Dil to Pagal Hai (Part 10 updated pg 11)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi Everyone!!!! I have been so inspired by all of your guys fanfics that I thought I should try it my self. This is my first fanfic… so I hope it goes well!

Let me just get some Barfi and Juice and I will start…

Part 1: It starts off in the middle of today's episode when Bani just finished telling the waiters what food to get for Jai and when she turns around Jai is right in front of her.

Bani: a-a-aap yaha…

Jai: You look beautiful tonight Bani

Bani: Thanks (she turns to leave and Seema comes up to her)

Seema: Hi Bani! Tum aag kitni sundar lagri ho.

Bani: Thanks Seema... Tum bhi achi lagri ho.

Seema: Wow!!! Kitne sundar Kangaan ... kaha se liye?

Bani: wo... um.... actually Mr. Walia ne dya tha.

Hearing what she had said, Jai looked at Bani and smiled to himself...Bani saw Jai looking at her and looked at him... their eyes met and they froze there...

It was Seema literally Yelling Bani's name that brought her back to her senses

Seema: Kaha goom gaye tum Bani?

Bani: oh voh main... kai nah (blushing)

Seema tried to hide her smile.

Seema went to go get some food leaving Bani alone.

Bani: (thinking) kya maine sahe kya tha Mr. Walia ko chor ke? Muje aasa kua lagta hai ke mere zindage se kuch missing hain...

Bani then noticed Jai still looking at her and walked toward Rano and Sahil

Sahil: Hi Bani mami!

Bani: Hi Sahil tum kaise ho?

Sahil: Main theek hoo—

All of a sudden, the lights went out... everyone wondered what had happened.

Pushkar: Sorry everyone.. looks like the lights went out. We will get candles and soon there will be a little light. Everyone just stay calm.

Bani went to go look for the candles. Not knowing where she was going, she bumped into the wall.

Bani: Ouch!

She turned around and started to walk again... she saw some light from a window and knew she was in the kitchen.

Bani started to look through cupboards for the candles when she felt someone's hand on her shoulder.

Bani gasped.

Jai: its okay its me.

Bani: Mr. Walia aap yah kya kare he?

Jai: main tumhare madat karne aaya hoon.. help chaiye hain?

Bani: koi baat nah... main manage karlongi

Bani got up on a stool and looked in the cupboard abover the fridge and found the candles. But then her stool started to wobble and she started to fall.

Jai seeing this caught her as she fell... Bani had her arms around his neck with her eyes cloesed and head against his chest. The candles were lying in her lap.

She could hear his heart beating.. bom boom, bom boom, bom boom...

And in the background the song Jya dhadack is playing

Sorry for the Length!!! Tell me if I should continue...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Its great - pls continue 👏
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That was great...please do continue
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It is really good!! Please do continue!!
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Great attempt, please do continue 😛
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nice start!
please continue soon
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its awsome plz contiue soon!!! 👏 👏 👏
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bravo nice work 👏 , do continue please 😊
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What do u mean sorry for the length, it needs to be longer. Great Job, plz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for all the good comments!!!
I will try to continue and post tomorrow or by tonight.

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