Abhiya Mini FF : The Symbol of Love - Completed - Page 108

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aadit hmmm nice name 😊 piya is a nw white witch all thks goes 2 maya & u 😉 abhiya fght ws cute over d name of dere nw born bby thx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow awesome update dishu.I so loved it.Sorry 4 late reply baba😳.I love name aadit.Abhiya weree cute.So Pia is white witch now?Thts grt.Cant wait more.plz cont..😳

no probs with late reply. and yup Pia is a white witch, but I will focus on her powers only marginally. the main focus will now shift to Aadit
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

Aadit hmmm nice name 😊 piya is a nw white witch all thks goes 2 maya & u 😉 abhiya fght ws cute over d name of dere nw born bby thx 4 pm

u welcome about the PM diya. and abhiya ko bhi normal couples ki tarah fight karna chaiye na😛
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Aadit's birth had left Pia very weak inside. Though Maya had healed her and had even transferred her powers to her, but Pia's fragile body could not take so much so soon and was constantly in pain. Haseena had asked Abhay to be careful with her and maintain a distance till she gets well completely as physical closeness right after delivery is as it is not advisable, and Pia had to go through a pre mature delivery of a super natural leaving her extremely weak and vulnerable. And so, for the last three months Abhay was forced to keep his distance from Pia and it was driving him mad. Pia too was missing his touches badly and was desperate to close the distance between them. It was the day of Pia's weekly check-up and they both were giving pleading looks to Haseena who pouted in response and said:"You both are making me feel as if I am a typical Laita Pawar type saas who is always conspiring against her son and his wife and finding more and more ways of keeping them away from each other!! If I have asked you to keep distance for some time, then it is for your own benefit. Now let me do my check-up despos!!"

Haseena finished her check-up on Pia and they both looked at her with pleading and hopeful eyes again. She gave a stern look back to them, and they both bowed their head in embarrassment and disappointment. Haseena could not take it any longer and burst out laughing, "Oh My God! Look at you despos!! Alright! You both can go and do whatever you want! Pia is absolutely fine now!"

Abhay and Pia could not control their joy and Abhay lifted Pia up and rushed to their room while Haseena shouted from back:"At least have some shame in front of your mom!" But Abhay was beyond listening anything. He has missed his Pia too much and was desperate to stamp her with his love all over again. Luckily Aadit was out with Chand visiting the Dobriyals as he and Misha had created a special fun bond and he loved playing with her. And so Abhay and Pia had more than enough time and privacy at their hands to restart their passionate love. As soon as they entered their room, they began exploring each other with their hands and mouths as if they had almost forgotten how it felt to be touched and caressed and kissed by their love. Soon they had ripped of each other's clothes and got busy making rough yet passionate love. Their passion driven by desires suppressed for months was overflowing and they both just wanted to get drowned in that sea of passion and never come out. It was little Aadit banging at their door hours later which brought them back to the world. They dressed quickly and took him in their arms. He gave them suspicious looks and mentally asked what they were doing that they did not open the door for full 5 minutes. Abhay and Pia laughed while blushing and said that they had fallen asleep but Aadit was not to be fooled and so he moved Abhay's face towards the mirror and pressed his little hands on his cheeks and mentally asked him, what that lips mark was doing on his face, and how come it landed there in the first place. Pia blushed realizing Aadit's question and Abhay smirked and replied:"In her dreams, your Mom thought I was food!" and everyone laughed off.

Few years later

Aadit was fast growing up and so were his naughty acts. He was now 5 years old and to all vampires' surprise he wasn't much interested in blood and hated it just like other human kids hate milk. He preferred normal human food, though for his proper nutrition and growth blood too was essential as he was still half vampire and his training as the most powerful super natural warrior was also very physically exhaustive. So, reluctantly, he would take blood only once a week and that too after Abhay, Haseena and Chand would promise him a bribe of a box of chocolates each. However, his lack of intake of blood was in no way affecting his health and strength and he was a fast learner. He and Pia would often practice together and Pia unable to gain control of her powers would often end up sending a spell towards him, but he would duck fast. All their joint training sessions would end with Pia treating Aadit to ice cream and gol gappas as he was very fond of both. It was on one such treat outing when they were returning back, that Pia sensed some extremely negative vibes. But before she had time to react a heavy log of wood hit her on the ground and she fell to the ground unconscious and blood oozing out of her head.

When Pia and Aadit had not returned home for an hour, Abhay got worried since he was also unable to reach them through phone and telepathy. He rushed out to find them out and headed in the direction of their favourite place where they used to have their little treats. But the ice cream parlour owner told him that they had already left an hour back. He was extremely worried now. He tried to smell Pia and Aadit out and found a strong smell of Pia's blood coming from forest, but Aadit was nowhere near her. Abhay was worried! His instincts told him that something really bad had happened. Without wasting any more time, he rushed out towards the spot from where he could smell Pia's blood. He reached there and found Pia lying unconscious with her blood almost drying up. Aadit was nowhere to be seen. Abhay panicked and quickly reached Pia and healed her wound on the head. Pia regained consciousness a bit and asked in a weak voice: "Aadit, are you alright?"

Abhay was confused and panicky and asked in panic:"Pia, what are you saying? Where is Aadit? He was with you, but I can't find him anywhere. I can't even read his mind! What happened Pia and how come you reached this state?"

It was Pia's turn to panic and she cried out, "What do you mean, You can't reach Aadit!! And we were just returning when a heavy wood log fell on my head and I don't know what happened next."

Abhay: Pia, please try to remember what happened just before that. Did you hear or sense anything? Think about it Pia!

Pia tried to focus hard and said, "Yes, I sensed some strong negative vibe just before that!"

Abhay: Who was it Pia? Think about it! Try to focus your energies!

Pia tried to focus all her energies and powers on that vibe and then she suddenly stood with a jerk and exclaimed:"Maithili! It was Maithili Abhay! Oh no, What has she done to Aadit? We need to save him Abhay. She will kill our son!"

Abhay was shocked beyond words. Pia shook him hard and he came to his senses and said in a dead voice,"We need to inform thee council right away!" And he took Pia along with her and asked Chand and Haseena to call an urgent meeting.

At the meeting

The vampires were shocked and furious to know that Maithili had kidnapped Aadit who was going to be their best bet against Maithili and Pia was furious and scared both at the same time. She kept saying that what if Maithili kills him, but the council of vampires assured her saying that none of Maithili's powers is going to work on Aadit and by now she would have known that his blood is poison to her, but Pia countered back:"Then why is Abhay unable to connect to him?" To which the council responded that "she cannot use her powers on him, but she may have created a protective circle around him preventing anyone to reach him." But Pia was far from relieved. She wanted her son back at all costs and now her ever burning desire to finish Maithili off was raging like an angry fire set to burn everything in its path. It took all their efforts to stop Pia from going out and seeking Maithili out. They made her see sense that Maithili would finish her off before she can even sense her. Desperately she asked, "So what shall I do? Keep waiting here and leave my son in that evil's care? I don't even know why she has taken him away and what she will do to him!" the council said," We can at least guess why she has taken Aadit away. She wants to use him against us. She wants to make him her weapon!"

Abhay: But why would Aadit listen to her? He is our son. Why would he turn against us?

The council: he is only 5 years old Abhay and at a very impressionable age. Who knows what Maithili's upbringing would do to him.

Abhay: Can't we do something? Can't we find her?

The council: You must know by now Abhay that no one can find Maithili if she does not wish to be found. Our only hope is that Aadit does not forget your love and that will be the only way for us to defeat Maithili in the end.

Pia: But how do we know that we will ever get to meet Maithili again? What if she just takes Aadit away to hurt us and never come back.

The council: She will! Maithili's desire to become the supreme power and make Abhay bow down to her is too strong for her to sit back quietly. She will surely return to claim her dominance over us, once she is able to mould Aadit into her weapon.

5 years later in France

Maithili returned to her house after hunting and saw Aadit eating something with relish. She asked him: Aadit what are you eating?

Aadit(coolly): Gol Gappas. I found the recipe on the net finally and made them myself.

Maithili(furiously): Are you a super natural or a cook? And how many times do I have to tell you that you should feast on humans to sharpen your powers and not waste your time eating these silly things like Gol Gappas or whatever they are!

Aadit(surprised): you don't know what are gol gappas? Aapke zamaane mein nahin hote the kya. Tch Tch... You don't know what you are missing on Maithili aunty. And you keep asking me to feast on humans. What fun is that going to be? All humans are going to taste the same. But I prefer enjoying different foods of the world with different tastes and Gol Gappas are my all time favourite. Too bad, you will never know what it means to have highly evolved taste buds. Do you want to taste it...

Aadit offered one gol gappa to Maithili who gave him a frown and he put it back in his mouth and muttered "or maybe not aunty."

Maithili: Stop calling me aunty!

Aadit: What else should I call you? I know that you still have hots for my dad, and look your hairs too have started greying!

Maithili(furious): What??? Where???

Aadit(laughing): Dont't worry aunty, because:

Abhi bhi tere gaal, gore gore
Lakho dilon pe dale dore dore
Dekho deewane huye ja rahe hai
Aadhe umar ke bhi chore chore
Haan baalon ki safedi se fikha kab hua hai Romaaance..
Aunty Ji aunty Ji.. Get up and dance..

Maithili(angrily): Stop it. I don't have time for your silly antics now. I have waited 5 years for you to master your powers and now as per our deal you will help me finish off all those vampires and become the queen of the vampires.

Aadit: And you will spare my Mom and Dad! 😡

Maithili: Yes you can leave with your Mom and go wherever you want, but Abhay belongs to me. Your mother has spent more than enough time with him. Now Abhay will be all mine!

Aadit: you can never separate them from each other!

Maithili: I can. Or else I will kill Pia and make Abhay mine.

Aadit(angrily): You won't do that!

Maithili: I would have done it that night itself had you not made this deal with me. You may be immune to my powers but not Pia. Your mom may be a witch but she is no match for me. So you would do as I say or else you yourself will be responsible for your mom's death. Now prepare yourself we are leaving for Dehradun right now.


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Edited by ..dishu.. - 13 years ago
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Back in Dehradun

Abhay and Pia had not spent a single day remembering their little Aadit in these last five years. Though life has moved on even for them, but a part of their heart was always missing and hoping for their son's come back. Pia had now mastered all her powers as her son's loss had made her even more determined to finish Maithili off. She knew that now no one can take her by surprise. She was now able to sense trouble even in her sleep. The vampire council too had done thorough research and had found a new ray of hope to defeat Maithili 3 years back, though they were not sure if it would work if Maithili were to attack within next 5 years. Today was the day for their monthly meeting and they were discussing about various strategies when little footsteps caught their attention. They turned back and what they got to know put a new sense of action in them. They were worried, yet a little hopeful. They started preparing for the war.

Maithili and Aadit had begun their journey from France to India. They both loathed each other to the core, and both were super powerful, yet none of them could kill each other off. And the reason to that were the wiccan defence and curse laws. Because of Maithili's black wiccan powers, no super natural could kill her without use of wiccan powers and apart from Pia there wasn't any witch left now. Pia could not kill Maithili because she was a human witch and Maithili was a vampire witch and thus stronger than her. Maithili could not kill Pia because of the black witch curse on her which she has come to know about a few years back; as Pia was her look-alike and her blood was poison to her. Aadit was immune to Maithili's powers because of being born to her look-alike but since he had no wiccan powers himself, he could not kill her. It was only combined strong vampire and wiccan powers bonded by blood which could defeat Maithili. But since Pia had become a witch after giving birth to Aadit, her blood had changed and so she no longer was connected to Aadit by blood. That was the reason why Aadit had to agree to Maithili's plan 5 years back as though Maithili could not kill her by drinking her blood, she could have killed Pia in human ways once she had her unconscious. Aadit had to save his mother at all costs and at that time, that was all he could do. But the situation was changed now. He had found the way to finish Maithili off and that was what he was going to do now. It was good thing that Maithili could not penetrate his mind else she would have known that it was not her victory but her death which was waiting for her to come to Dehradun. Aadit was dying to reach Dehradun and meet her and be with his family.

They reached Dehradun and found the vampires waiting for them. Maithili was confused how they knew about their arrival and for the first time she was suspicious. She checked her shield and knew that it was as strong as ever and no vampire could break her shield and read Aadit's mind. Then how come they knew about their arrival. Before she could figure it out, she sensed some burning sensation at her back and turned around to see Pia casting a fire spell on her. Maithili used her wiccan powers to create a shield around her to block Pia's weak attacks on her and launched her own electric current attack on Pia, but Pia ducked fast. Maithili addressed Aadit: If you want me not to kill your foolish mother, then finish all these vampires except Abhay off fast and leave with her. I and Abhay will rule over this world.

But Abhay responded back: In your dreams Maithili. I belong to Pia and Pia only. You took our son away but he still belongs to us and he will never bow to your commands.

Maithili(smirking): Not only your son, but you too will do my bidding.

With that she sent a quick invisible cage of electric current towards Pia and trapped her inside it. She addressed both of them back: Now you have 5 minutes. Aadit, finish off these vampires and Abhay you join me right now or else Pia will meet her end within 5 minutes.

Abhay was scared for Pia, but Aadit was completely unaffected and said: It's not Mom, but you who are going to meet your end in 5 minutes.

Maithili(laughing evilly): Ha Ha Ha. So you think, you can finish me off. Ha Ha Ha. Don't forget that I am a vampire witch and you are just a vampire, you cannot kill me unless...

Aadit(finished Maithili's sentence): Unless I combine my powers with some wiccan powers of a super natural bonded to me by blood.

Maithili: Exactly. And Pia's blood changed after giving you birth, so she is not bonded to you by blood and she was the last witch.

Aadit: She is still Alive Maithili aunty and she was with my dad for the last 5 years too. And you made the mistake of not keeping tabs on them in your over confidence and that's why you failed to realize that you were setting out to meet your own end in Dehradun.

Maithili(a little scared and confused): What do you mean? Speak clearly!

Aadit: No more wasting time speaking aunty. It's time for action and finish you off! And he called out : Aadita...

A little 3 year old girl with baby brown eyes came out and said:"Yech bhaiya!"

Realization finally dawned on Maithili and she was shocked. Before she could react to this new revelation, Aadita had joined one of her little hands with her brother and together they both pointed out their free hands in Maithili's direction and she could feel all her defences and protective shields breaking down. Soon sharp pain was hitting at her chest and she started wincing in pain. A sharp wooden log held by Aadit in his hand was piercing through her chest. The pain went on increasing till blood started flowing out of her evil dead heart. Aadita was chanting the spells to male her wiccan powers flow out of her body through her blood and Aadit was using all his strength to drive the wooden stake right through her dead heart. Soon all her blood was drained out of her body and she collapsed to the floor. But Aadit and Aadita continued their assault on her till her body started burning in fire. Even when her body was reduced to ashes, they did not stop. They had to finish off the menace of Maithili for once and forever. Aadita spelled the chants to free her soul from the ashes and then that soul was sent off directly to Hell. Maithili's ashes were then eaten up by Aadit so that no body could ever try to bring her back using any kind of magic.

Pia was freed from her bondage and all the vampires rejoiced at Maithii's end. But they were confused as to how Aadit knew about his sister and how he knew how to defeat Maithili through her. So, Aadit started explaining: Maithili had created a shield around me to keep the vampires off. She knew that mom and I are not telepathically connected as mom's change of blood broke the blood bond between us and she had not gained full control of her powers yet. But she never thought that Mom and Dad could have another child in these five years who would not be a complete vampire. And so when Aadita was born, she immediately connected to me. She had known about me even when she was inside mom as Mom Dad used to miss me a lot and so as soon as she came in this world, she connected to me and since then we have been communicating. But, I was concerned for her safety in case Maithili ever came to know about her and so I asked her not to tell about our connection to anyone else and maintain a low profile which she did. But she kept updating me about all your meetings too and through that I came to know that Aadita has the powers to defeat Maithili as she is both a witch and a vampire just like Maithili but has an advantage over her as she is natural born, and does not have a curse on her. Also, being born to Maithili's look-alike, she herself was immune to her powers just like me. But the only problem was that she would not have gained her full vampiric powers till she turned 7. But I was the solution to that if Maithili decided to attack early. Being my blood sister and being born to the same father we were bonded by blood and so me and Aadita could easily combine our powers and that's what we decided to do the moment Maithili decided to attack.

Pia: So Aadita knew all along about you, yet she never told me anything.

Aadita: Ich was nechesry mumma!

Aadit: Yes mom. I could easily block my mind from Maithili but I was scared about what if she tries to penetrate your mind. If she ever came to know that you know about me, then she would have tried to find out hoe her shield was broken and then she would have found about Aadita putting her at risk. And so it was necessary for both yours and Aadits's safety. I am sorry Mom. I know you and Dad missed me a lot, but so did I and I also so much missed playing with my little sister. Every time she would connect to me, I so wanted to rush back and take her in my arms.

Aadita: I miched u too bhaiya.

Aadit went and lifted his little sister in his arms and hugged her tightly. Abhay and Pia too were happy and emotional seeing their son back and embraced their kids. It was time for a family reunion when a voice interrupted them:

We are also part of the family guys!

They looked back to see Chand and Haseena standing there waiting to embrace their grand son after 5 long years.

The End

Edited by ..dishu.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dishu...
aadit..love him...
he loves gol gappas..just like me😛..
u toh know na..my fascination with gol gappas😛😆
ommggee...aadit singing auntyji🤣
gosh dishu...one hell of the update🤗

Beautiful end dishu..happy family!
Edited by --peehu-- - 13 years ago
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First of all biggy hugzzziee🤗for the surprise I loved Aadita. Adit sang that rofl; rofl🤣
Dish u r a superb writer keep writing dear waiting for more

Edited by snitchseeker - 13 years ago
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Superb update Dishu... Aadita was a real surprise... wasn't expecting another child 😃 and thanks for Abhiya romance... poor Haseena and besharam Abhiya 🤣
and Maithili n Aadit ...auntijee was too good... ekdum bao ke jaise BBB skills 🤣 🤣
all well that ends well... happy ending now Abhiya can live happily with their children... thanks for the FF Dishu... loved it 👏
Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 13 years ago
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awesome update dishu

metz and Adit's golgappa part was very funny🤣🤣

u gave us surprise at last😃.little Adita was too cute🤗.loved her

Edited by .rumki. - 13 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story

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