OS : The consequences of success

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Posted: 13 years ago
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At last, the four most promising dancers have reached the semifinals- the graceful and beautiful meenakshi, the tiger akshat, the chammak challo karishma and the guy with a good heart angad.. but what did they lose or gain in their journey towards the winning ribbon?

some flashbacks :-

meenu and akshat behind the canteen in private,quarreling. akshat is fuming in anger..

meenakshi - akshat tum mujhe galat samjh rahe ho... aur ye pehli baar nhi hain.. tum kyun hamesha mujhe galat samajhte ho?
akshat- main tumhe bht acchi tarah se samjha gaya hu meenakshi.. pehle DC,fir main.. aur aab allen? u r such a bloody cheat...!!
Meenakshi's eyes welled up bt she controlled herself.. she had promised herself that she wud nt fall weak even again..
she lowered down her eyes and said- akshat.. main baar baar ekhi cheez kehna to nhi chahti..par tum galat soch rahe ho.. allen sir bas mere acche dost hain.. wo mere trainer hain aur kuch nhi...
akshat- wow.. teacher se dost kab ban gaya wo allen haan? mujhe bhi pata nhi chala? gud.. apne boyfrnd ko kis tarahj dhokhe mein rakha jaye.. u know very well.. am glad..
meenakshi bit her lips..she did nt wanted to stir his anger more...
akshat- kya hua chup kyun ho gayi meeNU? aur kya kya hua hain batao na.. am so interested...!! really meenu.. am damn iterested.. bolo na.. rehersal ke bahane woh tumhe kistarah chuta hain ye to maine dekha hain.. bolo na meenu aur kya kya karte ho tum dono? mere peeth piche? bolo na.. he started teasing her,pulling at her arm- batao na meenu darling...!!
meenakshi cudnt take it anymore. she released her hand with a jerk and ran away tears rolling down her cheeks...
akshat called out behind her- are batakar jao na... ya fir main allen se puchu? he started to laugh...like crazy...bt his face twisted in an ugly manner and all of a sudden he turned and banged his head on the wall...


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Angad sitting on his bed,with a photo of akshat and his happily smiling together,in his hands.. he caressed the picture and said- yaar.. bht miss karta hu tujhe... tumjhe andaza bhi nhi hain kitna.. kabhi nhi socha tha ki hum dono itne door ho jayenge ek dusre se ki tu mujhse baat karna bhi chod dega... us bro se.. jiske bina tu reh nhi pata tha... ye competition, ye reality show wagera hamare beech kaise aa gaya yar? i miss u a lot... plz laut aa.. mera wohi bro akshat bankar... he sobbed...a hand touched his shoulder. he turned.. it was karishma.. angad wiped his tears away... she sat down beside him and took the photo frm his hands.. then she said in a very sweet voice,which is so unlike her usual voice..
karishma- tum aisa kyun sochte ho wo tumse alag ho gaya hain? tum dono bhai ho... tum dono ek dusre se khafa ho sakte ho.. par kabhi alag nhi ho sakte... u r akshat and angad the world's best pair.. so dnt lose hope.. jab use apni galti ka ehsaas hoga woh khud tumhare paas ayega.. tumhe gale lagayega aur kahega ki bro mujhe maf kar do.. dekhna tum...
angad looked at her in amazement.. and wondered that this competition had changed them all a lot bt the change karishma had undergone, was it only for aasman se aage.. or there was something else?


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the present day



The terribly excited and hence really busy DC in his office,making phone calls and even losing his temper sometimes talking to the people and making all kinds of arrangements for the semifinals wen roshni knocked on his open door. he turned- are tum? why r u knocking? c'mon in man.!!
roshni entered smiling.. DC put down the phone and pulled the chair out for her..
roshni- wow dc am impressed..!! tumhe manners bhi ane lagi hain?
DC smiled..
roshni- bht excited ho haan?
DC- bht zyaada.. uuff.. jaisa maine socha tha sabkuch waisa hi ho raha hain... audience sab meenakshi ke saaath hain.. woh usse apne aap ko relate karte hain.. jaisa tumne dekha hain.. sare rounds mein use hi sabse zyaada votes milta hain.. jeetegi to wohi .. am damn sure.. aur lastly uske aur akshat ke break up ke baad to audience shayad ro ro kar apna bura hal bana liya hain... akshat ne uske saath jo bhi kiya...
roshni- kya kiya hain akshat ne?
DC- are... usne meenakshi ke saath kitni buri tarah se baat ki.. sabke samne uska apman kiya.. log us baat ko kabhi nhi bhulenge.. akshat is gone man... is semifinals mein usse bhi sabse kam votes milega dekhna...
roshni- woh sab akshat ne kiya dc? are u sure? kya woh akshat hi tha?
dc- tumhare kehne ka kya matlab hain?
roshni- akshat to sirf ek mohra tha DC.. uske sare actions ke peeche dimag kisi aur ka hi tha.. akshat ke saamne situations ko istarah twist karke, unhe ek aur angle dekar ko laya tha? she stood up and came towards him- dc main us insaan ko acchi tarah se janti hu... aur main kabhi soch bhi sakti thi ki woh itna gir jayega ki logo ki feelings ke saath saath unke zindagi ke saath bhi khelna suru kar dega...
DC kept mum...
roshni cntinued to say- dc woh tum the jisne akshat k saamne meenakshi aur allen ke rishte ko kisi aur tarike se present kiya.. wo to baccha hain ye bhi nhi samajhta ki DC ka politics kitna khatarnak hain... akshat aur meenakshi ek doosre se pyaar karne lage the DC.. tumhare planning ki wajese se nhi.. unke dil mein sacche feelings jage the ek doosre ke liye.. tum meenakshi ko kisi aur tarike se bhi jita sakte hain.. par istarah?? DC tumne istarah un dono ke pyaar ka mazaq udaya?
DC- akshat agar meenakshi se pyaar karta.. to wo use kabhi galat nhi samajhta roshni.. aur maine kya kiya? maine sirf unki pyaar ki imtihaan li.. aur dono usmein fail ho gaye.. bas...
roshni- tum hote kaun ho ??? DC was shocked to hear her voice.. she had nvr shouted at him like this..
roshni- tum hote kaun ho... ye sab karne wale huh? kya samajhte ho tum apne aap ko? bhagwan ban gaye ho? kuch bhi kar sakte ho? akshat... wo bechara use to ye bhi nhi pata ki usne sab kuch kho diya hain.. angad,meenakshi sab usse dur ho chuka hain...woh paglon ki tarah sabkuch bhulkar apni manzil paane ki koshish mein laga hua hain.. lekin use kya pata.. ki ekmahan admi... jo apne aap ko bhagwan manta hain.. woh ye haq bhi cheen lega usse.. he is totally lost...
DC- ye uski kismat hain roshni.. tum khamkha itni pareshan kyun ho rahi ho?
roshni banged her fists on the table,frustrated..- ye uska kismat nhi tha DC.. tumne uski kismat mein ye sab kuch likkha hain... kya zaroorat thi meenakshi aur akshat ko ek doosre ke kareeb lane ki? kyun kiya tumne aisa dc? meenakshi ko to tum crown dekar uska dukh kam kar doge lekin akshat? akshat ko kya milega? kyun kiya tumne aisa? kya sirf meenakshi ko zyaada votes dilane ke liye ya fir... she smiled- koi aur wajah hain DC?
DC looked at her bt did nt say anything...
roshni- kahin aisa to nhi ki tum akshat se jalte ho?
DC- wat rubbish? he laughed- ye kya keh rahi ho tum? pagaal ho gayi ho kya? main? main jalta hun us akshat se? roshni lagta hain tumhara na dimag puri tarah se kharab ho gayi hain.. tumhe doctor ki zaroorat hain...
roshni- mujhe doctor ki zaroorat hain ya nhi.. ye prime concern nhi hain... par tumhe kisiki zaroorat zaroor hain...
DC- accha?
roshni leanied across the table towards him and looked at him straight in the eyes...-- tumhari aankhon mein saaf dikh raha hain DC... u r destroyed...!! u r in hell.. DC.. U R IN HELL... !!

with that she walked out of the room,leaving DC all alone... who tried to think abt her words...bt was afraid... in case they turned out to be true...
he said to himself- socho mat DC.. dnt u dare think... sochoge to kamzor pad jaoge... !! focus DC.. focus on ur world.. the wrld u have created.. the world of aasman se aage...



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Edited by kasturika_kashu - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahaan!! Superb 👏 ...Aww i really feel bad 4 Akshat 😭 ...plz cont soon 😊 nd plz PM me wen u update da nxt part 😃
Edited by Ms.Shy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting OS, Keep them coming

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