VirMan SS:Tu Bas De De Mera Sath;note on pg73 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow really nice beautifully written well done jasmine lovely part yr😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm...intetrestin..so wats the big secret..
manvi has cancer??
aww cant wait fr the next update..
pls update soon..pls..
thnks f r the pm...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
You better come up with the next update asap :) You have stopped at such an amazing point, I am dying to know what happens next 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazin ss dear!!!!...👏
truly heart touchin... read all d parts in 1 go... felt like cryin...😭
it ws emotional n touchy...
i gues d nxt prt hs gt smthin reltd 2 manvi sffrin 4m cncr...😔
realy a vry gd ss... pls pm me wen u updt...
waitin 4 d updt...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww
Poor Virat Waiting For Manvi Jus To Apologise And Propose But Why Did He Leave The Airport Manvi Ko Kuch Hua Toh Nahi???
Hawww Im Eager To Read Next Continue Asap And PM Me Please
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb updt yar pm me
wen u updt.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello guys here I m back again...😃...hope I m not troubling u all with d daily updates...😆

.love u all for loving & appreciating my writing...🤗

Here is the next part...

PART 5

Virat hired a cab & was coming to her.All the way the only thing that bothered him was Viren's words...He reached the hospital.He ran towards the reception & got her room number.When he came outside her room,he found Viren & Jeevika there with Vidhi.He wanted to go inside but the nurse didn't let him as she was resting then.

Virat: Usse kya hua hain?Kaisi hain woh?

Viren: Yaar,kal uska accident ho geya tha...hume bhi aaj pata chala.Abhi thik hain,rest pe hain.

Virat: Kaise pata chala?

Viren: Luckily Manan yahan pe doctor hain.Usne hume inform kiya tha.

Jeevika: Virat,woh tum se hi mil ne aa rahi thi.

Virat sat on a chair.He seemed tired with all the things happening.He was not able to handle all these at once.He was frustrated.He found all these so unfair.She was coming to him & what happened to her!!!Were they really meant to be with each other!...Suddenly Vidhi came & stood in front of him.

Vidhi: Uncle aap Manvi aunty ko leke pareshaan ho?

Virat: Ha beta...

Vidhi: Uncle tension maat lo..aunty bohat acchi hain aur who bohat strong bhi hain,who jaldi thik ho jayengi.

Virat: Of course beta unhe thik hona hi hoga!

Virat hugged this lil angel who gave him support at that moment.She gave him encouragement 'uncle,chinta maat karo plz...'.He cried his heart out.He knew that from now he couldn't take any more chance.It was time for doing something for her...He went to Manan who was Manvi's doctor right then.

Virat: May I come in doctor?

Manan: Of course Virat...itne dino baad tujh se mil raha hoon.Reunion pe bhi main nahi aa paya tha.

Virat: Ha Manan...yaar mujhe Manvi ke bare mein sab janna hain.Uski condition abhi kaisi hain?

Manan: Dekh,abhi woh thik hain...uske sar pe chot lagi hain.usse ful rest karna hoga'.otherwise choti moti injuri hain,khatre ki koyi baat nahi hain.

Virat: Thanks yaar!main usska pura kheyal rakkhunga.

Virat came to Manvi's room.He entered.She was sleeping.He sat in front of her & held her hands.He was continuously looking at her.He would not cry.She needed his support.He again somehow took her wrong.She was coming to him but couldn't.From now she didn't need to come to him.He would be always with her...Suddenly Manvi opened her eyes.She saw Virat holding her hands.

Manvi: Virat tum?

Virat: Ha ,Manvi main...

Manvi: Tum abhi bhi yahi ho?maine socha maine phir se tumhe kho diya!..Sorry Virat!

Virat: Sorry!par kyun?

Manvi: Kya hain na akele pan se maine iss tarah dosti kar li thi ki kisi ke aane ke aahat se bhi mijhe daar lagne laga tha!...Sayad issi liye uss raat ko tumhara phone nahi utha payi thi.lekin jab maine khud ko mana liya tha tab...

Virat: Tumhe keh ne ki koyi jarurat nahi hain...mujhe koyi explanation nahi chahiye.All I know is main ab humesha tumhare sath hi rahunga!I'll never leave u alone.

She was silent but her eyes were talking.They became full with tears.He wiped away her tears.

Virat: Ab tum kabhi bhi nahi royogi,main tumhe kabhi bhi rone nahi doonga!

She closed her eyes & a smile of happiness & peace crept on her lips.He softly placed his hand on her head & kissed her forehead...after some time she slept again.

Virat didn't go back to abroad.He decided to live with her here,in India.He gradually started to set his business up here.On the other hand,he took total care of Manvi with the help of Viren & Jeevika.Jevika used to bring the food for her & he fed it to her.Everyday in the morning he went to her & made her laugh with his lil mischief's with Vidhi.Vidhi & he also became good friends.All his time he spent for her.He did everything to make her well.With his love & care soon she got well.

It was day of her discharge.Jeevika came in the hospital with Vidhi but Virat didn't come.They waited for him long.Then Jeevika took her back home.After a while Jeevika left with Vidhi.Manvi was still waiting for Virat.While waiting,she fall asleep.Suddenly Manvi woke up to hear the door bell.She went to open the door.It was him.Manvi was very angry with him.He was late.Manvi said nothing & came inside.He knew that she would be angry.

Virat: Manvi sorry...plz don't be angry!

Manvi: Main kaha gussa hoon!aur waise bhi tumhe faraq kaha parta hain...agar faraq parta roh tum late thode hi na aate!

Virat: Plz!!!really sorry!

Manvi: I said that I m not angry.

He understood it was not that easy to pacify her.He decided to take her to the surprise that was waiting for her & for which he was busy.

Virat: Okay...no need to forgive but get ready!

Manvi: Kis liye?

Virat: Hain kuch tumhare liye...

Manvi: Par kya?

Virat: Ab itne sawal maat puncho na!chalo bhi!

Manvi got ready.They were going in Virat's car.Though she was a lil upset but she understood that he was busy with the surprise thing.She was getting impatient.She couldn't wait anymore.She knew he would not tell her so easily.So she decided to trick him.

Manvi: Hum kaha ja rahe hain?

Virat: Kaha na surprise hain...hum ja toh rahe hain.

Manvi: Nahi mujhe abhi janna hain!

Virat: Plz thoda sa wait kar lo.

Manvi: Batate ho ya mein gaadi se utar jau!

Virat: Ok,relax!batata hoon,baad mein maat kehna ke surprise ka maza kharab ho geya!

Manvi: Nahi kahoongi...!

Virat: Hum ghar ja rahe hain...

Manvi: Kaun sa ghar?

Virat: Humara ghar...

Manvi understood what he meant.He was about to say something but she made him stop.She didn't want to hear that.She wanted to experience that.Their house!She wanted to see that with her own eyes,feel it.There would be only them.

chal chale aapne ghar

aye mere humsafar

band darwaaje kar

sabse ho bekhabar

na jaha bheed ho

na jahan bhar ke log

na sheher mein baase

laakhon logo ka shor

chand lamhe tu

inse mujhe dur kar

chal chale aapne ghar

humsafar

Virat stopped the car.They reached their destination.Manvi got down from the car & saw the house from outside.She couldn't believe her eyes.This house belonged to her.Her legs were struck.She coldn't even move.Just to see the house from outside her joys knew no bounds.What would happen if she went inide!!!Virat stood beside her & asked her to go inside.He took her hands in his hands & went inside.The house was not set up yet.It was an empty house but for her the best house.She stepped in & was looking with all her amusement.It was so perfect!She entered the hall.From the hall's big window she could saw the beach outside.She had a big smile on her face.He came to her & said in her ears.

Virat: This house is sea faced!

She turned around & her smile got even wider.Shje could not say anything but thr apark of her eyes said it all...He took her to the bedroom.The room had a big balcony.From the balcony the sea view was more beautiful.She loved it.The bonus was it was the time of sun set.She was over excited to see the sun set.Suddenly he put hands on her eyes.She got angry.

Manvi: Virat aapne haath hatao plz!mujhe sun set dekhna hain!!!

Virat: Wait...usse pehle mujhe tumhe kuch dena hain.

Manvi: Kya dena hain?

Virat made her turn around & held the necklace in front of her face.She opened her eyes & saw it.It looked so beautiful in the rays of setting sun.She felt that all the happiness were missing till now was coming back to her.She loved his this lil gift.She had tears in her eyes,tears of joy!

Manvi: Abhi mujhe pehnaoge bhi ya nahi!

He made her wear the necklace.She wanted to see her in his eyes.

Manvi: Main iss mein acchi toh lag rahi hoon na?

Virat: Nahi,yeh tumhare pehen ne se accha lag raha hain...it's looking beautiful because U have wore it!

She was elated.All the blanks of her life were filled with happiness & love.She hugged him.He also held her tight.They watch the sun set being in each others' arms...Manvi wanted to set up the house according to her will bur still she needed him beside her.

Manvi: Virat,main aapne haaton se aur aapne pasand se iss ghar ko sajayungi!

Virat: Of course...tumhe hi toh sab karna hain.

Manvi: Tumhe bhi meri help karni hogi...!

Virat: Kyun nahi...after all it's our house!

Manvi: Humara ghar!

TO BE CONTINUED...

guys I know u all hope to see the cancer track in this part but I m trying to write a lil different...hope I have not let u all down...😳.if i have plz let me know,I'll try to give more effort...😊

hope u will like it & do comment guys...🤗

Edited by jesmin.farjana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing!!!!
aftr last update i thought viren wz mentioning abt manviz cancer...😕i seriously dont want dat poor thing to go thru one mre pain...aftral she has had loot of difficulties in past
luvd hw virat wz bonding well wid vidhi...
n his surprise wz really sweet...
thnx a loot for the pm...plz cont soon 😊
Edited by alicemath - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*edit*

that was awesome and super dear!!!!!!!!!
i loved the whole the it moved smoothly...specially the hospital scene was splendid...outcome of emotions ...

😛
and virast's decision everything was cool...

i absolutely loved it...
by the way i know it is different but i am loving it ...continue soon!!!!

Edited by jessiekarthik - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved it, it was great pm me

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