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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Nici0306
very very interesting.. and loved the character sketch.. it was like a story telling for me.. normally character sketch is boring for me.. as people try to be their poetic best.. but this one was just perfect...

thank u very much!! i just wanted to get a lot of trivial stuff out of the way.that is y it was so descriptive..:-)

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: amv63
Congratulations on the new story and thanks for the PM.
Your character descriptions were perfect. I like it when there is some background on the characters.
It has an interesting start and am looking forward to reading more.
Please PM when you update this and Living a Nightmare?

thanks a lot!!
n will deffa PM when i update the other one..though it will take a little while for me to get to it..😳

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

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oops i'm so sorry

i'm bit busy right now

i will post comment tomorrow

edited!!!

very sorry for the very late edit

heyyy i'm first 😃

that was fabulous update

i loved it a lot

thanks😉

Edited by achu_arshi - 13 years ago

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

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sorry, sorry sorry... i know i know i should've finished reading a while ago... but life came in-between! :/

this is one heck of a start! great start! absolutely beautiful... i loved the innocence shown in khushi, which is apparently snatched later... is it something to do with that night??? maybe she was pregnant with his child, and she had to fight the world to save the baby???? i loved payal in this. she is taking role of that fierce, overprotective sister, that I always wanted to see her in it... loved it!

Edited by aycma98 - 13 years ago

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

that was beautiful and poignant, yet very painful. i loved it.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

thank you for the pm, Sunara... a lovely update that was both heart-warming and heart-rending at the same time! the sibling love and teasing was lovely to see but khushi in a coma is too painful for words! eager for futute updates that might reveal how arnav is responsible for khushi's state!