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Posted: 13 years ago
read all the parts...
all the parts were so awesome...
you are a great writer vaishu...👏
love all the parts...
you portrayed the emotion so well...
i literally had tears after reading some of the parts...
update soon and pm me plz...
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Sorry guys...

i will not be able to reply to all commets... actually i thot wud lekin i don't have the patience it seems...😳

But thank u for all ur comments...

loved them all...
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yeh bhi galat haiii

sorry asma di...

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Revelations

After removing the distances b/w them and realising that their hearts were never apart they just stood there savoring the moment desperately wanting the time to stop. All of a sudden a strong force of wind blew bringing them back from their trance and they realised that a snowstorm was on its way though snowfall was lessened. Rey just grabbed kriya's hand and pulled her with him using a shortcut thru the garden to reach Kria's lane. This time Rey was hyper. He so wanted to go to a safe place. Kriya was constantly trying to calm him down warning him to see where he was running. Rey was in no mood to listen. Kriya stopped him near a tree.

K: Rey araam se. Hum pahuch jayenge aise bhaagne ki zarurat nhi hai. Vaise bhi ghar koi bhut dur nhi hai.

R: Baatcutter bilkul chup humein jaldi karna hoga.

K: Lekin aise bhagenge toh lag jayegi and fir lene ke dene pad jayenge.

R: Baatcutter trust me .. kuch nhi hoga..

Saying so he turns and starts walking only to stumble on the heap of leaves and fall down. In the process he hurts his shoulder a little bit. Seeing this Kria starts laughing. Rey gets lost in her laughter.

K: Dekha maine kaha tha na ... Gir gaye na... Aap meri baat sunte hi kaha ho...

R: ( comes back to the reality ). Aaah. Baatcutter meri madad karne ke bajaye u r laughing... Sahi mein this is so mean..

Kria comes close to him and starts dusting his hair and dress to remove the leaves. He then messes up with his hair.

R: baatcutter yeh kya kiya tumne...

K: aap aise zyada cute lagte ho.

R: toh normally nhi lagta kya..

K: haan lagte ho lekin aise zyada...

R: chalo i know main bhut cute hun lekin plz ab mujhe help karogi uthne mein. Varna hum yahi mein snowman ban jayenge..

K: Haan haan...

Kria forwards her hand and rey instead of pulling himself up pulls her down only to make him land on the heap once again but this time with Kria over him..

Now Rey is on the ground with Kria on top of him such that their faces are sideways. Rey then turns to see her face but her hair falls on his face. He just pulls her so her face is facing him. Kriya just lowers her lashes while Rey just get lost in her. He just murmurs "Breathtakingly gorgeous" to which kriya doesn't have a reply to and just hides her face in his chest to which Rey just smiles. He then stares at her hiding in his chest and feels her smiling and blush and rey then just want to capture the moment to himself. He then stares up and notices the weather. He curses his fate and then asks Kriya to get up as they had to hurry as the weather was worsening. Kriya also gets up with a annoyed face as she was too much lost in the moment. The feeling of love had captured them both and both wanted to cherish it but the circumstances were against them they felt. After running for some time they finally reached Kriya's house. They were panting after running for such a long time. They just smiled at each other. The weather was worsening after each moment.

R: Baatcutter dekho mausam bahut kharaab ho rha hai. Tum jaldi se andar jao varna tum bimaar pad jaogi.

K: Theek hai main oh chali jaungi lekin aap... Aap kaise jaoge?? Aapka ghar bhi toh bahut dur hai...

R: Main manage kar lunga...

K: Kaise??? (hyper )

R: Main manage kar lunga.. (t rying to calm her down)

K: Nhi... aap jab tak nhi bataoge... Main andar nhi jaungi... ( turning her face away from him )

R ( in his mind ): Ab main baatcutter ko kaise convince karun...

Then suddenly his phone rang. He checked the id. It was his granny.

G: shukra hai bhagwaan ka tera phone lag gaya.

R: Kyun kya huya??

G: Beta barf ki vajah se saari phone lines kharaab ho gayi. Baht der baad tumhara no. laga hai..

R: oh... main bas aa hi rha hun. Main baatcutter ke ghar pe hi hun...

G: Tu abh tak nikla nhi.. beta yahan toh bahut buri condition hai.. Tu vahin ruk ja... varna tujhe kuch ho jaye.. theek hai... kria and apna dhyaan rakhna... aur hamari chinta mat karna..

R: Okay grans.. love u... khayal rakhna apna..

G: Theek hai beta...

Rey just then turns towards Kria and then the realization struck him that he gets to spend the entire night with his baatcutter. He was so very excited for the night as finally he would be able to talk his heart out with her. But first he had to convince his childish baatcutter who was standing there pouting looking so sweet that it was sweeping rey off his feet. He goes and holds her from behind.

R: Baatcutter gussa ho... ( slowly and sweetly)

K (angrily ): nhi...

R: toh mujhse baat kyun nhi kar rhi?

K: kyunki mujhe nhi karna hai...

R: theek hai... Par andar toh chal hi sakte hain ...haina...

K: Nhi mujhe nhi jaana.. mujhe yahi khade rhena.. aapko itna fark kyun padrha hai.. aap jao na...

R: Issliye toh keh rha hun. Mujhe toh andar jaana hai. And chaabiyan toh tumhare pass hai... Toh main uske bina kaise jaungaa... ( making innocent face)

Kria turns around so that she is facing him. Rey just stands with a small face. She smiles seeing him and then pulls his cheeks and messes with his hair.

K: aap itne sweet ho...

R: Voh toh main hin ( winks )

K: Haan haan.. theek hai.. par achanak se plan chage kaise...

R: Woh grans ka phone aaya tha. Tufaan ki vajah se vahan conditions bahut buri hai.. Issliye she told me ki main yahi ruk jaun.. ( pauses ) Kria kya hum andar chale varna yahin khade-2 jam jayenge...

K: haan...

They then enter the house. Kriya then makes arrangements so that they could get some warmth and starts moving here and there ensuring all the facilities. She even prepares the fireplace in case the electricity goes off. All the while Rey just stands there seeing her do the work. He just starts cherishing the thought of they both being alone in the house. He is brought back to the earth as Kria shooks him..

K: Rey ( a little loudly )...

R: huh... kya huya aise zor se kyun bol rhi ho...

K: ( annoyingly ) kab se bula rhi hun... sun hi nhi rhe ho...

R: sorry na... kya huya????

K: main bas yeh keh rhi thi aap change kar lo so that ki aap comfortable ho...

R: Change???? Woh bhi yahan pe???? ( shockingly..)

K: haan... koi problem hai kya???

R: ( sweetly ) well... baatcutter ( pulls her closer to himself ) aise toh mujhe koi problem nhi hai.. lekin woh kya hai na main apna impression kharaab nhi karna chahta tumhari mom ke saamne...

K: kya????? (confused)

R: (teasingly) my sweet baatcutter i didn't know ki tum itni jaldi u know...ahem ahem.. ( winking)

K: ( pushes him) hawww... rey sharam nhi aati aapko aisa vaisa sochte huye...

R: toh fir just enlighten me ki change kaise karunga...

K: main aapko kapde dungi na...

R: don't u think tumhare kapde mujhe thode se bade honge...

K: mujhe apne kapdon ko shahhed nhi karna hai.. mere paas aapke liye clothes hain...

R ( shocked ) : kaise?? Matlab tum toh apni mom ke saath rehti ho na??

K: woh mere boyfriend ke hain...

R: but main yahan pe toh kbhi nhi aaya... as far as i know... ( pretending to think )

K: Aapke alava bhi mere bfs bhi ho sakte hain u know... ( putting her hands on his neck )

R ( putting his hands on her waist ) : Ho sakte hain... lekin koi bhi ghar tak nhi aa sakta for sure... and as a matter of fact... ek bhi nhi hai ya tha... except for me...

K: itna confidence khud pe accha nhi hota... u never know... ( turning her face sideways subduing a smile )

R: yeh mera khud pe confidence nhi hai.. yeh mera tumpe confidence hai ki jot um mere liye feel karti ho uska even ( showing a pinch ) itna sa bhi tum kisi ke liye feel nhi karti thi... "The strong Kriya Ghai" ke peeche yeh jo sweet si Kriya Ghai i mean baatcutter ha na... use sirf main hi jaanta hun and baaki log toh sirf isse jaanne ka keval khwab hi dekhta hai... ( seeing kriya gaping insely at him ) plus tumhare saath mere alava koi itne dinon tak put up bhi nhi kar sakta ( turns sideways smiling and kriya puches him in his chest )

K: haan haan theek hai zyada udo mat... vaise bhi aapki life mein bhi sirf main hun one and only u know... Baakiyon ka toh comparison hi nhi hai mujhse.. ( shows fake anger and turns her face away )

R: accha... tabhi toh aaj kahin itni aag lagi thi ki even fire-brigade bhi bujha nhi paati uss aag ko...

K: Kaun jal rha tha haan...

R: Koi nhi... haan...

K: Nhi toh... main... plz noways...

R: tum nhi jal rhi thi???? ( kriya just nods her head) okay so theek hai toh pata hai baatcutter kal ke liye mujhe ek party mein invite kiya hai... u know woh ek celebration hai kisi ne beauty paegent jeeta tha... she is my friend... and uski baaki dost bhi aa rhi hai... tum chalna chahogi??? U'll find many friends there...

K: ( irritatedly and angrily ) Khabardaar Rey agar aap kahin bhi gaye toh... Agar aap kisi ke paas bhi gaye na toh mujhse bura koi nhi hoga...

R: Tumse bura... Koi hain... well mujhe toh nhi lagta... ( and starts laughing )

K: Reyyy... ( and she starts beating him )

R: accha... baba... plzz...plz... na... am sorry...

K: nhi... nhi... main buri hun na... main batati hun main kitni buri hun...

R: i am sorry na... main toh bas mazak kar rha tha... ( holding ears) am sorry!!!!!!

Kria just irritatingly turns towards him but starts smiling on seeing his cute face...

K: awww... aap aise cute faces banaoge na toh main toh gussa hi nhi ho paungi...

R: and main chahta bhi nhi hun ki tum gussa ho... ( and pecks her forehead )

K: Theek hai theek hai... chalo now go and change...

R: just a sec Kriya ek chhoti si prob hai.. main bina kapdon ke change kaise karunga unless u r thinking... (winks)

K: Rey zyada udiye mat.. Have patience...

She goes inside and brings a T-shirt and a 3/4th

K: yeh lijiye... ( Rey tries to speak) and isse phele aap kuch soche main bata dun.. yeh meri hain.. actually mujhe iss T-shirt bahut pasand aa gayi thi so maine mom se zidd kar ke li thi... So now put an end to all ur fantasies and go and change...

R: par u know main keh rha tha ki...

Kriya just literally pushes him into another room and says.. jayiye...

Rey then comes out after changing and flops on the couch comfortably with his legs on the couch thinking about the night. He was having a smile plastered on his face. He then realises that he got the perfect opportunity to satisfy the queries that had been eating him from a long time. What.. Why.. How.. All these questions were unanswered and he knew he had to get those answers today. Kriya then comes out of changing wearing a shorts and a tee.. Rey just sees her from top to bottom..

R: Impresssive... ( winks )

K: I know... after all yahi toh hai the K-effect...

R: ( coming to her and holding her by her waist) U know baakiyon ka mujhe pata nhi leki this K-effect always works for me...

Suddenly then lights goes off. Kria hugs Rey instantly scraed. Rey just caress her head soothingly...

R: Its okay Kriya.. Kuch nhi hoga... Relax... Main hun na...

K: Rey mujhe andhere se darr lagta hai bahut...

R: Kriya yeh andhera tumhara kuch nhi bigad sakta.. I am there na... Chalo ab saari candles jalate hain and fireplace bhi varna hum log thand ke mare upar pahuch jayenge..

They walk upto the table where the candles were placed. Rey lights up a candle. He then observes that including there were odd number of candles left. He thinks of something to remove Kria's attention from the fits she was receiving due to the sudden darknes. Rey starts moving towards the fireplace to light it up. Kria also clings to him and walks with him. He then lights the fireplace. He then goes back to the table and keeps the burning candle there. There was a dim light due to the fireplace in one part of the house while the other part was dark. He then divides the candle in two stacks leaving one aside. Kria is confused as to what was Rey upto. He then turns towards Kria ...

R: Baatcutter lets race. Jo sabse pehle apne hisse ki candle jala ke iss single candle ko jalaega woh jeetega.

K: Rey lekin yahan itna andhera hain and mujhe darr lagta hai...

R: Uffo... baatcutter. Relax tum uss side ke liye candles jalana and main iss side ki ( shows her the side which was dimly illuminated due to fireplace light )

K: Yeh kya bacchon jaisa khel laga ke rakh hai...

R: Baatcutter plz na...

K: Noways Rey ...

R: Kyun darr lag rha hai ki tum haar jaogi and main jeet jaunga... And vaise bhi tumhare side andhera bhi nhi hai so aisa nhi hai ki main tumpe advantage le rha hun.. Lagta hai "The Kriya Ghai" challenges se darne lagi hai especially haar se...

K: Aisa kuch nhi hai... chalo chalte hai...

They place the last candle on the table near the couch and then start lighting the candles. Both of them finish at the same tme and rush to the last candle only to have en eyelock. They both get lost in each other but are brought back to the earth as the wax melting from both of the candles fall on their hands. They both jerk away suddenly and then looks at each other and starts laughing. Both of them bring their candle's wick together and lights the last candle. They then keep the candles on their places and come in the middle near the couch. They look around the house. It was beautifully lit. Neither a strong glare nor too dim just perfect.

K: Its beautiful... ( turns towards Rey ) Thank u Rey...

R: Thanks kis liye...

K: For everything ... Just everything... Jaise yeh room perfect lagne laga na vaise hi meri life bhi perfect hai.. just boz of u. U r the sole reason for it.

R: ( puts his finger on her lip) U r totally wrong baatcutter... ( Kriya is confused) Iss room ko kisi aur angle se dekhogi toh yeh itna accha nhi lagega.. But from this place jahan hum khade hain jahan humne saath mein candle jalayi yahan se it looks perfect... Vaise hi baatcutter tumhari life i mean hamari life humein perfect issliye hai kyunki hum donon saath hai. If this hadn't been the case toh humari life vaisi hi hoti jaisa yeh room dikh rha tha when fireplace was lit.. u know one side dark and other side dimly lit.

By the end of his saying he slightly turned pensive. Kriya wanted to ask the meaning of the last line but seeing his lost face she decided otherwise. She shook him out of his reverie.

K: Rey... U okay...

R: Hmmm...

K: Kya huya Rey... aap aise achanak se ...

R: Nothing.. Chalo na thodi der baithte hain. Kitne din ho gaye saath mein time spend huye...

K: Lekin itni raat ho gayi... Humein so jaana chahiye...

R: Baatcutter plzzz...

K: Okay...

Rey just go and flops on the couch half sitting half lying position. Kriya oes to sit on another but he grabs her hand and jerks her towards himself such that she is half on the couch and half on him.

R: Tum kahan jar hi thi...

K: Main toh baithne jar hi thi...

R: Nhi tum yahin pe aise hi mere saath baithogi. No arguments on that ( sternly as Kriya was abt to argue )

K: okay...

R: Thats like a good girl. (hugging her)

A silence prevailed inside the room except for a low rambling due to the storm outside. Kriya just was enjoying the moment, the peace, the serenity of the moment and the bliss of being in her love's arms. Rey on the other hand was in a deep thought thinking of how to strike up the conversation and get the answer he needed to. Kriya turned and looked at his face which looked like he was contemplating something. Uneasiness was evident on the creases of hi face. She just raised her hand and slightly and traced thoses patterns slightly thru her finger which removed it mostly not completely. She cudn't fathom y he was behaving that way. Rey all the while was looking up at the ceiling...

K: Rey kya huya... aap aise kyun baithe ho...

R: Kriya tum aise kar sakti ho????

Kriya was taken aback by the question. She knew that wud be raised one day but she didn't wanna face it. She had bee feeling guilty for a long time for that. She started..

K: Rey woh i am sorry... i know.. mujhe aapke saa... ( mumbling away )

But Rey cuts in middle.

R: Baatcutter tum mujhse itna pyaar kaise kar sakti ho...

Kriya was taken aback. She didn't see that coming.

K: kya matlab????

R: ( looks at her ) mera matlab hai tum mujhse itna pyaar kaise karti ho ki... Tum itni care kaise kar sakti ho meri... Tumse toh chhota sa jhooth bhi nhi bolte banta that oh fir how did u pull off ki tum itna bada jhuth bol pao...

K: Rey yeh sab aap kya keh rhe ho... yeh kaisa sawal hai...

R: Baatcutter yahi sahi sawal hai... Tum itni acchi kaise ho sakti ho... How can u baatcutter? Pata ha i think so i don't deserve u... Seriously...

K: Yes u r right Rey. U don't deserve me.. Aap mujhse kisi aur behtar insaan ko deserve karte ho jo aapke saath humesha rhe.. Har kadam pe and kabhi bhi aapko chod ke na jaye and aapki aakhon mein kabhi bhi aansun na aane de...

By the end she had tears in the eyes. Rey just looked at her face who was suddenly guilt filled. He just removed the layer forming.

R: ( cupping her face sideways ) I don't care main kise deserve karta hun. Mujhe sirf yeh pata hai ki main tumhe chahta hun and tumhare saath hi rehna chahta hun... har kadam pe...

K: ( snuggling closer ) I love u Rey...

R: I love u too...

A silence prevails while Rey tries to frame up what he wanted to ask her. He didn't want to bring any tears in her eyes.

R: Baatcutter mere ek sawal ka sach-2 jawab dogi...

K: Yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai...

R: Tumne yeh kaise kar liya tha. Tumne itni himmat kaise jutayi thi...

K: Matlab...

R: I mean ki tum aise bhi ja sakti thi par tum gayi.. tumne woh sab kaha ki main aage badh sakun. Tumne kbhi apne bare mein nhi socha kya. Matlab tumhe kitna dard huya hoga na uss samay jabki tumhari koi galti bhi nhi thi. On the contrary meri hi fault thi ki tum uss samay aisi position mein meri vajah se hi aayi thi.

K: Aap aisa kyun keh rhe ho.. Mom ko dance kbhi bhi pasand nhi tha na...

R: Mera matlab hai ki tumhe chose karna pada tha... Agar maine mom pe pehle hi accha impression diya hota na toh aaj tumhe utna nhi sehna padta. Tumhe utna dukh nhi hota... I am sorry Kriya...

K: Aap sorry kyun keh rhe ho... Its okay... Woh purani baat hai...

R: No its not... I have seen it and read it...

K: Rey kya keh rhe ho... ( trying to calm him ) Rey mujhe tab tak nhi pata tha ki main aapse pyaar karne lagi thi.. Maine aaj hi realise kiya jab maine wahan aapko party mein dekha

R: Jhuth hai Kriya... Plz Kriya aur nhi... Kyun mujhe khush dekhne ke liye baar-2 jhuth bolti rehti ho... Maine tumhara letter pada tha and uss din tumhe lake ke paas dekha tha

K: Kaunsa letter???

R: woh letter jo tumne likha tha par kbhi diya nhi.. Tumhare Universeji ne use college ke files ke thru pahucha diya tha mere paas...

K: Sorry Rey aapse jhuth bolne ke liye... But main aapko hurt nhi karna chahti thi.. it was just that.. Ab bhul bhi jayiye na ...

R: ( turns his face towards her and raises his voice) Main nhi bhul sakta Kriya ki tumhe meri vajah se itna sab sehna pada. Main yeh nhi bhul sakta ki tumhari koi galti na hone ke kaaran tumhe itne pains huye... Main vahan apne akelepan pe ro rha tha ... tumhe hate karne ki koshish kar rha tha yeh sochke ki tumne mujhse kbhi pyaar nhi kiya... ki tum mere liye vaisa feel nhi karti jaisa main karta hun... Main apne dukh ko sambhalne mein laga huya tha and maine kbhi yeh realize nhi kiya ki tumhara kya haal ho rha hoga.. Maine bas yeh soch liya ki tumne jo kaha vahi sach hai... maine kbhi aur jaanna hi nhi chaha... Main hamesha kehta ki main tumhe sad nhi dekh sakta lekin tumhari sadness ka kaaran main tha yeh main kaise bhul jaaun.. Jab maine tumhara woh letter padha tab mujhe laga ki tum mujhse itna pyaar karti ho jo baat mujhe khud hi samajh jaani chahiye thi... Uss din jab tumhe lake pe dekha toh pata hai toh pata hai mujhe laga ki tum meri batcutter ho hi nhi... Uss din mujhe pata chala ki mera pyaar sirf kehne ke liye tha jabki tumhara pyaar saccha tha... Tumne itna akele kaise sehen kar liya?? Y do u love me so much daamit...??? Main nhi dekh sakta ki tumhe meri vajah se koi problem ho... Tumne ek aisi life ko gale laga liya jo sirf kehne ko ife thi kyuni usmein jaan thi but aur kuch bhi nhi tha...

Rey released all his pent up frustration that had beenbuilt in him from the day he had read the letter. He wasn't able to forgive himself and he didn't want her to forgive him so easily for not trusting their love. A tear skipped through hi eye.

K: ( cupping his face ) Main aapko iss cheez ke liye hi pyaar karti ho...

R: kya???

K: Haan... Aap ne pucha na ki main aapko itna pyaar kaise kar sakti hun. Main issilye aapko itna pyaar karti hun kyunki aap mere liye itna sochte ho. Aap mujhe hurt nhi dekh sakte. ( takes a deep breath ) and rhi baat kaun zyada pyaar karta hai so main aapko bata dun ki aap mujhse bhi utna hi pyaar karte ho jitna ki main.. Circumstances aise the ki aapko aisa lag rha hai ki main aap se zyada pyaar karti hun and aapka pyaar kuch bhi nhi.. Par sach yeh hai ki aapka pyaar mere liye sab kuch hai... U by my side is all that i wish for...

R: Par baatcutter yahi sach hai... I don't deserve u...

K: Just STOP IT REY!!!! Aap ko pata hai aapki yeh baatein mujhe kitna hurt kar rhi hai... ( pauses.. takes a deep breath ) Okay Rey... Bas ek cheez ka jawab do.. Agar aap meri jagah hote toh aap kya karte????

R: Yeh kaisa sawal hai...

K: yahi sahi sawal hai.. Rey agar main uss din main apne friends ko chose na karke aapko chose karti toh kya aap ke dil mein jo mere liye feelings hai kya woh vaisi ki vaisi rehti kya... Kya humare beech mein vaise ka vaisa sab rehta kya...

R: ( thinks for a while ) Main agar tumhari jagah hota toh main bhi vahi karta kyunki main jaanta hun ki agar main apne friends ko ditch karta toh tum mujh pe kbhi bhi vishvaas nhi karti... lekin Kriya...

K: lekin kya Rey...

R: How did u know ki yeh jo tumne kiya woh sahi tha... Matlab mujhe bhi dard ho rha tha and tumhe bhi...

K: Rey i don't know ki jo maine kiya woh sahi tha ya nhi.. Main sirf itna jaanti thi uss samay ki aapki life mein meri vajah se koi bhut badi problem nhi aaye... I just wanted ki aap aage badho.. Mujhe hate hi kyun na karte ho lekin aap aage badho. Uss raat mujhe apne dance chodne ke bare mein maine socha bhi nhi. All that mattered was u. Mujhe sirf yahi chahiye tha ki kabhi bhi aapko meri vajah se apni life ke saath samjhauta na karna pade. Aap mujhe hate karte lekin usi ke naate aap aage to badhte. And i was more than happy agar aap aage badhte..

R: And tum...

K: Mujhe nhi pata... Maine socha nhi tha itna... Mere saamne sirf aap the uss samay...

R ( pauses ) : I love u baatcutter.. U r the bestest person i can ever have and i am fortunate to have u in my life.

K: Hmmm...

They were sitting there thinking about the conversation they just had. Every figment of their existence was in ecstacy thinking of the affection the other person had for them... But an uneasiness was still existing in Rey. But he ignored it.

R: Ek cheez puchun...

K: Haan.. lekin fir se woh sab nhi haan... maine kaha na...

But rey cut her in middle.

R: chup bilkul chup.. Main kuch aur puch rha hun. Well actually baatcutter maine tumhare letter mein toh padh liya lekin i wanted to ask ki tumhe mujhse pyaar kab huya...

K : ( Blushing ) Rey... woh...

R: bolona baatcutter.. mujhe tumhare muh se sunna hai...

K: Okay... Mujhe nhi pata ki mujhe aapse kab pyaar huya.. Lekin RDX sir ki party ke baad se mujhe samajh aa gaya tha ki aap mere liye har ladke ki tarah nhi ho.. Mere dil mein aapke liye feelings hain...

R: Haan pata hai... Mujhe kitna wait karvaya tha tumne... sahi mein...

Kriya gives a stern look and rey shuts up instantly.

K: Aur aap Rey????

R: Jab tumhe pehli baar dekha tha... ( Kriya has an open mouth. He closes it ) Aise kya dekh rhi ho. Haan mujhe tumse dekhte hi pyaar ho gaya tha. Tumhara attitude, tumhari eyes, usmein woh twinkling look, the determination sabkuch jeetne ka... In short everything. And fir tum college aayi.. I cudn't believe my luck pata hai.. Main tumhe uss mulakaat ke baad bhul hi nhi paya tha and tumhe vahan dekh ke itna khush huya ki kya bataun... Lekin tum hamesha mujhe galat hi saajhti thi.. ( pout )

K: awww Rey i am sorry... ( holding ears)

R: Its okay... Pata hai fir mujhe hamesha yahi lagta ki kaise main tumhari madad karun.. Kaise bhi bas main tumhari madad karna chahta tha. I didn't even know y pata hai?? Maine kbhi bhi aisa feel nhi kiya tha. Main hamesha tumhare saath time spend karna chahta lekin tum hamesha mujhe galat hi samjhti. ( rolling eyes in mock annoyance while Kriya pouts. Rey smiles) Tumhari window tak chadna, tumhari smile mein kho jaana, tumhe stare karna... sab kuch mere saath pehli baar ho rha tha...

K: So sweet of u rey.. lekin aapko 2 baar window se aane ki kya zarurat thi.. Lag jaati toh.

R: 2 baar hi 3 baar ...

K: 3 baar kaise???? Aap toh 2 baar hi aaye ho...

R: ( sheepishly ) woh actually starting mein jab tum team bana rhi thi toh main tumhari help karna chahta tha... And mujhe tumhe dekhne ka mann tha issliye aa gaya... Tumhe kya lagta hai woh chit tumpe hava mein aise hi koi bhi fekega...

K: Toh aapne meri team banana mein itni madad ki and main aapko hamesha hi sunati rehti thi... Main bhut buri hun...

R: Nopes tum mujhe hamesha se aisi hi pasand thi. U know tumhara yeh headstrong nature and determination to face anything those were the things i loved abt u apart from ur smile, cutness, innocence...

K: Rey sach-2 bataiega.. Main aapse itna rudely behave karti thi fir bhi aap mujhe itna kaise pasand kar lete the... Matlab aap mujhe hate kyun nhi karte the. Koi aur hota toh pata nhi kitna hate karta mujhe...

R: Well to be true ki maine tumhe kabhi hate nhi kiya toh yeh galat hoga. Uss rose day ke incident ke baad se mujhe hamesha lagta tha ki main tumhe puri tarah se crush kar dun. Mera ego hurt huya tha uss samay. Main apne aap ko curse karta ki main tumse itna frank huya and issi vajah se main tumhe college hunk "The Reyaansh Singhania" se milvana chahta tha. Lekin par uske aage jo follow huya maine vaisa kbhi bhi nhi socha tha. Yeh sach tha ki main tumhe dukh pahuchana tha and mujhe laga ki use tumhe meri importance realize hogi lekin main... how do i say it... main tumhe aise hurt karna chahta tha kit um meri importance realize karo... woh canteen wale incident ke baad jab maine tumhe rote huye dekha toh mujhe apne aap ko maarne mann kiya kyunki jo bhi ho voh sab nhi hona chahiye tha. Maine kbhi aisa socha hi nhi tha ki vaisa kuch ho jaega. Pata hai maine apne gusse ko shaant karne ke liye uss ladke ko bhut maara tha ( kriya shocked ) and jab ghar aaya toh Swayam se baat ki and i accepted then ki mujhe tumhari har chhoti se chhoti baat ka fark padta hai. Jo main tumse nafrat karne ka dikhava kar rha thaw oh sab ke liye sach tha ek samay ke liye maine bhi sach maan liya tha Swayam ki bhi baat taal di lekin uss din i realised the truth...

Rey said it all in 1 go. He was feeling so relieved. He always wanted to share all his feelings with her. Wanter her to know the minutest detail of his life and he did that.

K: Thanks Rey ... Mere liye uss ladke ko maarne ke liye ( kria winks and they start laughing ). But Swayam ko iss sab ke bare mein pata hai...

R: Haan woh jaanta hai ki main tumhare liye kya feel karta hun and usi ne mujhe bhut baar suggestion diye jab main hamesha dil ko leke confused rehta tha. And jab karan sir ne pyaar ke symptoms batay then i realised ki that I was in love...

K: rey bas ek cheez bataenge. Abhi jab hum candle game khel ke baithe toh aap itne philosophical kyun ho gaye the hamari lives ke bare mein.

R: Well it was just that ki maine aaj yeh realise kar liya ki meri life mein difference kya hota agar tum nhi hoti toh. Jaise yeh karma dim tha vaise hi mera dil bhi tha. Ek jagah andhera tha and baaki jagah halki si roshni lekin jaise hi tum aayi yeh ekdum vaisa ho gaya jaisa yeh karma huya jab humne saari candles jala di thi...

Kria then suddenly gets up. Rey gets startled as he was in a deep thought. Kriya then starts moving toward the kitchen. Rey also follows her and calls her from behind.

R: Baatcutter kahan jar hi ho...

K: Coffee lane...

R: Coffee woh bhi abhi...

K: Abhi hi toh mazaa... U know aise thand mein garam-2 coffee peene ka mazaa hi kuch aur hota hai.

Kitchen's lights were back. She just goes inside the kitchen for preparing the coffee. Rey meanwhile moves to switch on the lights of the main hall but that phase wasn't back. He was standing near the gallery. He then just admires the night. It was still snowing lightly. The snow had covered the plants and snowflakes were hanging down the leaves. Due to the moonlight it was shining beautifully. It was such a heavenly scene for Rey to watch. Kriya then just comes near him and stands and puts her head on his shoulder.

K: Kya dekh rhe ho...

R: Kitna pyaara lag rha hai na bahar...

K: (staring him) Hmmm...

Rey then just turns around and then they realize their faces are so close. They had been this close b4 but tonight it felt something different to both of them. It was like the proximity was sending sparks and they had an urge to pull away but at the same time just stand there like that. Kriya on seeing Rey's gaze on her just lowered her lashes. It was a beautiful set-up. The dim light due to the candles flickering and the moonlight from outside marking their silhouettes. Rey saw her face which had a different glow which he cudn't fathom was inner feelings of her emanating outside due to their proximity after confession or due to the dim light spread over them.

Rey could feel the adrenaline rush through him. He felt a jolt of electricity passing though him. He wanted to hold back the urge of closing the distance and wait for her response but he didn't know that when his thoughts became action and soon he found himself closing the distance and kissing her. He settled his hands around her waist and jerked her forward such that her hands rested on his chestand he deepened the kiss. He could feel the essence of her sweetness and he felt it the most natural thing to do.

( Kriya's feeling over the proximity: )

Kriya just lowered her lashes on seeing his intense gaze. She felt her cheeks flush. She had never experienced this before. They had been closer before but never did she feel like this. She felts emotions roaring inside her like a raging storm in the sea. Before she could fathom any reason he felt his lips upon her. She was shocked. But shocked wasn't the correct word to describe what she felt. She went numb for the time. When he pulled her her hands rested on his broad chest. She didn't know how to respond. With another contact she felt another storm raising inside her different in the intensity from the other. If the other storm could cause some damage in an area then this storm could shake the area.

Rey after nibbling on her lips for some time started returning to the senses. As mind took control over him he realised that Kriya hadn't responded. He felt guilty as he should have asked for her approval. He broke the kiss but still his lips were touching her lips.

Kriya didn't know how to react but then she felt like he was withdrawing off. As soon as he stopped kissing she realised the emotions that had been raging inside her. It was of pure desire. She knew as he stopped kissing that she never wanted him to stop. But he was withdrawing so she captured his lips this time.

Rey was taken aback by the sudden reaction of Kriya. He hadn't dreamt of this. As soon as she took his lips into hers he felt the heat and passion radiating.

Kriya moved her hands from his chest slowly around his neck. Rey felt the tngling sensation as she slid her hands arnd his neck. This was the last straw. He took hold og her strongly then ever moving her hands arnd her waist feeling her petite feminine figure savouring the moment. He nudged open her mouth and he slid his tongue inside her and she also did the same. Their tongues were playing inside while their hands were strengthening their hold on the other as if clinging for their dear life. They felt their desires and passion reach to their peaks. This was the moment for them.

They slowly parted as they were brought back to the real world by the sound of the timer set in the kitchen for the coffee. They looked at each other's flushed faces. Both of them had another glow radiating out of them. They still were in each other's embrace.

K: I love u Rey. Thank u so much for coming in my life and making it so beautiful.

R: I love u too. U truly are the person i cud ever imagne to end up with.

K: Rey ... ( coming closer ) agli baar se beech mein plz mat chodana... ( winks while Rey is left startled ). I trust u more than myself...

Kriya left for the kitchen meaning the last line all thorugh her heart not waiting for Rey's response. Meanwhile Rey just smiled thinking abt her reaction and happy with the turn of events that took that day.


Sorry for the late update.

Hope u enjoyed it... For pms just add me to buddylist

Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago
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Dis was simply FABULOUS...!!!

Awesum...!!!

Luvd it 2 d core...

D way Rey finally clarified everything was so damn sweet...

M speechless...

Seriously...

Luvd it 2 d core...

N snighda Di...

Thanx a lot 4 d pm...
Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago
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Awsm update dear!

Luved it to the core

Specially kriyaansh scenes! waise mostly sirf kriyaansh scenes hi the 😆

Thanx for the pm snigdha di!
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕

im super confused rey ke thouts ko lekar

'i wish i cud ' iska kya matlab tha ??😕😕

okay coming back.. shit shit their kisss gosh!!!!!!!!! me dead 🤢🤢🤢 damn tat was HOT!!

my face is flushed!! my aunty and cousin r constantly glarin at me thinking wat im doing in lappy 😆😆😆 unke gande dimag ki batti jal gayi hogi 🤣🤣

and all those scenes. of candles.. dim side dark side.. those thoughts.. everythn was perfectly described! im still confused of rey;s feelings..


hahaha i knew rey kria ke gar pe hi rukega!! its a matter of fact !! hehehehe tu thodi na hum tum ek gar mei band ho sequence chodti 🤣🤣

awww loved it all..!!! mind blasting update!!

i knw next update agla janam mei milega lik dis one ek janam toh tune le hi liya update karne mei 🤢

jaldi update karo 😳
Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Unress**

P.S-Dekho aaj hi unress kr ri hun Vaishu...
Treat ready rakhna...

Well i culdn't control my fingers to type this comment specially abt the kriyaansh scenes...


Hayyyeee...is the only word coming outta my mouth aftr reading ur splendid work yaar !!!


Am left speechless yaar...by ur commendable writing skills..

You are such a natural and Prolific writer dearie...

Extra-amazingly Fantastico !!!!

I really loved this part from the extremest core...


This is simply Wowwwie !!!
No comparisons against this chapter !!!

So sweet yet bitter sometimes...but i T-totally adore ur writing skills Vaishu darl !!!!

Am sooo touched by ur piece of writings ...especially aftr this rocking chappy !!!

Each and every thing u mentioned was utterly Mindblowing...
such a strong concept behind this chapter...

Simply Great...Wonderful...Magnificent...Superb...Elegant...and wat not is coming in my mind...

But at last i wanna say that this was truely "megical" chapter i've ever read till date of kriyaansh !!!!!


So,HATS OFF to you darl...

Aise hi dhamakedar updates dete rhena...
We love you Loadds !!!!
Muaaahhh :-*

Edited by mEgical_arsha - 13 years ago

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