My misplaced Diary (Poem)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey Guys, We are new to the Writers Corner...Wrote a poem so thought of sharing it with you all..Waiting for your precious feedback..

My misplaced Diary

My diary was misplaced

It was totally displaced

I looked high and low

In each and every row

But it was no where to be found

And my heart started to pound

Cause it was very dear

And a memorial of the past year

-Shivangi and Shivika (The twins in town)

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medha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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nice, wish it had been longer!👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: medhasainanee
nice, wish it had been longer!👏

Thanks Medha!!!😃

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Sawyer_Tom

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nicely written. Should have made it longer though. 😊

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jahnavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved it dearies... make it a bit longer

Edited by Kriyansh_jaanu - 13 years ago

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shiv_sis_square

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom
Nicely written. Should have made it longer though. 😊

Thanks...Yup should've been longer but loss of words, you cant really help it can you..

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Shishir Darsh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I'm not a much a poem person but still nicely written.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: marauder
I'm not a much a poem person but still nicely written.

Oh thanks for liking it then!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I'm not a 'poem person' but nice poem 😊 Keep it up !!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: varoo28
I'm not a 'poem person' but nice poem 😊 Keep it up !!

Thanks for taking out time for this then!

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