GEAR UP, MJHT NEW FF 6/6..CHP:16.Pg57 - Page 32

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lovely updt fiza
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Originally posted by: clustersofstar

lovely update

this is the different story and i mentally perpared for it

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lol... wht for ur ready more.. nothing more cuming up... ff is towards its closure

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

wonderful update...

lovely..

hmm so mr sharma is serious 4 this relation ship...

good..

n nupur finaaly found him reliable...

phew!!! the money matter also finished

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yes he is does seems too
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Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--

nice part..

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Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Nice update...

Originally posted by: -Gunners-

Lovely update...

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Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

superb update

loved mayank-nupur scene n convo

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Originally posted by: shafyyy

That was really really very nice part...

waiting for the race...

let's see.. what will be the track this time..

does mayank truely loves nupur and anupur do also have mutual feeling for mayank ????

thanks alol dear

abt there feelings just wait .. how they end up

Originally posted by: shria19

superb update:)

continue soon

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Originally posted by: mayuloveu

awsome. brilliant. mayur is so romantic

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Originally posted by: arhi_maneet

AMAZING UPDATE!!

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Originally posted by: daniella05

lovely update...

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RPLYD TO U ALL..

Nest maybe delayed as I haven't thought wht to do to addy… any suggestions…

Chapter: 15

The track was announced in night and race was in 2morow afternoon, as it appear it was a simple track, a street which was not used by any traffic.. it's a straight track so not to much needed to be down… only three 4 turns and that were also pretty simple..

Car was made in perfect shape.. and now this time he was super excited .. Previous two round he certainly has raced for his need, now he will race just to enjoy the feel…

It was late in night he was wide awake.. his mind was going back on track, it was quite similar to the track where Addy made his life completely upside down..

Something just came in his mind, he looked down at her..and touched her cheeks…

Mayank: nupur.. wake up..

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: wake up… we need to do something…

Nupur: mayank shut up n sleep…

Mayank: nupsi please I need ur help..

She opend her eyes and looked at him

Nupur: what…

Mayank: get up n cum out…

Nupur: maynkkk…

Mayank: pls its urgent,…

…………………

The third and final around was just about to start, frm last round only 3 racers were able to qualify…

Mayank: it isn't good..

Nupur: why less competition

Mayank: yes.. less competition and less chance that other race will crash each other.. track is wide enough to gave space to all of us…

Nupur: 3 turns and 3 chance for the lead..

Mayank: but I am not liking one thing..

Nupur: what…

He encircle his arms around her waist…

Mayank: why navigators are out of race..

Nupur: cause there no need of navigation now.. it's a straight race…

Mayank: but my lady luck will be gone…he touched her forehead with his

Nupur: from ur life.. sigh

Mayank: oh hello.. donot even dare to thing ur leaving my life…

Nupur: really…

Mayank: ya really..sweetheart

Nupur: chill mayank… now get in car.. race is about to start… and take good care of jack..

Mayank: I will sweat heart.. don't worry…

She came forward and hugged him… best of luck… kissing her forehead he went inside his car.. This time to race on his own….

………..

The race begins in 3……..2……1……

They all hit the accelerators and speed up to get the lead… the were all moving pretty neck to neck..

The first turn to left appeared.. jack was to extreme left and Mayank was at a bit right.. and the third person was in between both..

Both of them crashed the center car… and dragged it… until the car was getting out of control from the driver… and the turned got finished and straight road appeared… both of them left the car and it twirl around… the driver has to stop and than turn back to catch the race..

Yet jack and mackz has took the lead, pretty much..

Nupur: ben give the map… whts in the end..

The street was heading towards a railway track… she was looking at the track and sumthing was struck her mind…

They were connected to him by his cell

Nupur: mackz

Mayank: hey dear so ur missing me too ..

Nupur: listen carfully

The third turned arrived and mackz pushed jacks car on the side.. so that it hit with the wall… trying to make him slow.. but jack was dam good… he put his car in lower gear and making mackz in lead… from his behind he again came beside him…

The last and finally chance of having the lead was lost, but mackz was determine to win this time… as soon as the straight road appear…. Mackz looked at jack.. smiled and hit NOS.. making his car in lead… yet jack laugh out loud..

Jack: kid u didn't knew wht is cuming next for u….

The final hurdle appears on the track and maackz hit his staring with frustration this cant be man…

Nupur: I told u it will be…

Ben: now wht…..

So all of u thought that it's a simple race… no nota at all…. Okay guys.. wht u have to do to win… the finishing line is the rail way track… and I will give u some news … u have to came across it to win this race.. alive

Jack came just bedside Mackz and he looked at him and smirk.. and laughed pitfully… mackz was pretty calm in this part.. he knew he has to do sumthing..

Ben was frustrated he removed his Bluetooth from his ear and went back..he knew crsoing the railway track they need NOS that mayank has already consumed.. so now chance are no no…, just nupur was connected with him

Nupur: u know u can do it…

Mayank: sure baby we can..

They were few KM away from the track..aand they saw the train from the right appearing..

Samrat: crap man… wht is this…

Nupur: this is the twist…………

Ben: wht the hell

They both put there car in top speed, making them on fire… it was just a 2 km away when jack looked at mayank showing a thum down hit the NOS…

Mayank was maintaining his high speed… and was not too too far from him…

Samrat: GOD he has already used his NOS…now wht

Ben: we are lost man..

Nupur: not yet.. game is just abut to began..hit it mackz..

He smiled widely and hit the button. To turn the NOS on…his car got into jet speed.. the train was cuming with it speed and they were almost there ….

Jack as hitted the NOS before mayank was losing his speed ..yet mayank was rushing threw it.. he saw jack's stunt face…and smiled…

The train was just few meters away from them.. they knew it was dam risky as somhow both of them timings has not been perfect…

Mayank: common on baby u can do it…we can make it… cum one

Ben: u cant do it mackz NOS power will finish at the track.. man u will drop the speed abruptly ..maackz wht the hell ur doing

Mayank: I need to win ben.. I know I can do it….

Ben: at ur life's risk…

Mayank car flew in front of the train…..it was just as if its goona blow it away… just few inches away….ben n saint almost close there eyes…. they were waoo n scream all around as it was pretty pretty close.. yet he made

Jack: s** man…

Jack has to turn his car to stop it else he will be crashed by the train.. yet while turning his car back got hited by train…

Nupur: wooo hooo… yes…u did it man

They both looked at mayank car wch was safely landing there….with open mouth.. nupurs voice bring them back

Ben: OMG…. Woo…

They all jumped and hugged each other.. and rushed to finishing place…

Mayank: stod there for few mins .. absorbing the feeling of wining and getting himself… it was an amazing feeling ..he knew he has got his life back….

I did it… I just did it..he scremed and went out of his car…

She run towards him and hugged him , he swept her of her feet's and twirled her around…

Mayank: the plan worked man we did it…

Nupur: yes it does.. congrats…..

Ben: hello.. can we meet him.. she left him and he chukled and hugged him… finally mazkz is back to his habit of wining.. bingo..

Saint: congrats dude.. many congrats man… u did wht we all thought was impossible

Mayank: thank amigo…

Saint: but will u pls define how u did it..

Mayank: sure.. donot u thing we shall do it with a chill bear.. its to hot here

Ben: pls lets go I am dying to know..

Wait a min wht u have done to the car…from inside

Mayank: just a little modification… lets go home I ll tell u

….

Ben: So will u pls stop playing around.. how cum ur NOS power doesn't ended on the railway track…

Mayank: cuase I have to much of it…

Saint: shut up n in detail mackz…

Mayank: fine .. se last night I was checking this road and the km were ending near the railway track and as nupsi told me that there will be a twist .. so I had the gut feeling that it will be related to track.. so I made her work the night and we had not one 4 cylinders of NOS…

Saint: Holy S*****… wht an I idea

Ben: wait a min,. how can be it possible… there too heavy to cary….. on man.. that why us almost empty the car from inside…

Mayank: yes.. al the unnecessary things were removed… plus Nupur was also not there so her weight was minus to… so we pretty carefully adjusted the cylinders and balance the car with it… ya I know it was a bit heavy yet it work…

Ben: man that was awesome… now I certainly knew mackz is back…

Mayank: yes he is… now one person also need to know that…. And for that we will be leaving to NY soon .. wht about day after 2morow…

Saint: hey u will be going back

Mayank: yup I have to .. I don't belong here…

Nupur who was listening to his heroic story smilingly as he was narrating it like a hero.. was stopped in her track and looked back at him… at his words of leaving back to NY>>>

awww mayu won the race .gr8 ...

.n he is leaving for NY n nupur being scared of losing him .dats gr8 . lol ...this insecurity will increase the emotional bonding more strongly ...update soon

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

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where r ur ffs 😡

OMG loved this part dii...
Im so so soo happy that he won...i ws pretty much sure that he will but now when he did it in actual im feeling too happy...He is back on track...😃
But hey wats he's saying...he is leaving NY that means leaving nupur...it cant be true he dint mean it that way na...im sure he has something in his mind...
Lovely part dii...amazing...🤗
Cont soon nd abt addy hav no idea just want to see him destroyed...

amazing and interesting. mayank is going back?

VERY NICE! AWESOME! LOVED IT!