ArShA One Shot walk 2 remember!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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A Walk To remember(ArSha OS)

i ws gng down the street lost in my deep thots ov her.she ws gng 2 far away 4m me n I cudnt help it.neithr cud I stop it nor cn I let her go.we both knew widout even sayng tat we both love each other.4 expressing ourselves 2 each other we never needed any wrds.we understood each other more than we even understood ourselves.

I ws feeling so low n gloomy beyond even ma imaginations.thnkng a life widout her ws like living widout air.she came 2 my life like a gush ov fresh air n became my oxygen.i ws fighting wid myself n my feelings forcing myself 2 adapt 2 the life widout her.i dint knw hw I cn bt I had 2 4 myself,4 US!!

It ws getting dark.cool breeze ws blowing bt thr ws fire burning inside my heart n tat ws burning my whole body.i ws cnsdred as a cool dude n a handsome hunk by my frnds who thot I seldom care abt grls n all n my looks were inherited.being 4m an army background I ws cnsdrd tough 4m inside bt I had a tender heart.they never knew tat my 1st crush took me more than 8 yrs 2 recover 4m tat shock state.still I ws nt able 2 shov it off completely unless she came 2 my life n changed it altogether.the smile tat I had 4gotten,she brought bck.she made me feel lyf z beautiful n I kept living in the wrld built by her.

Yes,she ws my lyf bt I dnt wanna b selfish.so I had 2 let her go!n if she ws destined 2 b mine,she ll come bck 2 me n these distances ll make us more fonder ov each other.as I ws moving down the street,a strong wind blew wich reminded me ov her.i looked up the sky n saw an airplane gng.yes it ws her gng 2 NY!shakti mohan Sharma gng 2 persue her dreams.i waved at the plane like a 2 yr old kid n said"good luck shaks!i ll miss u a lot.come bck soon.i love u so much n I ll wait 4 u"n passed a flying kiss 2 the plane!!!

Tat ws the most beautiful walk ov my life!!

THE END

Sorry readers if u dnt like it.i tried 2 write differently n u must hav read many happy endings n sad endings.so 2 b off the routine I made it imple n straight wid a mixed ending.hope u like it.plx hit the like button if u do n if u dnt plx plx at least cmnt n tell me u dint so I shud refrain 4m writing such thngs again!!

KriYaansh ff:dil se rey
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved d way u expressed amar's feelings for her..


I connected to it so easily n it seemed like so natural...


Thank you shonu for dis OS..


It was amazing...u portrayed d feelings very well..


10/10 from my side for dis..👍🏼


Short n Cute...loved it to d core!!


N luv u shonu for dis..

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome totally different writing...i loved it very much
awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭😭😭
That was soo sad 😔
U potrayed his emotions soo well 👍🏼
Nice os...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...
the feeling and emotions of amar..you portrayed it so well..
though i am crying after reading...😭
but loved it very much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dat was a wonderfull os
his feelings wer portrayed soo well
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was a wonderful OS Tina.
Loved it very much.
It was cute and wonderful one.
Simple yet the emotions wetre high.
Thanks for pm.


Do continue writing.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully potrayed amar's feelings...
Truly said if destiny wants dey will b 2gethr...hope it ws true...
Awesome OS...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved d way u expressed amar's feelings for her..


I connected to it so easily n it seemed like so natural...


Thank you shonu for dis OS..


It was amazing...u portrayed d feelings very well..


10/10 from my side for dis..👍🏼


Short n Cute...loved it to d core!!


N luv u shonu for dis..

thnks a lot meow 4 liking it.tat z dedicated 2 u n ArSha!!
i 4got 2 mention it here.lemme d it nw..
love u 2 meow
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Posted: 13 years ago
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short yet beautiful...simple,unique and cute...enticing portrayal of amar's feelings...nyc 1...happy arsha week...

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