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Posted: 13 years ago


when r u updation di...waiting for FT like hell...see we are stalking u here also but cant help...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting 4 it like hell...
plz update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

franky come on fb i am online 😉

payal i had to leave i needed a good nap 😆😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting di...
kahan gayi???😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
i see a green light... waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

First of all I am so sorry for the delay. My next few weeks are also going to be very hectic at office so sorry for the lateness and patchy updates.

Good news is that it is a long weekend in UK so I will try to give 2-3 updates till Wednesday.

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 29

Two Days later

Everyone except Meera had finished their dinner and were sitting in living room. Maan was doing his work on laptop as Geet and Daadima flipped through TV channels making funny remarks about all saas bahu sagas coming late on the telly. Dev had still not come home and Meera was waiting for him. Vicky was already sleeping.

As Meera gave desert to all, a weary Dev entered the house.

Meera – "Aap aa gaye Dev…bahut der kar di aaj…aap fresh ho jaiye, mein khana lagati hoon"

[You are here Dev…you got quite late today…you go an freshen up while I set the table for dinner.]

Dev answered tiredly –"I had a party to attend so I have already eaten. Tum kha lo."

"Lekin you didn't even tell. If you had a party toh batana toh tha na….mein wait nahi"

Suddenly Dev shouted – "So what do you want… Ab kya karoon…maafi mangoon tumse because I made a big mistake…. meine kaha tha wait karne ke liye."

[So what do you want…what should I do now…should I say sorry to you because I made a big mistake…did I ask you to wait?]

Meera was teary – "Dev aap itna gussa kyon…"

[Dev, why are you getting so angry…]

Dev – "Toh aur kya karoon. Pura din thak kar ghar aaya hoon aur tumhein aate hi apni nagging shuru karna zaroori hai. Aadmi ko apne ghar mein bhi chain nahi mil sakta. He has to first answer to you. Koi aur kam nahi hai tumhein"

[So what else should I do? I have come home after a tiring day and you have to start your nagging as soon as I enter. Man cannot find peace in his home also. He has to first answer to you. Don't you have any other work?]

Maan was aghast listening to Dev talking so rudely to Meera over such a small matter. He intervened – "Dev what are you saying"

Dev saw his entire family looking at him. "Haan I know…as usual it is my mistake only."

With that Dev stormed to the backyard and Meera ran off to her room crying.

Maan, Daadima and Geet were just left shocked. After a while Geet cleared her throat – "uhh…Maan aap Dev se baat kijiye na. Daadima aap Meera se. Itne mein Meera ka dinner laga ke lati hoon"

[Uhh…Maan, you go and talk to Dev please. Daadima you talk to Meera. I will go and get dinner for Meera meanwhile.]

Daadima nodded and walked towards Dev and Meera's bedroom and Maan went to the backyard.

Maan found Dev sitting at the swing. He sat down silently next to Dev giving him space to talk. After a while Dev spoke – "This project is every important for me bhai. I suffered some losses last quarter and this project is required to bring up the profit margins again."

Maan calmly replied – "Does Meera knows about the loss"

Dev shook his head in denial.

Maan sighed – "Pehli baat, our business may be different but we are one family. So you don't need to worry at all. I am happy that you are trying to manage things independently and I have full confidence in you but also importantly you know that your brother is there with you…right!!!"

Dev nodded his head.

Maan continued – "Second thing, when Meera doesn't know what you are going through, how she can understand your problem? Tumne use kuch kaha kyon nahi"

Dev just sat silently.

Maan put a hand around his shoulder – "Dev, you spend time with your family and business. But don't you think you should give some time to Meera also. Hmmm…Din mein kuch waqt uske liye bhi nikalo. And if not possible, at least spend some time on the weekend. Talk to her. She is a very mature woman and I am sure she will understand."

Dev nodded again – "I know Bhai. Lekin mein kya karoon. She is always busy with Vicky and waqt ke saath saath kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki bahut faasle aa gaye hain. Hum saath toh hain lekin…"

[I know bhai. But what should I do? She is always busy with Vicky and with time, I sometimes feel we have grown apart. We are together physically but…]

"Aisa nahi hai Dev. Tum donon ne shaadi tab ki thi jab tum dono ki enjoy karne ki umar thi. Jab log bina responsibility ke hote hain tab Meera was mother to a child. Itni choti umar mein usne kitne achi tarah se sab kuch sambhala hai. But shayad, now it is time for both of you to enjoy a little. Waise bhi ab Vicky bada ho gaya hai. Geet aur Daadima ke saath bhi time spend kar leta hai. You just need to make little effort to give each other time. Sab thik ho jayega."

"Don't worry Dev. We all are here together and we will work these problems out. Yeh sab toh business mein laga hi rehta hai but these things don't matter till the family is together."

[I don't think that is true Dev. You two got married when t was your age to enjoy. At the age when people live without any responsibility, Meera was mother to a child. At such a young age, she took care of everything so nicely. But probably now it is a time for both of you to enjoy a little. Also, now Vicky is grown up as well. He is able to spend time with Geet and Daadima. You just need to make little effort to give each other time. Everything will be fine.

"Don't worry Dev. We all are here together and we will work these problems out. All this is part and parcel of business but these things don't matter till the family is together]

Dev nodded his head gaining strength from his brother's words.

Meanwhile, Geet went upstairs to find Meera crying in Daadima's lap. Daadima was caressing her head

"Aise dil chota nahi karte Meera. Hum Dev ke kaan kheechenge. Bekar mein hi humari beti ko daanta unhone.

[Don't get disheartened like this Meera. I will pull Dev's ear. For no reason he has made my daughter cried so much.]

"Come on Meera…aise kyon ro rahi ho tum. Are apna samajh ke hi daanta na baba. I am sure office mein koi baat hui hogi. So stop crying and support him in his problem."

[Come on Meera…why are you crying like this? He scolded because you are his own. I am sure something must have happened in office. So stop crying and support him in his problem.]

"Lekin Geet beta, unhe aise baat nahi karni chaiye thi na"

[But still Geet beta, he should not have talked like this]

Geet entered with a smile and wiped Meera's tears away. "Meera, aisa kya kaha Dev ne. I am sure he will say sorry but is that what you want? Dev never misbehaves with you na. Toh pakka he is disturbed by something. Agar tum nahi samjhogi toh aur kaun samjhega.

Ask him when he calms down. I am sure once he shares with you all will be fine."

[Meera what did Dev say that hurt you so badly. I am sure he will say sorry but is that what you want? Dev never misbehaves with you na. Toh pakka he is disturbed by something. If you won't understand then who will?

Ask him when he calms down. I am sure once he shares with you all will be fine.]

Meera gave a wet smile – "You are right Geet."

Daadima cupped Meera's face and smiled – "Chalo bhai…Geet ne finally tumhein smile kara hi diya. Ab hum sone chalte hain. Tum apne patidev ko sambhalo. Lekin haan agar koi bhi baat ho toh humein bula lena…hmmm"

[Wow…Geet finally made you smile. Now I am going to sleep. You take care of your darling husband. But yes, if anything happens, you call me…hmmm]

Meera nodded her head. Daadima left winking at Geet so that two girls can talk easily seeing how well Geet was handling Meera.

Geet sat down next to Meera – "Meera, sach sach batao, kuch problem toh nahi hai na tum dono ke beech. I mean this was one off incident, right?"

[Meera, tell truthfully, is there any problem between you two. I mean this was one off incident, right?"]

Meera kept quiet with Geet just caressing her hand slowly. After few minutes she spoke – "Pata nahi Geet. Aaj kal hum saath toh hote hain lekin kabhi kabhi lagta hai jaise ek faasla sa aa a gaya hai. Lagta hi nahi jaise hum pati-patni hain. We both are so tired by the night that we hardly talk to each other."

[Don't know Geet. Now days we are together but still feel there is a distance between us. It just doesn't feel like we are husband-wife anymore. We both are so tired by the night that we hardly talk to each other.]

Geet sighed – "You know Meera, knowing the problem is first step to solution. When you know the problem, then you should spend more time with him. Sometime, one person has to give more effort to make this work…hai na."

Meera nodded. "I know Geet. Shayad meri bhi galti hai. I had become so possessive about Vicky. Office jaana chod diya. Bus sara time Vicky ke saath hi"

[I know Geet. It is probably my mistake too. I had become so possessive about Vicky. I left even going to office. Just all the time I spent with Vicky.]

Geet smiled – "Are toh kya hua. Chodo jo hua. Ab Vicky bada ho gaya hai. Toh it is time to focus your attention to your second kid."

[Just leave what happened. Now, Vicky is all grown up. So now it is time to focus your attention on your second kid]

"Kid?"

"Are yeh husbands kids ki tarah hi hote hain yaar. Favorite candy na mile toh tantrums shuru."

[These husbands are like kids only yaar. If they don't get their favorite candy, they also start with their tantrums.]

Meera and Geet laughed out – "That is so true"

Geet fed Meera her dinner when Dev entered along with Maan.

Dev – "Meera, I am sorry…mujhe aise"

Meera stopped him – "Please Dev, don't say sorry. I also overreacted. You must be tired toh ho gaya…chodiye.

Geet held Maan's arm – "Mere khyal se humein chalna chaiye and let these two love birds sort their issues out. Btw Dev, you can continue to feed your darling wife"

Dev rolled his eyes and Meera just smiled as Geet dragged Maan away.

Precap – Maan - ab phir se raat ko shower lena padega

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome they r right they need to spend time but i missed maaneet moments in this update
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part lovely geet she solves every problem
Edited by mehak173 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update di...

di u again gave short update.. its alrite di. can understand ur situation this time next time no excuse want biiiggg updte..

dnt say me tat next part will have hot hot scene.s just like the 28th..as per the precap.

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Posted: 13 years ago
very short
luved it
do continue soon

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