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Posted: 13 years ago
i admit i got addicted to your SS with the first line, you manged to bowl me with it girl !! 😳

Dedicated

to all those princesses who believe that there is a special one made only for them. This is to tell you that no matter what others say, don't lose hope because your price charming is waiting out there n is needing you as much as you need him, or even more.


you wont believe my brothers and my best friend *he is an idiot i tell you* till date tease me saying i day dream 😭 but as if i gave a damn to him or others 😃 aoww love to live in my dreamland 😉

aoww m already in love with this Geet coz i can say i can resemble her with my poor state of heart 😳
aoww i just love her

Wo hi meri zameen, wo hi falak

Mere dil ka sukoon uski ek jhalak

Khuda se ibadat me manga, de do mujhe wo

Jiski main hu, sirf mera ho jo
just loved these lines


hehe the entry was a damn cool even i was wondering, what was dat

Tareef kar rahi hai ke izzat utar rahi hai


aoww Maan i was helucinating it with Jab We Met's Shahid 😉

i can wait when they'll mee i want them to meet as soon as she lands in Delhi 😆
mandymore thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congratz 4 new ff...
awsome. Prologue...
neethuMG thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for an updt for long time
sukklover thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
frnd..how r u???😃
4 Pming me..😛.
4 ur good job..👏👏..
ur updates..⭐️.
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the next part...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
woohhh...
just a word- AMAZING!!!!!
I LOVED THE STORY
and the poem-

Wo hi meri zameen, wo hi falak

Mere dil ka sukoon uski ek jhalak

Khuda se ibadat me manga, de do mujhe wo

Jiski main hu, sirf mera ho jo
that touched me somewhere really deep..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Am loving Geet's character.. Sounds really funny and lively...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oshi, that was wonderful sweet heart. Your title, poem, dialogue, story, i mean everything says 'ladki ne homework acche se kiya hai'.

So, this will be a SS with about 10 parts more. Love the starting. Being a punjabi myself, i can understand her situation in that buzzing haveli. Loved their intro too. Waiting for more.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
whewn the hell r u updating oshy dolly???? dun test my patience😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

IBADAT

Love Reincarnated

@chavvi16
Don't get confused dear... Story will unfold as we'll move forward😊
@dazzlingdivz, @kawaii_geet
So gud to have wonderful writers praising ur work😳
@SallyAmanda
Ur lines were so true👏
PART 2

Geet arrived at Delhi airport n saw Pinky patiently waiting for her.

Pinky, daughter of Manchanda (cousin brother of Geet's dad) was cousin cum best friend of Geet. She worked in a well known company of Delhi n lived in her own apartment, alone.

They reached home and Geet told her that she wanted to visit the dargah.

Theek hai take rest we'll go in evening. Pinky said. O teri...

Kya hua?Geet asked worried

Arre mai kaise bhul gayi aaj business party hai. Pinky shouted. Yaar I won't be able to come with you.

Theek hai dear, koi baat nahi I will go by myself... Chill.Geet tried to calm her down.

Hmm OK and after visiting dargah you can join me at the party. Pinky offered.

Geet gladly accepted. Sure.

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Geet came out of the daragah. There was a group of fakir babas singing and playing different instruments. All men were sitting with the babas. In between there was a wall and on the other side, ladies were sitting. The atmosphere was peaceful and serene. Geet wanted to take in the most of it as she had to leave Delhi the very next day. She sat with the ladies.

The music played was captivating and magical. Music was always near to her heart as she was a trained Kathak (classical) dancer. She found herself floating in the waves of soulful music and words automatically came out of her throat.

Play me😊

(Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaara

Ishq Bina Kya Jeena) - 2

Gud Se Meetha Ishq Ishq, Imli Se Khatta Ishq

Vaada Yeh Pakka Ishq Ishq, Dhaaga Yeh Kachcha Ishq

Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh, Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaara

Ishq Bina Kya Jeena

Oh Oh Oh Oh, Oh Oh Oh Oh

(Gud Se Meetha Ishq Ishq

Imli Se Khatta Ishq Ishq) - 2

Vaada Yeh Pakka Ishq Ishq

Dhaaga Yeh Kachcha Ishq Ishq

(Ishq Bina Kya Jeena Yaaron

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaaron) - 2

(Gud Se Meetha Ishq Ishq

Imli Se Khatta Ishq Ishq) ' 2

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaara

Ishq Bina Kya Jeena

The enchanting 'ta dhin dhin dha' of tabla and soothing tune of flute coaxed her to dance. Without her very knowledge she was dancing complimenting the music with her graceful moves.

(Neeche Ishq Hai, Upar Rab Hai

In Donon Ke Beech Mein Sab Hai) - 2

Ek Nahin Sau Baatein Kar Lo

Sau Baaton Ka Ek Matlab Hai

Rab Sab Se Sona Ishq Ishq, Rab Se Bhi Sona Ishq - 2

Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh, Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh

(Ishq Bina Kya Jeena Yaaron

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaaron) - 2

(Gud Se Meetha Ishq Ishq

Imli Se Khatta Ishq Ishq) - 2

(Heera Na Panna Ishq Ishq

Bas Ek Tamanna Ishq Ishq) - 2

Bas Ek Tamanna Ishq Ishq - 3

Bas Ek Tamanna

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaara

Ishq Bina Kya Jeena

Geet heard a male voice from other side of the wall. Each word was deep felt and some kind of pain etched in them.

Ishq Hai Kya Yeh Kisko Pata

Yeh Ishq Hai Kya Sab Ko Pata

Yeh Prem Nagar, Anjaan Dagar

Saajan Ka Ghar Kya Kisko Khabar

Chhoti Si Umar Yeh Lamba Safar

Yeh Ishq Hai Kya Yeh Kisko Pata

Yeh Dard Hai Ya Dardon Ki Dava

Yeh Koi Sanam Ya Aap Khuda - 2

He was removing the cloth from his head after coming out of the dargah when he heard the sweet voice of a girl filled with happiness and dreams of love. He smiled sadly love, dream for one while a nightmare for other. He couldn't stop himself from voicing his own thoughts.

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaara

Ishq Bina Kya Jeena

Geet said while trying to see through the small holes in the wall.

Tumne Ishq Ka Naam Suna Hai

Humne Ishq Kiya Hai

Phoolon Ka Gulshan Ishq Ishq, Kaanton Ka Daaman Ishq ' 2

He turned his back towards the wall, towards her.

Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh, Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh

(Ishq Bina Kya Jeena Yaaron

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaaron) - 2

(Gud Se Meetha Ishq Ishq

Imli Se Khatta Ishq Ishq) - 2

She touched the wall as if she was touching him, she knew who he was. Tears brimmed in her eyes as she was having a hard time believing that finally she found him. Yes, it was him, her soul mate. The one for whom she has been waiting for so long, there was no chance of mistake.

Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh, Ishq Ishq, Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh, Ishq Ishq - 2

Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh, Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh

She went to the men's side but he was gone. Though she didn't saw him but was happy that she knew he was there n she found him or her love found him.

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Geet reached the party venue and entered the main hall. She was the only girl in traditional. All head turned and was mesmerized to see the simple beauty. She was dressed differently but didn't look out of place as she carried herself with confidence and elegance.

Geet saw pinky and joined her. Tu aa gai? Badi der kardi. And then she noticed the strange glow on Geet's face she looked extremely happy.

Tujhe kya hua? She asked incredulously.

Geet pulled her to the corner. You won't believe what happened today. She said all excited. There was feeling of content in her heart n she had never been this happy. I found him.

Who? Pinky asked confused.

My soul mate.Geet sighed like a love sick teenager.

What? You met him? What's his name? You knew him before? Pinky threw her bunch of questions.

No i didn't knew him from before and I don't know his name... I didn't exactly met him but heard him.

Pinky gapped at her weirdly. Are you nut? She blasted. Can you tell me Ms. Geet Handa how do you know that he is your 'soulmate' when you didn't even saw his damn face?

Pinky you don't need any specific thing to fall in love. It's just the special essence, the feel n your hearts tells you. Yes, this is the one. Geet repeated her mother's words that were engraved in her heart.

Geet would have loved to elaborate more but a familiar voice asked for her attention. She turned behind n walked through the crowd as if in control of some spell. Everything else was blurred; including Pinky who was calling her, it was just her n that enchanting voice. She only heard him n wanted to see him only. And at last she saw him standing with his back towards her.

Bheed me bhi tu jaana pehchana sa laga

Tere hootho ka har lavz fasana sa laga

Tumhari awaaz ne mujhe itni shiddat se pukaara

Ke uske siva mujhe har alfaaz anjaana sa laga

Yes Mr. Singhania as you say. He stated n walked towards the bar while Geet followed him absently. The attendant served him as he took his seat in a corner. Grabbing the glass with his long fingers he neared it to his mouth n that was when Geet saw his face for the first time. Her eyes widened with the height of perfection his each feature was carved to. She had imagined him to be handsome but not so deadly gorgeous.

Waah! Babaji itna accha banda banaya aapne mere liye.Thank you.She said looking up n blushed at her own thought.

Maan felt someone's gaze on him n looked in her direction but Geet quickly hid herself behind the pillar. Finding no one there he again resumed drinking.

Geet again peeked from behind the pillar desperate for his one more glimpse. She looked at him intently; he looked sad n aloof for some reason. There was a sudden impulse in her heart to hug him n tell that everything is going to be fine. Coming out of her sweet reverie she hit her head, of course she can't do it right now.

Smiling she went back to Pinky, who gave her a 'Now-What?' look.

Pinky wo kaun hai? Geet asked pointing towards Maan.

Kaun? Pinky searched through the crowd.

The one who is sitting in corner.

You mean DD..Well he is Maan Singh Khurana. Pinky informed. CEO of Khurana Construction.

Oh!Geet said n the expression on her face literally scared Pinky.

After a brief moment Geet eyes gleamed n she said what Pinky had least expected. I am joining KC.

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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 13 years ago

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