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Posted: 13 years ago
Swayam ko Taani ka bhai bana diya😡.. atleast is ff mein toh chod dete bechare Swayam ko... kaisi behen mili hai.. Krishna ji hi bacha sakte hai usse...
Rey wants his Baatcutter to save him from this blabbering machine... hope Kria returns soon..

haye!!! am waiting for that pre-valentine flashback... KriYaansh confession "ILU"😍

thanks for the cute update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

❤️😃Here's the awaited chap i guess

enjoy!!!😃

Chapter 6

*Flashback*

Kria- pata nahi rey kaise😔 honge mein toh unse baat bhi nahi kar paye kitne sad honge who aur us shivam ki toh mein agar samne aaya na toh chodungi nahi use😡

Idea rey ko call karti hu nahi nahi hey universeji aap he kuch solution do

Kal toh valentine's day❤️ hai kaise batau mein yeh din aapke saath spend karna chahti hu par pata nahi appp aaoge ya nahi par use din toh bohot khush hue the jab meine aap se kaha tha ki aap mere ache dost se kuch zyada ho pata nahi par aapke saath wo dance(mere bina seq.)😳 karke bohot acha laga tha'😳. N she goes in flshbck of tht dance(I knw flashback ke andar flashback weird rite??)😆

N here our Reyam

Swayam ' are yar tu kyu itne chinta kar raha aaj loha garam hai maar de hathoda😃

Rey ' hatho wat??😕

Swayam ' are yaar teri hindi itne weak kyu hai??🤔

Rey- ek toh main waise he tension mein hu aur tu yaha mujhe😕

Swayam ' acha chod tu tension mat le aur jaa aur jang fateh karke aana😆

Rey 'oookkk😕

Rey climbs up kria's window n sees her smiling 2 herself n sys 2 himself -hmm baatcutter mere bare mein soch rahi ho nice'.😳😃

Rey tries 2 carefully enter frm window but strikes on smthng n it crashes down kria comes bck frm her flashback(matlab abhi tak rey ke hi khayalo mein he thi)😳😃

Kria comes n sees who's it n gets shocked seeing rey

Kria ' rey😲 aap yaha kya kar rahe ho mom ne dekh liya toh aur aap hamesha yaha se kyu aate ho ha aapko chot lag jati aap gir jaate toh'

Rey ' kyu agar mujhe chot lagegi toh tumhe dard hoga😃

Kria blushes- ha😳

Rey thinks how can someone be so cute

Kria ' par rey aap yaha itne raat ko kya karne aaye ho

Rey ' tumhare mom se milne aaya hu

Kria ' kya😲

Rey ' obvisously baatcutter tumse milne aaya hu

Kria ' wo I m sry rey😭

Rey ' kyu😕

Kria ' wo aapke team haar gayi aur phir mein aapse milne bhi nahi aaye

Rey ' its ok kria aur waise bhi tum jeeto ya mein mere liye toh ek hi baat hai

KriYansh LLHH n bg tune😳 ooohooohooo

Rey- waise tumhe pata hai aaj pre- valentine's day hai toh

Kria ' toh'..😊

Rey 'wo mein tumhare liye kuch laya hu

Kria gets exicted ' kya😃

Rey ' close ur eyes

N now open

Kria sees a beautiful glass in side a couple dancing

Kria ' its beautiful

Rey ' u knw wat jo couple hai na wo tum aur mein hu

Kria blushes😳

Rey then gives her her favourite chocolates

Kria- wow these r my favourite!!

N starts eating them n makes rey also eat them

Kria ' u r the best rey😃

Rey making his collar up😛 ' I knw

KriYansh LLHH

Rey 'kria mein tumse kuch kehna chahta hu

Kria- kya??

Rey bends down on his knees

Rey ' kria meine tumhare saath apni life ke best moments spend kiye hai tumhare har choti se choti baat mujhe yaad hia jab tumee phela baar deharadun mein mila phir jab tumhara college aayi phir hamare fights hamara first trip first dance gs n ags then hamari dosti

N then tumhare ache dost se kuch zyada par aaj mein tumse wo kehna chata hu jo mein tumhe first day se kehna chahta tha

KRIA I LOVE U WILL U BE MINE???😳❤️

Kria was dumbstruck she had no words in her mouth she was so happy

Kria ' YES YES YES I LOVE U TOO REY❤️❤️

Precap ' flashback continues'.


so hwz it hope u all like it i rewritten it many times!!!🥱

Nxt update on pg 75 with 40 likes!

Edited by kritzzz_ArSha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
unres...

unwaahhh...
mujhe fir pm nai mila...
phir bhi i reached here without d pm...
*patting my back*
newazzz...
awesum update...
confession was sooo cute...
hayeee...
luvd it 2 d core...
bt please pm me nxt tme... pleaseee...
Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update
luvd each nd evry part of it
aww kriya thinking bout rey 😍
confession was super cute
waitin fr kriya to return
wen vil she return ???????
ty fr da pm
update soonn
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kritz this was awesome update.
Loved it a lot.
Very well wriiten.
Wow Kriyaansh confession was so cute.
Yup missing them so much.
Thanks for pm.
Do update next part soon.


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Posted: 13 years ago

awesumm updt kritz...

aww...kriyansh confession supaa cute...
loved it to the core...
do updt sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update
Loved the way rey proposed so cute
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww super cute kriyansh confession.update it ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
oyee...a beautiful confession indeed...wishing this wud have happened on the show...neva mind...u did it...awesome...waiting for more flashback/...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazing ff...i just read all the parts in one go...
plz update soon

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