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Posted: 13 years ago
hi di once again what a lovely update geet ne maan ko gift and maan liked it well di i have doubt i head by some body if pen or karchief we gave to any body a fight will happen in b/w them in future geet ka pen lagana acha laga maan ka wallet me poonam pic geet felt lttle sad even maan felt guilt to make geet sad precap wow so much expectations

Precap - "Is she wearing a shirt? My shirt?"



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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting...WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

WAITING...WAITING...WAITING😍

music_girl thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
how r u?
Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fine how r u ?
mahimaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

me late😭...but congrates for new thread😊...

n me waiting for this update...just recently started reading this ff...n its rocking sweety😃...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Friends,

This is a little small part as I could not combine it with any other part. But I thought this was important to show Maan's state of mind. It is just my personal opinion that women usually go for love realization attraction whereas for men it is love attraction realization. So as I said, it is just my personal opinion and hence my story follows the same path.

Maan is affected by Geet and somewhere she has made some place in his heart. So for me the next logical step is this.

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Chapter 28

Warning –18+

Maan came out of the washroom to see Geet sitting in bed reading a book. He started to move towards his study when he stopped short. "Is she wearing a shirt? My shirt?"

Maan walked towards Geet to confirm she was indeed wearing his white shirt from the morning. "Geet…tumne meri shirt kyon pehn rakhi hai?"

[Geet why are you wearing my shirt?]

Color crept on her face as she didn't know how to answer.

She fumbled – "Ji…woh…haan…woh mere saare night suits washing mein hain"

[Ji…woh…yes…all my night clothes are in washing]

Maan narrowed his eyes seeing her stammer like that – "Acha….toh isliye you wore my shirt…woh bhi the one which is not even washed. I have worn it whole day and it probably smells of me…"

Maan stopped short as realization hit him and deepening of Geet's color just confirmed his thought.

Both of them were taken by surprise with what happened next. Maan as if in trance went ahead and pulled back the sheet and they both gasped. Geet at his boldness and Maan as he saw her slender naked legs as his shirt just reached her upper thighs and she was wearing nothing underneath it.

He totally lost his senses as his gaze moved the length of her silky legs, up her belly and sopped at the hardened buds which were now clearly visible under the semi transparent shirt. Her ni***** were straining his shirt as heat emanated out of her due to his gaze. This also made him realize that she wasn't wearing any b** underneath.

Maan's control snapped with that thought as he literally scooped her out and crushed her in his arms. His wanting lips sought and urgently pushed onto her quivering ones. He kissed her deeply and wetly. She groaned as her soft curves carnally collided with his hard chest and he used that opportunity to push into her mouth. He extracted and drank her sweet saliva exploring her mouth with his tongue.

None realized when Maan hoisted her up and she wrapped her bare legs around his waist.

He smashed her onto the wall still holding her by waist. She moaned loudly "Maan" as he left her lips and started placing wet smooches at the column of her neck.

Every barrier was unacceptable and hence he took one collar in his mouth and another in his free hand. Geet gasped loudly as with one jerk he tore every button making her front exposed entirely. Her entire being shook as he with out any delay grabbed her hair tilting her little backwards giving him easy access to her front. In haste he sucked, licked and bit her curves driving her to an insane and a pleasure land.

Geet could not bear his torture anymore and like a druggie she pushed him away a little and removed his vest and collided her soft being into his arms again.

Maan groaned loudly as she took his earlobe into her mouth and bit it.

He bit in her valley as revenge even as his bare torso felt her nakedness.

Still against the wall, Maan moved his hand from her waist and cupped her bottom placing her feminine core directly over his now hard manhood. She literally threw her face back and dug her nails at his shoulders as pleasure rocked her entire being. With his one hand fondling her bre*** and second hand directing her bottom he rocked her core over his hard length till she hit her peak and he felt her juices drenching her underwear. As the heat and wetness percolated into his tracks he knew he wouldn't be able to hold it either.

He jerked open his eyes and sat on the bed straight. He ran his head through his hair and groaned in frustration as he could feel his throbbing arousal.

"What the hell was he dreaming. How could he dream like this, think like this…about Geet. Man it was hell erotic and I can still feel my breath all ragged just be dreaming. God she will be death of me. If dream is like this then…no no Maan…don't even go there. Get a grip. She just sewed a button on that shirt, just one brush of her lips on your torso and you are dreaming so wildly about her"

Maan still could not believe that he had gone so far in his thinking about her. But more than that, there was an immediate task which he needed to handle. He got up from his bed and walked to the bathroom. After relieving his need under a shower, he came out with at least some calmness. As he walked towards his door he saw Geet sleeping tightly in the bed. She was curled into a ball and had kicked away her sheet.

Maan walked to her and placed the sheet on top of her. She smiled slightly and straightened her legs feeling the warmth. Maan gently brushed her hair away from her forehead and before he could think or stop planted a small kiss there.

He got up and walked to the study. He looked once more at the angel sleeping peacefully as he closed the door. He shook his head chiding himself for such wanton dreams about her but then knowing that it was probably out of his control now. Not only was he attracted to her but affected by her as well.

Poonam's picture stayed underneath the mattress today as Maan slept off hugging his pillow.

Precap – Dev-Meera fight


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Posted: 13 years ago
omg.. i was flying to be the first one to comment but now words seems dead for me... i am so ☺️... it was amazingly hot update and i was reading it sitting in my papa's cabin... lolzz nothing to say di...

simply superb... i was shocked at Maan's instant reaction but he was dreaming... ...

precap sounds interesting... maaneet will resolve their fight kya???
continue soon di...
Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
music_girl thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
not any better than yesterday was home today
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Posted: 13 years ago
me loved it ...
the dream turned out to be dream ...😆
hope to see the dream turn into a reality.

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