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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
deetha plz update
plz plz plz plz plz pzl
update update update
plz update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
deetha dhoka...

normally when u write index updated there's an update...

lekin aisa nhi huya...

yeh toh sarasar dhoka tha...

dil tod diya tune yaar...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

deetha dhoka...

normally when u write index updated there's an update...

lekin aisa nhi huya...

yeh toh sarasar dhoka tha...

dil tod diya tune yaar...




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aaj pakka milega...pakka wala...par shayad late hosakta hai ...so wait karo...aaj pakka wala update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: deetha


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aaj pakka milega...pakka wala...par shayad late hosakta hai ...so wait karo...aaj pakka wala update😃


really?? glad u thought of updating this 😆 just joking waiting for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
koun koun waiting for baatcutter?????? i know many are there...so sab ki naam likhne lagungi toh tym khatam hojaye...ri8 nah...i think im not thinking much...i hope i have many readerss...guys i really cant believe the cmnt and compliments ppl are giving to me...gosh kya kya kehte ho tum log...kuch kehte hai professional writer banjao...kuch kehte hai book banake bheju...kuch toh seedha kehte hai ki mai d3 ki writer hojau...really????????gosh pata nahi aapko kaisa lag raha hai par im on 900000000000000000000000000th cloud now...and all this just because of arsha...they make me love them more and thus i get very connected and writings are the output...I JUST LOVE ARSHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ab aapko poora update green mei hi milega...coz green symbolises ARSHA!!!!!! gosh arsha ...uss naam suntehi kho jaati hun...par ab nahi nahi toh update koun dega????

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guys im giving some pics...imagine ranvijays house...



rey finally got ready and rushed down just to see the lively house after 3 weeks...kriya just made the kheer and was not to do the rest as she was still week ...but the sisters never sit quite...the were running all over the house chasing each other...he came down smiling seeing them playing lyk kids...

"these two are just lovable"rey said but was surprised and confused...another voice???

he looked side...he found swayam too looking at him...they both laughed...

kyun na ho...they were the two they love the most and that too common ...one love of life and one best friend forever...for reyam they were lyk two fresh tulip( hehe..i love tulips) buds...they always wanted to protect them from everything...

"aakhir ye donon aise bhaag kyun rahi hai???"swayam asked...rey just shrugged...

they went down and found preeti and priya gng out...

"mom kaha jaa rahe ho???? breakfast nahi kiya???"swayam asked...

"humne karliya ...tumdono apne handsome looks mei itna immersed the ki indonon ne hame khanekeliye kehdiya..."priya said...

"aur haan rey suno...papa log office gaye andd humdonon ek meet keliye jaa rahe hai...tum donon jaldi khao aur indonon ko bhi khane keliye kehdena...nahi toh aise hi khelte rahenge..." preeti said and both left...

"ye donon aise khel kyun rahe hai???"rey asked...

sw: unhi se poochte hai/...

reyam went to them but was unable to talk as they were shouting and running...

k: sweetu rukh jaa...nahi toh jab haat lagegi tab toh tu gayi...

sh: ( hanging her tongue out.) pehle pakdo shona...

k: mai kehrahi hun rukh jaa...

sh: nahi ,...😛

rey somhow caught when sharon took breath...

r: kriya tum log aise kyun khel rahe ho????😕

k: khel rahe hai??? woh actually kya hai na rey bachpan mei khele nahi na saath mai isiliye...

reyam: really????? how sweet...

k: chup...donon pagal ho kya??? use mera majak udaya aur mai use peetne keliye bhaag rahi hun aur tum logon ko ye khel lag raha hai?????

reyam: ( tum hi imagine karlo unki face kitni cute si bangayi hogi)

sh: hahaha...🤣...she caught her stomach with one hand and pointed other towards them and started laughing...

k: tu has rahi hai tu rukh...

kriya againg started running and again strtd their running session...finally kriya caught sharon both fell on the couch and were fighting lyk small kids laughing...

reyam stood there heads together admiring them...

krisha were fighting continuously ...

r: kriya hame bhook lagi hai...

k: rey sorry agar haat choda na ye mujhe maar degi plzz aap khalo...

sh: haan swayam tum bhi...

.so reyam went and had the special things made 4r them...

meanwhile krisha became silent...they sat beside each other breathing hard...

sh: shona bohut aaya na...( still laughing..)

k: bohut nahi sweetu bohut bohut bohut...*phew* i loved it...
she said breathing hard...

sh: shona galti se hi sahi tune sahi kaha hum bachpan mei khela thodi...toh ab khele????

k: wow!!!!!!! grt idea...ab koun pakdega?????
* excitedly*

sh: ab tune pakda toh ab meri baari...

k: kk then strt...

she ran...sharon behind her...reyam saw this...they beat their heads...

r: yaar inhone breafst nahi kiya...

sw: haan yaar kriya ne kuch nahi khaya wo abhi bhi weak hai...

r: aur sharon bhi toh 3 hafte se kuch dhang se nahi khaya...she is week too dude...

sw: toh chalo manate hai...

r: haan...aur koi kaam hai????

both sighed and ran behind them...krisha were always telling bhook nahi bas hame khel na hai...

so reyam took each a plate and ran behind them...jo dikhe uske mooh mei ghusalo...

they both fed krisha never knowing fr whoom they are feeding...and krisha full on masti mood...

finally reyam completed their work...they got that the girls were not gonna stop so they went up...they decided they would go to office as they were not dng anything...they thought till they earn money to make a own dance insti they will work in office...krisha finally stopped when reyam came down to go ...they bid bey to their loves and bff's and left...krisha smiled and went in to again enjoy...

reyam went to office ...to deir dads company...( singhania's and shekawats companies united...)

sandy and vijay were sitting on the couch discussing somthing ...when reyam knocked and entered...

sandy: ahh!!! rey swayam kya baat hai donon in shirt and tie?????

sw: haan wo papa actually humne socha kitne din aise nakaam jaise...

r: naakaam...wat??????

sw: tu chup reh...kuch samaj mei thodi aati tumhe hindi ka...

sandy and vijay laughed...

sw: haan wo actually hum kuch kaam karna chahte hai...

r: haan dad ...ab toh hamari responsibility hai ki hum kriya aur sharon ki needs poori kare...

sw: aur hume aap pe dependent nahi rehna hai...

r: woh actually aap log galat mat samjho actually we/...

vijay: arey isme galat samaj ne wali baat kya hai??? infact hum khush hai ki hamare bete ko apni responsibilities samaj aaraha hai...

sandy: haan bhai sahi keh rahe hai...after all wo tumhari wifes hai so u have to take their responsibilities...

sw: isiliye hum apna files laaye hai...

r: aap dekh ke...

vijay: pagal ho??????? hume pata hai hamare bete kitne talented hai...

sandy: haa u remember wo jo project tha...

vijay : its still waiting 4r u both...

reyam grinned...

r: toh dad kaha pe kaam karna hai...i mean files and the other stuff abt the project...

sw: ya exactly aap hame project ki files dedijiye hum aaj padh ke kal se kaam shuru kar sakte hai kyun rey...

r: ofcourse...

sandy: woah !!!!!!!! wait...

vijay : hume pata nahi tha ki tum log itna dedicated hojaoge...waise acha hai par ye project abhi strt nahi hogi...min 1 mnth lagega strt hone mei...

sandy : isiliye hamne socha ki iss tym ko tum log waste kyun kare????kuch kar sakte hona???? ri8 bhai??

vijay nodded...reyam CONFUSED!!!!!😆

rey: dad hum kuch samjhe nahi...

vijay : samjha te hai na...actually hum ne socha ki iss ek mahine ke andar...

sandy: tum log apna honeymoon toh cmplt kar sakte hai ri8????

reyam confused ...looked at each other then it struck...wide eyes ...open mouth...YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! they jumped hugging each other ...finally realised that their parents were there...

reyam: ( back to attention) sorry...

sandy: vijay: paagal...ab jao donon...

reyam literally ran to their home ...they searched 4r krisha...they were no were...they said they were in practicing rooms...

( as they were 4 they made another reharsal hall 4r swaron...) just imagine...)

reyam went to their respective loves...


listen dis song...

i will try my best to describe the steps...style contenporary + classical at some places...( sorry guys u expect a story ri8...but bohut din hogaye kuch dance likh ke...so im giving soory )

and and and guys mujhe dance ke baare mei jyaada kuch nahi pata ...so jo dancers ...i mean im a dancer too...but if im wrong then dnt take it otherwise

listen to this song



( italics is the dance)

in the starting( music bit) she closed her face with her palms...slowly slid her left palm down her right.when her right palm reached her chin caressing her cheeks...

rey slowly leans on the door and watches her dances...(song starts)...


O re piya haye..ore piya


hugs herself slowly smiling all the way ...

O re piya haye..o re piya

slowly looks at mirror and blushes...

O re piya haye..o re piye

stretches her ri8 hand and left back leaning 4rward and left leg stretched back at her waist level

Udne laga kyon

jumps with a stretch...

man baawla re

runs and sticks to the mirror blushing...

Aaya kahan se

comes down caressing the mirror in a zig zag manner...

yeh hosla re

pushes herself back sitting on the floor with legs stretching her hands front

O re piya haye.

layed back slowly stretching her hands...

O re piya haye..

took a back flip( not eactly flip...smthing lyk streced her legs backwards and stood...) hope u got...


Tanabana tanabana


swayed side wards ...

bunti hawaa haaye bunti hawa

folded her left leg in ...lyk her left foot touching right knee and sad down and brought her hands down waving 4r ri8 .above her head...( as we do for water)


Boondein bhi to aaye nahi baaz yahan


fell down to left and looked up...slowly bent back catching her ri8 foot with ri8 hand and left hand bent above her head...( all the while a smile plastered on face...)



Sagish mein shaamil sara jahan hai
Har zare zare ki yeh iltiza hai
went on knees took one turn and with hands on hip swayed ri8 to left rythematically


O re Piya
O re Piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re Piya


imagine some streches and cartwheels...
ni re ,re re ga
ga ga ma
ma ma pa
pa ma ga re sa
sa re re sa
ga ga re
ma ma ga
pa pa ma
dha dha pa
ni ni sa sa pa

did some khatak steps with an amazing foot work( i personally love khatak footwork)

pa sa ma pa dha ni sa ni
re ni sa sa sa.. . . . ..

took numerous turns...( beautiful part of khatak)

( at 3:06) she hit rey who came to her...



Nazrein bolen duniya bole

he pulled her close( in LLHH) and slid his hands down hers and caught her fists in his

dil ki zaban haaye dil ki zubaan

swayed together side wards never breaking the eyelock...


Ishq maange ishq chahe koi toofan


he caught her tight by waist and both bent towards reys right streching her ri8 and his left leg up ...with full sink...and he turned her back crushing her back into his chest...


Chalna aahiste ishq naya hai

caught her by waist and lifted and moved front when she moved her legs lyk peddling


Pehla yeh vada humne kiya hai


she wrapped her left leg to his waist...( her back to him) cught his head side wards with ri8 hand...and he twirled...



O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya
Piyaaa...

he slowly let her down she turned to face him...both faces tuching each other and both swayed...then he slowly pulled her into a warm kiss...

at 4:26 she pulled back and hugged him tight ...



Nange pairo pe angaro

he slowly lifted her and placed on his foot...


chalti rahi haaye chalti rahi

foreheads touching eachother and he walked front slowly with beat...both smiling at each other...


Lagta hai ke gairo mein

lifted her by gripping her waist and twirled...


Palti rahi haaye


placed her down and bent as she sat on his shoulder from back with both legs on either side of him...as he caught them tightly...( tightly ki zaroorat nahi hai aise...he is king of lifts)

le chal wahan jo


slowly streched her hands front as he slowly went forward...

Mulk tera hai

moved her hands as if moving her wings...


Jahil zamana


bent back with hands on floor ...
dushman mera hai

stood taking her legs as in a back flip from his shoulders...

haaye

O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

first arsha khuda jaane lift...he twirled continuously ...slowly decreased speed as he brought her down making herself stand on his feet...his hands wrapping her waist as her around his neck and both stared into each others eyes

( position something lyk dis...watch the above video at 1:58


heads touched in the same way...and looking at each other while he was smiling as she blushed...)

ab aur kya dekh rahe ho??????/gaana khatam...

r: baatcutter...

k: hmm...

r: wo ...

k: hmm???

he gently took her lips into his ...he kissed her to earnest...and pulled back as she was lacking oxygen...



r: actuactually aaj mai bohut khush hun...

k: kyun??( whisper)

r: kyun ki ek toh bohut dinon ke baad tere saath dance kiya aur dosri baat ye hai ki ye poora ek mahina hum ...sirf hum ek saath bita sakte hai...

k: kya?????par rey ghar pe toh...

he cut her in the middle...

r: haan ...kyun ki hamari honey moon trip fix ho chuki hai...

k: kya??????😲

r: haan...ab mai , tum aur sirf pyaar hi pyaar...

saying this he pulled her into another passionate kiss...






kaisa tha???????

acha ya bura??????

kuch bhi ho ...lyk and cmnt plzz...😳

precap:

nahi hum dono ek saath baitenge...( krisha)

ye toh galat hai...( reyam)

bilkul sah hai ...ab jao aur jaldi baito dono...flight take off karne wali hai...

* babyface* theek hai...

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey deetha when will u update...waiting 4 it..!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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W8ing deetha😊😊😊😊jaldi update kar plzzz 😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Ritu_ArSha

W8ing deetha😊jaldi update kar plzzz 😭😭😭



arey baba abhi nahi ...shaam ko abhi mujhe kaam hai...itne din wait kiya kuch ghante wait kardo plzz...* babyface*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Despretly Waiting please update fast !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: deetha



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aaj pakka milega...pakka wala...par shayad late hosakta hai ...so wait karo...aaj pakka wala update😃



Tu meri stithi pe has rhi hai...

dost dost na rha...


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