Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
I love dis title - A Walk To Remember. I know me too
As usual u r too good in expressing their feelings. Thanks for that.. i blabber a lot isi ka asar hai
Love each n every word of d updt. Love u for that
I thot Smriti wil become Kabab mein Haddi but I love her in dis FF. I know y u like her😛
Smriti n Rey bonding is really gud.
Kriya's reaction wen she thot rey was talking to his mom was worth-reading.
Kriya was too gud she stiffened wen 's she thot of rey's mom.
Wen Rey gave her d cell to speak she was stammering...i loved dis action of her.
"mom, grans dekho nay eh mujhe kuch bolne hi nhi de rhi hai", dis is my fav line.
Poor Kriya she really needed some break to understand wat was happening.
Esp. loved her line wen she told," universeji, kya hai yeh..ab mujhe apni mom ki awaaz sunyi de rahi hai".
Smriti n granny were on d line wen dey were fighting too.Smriti was enjoying it.
Both r under smriti's control...how they stood erect was really gud.
Smriti in Grans house n Kriyaansh alone...wow!!!
Kriya's shock was expected...it was obvious, how can she even imagine dat smriti n rey got so well within few days.
Well i know very well. Actually Cvs ne toh mom-daughter relation ka kachra kar diya the.. and i wanted the relation to be cherished and issliye these little interactions.. i hope u like it..
Kriya walking along d way without knowing where to go n rey following her was awesome."
"Love u too (pauses) mom...", dis was a very good line among d whole updt.
U r too good vaishu at d lines..waiting soon for u to write romance too..
I wont leave you until u giv a try.pata hai yaar.. am trying my level best.. but romance is so... i don't know what to say
Kriya is so cute she agreed wid d fact dat she is safe wen she is wid rey. well when rey s there y fear
Loved d way rey wanted to keep his trust forever by her mom n doesnt want to break it once more like before. thats totally rey
Kriya enjoying d snow was very fascinating part, the way she was swaying around n rey admiring her leaning on was really very gud..luvd it. i know i love snow and it has a magical feeling..
Gazebo was very beautiful n d garden too...song sequence!!!
Song Sequence
Finally I heard d song.
It was so...gud. i too loved it.. credits go to sneha ( taylenaloverx)
I liked all d stanzas but i loved few lyrics n d meanings.
There I was again tonight, forcing laughter, faking smiles
Same old, tired place lonely place
Kriya thinks of the time how just the day before till the start of the party she was behaving before she saw Rey.. How she had been plastering a smile on her face while she was broken to shatters inside...
********These is my fav. phrase, u explained dem really well...esp where you said she was plastering a smile while was broken inside********
i love it boz it just sways us into the mood yaar so very well
This was the very first page, not where the storyline ends
My thoughts will echo your name until I see you again
These are the words I held back as I was leaving too soon
I was enchanted to meet you
Kriya then comes close and Rey turns her around at the same place.. She keeps her hand on his shoulders and looks straight into his eyes as she mouths the words and she remembers how she broke him the pre-valentine's day. She remembers the days just after those when those word echoed in her ears all the time and how she cursed herself for saying it and then she remembers tonight how they finally said those words which were always held by them till then. Rey understands what was going in her mind. A drop of tear falls from her eyes and she rests her head on his chest and Rey also assured her patting her head that it wasn't the end... Both of them then come to the same place where they started off their dance.
*************The lyrics had a very depth u protrayed it well, rey comforting her while she remembered d day she had broken him, n d way he understood wat she felt without d words, dis easily showed their true love for each other...U r awesome in dis!!I dint expect dis..all d lyrics were exactly matching up wid d story.***************
these are my favourite lines boz they bring out the fear that lies within us abt the perfect stry being a dream
I loved d whole sequence but d above too was really close to my heart.
U rocked Vaishu...
Fantabulous updt..
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