess all these added up resulted in what u're pointing at.

But i personally dont have a prob with dialogues. Remember when Arnav left for london, and Khushi was missing him and the diallogues conveyed while khushi talked to herself? Where she said 'jis rishte ki neev hi nafrat par ho, ussei umeed lagana nadaani nahi tou aur kia hai? Par shayad hum ye nadaani kar bethei'.

(if hoping for the relation who's foundation is layed upon hatred is not stupidity then what is? But perhaps i have done that stupidity)

That whole scene had some mind blowing dialogues, dont you think?

Im not defending the cv's, oh no 😆 But all i'm saying is they have a lot of pressure on them so maybe thats the reason behind your complaint. The teri meri dream sequence was sheer brilliance. Yesterdays telepathy scene was brilliant. The hug scene before the hut scnee was brilliant. I wasnt too much satisfied with the hut scene though.

And besides, they needed to show how 'Muhabbat Door Jane Na De' is true in their case. They cant stay away from each other. If they are forced to, it leads them to missing each other. They cant get each other out of their minds, hence dreams. I think its all completely relevent.

Even under pressure they delivered some amazing scenes, so i guess we can cut them some slack, no?😉

My pov entirely !

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catz

@woundedsoul

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

I dont think so.
Story is still very strong.

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shtl_l

@shtl_l

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _WASIM_
I dont think so.
Story is still very strong.

there is story now but not strong enough...lot of scenes cant connect...like

1) khushi changing dress...

2) catching fireflies...

3) telepathy talk hearing word by word

4) arnav could have told khushi to track the no. from cell phone.

5) b4 arnav hand tied so he doesnt run...now he is freely roaming in the room...still when kidnapper comes in his room he doesnt fight with him.

6) he doesnt try to run away...he ran only when he saw khushi

7) mami investigagion wht happned she doesnt even ask khushi of any progress.

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

i guess 1ce arnav is back things will get better...coz then cv's will not need to plan stuff without arnav...so the natural story will comeout

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shtl_l
if we see the story from the start...ipkknd the story was tight script without any flaw as such till holi episodes...i mean each scene was done well...storywise also there was no loop holes...

but after holi episode the show started showing flaws...i dont mean just direction...i mean the story script...did the writer changed...i really want to know if the writer changed after the holi episodes...

i mean thou kidnapping track was good...to cover up the barun abscence...they did keep the story going...but connectivity is...i dont know...i mean in the hut scene...khushi changing dress...khushi was wearing proper dress b4...the writer should have shown water being splashed...atleast we can justify the clothes she wears after that...but the dress was not even tht much torn...

3 dreams in 3 weeks...i know to bring the lead couple in one frame...ok that is understandable...

telepathy talk...oh dialogues were good but they didnt execute it properly...

we will overlook all these things because we r die hard fans...but normal tv viewers donot overlook such things...

i hope after barun comes back...the CV's will give us our strong script and story back...

Hmmm...very good post...I have been feeling the same thing...its like they can't deal with the success the show has achieved...after winning 6 awards straight slump...they told me that Arshad Khan directed the holi week...I sort of still feel it was Lalit Mohan's goodbye gift...I hope they can meet the expectations they set for themselves...

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shtl_l

@shtl_l

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

i forgot to add...the bubbly track was most annoying to the audience...till now noone understood wht that track was about...😲

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1yyy2krish3

@1yyy2krish3

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Da story writers r same ….

I think CV's r changed

even though arshad is good ..some wer v r missing LM direction…

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pacsun

@pacsun

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

I am ready to be patient till Barun returns. Then CV's better not throw in any silly tracks (ie: comedy, Bubli, Masala etc) and give us IPPKND in its pure, unadulerated form. TRP's have dropped low and now its hard to get it back even with some great epis. Obviously fans move over to other shows and don't easily return.

CV's better have learnt their lesson.

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Meera

@MeeraHK

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

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Every serial has its up and downs here no one even cv's expected trp's wl go for toss when barun takes a brk..that's it..by few weeks trp's wl go up..are this is the only serial of sp which cld compete with bv guys..cv's wl surely do something to lift trp's...

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