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Badra

@SublimeSanaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

just checking whether i have commented using my previous acc

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Addie07

@Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#703

res!!!

*edits*

Oh, God! Adi!!!

You know how we discussed this over, and over, and OVER again while we talked?!
Especially the conversation between Aryan and Arnav?!

But as I read it today, you managed to give me this empty feeling in my stomach! As if I had somehow lost the bottom of it! 😕 😆

Khushi's emotions as she waited for Arnav to get back to consciousness!!

Simply superb, Adi!! 👏

I'm at work, so I couldn't listen to the song! 😳

Talk to you tonight! 😃

*edits, yet again!*

Oooh!! You dedicated it to moi!!

Love you, Adi!!

And hey! I love the icon Mark Zuckerberg has chosen for the "Poke" thingy!! 😃

Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago

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theresa

@tintinu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#704

wow! u updated this ff dear,i was waiting for this update

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@Chocoangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#705

res

Edited

OMG...

dat was a simply amazing update...!!

Edited by Chocoangel - 13 years ago

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#706

Oh god that was beautiful!!! Loved it!!!
Ur writing is just fab!!! Seriously!!!
Loved the update :)

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#707

Amazing update Lyraa <3

I loved the conversation between Arnav and Aryan it was beautifully done!

xoxo

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icebraker

@icebraker

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#708

Oh God !!!!! how do u write this... so emotional. ur choice of word is exceptional. as always like all other chapters loved this part too .God bless u and ur writing skills.

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#709

Awesome... I love aryan...
Good bye leave as soon as u can...lol...

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Badra

@Ms.Mano

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#710

again ...

comment on chapter 14 ...

wow 😉.. the flash backs are amazing 👏.. yaar tht isnt fare .. i keep falling for aryan character has well .. he is a great guy .. and he deserve all the happiness ... u can see na .. there is a but coming .. BUT ... kushi is arnav's .. they are made for each other .. so aryan will a means to an end for kushi .. her destination will and should be arnav and aryan is just a mild stone .. man this story is going to kill me .. 😆

hmm .. aryan should be scared .. kushi's might breath because of him but her breath belong to arnav and only him ..
an angel breathing the heart ... 😭 .. let time decide .. whose heart will be broken by whom .. 😉 .. btw u are breaking my heart over here ... 😆

wow .. sham is back for good ... i souppose nt .. it seems wonderful to here the manic's sound .. just kidding yaar .. i havent lost it ... but i can bet on it ... th i am going to lose it after reading ur update ...

so sahm is planning to kill aryan .. why do i have this stupid feeling tht arnav will be shot .. man my mind is again on over drive .. will see wht truly happens ..

"How many times do I have to tell you, don't walk away from me when I'm talking to you." ... man luv this line .. like to see arnav annoyed .. he looks more like asr ...

i am all most crying over here .. seriously .. yaar the confrontation is amazing .. it is so ,,, speechless ...
wht will arnav truly do if she tells him she didnt luv him .. will he jump from the cliff .. just a thought ... hope nt ..

finished reading and i have no idea wht to say .. the last bit was devastating .. my heart is crying for arnav .. he is hattered ... and kushi chose duty against luv .. man this sucks .. and to think u stopped at this ..

btw it was excellent .. luved it ..

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