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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
buaji is so sweet,love her
payal and akash are so mean
the flashbacks were really helpful to know the extent of their love and care for eachother even though they didn't acknowledge at that time
beautiful update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
awesome update di
loved it
they r the perfect couple
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Beautiful update!
Really perfect couple!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Awesome !!!! Perfect couple..Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Picture Perfect <3 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Good one, i liked it , pls continue...
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#97
loved it loved it loved it!!!!
its superbbb...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

Khushi: "he is not listening to me , you please him,"she walk out

NK: why you are not listening her?

Arnav: i was just going for shower and she

NK : i asked her to stop you , he was checking him again

Arnav: "i slept like an idiot "

NK: smiled


Khushi walk down no one was there she find kitchen

ramu kaka"what you want?"

Khushi: " i want to make something for Arnav ,tell me what he likes"

Ramu kaka: he eat everything , he is not fussy "

Khushi: there must be something

Ramu kaka: "anything "

Khushi : i will make soup for him , she asked ramu kaka to give her things

Ramu kaka: " i will make"

Khushi: no no i will make myself, you tell me about him , since when you know him

Ramu kaka: since the first day as i he paused

Khushi" bola"

Ramu kaka" i brought him in side , he was sleeping in rain"

Khushi just held her breath. how mean his parents were left him in rain

Ramu kaka" he was having temperature at that time. Nani ji called Dr ,he told he is having pneumonia , and he should be admitted to hospital "

Khushi: then

Ramu kaka:"SB ji took him to hospital with me ,i stayed there"

Khushi how old was he at that time?'

Ramu kaka 2 days

Khushi:just shiver , she felt liking running and hugging him tight in her arms .

Ramu kaka:look at her as she was crying " beta you dont leave him"he placed his hand on her head

Khushi i will not kaka. i will never leave him


Mami: what you are cooking?

Khushi: i am making soup for him

Mami: why he cannot have lunch?

Khushi: he had vomit few times and he is still having fever .

Mami: "Arnav has so much nakhara , and you did wrong in coming in the kitchen "

Khushi: why ? she was pouring soup in bowl .

Mami: rasam ha bride first cook some sweet dish

Khushi: "mami ji my husband cannot eat sweet then why i cook sweet."

Mami: boiled you are to batameeze , your maa

Khushi: stop where you are as my maa was your best friend and you force my maa she paused

Mami: you have spoiled my son in one night, he was such an obedient child of mine

Khushi:come again , you said him your son, let me mark the .

Mami: batameeze larki

Khushi: just walk up " you have not seen my batameezi yet and , i have not even spoiled him 1 % i will now spoil him like anything"she walk upstairs

She knocked at the door , and enter

NK: "it was so hard to hold him"

Khushi smiled

Arnav: "what took you so long?"

Khushi: just sat next to him placed napkin " open your mouth"

Arnav: i

Khushi: shhh open , she was blowing so it get bit cold .

NK: great bhabi, he will only listen like that.

Khushi: would you like to have bhai, she wipe his lips

NK: no no i have to go, see you he left them

Arnav: you made that

Khushi : how you know ?

Arnav: taste is different

Khushi: is it bad

Arnav no no

Khushi then finish it quickly .peck his cheek

Arnav: smiled at her rub his cheek

Khushi what

Arnav: you left your lipstick mark on my neck , NK saw it

Khushi oh really shit

Arnav:its ok he didnot not said anything .

Khushi just blushed ,"i am crazy "

Arnav: did you had anything?"

Khushi you finish first then i will have .

Arnav"stop this " he just get out of bed "Ramu kaka bring lunch"he shouted from the door

Khushi: aap ko ghusa bhi aata ha she walk behind him with bowl

Arnav: ha

Khushi; aaah

Arnav : no first you have lunch

Khushi" will you listen to me or not" showed him her punch, he just sat back

Arnav: smiled he open his mouth

Khushi " tell me one number"

Arnav what for?

Khushi one number please

Arnav 12

Khushi are you sure ? with open mouth

Arnav yes

Khushi: means 11 more

Arnav what

Ramu kaka came with her lunch as he left

Khushi: 11 oh GOD how i will take care of 11 more

Arnav: what 11 more

Khushi: kids

Arnav: what the

Khushi i was thinking while cooking , how many kids we are going to have ?

Arnav: stare at her ,she was eating & thinking

Khushi:11

Arnav: but i said 12 , he roll on bed & came close to her

Khushi i have one , she chew the bread

Arnav: what ? where ? when? how ?he placed his head in her lap

Khushi: he is bit grown up but need my most attention, raised her knee a bit & put a bread piece in his mouth, she was not expecting he will bite her finger " Ouch Arnav dont chew my finger"he had a big laughter that for the first time echo in RM , shocked everyone in the home as it was a new sound for them "your baby is naughty"

Khushi kept her plate and kissed his forehead " i love my baby naughtiness ,and his smile " she succeed making him smile with her crazy talk . he was kissing her finger and smiling at her

Arnav "First you take care of this one then think of 11, this one will not let you think of other "

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
beutiful update! Loved reading it hamesha ki trha :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
11 kids!! WOW! Thats gunna take some effort! 😳
Amazing update!

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