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soniyahkhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: JerryTheMouse
Nice update! I loved the songs! So appropriate and beautiful!

Liked that he took her to the temple, he now understands her!

Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the Pm!

He understood her too late, but all's well that ends well!😉

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soniyahkhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: highonshows
that is sooo beautiful...

Love how he is feeling helpless...but still not giving up n hoping against all hope things will turn around...

And khushi,...scared from past experience to trust...even tho her heart tell her otherwise...

Wow what a dilemma they are facing,...atleast they are facing it together...

Cant wait for the next update...

Avni

Hi Avni!

Wow..it feels nice to read what i tried to explain n ur words! Next update will be soon, hopefully! Many thanks.😊

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soniyahkhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: OnlyHope
Yaaar Soniyah..HAR part mein..hameshaaa you make me cry
and the song Kuch Is Tarah..is SO beautiful..I LOVE it 😳 and it was so apt for the scene too..

Great great part..I think one of the most beautiful ones 😳

Do continue soon :D

Yaaar Fari, tum ho hi itni achi k tumhye rona aajata hai!!!!!😭 I know Kuch is tarah is sooo amazing, atif's sexy voice got me addicted to the song😉 and its lyrics are really nice too! Thank u sooo much for liking it! 😊😊

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soniyahkhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: ruby-red
awww thats so sweet and heartwarming, he cant bare tears in her eyes, hes so desperate for her to forgive him, very nicely written, please continue.

Thank u sooo very much ruby-red! ur compliments are really encouraging! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Licyabhingya
aww it was so cute!!!

Thanks a lot!😊 ur username is more cute😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: Sups1994
I m in luv wid dis ff...

Aww! That's so sweet! Thanks a lot! :)

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OnlyHope

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Posted: 13 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: soniyahkhan
Yaaar Fari, tum ho hi itni achi k tumhye rona aajata hai!!!!!😭 I know Kuch is tarah is sooo amazing, atif's sexy voice got me addicted to the song😉 and its lyrics are really nice too! Thank u sooo much for liking it! 😊😊

Is mein mera acha hona kahan se agaya 😆

YOU are a great writer

and yep..that song has a lotta memories for me <3

I love every single word of it ☺️

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soniyahkhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: OnlyHope

Is mein mera acha hona kahan se agaya 😆
YOU are a great writer
and yep..that song has a lotta memories for me <3
I love every single word of it ☺️

Memories, haan?😉😉😉

acha ab aur taareef na karo meri, proud ho jaoungi!😛

aur Khuda k waastey apna ff update kardo..eik to bari gakti kardi maine tumahra ff shuru kar k!

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soniyahkhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi Friends!!! Many thanks for all those beautiful comments. I really appreciate them! 😊

I have got a lotta guests over so had no time to spare for the update so far but im gonna try to wake up and write the next part sometime in the night when i can get some quiet time to myself!

So my fingers are crossed for a Saturday afternoon update!

Cheers and thank u very much again,

Love u all,

Soniyah!😊

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soniyahkhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi guys! First of all thank u sooo very much everyone who liked and commented. Your appreciation makes me sooo very happy, that I cant even explain! Anyway, before there is any more similarity between my future storyline and the serial, I thought to update as quickly as possible.

The first song is Saibo from the movie Shor in the City. It was suggested by the reader Zinatra Thanks u sooo very much dear! The link:

https://www.songspk.pk/indian/shor_in_the_city_2011.html

The next songbecame my choice the moment I read it in the suggestion comment by Farah53! It is Aao ge jab from the movie Jab we Met. But as I was waiting for the right moment to come, the CV's used it in the serial. I was sooo pissed off and even complained to a friend here on IF, but she said, its okay! So I have used it here. Thank you sooo much Farah53 Here is the link:

https://www.songspk.pk/jab_we_met.html

Edit: IF irritating with the editing again. curse it if ur anable to read properly. tried to fix it twice.

Part 12:

After reaching the Shervani Hilltop Inn, Arnav and Khushi proceeded to their suite at once.

Khushi dropped to the sofa at once and put both her palms on her eyes. Her head had started aching with all that crying and the confusing thoughts in her mind. Arnav came to sit on her right, on the edge of the sofa.

"Khushi?" She looked up.

"Chai mangwaa loon...tumhare sar main tou dard hain?"

She nodded but got up. He held her wrist to stop her but she didn't turn around. "Khushi agar tumhey sahi lagey tou mainey bahar garden k paas tumhare birthday k liye chotta sa arrangement karwaya tha. Warna idhar hi..." "Nahin theek hai, aa jaeyngey, Di ko kuch aur..." "Tum kab tak doosron k liye jeeti raho gi? Tumhari apni koi marzi hai ya nahin?" He cut her angrily. "Huamin to khud yaad nahin k humari apni koi marzi hai Mr. Arnav Singh Raizaada! Aur jab doosre humaari zindagi ka faisla karna chor dain,gey,us din hum apne liye jeena shuru kar daingey! Aur koi raata hai humare paas kya?" She shouted, blinking her eyes, trying to control her temper and her mixed emotions and went to the bedroom.

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After a quiet tea, they both went to freshen up and got dressed.

Arnav entered the bedroom from the dressing room in a black two piece and white shirt but stood bowled over, at the door. She was standing in front of the mirror with her back to him in a simple white sari with a banarsi border and looked so strikingly beautiful that Arnav kept on staring at her from head to toe. The back of the blouse had a deep neck and her hair was kept on the left shoulder which gave him a full view of her appealing back. Khushi saw him looking intently and unabashedly at her back.

He saw her looking at him in the mirror and their eyes met.

Man yeh saheb ji...
Jaaney hai sab ji...
Phir bhi banaye bahaney
Naina Nawabi ji
Dekhe hai Sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe Ishaare...

(Arnav walked forward and stopped right beside her, their eyes still fixed at one another)

Man yeh saheb ji haan karta bahaaney
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ...

Ishaarey, dheere dheere

Naino ko dheere dheere

Jiya ko dheere dheere

Bhaiyore saibo...

Dheere dheere begaana

Dheere dheere apna sa

dheere dheere laagan Saibo

He was about to grab her shoulders when she stooped a bit to get her bindi. She picked a silver one when,

"Nahin! Laal wali, Khushi!" He exclaimed.

She turned around and her hair flew in his face.

"Zyaada suit karegi!"

Unable to cope up with his gaze and the weird feeling in the pit of her stomach, she wore the red one instead.

"Perfect, Mrs. Raizaada! Chalain?" he asked smilingly.

Instead of answering him, Khushi twirled on her toes and headed towards the door, dampening Arnav's hopes.

Arnav had made a small quiet arrangement for Khushi at the outer premises of the Inn. There was a bouquet of red roses, and a scrumptious chocolate cake waiting for Khushi as she walked to their table. "Happy Birthday Khushi!" Arnav said casually pulling a chair out for her. Khushi could not believe that he was the same man who would make her get out of his car on a deserted road at night. "Dhaniyavaad!" she replied sitting. When Arnav had sat down, he took her trembling hands into his and looked deeply into her eyes. "Khushi I have had enough! Main ab aur eik minute k liye bhi tumhey dukhi nahin dekhna chahta...please mujhey ab kehne do jo main kal se tumhey kehna chahta hoon!" "Arnav Jee, baar baar eik hi baat dohrana ka koi faaida nahin hai...humney aap se kaha na humain..." "Ab sunna parega, Khushi! Tumhey jaane ka haq hai k kyun mainey itni girri hui baat kahi? Yun har waqt ro ro kar jalne sey to acha tha k tum meri collar pakar kar mujhsey poochti! Tumhey poora haq hai Khushi, but I'm going to tell you anyway aur tumhey sunna hi parega! Mujhey tumsey pyaar shaaid tabhi hogaya when I saw you in that red sari for the calendar shoot. Kya koi itna khoobsoorat bhi lag sakta hai, I kept asking myself. Meri nazrain tum sey hat hi nahin rahi thi, par phir bhi main tum par chillata raha. Jitni baar bhi tum mujhsey takrai, mujh par giri, har dafa mera dil tumhari taraf khinche chala gaya. I was fighting a lost battle with my heart. All the time mainey tumhey jharka, cheekha, daanta, bura bhala kaha, par eik bhi dafa I couldn't see you in pain. Jaise tumhey kuch hota, my heart would take over, chahe tumhara baarish main accident hotey hotey bachna, us building ka girna, un gondon ka tumhey chot pohunchana, tumhey sardi se bukhaar hona, tumhara Bauji k liye fikarmand hona, tumhari saagai tootna..har daf...everytime Khushi, everytime! Mujhey nahin pata tumhey kab mujhsey pyaar hua, lekin jab mujhey lagne laga k tum par sirf mera haq hai tab tumney apni engagement announce kardi! Tumhey shaaid andaaza bhi nahin hai k mujh par kya guzri thi us waqt Khushi! Main tumhey humesha for granted leta tha, tum aayi lavaniya ko train karney thi, par meri nazrain tumhey hi dhoonti thi, eik hi ghar main subah shaam milna, I could not imagine k tum kisi aur ki bhi ho sakti ho!" He stopped to breathe but Khushi's hands were still in his firm grip. She had tears in her eyes but she didn't want to interrupt him. "Diwali par, main apne aap ko rok na saka. Shaid agar phone na baja hota to main tumhey kiss bhi kar chukka hota aur mujhey iss ka koi pachtawa bhi na hota cuz I was in love with you even then Khushi! But then reality struck. I was about to kiss a girl who was engaged to someone else and in utter frustration and in attempt to take revenge from you, I called for my engagement with Lavaniya. "Badla?" "Khushi I was not blind. Mujhey dikh raha tha how u were reacting to our almost kiss. How could u feel like that in my intimacy and be engaged to someone else? So I used Lavaniya, which eventually didn't work because your engagement got called off, so I had to do the same! Lavaniya k jaane k baad, tumhari sagaai tootney k baad, I had no reasons to ignore my heart. The strange feeling I had for you soon grew into possessiveness. Main tumhey eik pal bhi us NK k saath nahin dekh pata tha...I guess this is what love is all about. Akaash ki shadi tak, kitney din lage mujhey apne dil ki baat samajhney main! Main poori tarah tumhara ho chukka tha Khushi. I was changed inside out from ASR to Arnav. I even realized that you loved me as well. Tumhara sharmana, mujhye dekhna, I understood it all. Shaadi ki raat just as I was about to tell you how I felt about you, I saw the worst I could have ever seen." Khushi waited with bated breath. "I saw you in Shyam's embrace. Woh tumse sache pyaar ki qasme khaa raha tha. Abhi main sab samjhnye ki koshish ki kar raha tha k tum ney..Khushi tum ne us sey kaha k woh Di ko chor kyun nahin deta!" "Par hum ne tou...'" "Khushi I now understand that woh aankhon ka dhoka aur apne pyaar par vishwaas ki kami thi, that I misunderstood you! Shyam jo keh raha tha'mujhey nahin pata but I read in your diary k us ney tumhey dhoka diya'" "Kya???" She pulled her hands away. "Aap ne humari diary parhi?" Arnav nodded. As usual the conversation had taken a 90 degrees turn. "Par aap ko...'" "Khushi, listen to me first!" He said in his impatient ASR manner. "Us raat main samjha k tum aur Shyam mil kar mujhey aur Di ko dhoka de rahey ho, hum sab ko bewakoof bana rahey ho! Mera dimag...u don't even realize...how I felt that night Khushi! Itney saalon baad mujhey eik khushi mili thi...main phir se jeene laga tha'khush rehne laga tha...mujhey laga tha k itni saalon ki bhaag dor k baad ab araam ka time aagaya hai...lekin nahin! Mera saara sukoon barbaad hoagaya jab Shyam ney mujhey khud apne mun se kaha k tum dono eik doosre se pyaar kartey ho!" "KYA?? Shyam Jee ne yeh kaha? Un ki himat'?" "Us ki himat ka kya..woh itne saalon se humain dhoka de raha hai..tou yeh jhoot us ki liye kaunsi bari baat thi? Par merey liye ye thi!!! Mere liye, Di k liye'yeh bari baat thi! Main Di k paas bhi gaya tha unhain Shyam ka bataaney but I got to know k woh pregnant hain. Itney saalon k baad unhey jo khushi mili thi'main kaise cheenta unsey'kaisey torta un ka Shyam par se bharosa, kaisey apne saath saath un ki zindagi bhi ujaar deta!" He stopped again, and Khushi sniffed. "Phir mujhey eik hi raasta dikha. And I followed that. Baghair kuch sochey, baghair tum se poochey. main ney tumhey contract marriage par force kiya. Eik yehi raasta samajh aya tumhey Di ki family se door rakhne k liye. Kuch hi ganthon main mera tumhare liye pyaar nafrat main bada giya, aaya to tumsey I love you kehney par'.jo hua tumhare saamney hai Khushi! Ab tum hi batao..." He looked at her eagerly. She took a while to reply. "Hum kya bataayainn? Agar aap itna hi pyaar kartey they tou udhar hi nahin pooch saktey they hum sey, ya phir pool k paas, ya mandir main? Ya raat ko kamrey main? Eik dafa tou poocha hota, Arnav Jee? Aap ki baat humain samajh aagayi hai lrkin itna bhi nahin samjha aap ne humain k sahi kaaran bataa detey'gussey main aakar hi sahi, bataa to detey, tou aaj yeh din tou naa dekhna parta!" She got up hysterically. Arnav stood up as well. "Khushi im really sorry! Main jaanta hoon mujhey tum pey trust karna chaiye tha'aur tum se eik dafa to cross check bhi'kar lena chaiye tha...par..." "Par agar aap hum sey poochtey tou ASR ki shaan main kami na aajati?"she retaliated in KKG style. "Haha! Really Khushi, tum jaanti tou ho main kaisa hoon?" She comes forward to him. "Jaanti hoon k aap ney apni zindagi kitni mushkil banaayi hui hai, kitney akroo sariyal laad governor hain, kitna mushkil hai aap ko jhelna, par phir bhi'phir bhi hum aap se pyaar kartey hain aur humesha aap ki zindagi main rehna chahtey hain!" She broke down and huged him. "Khushi??? Tum ney mujhey maaf'"He stopped because her last line drew away all his insecurities and his fears. "Thank you Khushi'Thank you so much!" He squeezed her and kissed her frantically on her cheeks, forehead, hair, unable to contain his sudden happiness and the relief he got. "Arnav Jee'koi dekh lega tou'" "Dekhne do'" And he closed his eyes, smiling truly after months.

Aaoge Jab Tum Saajna
Angana phool khilenge
Barsega saawan, barsega saawan
Jhoom jhoom ke
Do dil aise milenge

PART 13:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68605870

Comment and/or like if you feel like. btw, how were the songs??

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Edited by soniyahkhan - 12 years ago

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