New FanFic -Blues in the Night -Chapter 3,4 -Pg 14

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Hi everyone. I was trying my hand at writing an OS for SwaRon and here I end up writing a SS. Please let me know what you think and if I should continue. : )






Blues in the Night

( I do not own the banner. All the credit for this goes to Sneha G. and the FB Page *|Swayam & Sharon|* - |(Re-Writing fairytales since 20th April, 2011)| Thanks a lot for this superb pic. )

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Chapter 1


It was a bright sunny afternoon with a fresh breeze blowing from the northeast. The small sloop was making a series of very short tacking manoeuvres as it made its way gingerly up the narrow channel.

The forest marched down the steep rocky hillsides to abruptly meet the sea below on both shores. The tiny but sturdy craft was tossed precariously by the rip tides created in the close waterway. The sole occupant reset her grip on the tiller and brought the sloop around in yet another tack headed toward a little niche in the eastern shoreline. She was kneeling in the boat's compact cockpit watching carefully ahead for any tell-tale clues on the water that dangerous rocks lay just out of sight below the surface. She held her course on a starboard tack until she was just past a rocky spur which broke the forest cover and actually spilled over into the sea.

When she was about eighty yards from the shoreline she abruptly swung the boat head to the wind bringing it to an almost dead stop in the water. After losing the sheets on both her jib and mainsails, she quickly scrambled to the bow and let her anchor line out till she felt the anchor touch bottom. She then expertly continued to pay out enough of the line to properly set the anchor, allowing for both safe swinging room as the wind might shift and the expected change of depth as the tides came and went.

She had been so occupied with the business of sailing her small sloop, that she had not noticed that she had an audience. A tall slim young man in blue jeans, T-shirt and black leather bomber style jacket was sitting on the rocky spur smiling with open admiration at the sailing skill of the woman skipper on the neat little sloop. As she stood from securing the anchor and started to lower and tie down her sails, he arose and quickly walked back up into the trees behind him. So she never knew that her arrival had been noted.

When the sloop was secured to her satisfaction, Sharon went below and put a tiny kettle on the single burner in the diminutive galley. As she waited for the water to boil, she pulled a thick dog-eared ring binder out of a shelf to the left of the companionway and opened it to the last entry. This book served a dual purpose as a ship's log and personal journal. She noted her time of arrival and location of the tiny sheltered anchorage, the weather which was close to perfection for a sailor and a personal note that this seemed a great spot in which to write and create.

Sharon was just past her twenty second birthday, short of stature with what she self-deprecatingly called a well-rounded figure. She had short cropped almost boyish auburn hair and green grey eyes. When not working at her research position at a Vancouver newspaper, she was usually to be found out on her tiny sailboat or bent over a computer keyboard creating either the poetry or short stories that her abundant imagination thrived on. Now she had the best of both pursuits as she'd recently purchased a new laptop that allowed her to enjoy both the leisure's at once.

When the kettle had boiled, Sharon made a large mug of steaming hot tea and taking the laptop with her, went back on deck. She made herself a comfortable workspace on the foredeck with her back leaning against a sail bag which in turn was propped against the mast. Before starting, she relaxed with the tea and surveyed her temporary neighbourhood.

The beaches were quite narrow strands, mere ribbons of sand between the water and the forest. There were a couple of other rock spurs which jutted into the channel but the one she was to the lee of seemed to be the largest and the only one which gave sufficient shelter to provide the one-craft size anchorage in which she lay. At first glance, the hillsides looked totally devoid of settlement. But when she looked more closely, she spotted at least four widely separated structures perched on the slopes and almost hidden by the forest cover.





Well there it is. Please let me know what you think, and if I should continue this story line. Thanks for reading. : )

P.s - Please read the note below. 😳




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Blues in the Night

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Hey guys. This is my first work on SwaRon so please be frank with your reviews and let me know if I should continue or not.


This Sharon and Swayam will be like totally different from the one's we know. They are new characters. 🤔 I know many of you might not like my description of Sharon, but that's how it came out according to the plot. I hope you all will like this.



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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Blues in the Night

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: : Index : :


(The page numbers are hyper-linked. 😳)

Chapter 1 : Scroll Up

Chapter 2 : Page 8

Chapter 3 : Page 14

Chapter 4 : Page 14



Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Blues in the Night

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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres


awesome update.
it vwas pretty cool one .

sharon on boat was cool. Swayam seeing her loved it.

Thanks for pm.
Do continue and update soon.


Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Unres
Lagta hai sissy boat ride par research kar ke aayh h...
Its amazing...
Whole new concept...
Waiting for nxt part...
Edited by aditi061 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start..verie wel written
n yeah u shud continue
its gud n differnt sort of story..
i wud luv to read it further..
Pleeezz pm me ur next update..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmaju

Res

unres


awesome update.
it vwas pretty cool one .

sharon on boat was cool. Swayam seeing her loved it.

Thanks for pm.
Do continue and update soon.



Thanks a lot di. 😊
Hehe, how do you know that it's Swayam who was seeing her? 😛
Aw, you're welcome!
Sure I will di. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Enjoyed reading th first part...ur obsession with the smallest of particulars was obvious in beautiful language...sumthng different abt this Sharon ...too early to pass a judgement but will make interesting reading...u should definitely continue...we hav had so many fictions with their own interpretations of Swaron & I believe that shuldnt b a reason for u to hav second thoughts...thanxx for the pm & luk forward to ur update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue and pls pls pls pm me when u update
sounds refreshing as well as interesting
update soon and pls pm me

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